Oh. Okay.Dean wrote:Of course not.ReCreate wrote:Same here but... That post is not whole chapter is it?There is a lot to do and I haven't even revealed who Shaun's father is yet.
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Oh. Okay.Dean wrote:Of course not.ReCreate wrote:Same here but... That post is not whole chapter is it?There is a lot to do and I haven't even revealed who Shaun's father is yet.
am notSinder wrote:you are such a liar
HeheBuckdida wrote:HEY! You updated again! Why do you keep stealthing these?!
Oh, and I'll get to your PM soon. I've been a little busy lately...
Invert that pronounDean wrote:The Game (for his lasting support)
Sorry 'bout thatTeh Brawler wrote:Good luck in life, man. It was amazing reading your stuff, and I'm sure that this is just the start for you. However, I do have to make one comment before you go.Invert that pronounDean wrote:The Game (for his lasting support)
Oh, and you will have made one member very happy when he reads the end.
Jason Mraz wrote: My goal is to show everyone that they, too, can do what they love to do.
Daggy wrote: Look a shadowpriest, what a cutie.... POW
IceKitsune wrote:Ok I have to say this first because I know some people are going to flame me but I really did like this story It was very well written. The major problem is that the whole thing hinges on a Deus ex Machina and every one in the story being very stupid and unobservant aka an Idiot Plot. Its just poorly plotted its well written but that's about it a lot of that has to do with you not picking out a father for Dayshaun at the beginning. Everyone in the town should have figured out who the father was when Grape came back from being away with Peanut for 3 Months it should have been obvious to anyone with a brain. Not to mention that his ears flop and are longer then normal. I can forgive the Deus ex Machina but not the Idiot Plot I'm sorry I'm not insulting you so please don't take it that way it just this is how I feel about it.
Thanks Ebly, it's been great knowing you.Ebly wrote:Ewwww, grape/peanut. *giggles*
It's a shame you're taking a break, but understandable. See you later, and hopefully when you come back you'll post in more than just this one topic, heehee.
You too Two_Twig. I've actually been really anxious to find out what happens on your story.Two_Twig wrote:It's been a blast reading your story Dean, hope you return soon, and have a great one
You're right, IceKitsune shouldn't feel sorry about how he/she feels about this. I mean, it wasn't use to offend, simply to correct. And besides where would we be if we denied ourselves the freedom of speech due to fear? In fact, thanks IceKitsune.Tobee wrote:You should not feel sorry for the way you feel, IceK, even if it may seem harsh to the other part. And Dean, this was VERY entertaining to read, I even had tears in me eyes :3 Thank you alot Dean. <3
S'okay.IceKitsune wrote:Ok I had seemed to have forgotten somethings my bad. And now i remember why I thought that you hadn't picked a father from the beginning. When you where talking about not having reveled the father yet I (for whatever reason) thought that you had not come up with who it would be yet. Why I thought this I don't know because in retrospect it makes no sense at all. I also made the assumption of the gestation periods thing so that screwed me up a bit. I really should have re-read the story before posting but oh well nothing I can do about it now. By the way I'm a guy.
ThisEbly wrote:Ewwww, grape/peanut. *giggles*
Thanks ctcmjh,ctcmjh wrote:Great job Dean. Great job.ThisEbly wrote:Ewwww, grape/peanut. *giggles*
Yeah, I'm a big Max/Grape fan, as well as Peanut/Tarot, but I don't hate the Peanut/Grape pairingDean wrote:Thanks ctcmjh,I appreciate it.
Though I did suspect you were a Max/Grape, though.
Completely, I'll be looking forward to your inputDean wrote:You too Two_Twig. I've actually been really anxious to find out what happens on your story.Two_Twig wrote:It's been a blast reading your story Dean, hope you return soon, and have a great oneI'm sorry I haven't commented on it, but I needed to keep my shipping a secret.
Hope you understand.
Hehe, thanks ReCreateReCreate wrote:nevermind saw the update on the previous page.
this is amazing.
just amazing and epic.
It's a futuristic setting, but the entirety of what's happening isn't explained until later.Cerberusx wrote:Ok, so I've read chapter 1, butI can't understand the plot/story line. What is going on? And I don't want to read anymore, for the fact that I don't read things that leaves me with a question mark over my head. So can someond explain what is going on?
We all figured it out, and it's really not that hard. read it slower and try not to skip, then you should understand.Cerberusx wrote:Ok, so I've read chapter 1, butI can't understand the plot/story line. What is going on? And I don't want to read anymore, for the fact that I don't read things that leaves me with a question mark over my head. So can someond explain what is going on?
Haha! Thanks Sinder.Sinder wrote:
Just for you, Dean.
GRAAAAAPE
Thanks Game,The Game wrote:]Wait...waitwaitwaitwait,wait. It's over?? Wha....waht?? that was not expected.....
Dean, I really liked this story. I admit it was confusing at times, but when it was understandable I loved it. Some people may say that it was 'bad', or 'weird' or 'it made no sense' but I don't agree with them, and i will take a bazooka on those people.![]()
I know you probably won't see this, but so everyone knows, i give this story 4 1/2 stars. (the other half, cuz of the confusing places).
I hope you keep writing, Dean.
Thanks Jack, I appreciate it.Jack wrote:why did i forget to finish this??!?!?!?!?!?!? it was beautiful!!!! one of the best stories i have ever read! im sorry dean for not commenting! i had to leave the forum a bit for tests and all that other stuff!
*sniff* *sniff* this story... *sniff* is absolutely, the best fanfic i have ever read! and i even dare to say that it is better then some of the published books i've read!
dean, you are great!
EDIT: oh! and here is what i think about it in more detail:
the story is well thought out, the plot is great, every scenery is so beautifully described that you can actually get a very clear view of everything in it and to top it all off, PEANUT IS THE FATHER!!!
i love it!
DON"T LEAVE ME! DXDean wrote:Thanks Jack, I appreciate it.Jack wrote:why did i forget to finish this??!?!?!?!?!?!? it was beautiful!!!! one of the best stories i have ever read! im sorry dean for not commenting! i had to leave the forum a bit for tests and all that other stuff!
*sniff* *sniff* this story... *sniff* is absolutely, the best fanfic i have ever read! and i even dare to say that it is better then some of the published books i've read!
dean, you are great!
EDIT: oh! and here is what i think about it in more detail:
the story is well thought out, the plot is great, every scenery is so beautifully described that you can actually get a very clear view of everything in it and to top it all off, PEANUT IS THE FATHER!!!
i love it!
You've been great to have.And thanks again, you really helped me out.
I'm not leaving silly.Jack wrote:DON"T LEAVE ME! DX
Something...Jack wrote:oh :u
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then im good. so what are you inspired for now? :3
I doubt I'll be posting elsewhere other than commenting on other fics. (Though I might end up being too shy to do even that for the most part)Jack wrote:oooooh! how exciting!
so dean, you gonna start posting in other places on the forums too? or possibly give me your msn? im good either way, but both will be better!
done!Dean wrote:I doubt I'll be posting elsewhere other than commenting on other fics. (Though I might end up being too shy to do even that for the most part)Jack wrote:oooooh! how exciting!
so dean, you gonna start posting in other places on the forums too? or possibly give me your msn? im good either way, but both will be better!
But msn means Messenger, right? I'll be happy to PM it!Send me yours too, kay?