Halloween Cakes
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Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:30 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
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Re: Halloween Cakes
SQUEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The mythological and folklore references! I love it!
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Re: Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Halloween Cakes
Another wonderful and light update. As always, your story proves fun but emotional.
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Re: Halloween Cakes
Love your writing style, and I'm loving this story! I can't wait to hear more!
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Re: Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Halloween Cakes
Okay, this is getting more and more interesting! I wonder if they ALL will disappear?!
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:38 pm, edited 1 time in total.
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Halloween Cakes
So the mystery continues, with a Holmesian flair at that! I like it.
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the plot thickens once more, it feels like Scooby Doo but better.
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Halloween Cakes
Oh for... .
Awaiting the last chapter!
Awaiting the last chapter!
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Re: Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Halloween Cakes
And so it ends. Quite the story. I hope this is not the last.
Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...
Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...
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Thanks, I hope that's a good thing. And I hope it isn't the last as well.copper wrote:And so it ends. Quite the story. I hope this is not the last.
Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...
*nods* Well, we'll never know who the cat was....
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Halloween Cakes
Wow, a true halloweenian adventure for the intrepid detectives, yay!
*Salutes* Congrats, CC, once again you didn't fail your faithful fandom!
*Salutes* Congrats, CC, once again you didn't fail your faithful fandom!
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Re: Halloween Cakes
I enjoyed it. (also, am I the only one who reads Honey and vanilla with Starfire and Raven's voices from Teen Titans?)
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@valerio: Thanks for the compliment!
Brent: I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.
Brent: I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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I didn't say she talked in the same mannerisms, just with the same voice.ChewyChewy wrote:@valerio: Thanks for the compliment!
Brent: I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.
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I figured, but it's kind of hard for me to imagine Starfire talking normally....RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I didn't say she talked in the same mannerisms, just with the same voice.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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...Wow, I'm gonna be picturing Honey and Vanilla to talk like that from now on. Awesome.
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What did you think of the story overall?44R0NM10 wrote:...Wow, I'm gonna be picturing Honey and Vanilla to talk like that from now on. Awesome.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Halloween Cakes
ever heard Princess Bubblegum on Adventure time? that's her.
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I hadn't, so I looked it up.RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:ever heard Princess Bubblegum on Adventure time? that's her.
Mmmmmmmmm.... Still not entirely sure, but maybe.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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I loved the story as per usual, hehe. I've gotta admit, I forgot about Silver at first. Still, I really enjoyed it. A mystery in a mystery in a mystery
Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising.
Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising.
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Glad you did. I'm not that great at writing mysteries, and was honestly solving this one myself.44R0NM10 wrote:I loved the story as per usual, hehe. I've gotta admit, I forgot about Silver at first. Still, I really enjoyed it. A mystery in a mystery in a mystery
Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising.
Well, I'm glad you at least thought that was a good technique. I probably should have done it from multiple points of view. As I said, not great at writing mysteries.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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