A story

Harry Johnathan: Posts: 2075; Joined: Thu Nov 12, 2020 12:10 pm

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Let the words of my mouth and the meditation of my heart be acceptable in your sight, O Lord, my rock and my redeemer.

- Psalm 19:14

Welsh Halfwit: Posts: 14735; Joined: Sun Mar 17, 2013 3:09 am; Location: Wales, a luverrly land with noisy neighbours.

Re: Phantom of the Night: A Horror Story [PG-13]

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Post by Welsh Halfwit » Tue Dec 28, 2021 10:30 am

Nice worldbuilding. A slightly unlikable lead is often a good place to start.

Commander Hawle. U.S.C. Loper. By the talented DDeer.
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Re: Phantom of the Night: A Horror Story [PG-13]

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Let the words of my mouth and the meditation of my heart be acceptable in your sight, O Lord, my rock and my redeemer.

- Psalm 19:14

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Re: Phantom of the Night: A Horror Story [PG-13]

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Let the words of my mouth and the meditation of my heart be acceptable in your sight, O Lord, my rock and my redeemer.

- Psalm 19:14

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Re: Haunt My Mind: A Horror Story [PG-13]

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Let the words of my mouth and the meditation of my heart be acceptable in your sight, O Lord, my rock and my redeemer.

- Psalm 19:14

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Re: Haunt My Mind: A Horror Story [PG-13]

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Post by Amazee Dayzee » Fri Jan 07, 2022 7:36 pm

Just got caught up on reading this. It is very good! Nice story you wrote!

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Let the words of my mouth and the meditation of my heart be acceptable in your sight, O Lord, my rock and my redeemer.

- Psalm 19:14