Easter Cake
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Easter Cake
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
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Re: Easter Cake
Oh thank dog the cakes are back! I was getting a case of the withdrawal here!
Good start, very good! Heh, rabbit got her tongue
Moar!
Good start, very good! Heh, rabbit got her tongue
Moar!
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Re: Easter Cake
must be a small rabbit. or she has a big mouth, but she barely talks, so that's not it.
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but when she speaks out, we KNOW itRandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:must be a small rabbit. or she has a big mouth, but she barely talks, so that's not it.
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Wow... Small rabbit, big mouth.
I wonder what sort of life affirming lesson Vanilla will learn from this rabbit. Good or bad, this ought to be a great story!
I wonder what sort of life affirming lesson Vanilla will learn from this rabbit. Good or bad, this ought to be a great story!
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@valerio: Careful with your words, please....
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Another interesting update. So the great Peter Rabbit is here and visiting. Sounds wonderful.
Honey is very accepting. Vanilla needs to take a page from her book and relax a bit.
A green egg on Easter. What a thoughtful gift.
Honey is very accepting. Vanilla needs to take a page from her book and relax a bit.
A green egg on Easter. What a thoughtful gift.
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Too late, CC, too late.
Addiction comes strong with the Cakes
And when the li'l one said 'Mama!', my heart melted more than with any known ship! That baby rabbit is a weapon of mass cuteness!
Addiction comes strong with the Cakes
And when the li'l one said 'Mama!', my heart melted more than with any known ship! That baby rabbit is a weapon of mass cuteness!
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Re: Easter Cake
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Easter Cake
Nice little joke at the end. That's Vanilla for you, always a comment...
So Peter is now full grown. Hmm, wonder how he will protect her.
Mr. Cake is not the most likeable person in the world... at least he cares.
So Peter is now full grown. Hmm, wonder how he will protect her.
Mr. Cake is not the most likeable person in the world... at least he cares.
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an order of melting heart with side of butter at table 2, please!
Oh, and don't forget the cake with the egg, thank you.
Hmm, tasty more more MORE!
Oh, and don't forget the cake with the egg, thank you.
Hmm, tasty more more MORE!
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Easter Cake
That snake knows a little too much.
I say she's still asleep and this is a dream.
I say she's still asleep and this is a dream.
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Um, how did a constrictor get into the wilds of an American Forest not in the South.... is this a pet? It's owner, or former owner, will get into a lot of trouble for it running loose....
So Vanilla ate Peter. That's unusual. I guess that was Vanilla's first taste of raw meat?
So the snake is like a vampire, gotcha!
So Vanilla ate Peter. That's unusual. I guess that was Vanilla's first taste of raw meat?
So the snake is like a vampire, gotcha!
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...Frequent flier miles?copper wrote:Um, how did a constrictor get into the wilds of an American Forest not in the South.... is this a pet? It's owner, or former owner, will get into a lot of trouble for it running loose....
So Vanilla ate Peter. That's unusual. I guess that was Vanilla's first taste of raw meat?
So the snake is like a vampire, gotcha!
And...HOW is it like a vampire, exactly...?
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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ChewyChewy wrote:...Frequent flier miles?copper wrote:Um, how did a constrictor get into the wilds of an American Forest not in the South.... is this a pet? It's owner, or former owner, will get into a lot of trouble for it running loose....
So Vanilla ate Peter. That's unusual. I guess that was Vanilla's first taste of raw meat?
So the snake is like a vampire, gotcha!
And...HOW is it like a vampire, exactly...?
Part of the legend of Vampires, especially since Bram Stoker's novel, is that they can hypnotize people like the snake did. Look into their mind and control them, make them motionless for when they take the final bite. Made for an alluring scene in Dracula.
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Given the surreality of this tableau, any comment will be suspended until next update. *cluck*
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Re: Easter Cake
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Awww, such an emotional update. At least she managed to find the courage to fight!
Poor Peter. I guess he kept his promise.
So when do we see the egg?
Poor Peter. I guess he kept his promise.
So when do we see the egg?
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Re: Easter Cake
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Easter Cake
a bit weird, but just as good as always. I had fun reading.
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Thanks! Yeah, it was weird--I told you this was a long time in coming, because I wasn't sure how to make it work. But I hope I succeeded.RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:a bit weird, but just as good as always. I had fun reading.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Ooookay... Peter is a nice bunny and all, but I am sure he could have done that SOME other way....
Really good writing as always, Chewy! Always like a good Cake Sisters story!
Really good writing as always, Chewy! Always like a good Cake Sisters story!
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How do you mean?copper wrote:Ooookay... Peter is a nice bunny and all, but I am sure he could have done that SOME other way....
Really good writing as always, Chewy! Always like a good Cake Sisters story!
But thank you both for the compliments!
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
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Thanks! Hope you like the rest!McFly wrote:Just started reading this, and I'm loving it so far.
Keep up the good work.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Easter Cake
hmm...Peter Rabbit...
I couldn't help but think about it a little bit, heh. Either way, an awesome read as per usual. Definitly an imaginative way to teach a lessons about trust.
I couldn't help but think about it a little bit, heh. Either way, an awesome read as per usual. Definitly an imaginative way to teach a lessons about trust.
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Ha ha.44R0NM10 wrote:hmm...Peter Rabbit...
I couldn't help but think about it a little bit, heh. Either way, an awesome read as per usual. Definitly an imaginative way to teach a lessons about trust.
Well, thanks!
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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