Just an ordinary Guy.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:09 pm

After a longer break, Story!
No aliens of timie wimie wibbaly wabbaly stuff this time.

INTRO

Grape was on the living room floor playing (and chewing) with a ball of yarn.
She struggled like she was...Er...playing with a ball of yarn.
She rolled around.
*BAFF! *
"Arg! Stupid table!" She said as she rube her head after she smacked her head against the coffee table.
She got up. And took a left through a hallway to the kitchen.
"Peanut?! Are the pizzas done yet?!" She yelled.
"Wha?" He started as he looked up from the table play with his invention.
"Uh, almost...I got to put them in first..."
Peanut's machine was creating a signal.The signal was: "Streak.Come back."
Grape walked over to Peanut.
"He's not come back." She said as she rubbed his back.
Peanut sighed after hearing what he already knew.
"Um,Here." Peanut said getting up to put dinner in.
Mom and Dad were at some "Pet safety" class.
Grape rolled her eyes as she thought about that.
"Have you heard anything about when Mom and Dad are coming home?"
Grape asked.
"Not yet." Peanut said closing the oven.
"Aw..Grape moms going to kill you if she finds out the you mess with her yarn!" He continued peaking into the living room.
"Why do they even need a class?!?" Said Grape ignoring Peanut.
"Were perfectly safe!!"
There was a huge bang at the door.

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:11 pm

A huge bang, can't be good.

Or can it?!

Teh Brawler · Post by **Teh Brawler** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:19 pm

BAFF

Best sound effect ever.

yoyodude · Post by **yoyodude** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:03 pm

Tobee wrote:A huge bang, can't be good.

Or can it?!

*kool aid man crashes through the wall*

Teh Brawler · Post by **Teh Brawler** » Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:04 pm

yoyodude wrote:
Tobee wrote:A huge bang, can't be good.

Or can it?!
*kool aid man crashes through the wall*

OH YEAH

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:50 am

OK
I'm game
I'll pretend this is an ordinary situation for an ordinary day of our heroes.
My head hurtz already

The Game · Post by **The Game** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:04 am

I have the strangest feeling that this story will be awesome

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 3:19 pm

Thank you for all the great comments

CHAPTER 1

Grape and Peanut jumped as it happened.
Peanut walked slowly to the door.
Grape grabbed his arm.
"Were do you think your going?!" She whispered.
"To get the door!"
"It could be a robber!"
"A robber who knocks?"
"O-Okay.."Grape said as she let him go.
Peanut walked to the door and reached for the nob.
Before he could open it, it smashed open!(It's still in one piece.)
He jumped back before the door smacked him.
A man was at the door.
He had brown long messy hair, glasses that had a hint of green and, brown eyes. He was about 5' ish.
He was smiling.
"Who-"Peanut started.
"PEANUT!" The man Screamed as he gave a huge hug to Peanut.
"Ack!" Peanut coughed.
"You don't remember me do you?" He said.
"Uh,No."
"Its me!" He started swinging his arms around.
"Allecx! You cousin twice, well... Three times removed!"
"Where's Grape?" He said hanging his coat up.
Peanut tried to catch his breath.
He heard a faint GRAPE! Sound from the kitchen.
Peanut ran in.
After they had gotten everything all straighten out and had dinner.
The big questions started getting asked.
"So, Why are you here?" Peanut asked as politely as he could.
"To watch you for awhile!" He replied.
"Awhile?Where's Mom and Dad?!When are they coming home?" Grape asked Allecx.
He looked at the ground before saying:
"They won't be home very soon..."
(Eds note: it's pronounced Alex just spelled cool.

)

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 3:25 pm

1) it's becoming INTERESTING

2) PLEASE DON'T LET IT BE AN ALIEN!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:16 pm

valerio wrote:1) it's becoming INTERESTING

2) PLEASE DON'T LET IT BE AN ALIEN!

(1 it will be!
(2Promiss. No aliens! Allecx is a human dude I made up.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:28 pm

(Eds note: it's pronounced Alex just spelled cool. )

For some reason, this made me temember an enemy dude of Captain marvel, whose name was Fredd -because he was too bad to have just one 'd' in his name!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:51 pm

Chapter2

"How long?" Grape asked.
"Mey, A few days." Allecx said getting up of his chair.
"How many?" Peanut asked.
"Seven or eight." Allecx replied.
"Seven or eight?!?" Grape and Peanut said at the same time.
"Ish"
Peanut grumbled.
"Now it's been a big day and it already 8:00.Bed time!"
"But on Saturdays Mom let's us stay-" Peanut started.
"Yes, but my favorite tv show is on and I don't want to miss it."
Peanut growled as he went in his room.
The next day at 4:30 Peanut's alarm went off.
"Urg..." Peanut moaned as he got out of bed.
He yawned before seeing the clock.
His eyes widened.
"Tck!Who ever set my alarm is..." he mumbled not finishing his sentence.
He walked down stairs to get a quick drink of water.
He opened the fridge looking for a bottle.
The fridge was empty.
He groaned closing the door and turning to the cupboard.
He got on his toes and reached for a cup after opening the doors.
Reached for one and smacked it.
It wobbled before falling out of the cupboard.
Peanut caught it with one hand. He smiled.
He yawned once again before walking to the sink.
The sink was placed right in front of a window of their back yard.
Before filling his cup with the water from the sink(Hey, he's a dog.)
He looked outside and smiled at the empty peaceful yard.
He looked down to fill the cup.
Peanut drank the water in the cup.
As he drank as he looked at the yard once again.
A man stood out in the dark.
Peanut jumped and spit all the water back into the sink.
He looked up at the yard again shaking.
The man wasn't there.
It was to dark to tell who it was.
Peanut ,scared like crazy, ran into his room a slammed the door.
His heart was beating a million times a second.
He looked at the clock.
It had only been two minutes.
He quickly got to his bed.
And closed his eyes.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sat Aug 14, 2010 3:09 pm

Oh-ho! Perhaps did peanut see the ol' Reaper there in the garden?

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sat Aug 14, 2010 3:16 pm

I bet it was you there Valerio. <.< :p

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sat Aug 14, 2010 3:30 pm

ACK! I've been discovered!
Now I must reap YOU!

Zander · Post by **Zander** » Sat Aug 14, 2010 3:32 pm

valerio wrote: Now I must reap YOU!

I misread that T_T i have a dirty mind..

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Aug 14, 2010 6:17 pm

valerio wrote:ACK! I've been discovered!
Now I must reap YOU!

AH!
Valerio! you made into my story!!!
Now really is the end of the world. >.>
Lol
Just kiddin'!!

The Game · Post by **The Game** » Sun Aug 15, 2010 6:17 pm

That's why the title seemed so familiar!!
It's like Hannah Montana's song!
...
why the heck do I know that...

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:30 pm

Sorry, No update.
I have been have some problems with my ipod and i have beed working on that.
i fail at life...

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:37 am

Hopper200456 wrote:Sorry, No update.
I have been have some problems with my ipod and i have beed working on that.
i fail at life...

woah, take it easy, hoppy!
You know we can be patient
we can wait...
we are numerous...
in the dark...

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:14 am

Oh dear god Valerio. <.< You're going to scare him away!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:10 pm

Chapter 3
Dear Grape,
I can't stand to see your wonderful face and just sit and do nothing, so I-
Peanut fiddled with the pencil as he tried to think of what to write.
He rolled it across the table.
He sighed as he sat up in the chair.
He read it time and time again trying to find the right words.
Making him jump the door slammed open!
Allecx was in the door way.
"Hey, P-nut, we need to go- What are you doing?" he asked
Peanut hid the note with his Spot the Superdog comics.
"Er..Nothing..." he replied blushing.
Allecx raised an eye brow.
"Well, anyway we need to go out to lunch then I need to go to my office." Allecx Said.
"Uh, sure..." Peanut replied.
"You could take your work with you of you want. I'm sure she won't see it."
"How did you-"
"We better get going!" He said smiling.
Lunch with Allecx. The thing that makes you think: WHY ME?!?!
Peanut sat finished his frys before they left.
Peanut stood up and took a couple sips of his soda.
In the corner of his eye he saw the man out in the grass.
He coughed on the soda nearly killing himself.
"Peanut? You okay?" Grape said.
Peanut coughed before saying
"Yeah, I...just was drinking to fast."
He looked back in the direction.
The man was gone.

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:20 pm

The mystery man OH GOD

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:24 pm

poor Peanut!
Interrupted while he was writing his declaration of love! Stupid Alecx!
Tobee, you didn't see me...

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:51 pm

valerio wrote:poor Peanut!
Interrupted while he was writing his declaration of love! Stupid Alecx!
Tobee, you didn't see me...

I was going to finish that note in the story but I couldn't think of anything romantic to say so I cut it off.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:03 pm

I was going to finish that note in the story but I couldn't think of anything romantic to say so I cut it off.

YOU dared to interrupt him!?!

I'll creep you to the end of days for this!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:18 pm

ONLINE EXTRA!!

Tobee walked in the long dark alley shaking every bone in his body.
He held a lantern sticking it out in front of himself to light the alley.
It was a nightmare walking through those alleys alone at night.
Tobee was worried that his worst nightmare would be lurking in the long dark trench.
The lantern made a load noise when Tobee shook.
Tears of fear ran down Tobee's checks.
"Tooobeeeeee...."
He heard in the dark.
Tobee screamed and threw the lantern in the air.
He ran,and ran.
He could hear foot steps behind him.
He made the mistake of looking behind himself.
There was no one there.
Before he could look in front of himself he ran into his worst nightmare.
Valerio.
Valerio laughed as he reached out and grabbed Tobee.
"Noooooo!!!" Tobee screamed.
Ever since that day, Tobee was never seen on the forums again...

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:20 pm

valerio wrote:
I was going to finish that note in the story but I couldn't think of anything romantic to say so I cut it off.
YOU dared to interrupt him!?!
I'll creep you to the end of days for this!

Great, I KNEW I should have finished it.
The letter comes into play later.

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:23 pm

OH DEAR MOTHER OF GOD

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:39 pm

hopper, you know me so well
And him...

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:43 pm

valerio wrote:hopper, you know me so well
And him...

I know my most loyal fans. :)8

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:44 pm

PLEASE SPARE ME :<*cries*

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:44 pm

you're still here. It means something, does it?

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:59 pm

Chapter 3

The car trip was a huge drive.
Grape fell asleep for about an hour. The rest of the time she just sat and waited.
Peanut did about the same.
He thought about the man. He shook as he thought about it.
"What's wrong?" Grape asked yawning.
"Oh, Uh...I'm cold." he lied.
"It burning in here!"
"Yo-You have a thicker coat..."
Grape rolled her eyes.
Once they got to the office Allecx told them not to touch anything.
The went up two stories and past many desks.
"What do you do?" Grape asked as they walked.
"Hm?Oh, I work in robotics."
"Why do you need all these computers, desk and stuff." Peanut asked.
"Someone has to work on the programs." Allecx replied.
Allecx turned and went to one desk and shuffled some papers and picked up stuff.
Peanut saw a little bronze ball on one of the desks.
He touched it.
He jumped back as the little ball burnt his finger.
"Alright!" Allecx said walking toward the door.
Peanut looked at him when he talked.
He looked back at the ball and it was gone.
Peanut rubbed his eyes thinking, I really need to get nine hours.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:06 pm

well...robots. Robots are fun...
*and all of a sudden Valerio is struck by a bad premonition*
Robots...
Uh-oh!

BTW, didn't know that thinkers were immune to cold, hehe!

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:09 pm

Mystery objects and what'not EVERYWHERE

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Wed Aug 18, 2010 12:59 pm

Chapter 4

The ride home seemed longer. They went over three bridges.
"Where are we?" Grape asked half an hour into the drive.
"Tensuvania."
"I'm sorry?" Peanut said.
"Ten-Su-Van-Ia." Allecx said again.
"And where might that be?" Grape asked.
"Meh, five or six cities away from Babylon Gardens."
"WHY DO YOU DO THIS!?" Grape said putting her palm on her face.
"Its 6:30-" Allecx started.
"It's six already!?" Peanut asked.
"Hungry?" Allecx finished.
"Uh,Yea."
Dinner was the same as lunch.
When they went to the counter to order the food, Peanut could see the man back in the kitchen.
He jumped back but kept his eyes on the man.
He heart was beating a million times a second.
Grape saw this.
"Peanut? Are you okay?" She asked.
"G-Grape, look at him."
"Who, that guy?" she said gesturing toward the man.
"Yea, I've seen him in our backyard, a-and at lunch, and all over..."
"Peanut,-" Grape started.
Peanut thought what it would be like if he was her.
"J-just kidding." Peanut said smiling at Grape.
"Tch," Grape said, turning away.
Peanut looked back at the man and, guess what, he was gone.
After dinner they got back in the car.
After a few more hours of driving, they made it home.
Grape got out first. Peanut was still in the car was putting things like his DS into a bag to bring into the house.
As he was walking he slipped on a bronze ball and fell face first into the concrete.
He felt really dizzy as he got up.
Grape turned to look at him and gasped.
Peanut, confused, felt blood dripping down his face.
He looked at his hand.
It was covered in blood.
He looked back at Grape.
Then he blacked out.

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Wed Aug 18, 2010 1:25 pm

Oh dear god more mystery

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Thu Aug 19, 2010 7:39 am

uh-oh
gorey...

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:26 pm

A huge big Thank you to Lightwolf21 for spell checking my chapters!!
Thank you lightworf21!!