2021/10/05 - Escape Plan

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2021/10/05 - Escape Plan

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[ Escape Sequence

Title Text: Um...I'm the viper, and I've come to vipe your windows?

And now we return to the Keene And Breel show!
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Going down is faster to do
when yourself is stebbing at you.
Breel sees his ‘reflection’ appear
and wonders what it’s doing here.
Keene doesn’t need him pulling now -
‘lest he falls off anyhow -
but Breel doesn’t tell true love
how this double fits like a glove.
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Did he know of his doubles’ path?
Did innocence know of evil
before dropping down a level?
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Ah yeah, back at the manor with Keene and Breel. They're trying to escape from it, but NegaBreel is always attempting to kill his alter-ego... :? NegaBreel got right in front of Breel! :o He should put more emphasis with that dagger, though. :P You're falling from about three meters, it's not much, you won't hurt. ;) Keene shouldn't have great troubles to escape using the stairs, because NegaBreel wants only Breel... :roll:
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Nega Breel is gonna get run over by a car, comically taking him out, I just know it.
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This sequence is full comedy. And I love it.
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Is it sad that I am thinking that is a nice sash window?
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So Breel and Keene were climbing down instead of going up in order to escape? At first glance I was confused because I couldn't tell if they were outside or inside.
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Amazee Dayzee wrote: Tue Oct 05, 2021 4:37 pm So Breel and Keene were climbing down instead of going up in order to escape? At first glance I was confused because I couldn't tell if they were outside or inside.
Looks like they're "down and out" now !!
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I'm sure that they didn't end up breaking anything and Keene was right when he said it was fine. Breel probably tensed up though. I can see a lot of bruising and pain only for them. :P
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Oh hey, we're back. And I'm late for once.
That has to be the most half hearted stab I've ever seen.
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Still have that stabbing problem, I see
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To be fear to Nega Breel, this time it wasn't a stab. It was a steb. There is a HUGE world of difference. ;)
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Maybe he thinks it's a drumstick .... ?
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So, with the whole "Celestrial citizens can't see evil" thing-- does that mean they literally can't see an evil being before them, or is it that they just can't perceive them as evil?












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I think it’s more they can’t detect an Infernal being unless they’re actively doing something with their powers. For example, Kitsune was able to detect that a portal was open, but that was it. Anything more would require the mortal senses, which is why he said he’d hone in to whoever informed him that they sighted a demon rather than the demon itself.
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Its just a shame that Lois, Marion, Todd, Tarot and the aardvark are trapped up on a building in a car because they probably would inform him as they need him right now since Steward has really lost it. :P
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Hey look Breel, a curtain to grab-
And an open window, shadow ready to stab-
The other folks need you, don't fall-
That'd be one way to drop the ball...

That dagger looks sharp and rough,
And so it's really really tough
For Breel not to shout and leap back-
And the curtain's given full slack.
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