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by copper » Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:33 pm
Let us hope that vengeance is swift for the Orange furred one...
Spike is so going to break his bonds like a boss!
I am sorry to hear of your losses. I do hope that all is well in the end.
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by JeffCvt » Sat Nov 03, 2012 3:20 pm
Just a quick note, in the second panel, "broke" should be "break."
And also, Spike is going crazy at this point. I'm afraid to even turn on my computer out of fear of him breaking it.
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by _Stu_ » Sun Nov 04, 2012 1:04 pm
A stupid mistake i made
fixed, thanks for making me notice
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by Khasimir » Mon Nov 05, 2012 1:06 am
WoW! I really like this comic so far.
The story plot
isn't blandly predictable, and the characters are very dynamic. Love it! I can't wait to know what happens next!
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by _Stu_ » Mon Nov 05, 2012 3:04 am
Khasimir wrote: WoW! I really like this comic so far.
The story plot
isn't blandly predictable, and the characters are very dynamic. Love it! I can't wait to know what happens next!
Thank you!
i'm always happy to have new readers!
and, new page
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by _Stu_ » Mon Nov 05, 2012 3:04 am
Just in case you didn't notice who Twelve actually is
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by angelusbr » Mon Nov 05, 2012 6:02 am
Twelve is after eleven and before thriteen, right?
ok, lame joke.
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by Khasimir » Mon Nov 05, 2012 6:30 am
0.0" Well now, that's gonna be quite some fun cleanup.
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by _Stu_ » Wed Nov 07, 2012 4:08 am
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by _Stu_ » Wed Nov 07, 2012 4:08 am
Whops smells like troubles
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by valerio » Wed Nov 07, 2012 4:46 am
*facepawlms*
Primo...Like, thinking of getting out there a little before than now?
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by Khasimir » Wed Nov 07, 2012 7:16 pm
angelusbr wrote: The plot thickens
Yes we know. It'll keep on doing that until it crests.
I look forward to find out how the duo is gonna escape this one!
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by copper » Thu Nov 08, 2012 12:00 am
Looks like 12 is going to have fun with Ten... I wonder who is stronger...
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by _Stu_ » Fri Nov 09, 2012 3:05 am
Sorry Mario but your princess is in another explosion
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Good, Deviantart died again ^^
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by valerio » Fri Nov 09, 2012 3:07 am
why do I feel this day is not going to end up well?
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by _Stu_ » Fri Nov 09, 2012 3:51 am
Yes about that... no well, i'll tell you next week
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by kavviyenta » Fri Nov 09, 2012 1:26 pm
Via the mystery dog that is.
http://valito.deviantart.com/ my deviant gallery, nope there's no housepets in it
Unless you like Lilo & Stitch, kinda wish to see the experiments in housepets style
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by Khasimir » Fri Nov 09, 2012 5:13 pm
Each next page is more thrilling than the last! x3;;,
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by copper » Fri Nov 09, 2012 9:17 pm
A fun ride, this is turning out to be. Um, for the reader, not so much for Spike and Primo...
Spike is giving into the dark side of the force. Primo, use your jedi powers to help him!!!!
He has jedi powers, right? Because Spike is looking like he is shooting lightning from his fingertips...
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by _Stu_ » Mon Nov 12, 2012 3:18 am
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by _Stu_ » Mon Nov 12, 2012 3:21 am
I'm sure that now i'll be universally hated
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I don't feel so well... i'm sick, i got fever and a bad headache. But for the next three pages everything should be ok.
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by RandomGeekNamedBrent » Mon Nov 12, 2012 3:24 am
I'd be mad, but comics and TV have taught me to treat fictional death as temporary.There's a lways some way to bring them back.
and he's the 1 in 1X. title characters can't die.
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by valerio » Mon Nov 12, 2012 5:23 am
...do you realize that there BETTER be a reason for this.
Or ELSE?
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by _Stu_ » Mon Nov 12, 2012 6:00 am
There is. This event was planned and decided from the very beginning, because is VERY important for the whole plot.
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by angelusbr » Mon Nov 12, 2012 6:03 am
Well, I remember I foresaw Primo's death in this arc, but someone also told me that then the comic would have been renamed if this happened. Also, remember Pete will show up pretty soon. Maybe he saves Primo's life.
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by Khasimir » Mon Nov 12, 2012 11:34 am
CHEAP!
Nobody likes feign deaths in fiction. If you're gonna kill off a major character, atleast be sure
not to bring them back, okay?
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by RandomGeekNamedBrent » Mon Nov 12, 2012 1:25 pm
Khasimir wrote: CHEAP!
Nobody likes feign deaths in fiction. If you're gonna kill off a major character, atleast be sure
not to bring them back, okay?
there are some characters that can never be permanently killed. In the case of this comic, they are Primo and Spike (title characters) and all of Rick's characters.
my theory:
somehow, Primo is the first of the experiments, so this won't actually kill him.
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by valerio » Mon Nov 12, 2012 1:55 pm
...or, Primo may be Uncle Ben!
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by copper » Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:19 pm
Heh, Primo gets shot. Way to go there Stu!
Remember that one pic of Primo with powers? I am sure this is how he acquires them somehow... deal with a deity or something? I do not know.
I wonder how badly Spike will fight back now that Primo is "gone" ?
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by valerio » Tue Nov 13, 2012 1:36 am
copper wrote: Heh, Primo gets shot. Way to go there Stu!
Remember that one pic of Primo with powers? I am sure this is how he acquires them somehow... deal with a deity or something? I do not know.
I wonder how badly Spike will fight back now that Primo is "gone" ?
the real problem is: how much power will this 'human' gain from X's hatred?
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by _Stu_ » Wed Nov 14, 2012 3:14 am
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by _Stu_ » Wed Nov 14, 2012 3:15 am
I hate myself for this? Quite enough.
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by valerio » Wed Nov 14, 2012 4:27 am
typo!
Spike should say "I-I can save you," etc.
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by _Stu_ » Wed Nov 14, 2012 4:43 am
Holy--
i didn't even notice!
Seems like i don't feel so good after all. Better go back to sleep. Thanks for making me notice xD
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by angelusbr » Wed Nov 14, 2012 6:29 am
So primo died for good?
INteresting.
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by copper » Wed Nov 14, 2012 11:09 pm
Heh, let us see how this continues~
Poor Spike. That second to last panel of his face in profile is priceless... would make a great avatar
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by Khasimir » Thu Nov 15, 2012 11:37 am
How tragic.... Spike's expression is so vivid, the shock and grief he feels is drawn very convincingly.
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by _Stu_ » Fri Nov 16, 2012 3:04 am
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