A story
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- Harry Johnathan
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A story
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Sarah was afraid, so she lied and said, “I did not laugh.” But [The LORD] said, “Yes, you did laugh.” - Genesis 18:15 (NIV).
- Welsh Halfwit
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- Location: Wales, a luverrly land with noisy neighbours.
Re: Phantom of the Night: A Horror Story [PG-13]
Nice worldbuilding. A slightly unlikable lead is often a good place to start.
- Harry Johnathan
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Sarah was afraid, so she lied and said, “I did not laugh.” But [The LORD] said, “Yes, you did laugh.” - Genesis 18:15 (NIV).
- Harry Johnathan
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Re: Phantom of the Night: A Horror Story [PG-13]
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Sarah was afraid, so she lied and said, “I did not laugh.” But [The LORD] said, “Yes, you did laugh.” - Genesis 18:15 (NIV).
- Harry Johnathan
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Re: Haunt My Mind: A Horror Story [PG-13]
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Sarah was afraid, so she lied and said, “I did not laugh.” But [The LORD] said, “Yes, you did laugh.” - Genesis 18:15 (NIV).
- Amazee Dayzee
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Re: Haunt My Mind: A Horror Story [PG-13]
Just got caught up on reading this. It is very good! Nice story you wrote!
- Harry Johnathan
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Sarah was afraid, so she lied and said, “I did not laugh.” But [The LORD] said, “Yes, you did laugh.” - Genesis 18:15 (NIV).