SRP: STEELHAVEN - OOC

Deske · Post by **Deske** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 6:56 am

Very early on, pages 4 ish maybe.

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 7:00 am

oooh I see , thanks

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 9:29 am

I guess Mayotte is a lightweight and cant stand all that he had. Guess corp can get mad at him later for passing out on his desk.

Civilization · Post by **Civilization** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 1:06 pm

Heh, well I guess I have my way of getting back in here... Is that dog already in the med bay or is that dog on his way?

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 1:12 pm

Since Corp just about reached over his desk to attack Colorado and told him to get out of his sight. I would imagine they will be on the way soon.

Civilization · Post by **Civilization** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 1:18 pm

Yeah, but what about that dog Mayotte punched out, that's what I'm asking.

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 1:19 pm

Oh him? Yes, he probably is going to be at the med bay right about now.
maybe a few others during the whole eventual breaking up bits of the fight.

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 1:23 pm

So, how was the chew out?

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 1:27 pm

I was laughing through it and tried to imagine how the entire exchange would sound like in my head. I must say you are a very skilled writer and I could tell the character was very mad.

Deske · Post by **Deske** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 1:57 pm

Welsh Halfwit wrote:So, how was the chew out?

Terrifying. I loved it, it seems easier to write harsh emotions, but that was fantastic. Unfortunately I didn't hold up that well and feel I wrote rather clichè.

On the flip side it's been a long time since I've had to write something that sounded more professional than that message from CMO Raj M. Sivakumar.

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 3:29 pm

This is NAAFI

NAAFI tea proudly states you can make two cups with one bag. Its strength was/is fearsome. Add sugar and you had the British Army's primary way of dulling initial shock. And every soldier had them.

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 8:27 pm

I agree with everyone , what was a really good post Welsh , very impressive ^^

Legotron123 · Post by **Legotron123** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 10:06 pm

Is anyone else ready to end the day?

Deske · Post by **Deske** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 10:13 pm

Not a bad idea.

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Thu Aug 13, 2015 10:38 pm

I only have one character left anyway, he doesn't have much left to do

also, for serences post. Could I jump in as a temp insignia guard to kind of help interact with her a bit?

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Fri Aug 14, 2015 12:57 am

Iron Panda wrote:I only have one character left anyway, he doesn't have much left to do

also, for serences post. Could I jump in as a temp insignia guard to kind of help interact with her a bit?

You could try but I fear any interaction will be...

"Hel..."
BLAM!
Urgh *dies*
Punch, punch, punch, punch, punch.....

And are we to be denied Lewis' reaction to being chewed out?

Legotron123 · Post by **Legotron123** » Fri Aug 14, 2015 1:05 am

No, I just haven't thought of it yet.

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Fri Aug 14, 2015 1:19 am

Welsh Halfwit wrote:
Iron Panda wrote:I only have one character left anyway, he doesn't have much left to do

also, for serences post. Could I jump in as a temp insignia guard to kind of help interact with her a bit?
You could try but I fear any interaction will be...

"Hel..."
BLAM!
Urgh *dies*
Punch, punch, punch, punch, punch.....

And are we to be denied Lewis' reaction to being chewed out?

I am sure she and I can come up with something

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Fri Aug 14, 2015 1:38 am

Legotron123 wrote:No, I just haven't thought of it yet.

So you know - and, possibly so Lewis knows - Corp really didn't like chewing Lewis out. He hates that it was needed.

Legotron123 · Post by **Legotron123** » Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:52 pm

Does Corp out rank Lewis? I've forgotten.

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:05 pm

Corp would be roughly equivalent 'Chief of the boat' but we had to alter things so Corp could take that temp command so he has the same rank as Lewis but Corp only answers to the Captain when it's a Security matter.

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chief_of_the_Boat

Deske · Post by **Deske** » Fri Aug 14, 2015 6:39 pm

Lieutenant Lewis Walker, right?

Isn't Corp "Lieutenant-Commander Davidstow"?

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 12:47 am

Deske wrote:Lieutenant Lewis Walker, right?

Isn't Corp "Lieutenant-Commander Davidstow"?

Good point. I'd forgotten Lewis doesn't have the 'commander' bit yet. but he's never wanted - or needed before now - to pull rank on Lewis.

Legotron123 · Post by **Legotron123** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 3:41 pm

In my next post I'm going to start the next day. Is everyone okay with that?

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 4:18 pm

Sounds fine to me. What time for the morning briefing? As he has the eight o'clock medical.

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 5:08 pm

All that's left is the station attack. Which I think serence just needs to make a post and I think is done on her side. Not sure though

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 5:18 pm

And, if anyone thinks Keeva and Dan are going to get up to anything else tonight..? You have dirty minds...

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 5:22 pm

Also yes, there is an insignia member with the last name of Stephens. I am sure he has no relation to any other character.

Deske · Post by **Deske** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 6:26 pm

Welsh Halfwit wrote:And, if anyone thinks Keeva and Dan are going to get up to anything else tonight..? You have dirty minds...

No I don't, in the human world that's just logical progression. It just takes longer.

Legotron123 · Post by **Legotron123** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 6:47 pm

The morning briefing happens at 6:00. That's why Saturday morning cartoons don't start until seven.
Also, if I remember their ages right, Dan and Keeva are way too young to do... THAT.

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 11:15 pm

Legotron123 wrote:The morning briefing happens at 6:00. That's why Saturday morning cartoons don't start until seven.
Also, if I remember their ages right, Dan and Keeva are way too young to do... THAT.

Both about 17 in human terms, I recall. But both still clothed tonight.

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Sat Aug 15, 2015 11:43 pm

If serence allows this grunt to live. He is going to get fan art and a fanfiction made. totally because of how random I am feeling tonight.
I don't think he will ever be a regular here in the RP though, so don't worry. I am not adding a second one.

But if he dies, well. Barry does have two sisters. One of them might just have to show up soon in a special way.
Edit: Also would it be okay to add something to the rp's universe lore? I have something I would like to do for Barrys sister and her own story (she probably wont be showing up ever, except to talk to barry when the next day starts)

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Sun Aug 16, 2015 1:11 am

And that's the end of my character for the day . I'm ready for the next day now . Thanks for waiting guys , and thank you Drake/Iron Panda for giving my character someone to interact with

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Sun Aug 16, 2015 1:14 am

You are welcome, glad you got some posts in.

Also that lore idea thing I mentioned.
I was going to have Barrys sister be a smuggler/transporter for a rare and valuable gem that a lot of people would kill for so it has to be transported in secret to markets from planet to planet and such.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Sun Aug 16, 2015 5:53 am

I'm cool with a new day if Welshie is.
I'm not sure how much more there is for our characters to do/say tonight anyway.

What about the guys in the medbay? Do you guys want to do anything more before the day ends?

Welsh Halfwit · Post by **Welsh Halfwit** » Sun Aug 16, 2015 6:17 am

Got no problem. Corp'll sleep at his desk (with warning sensors to detect approaching people and wake him) and Dabry's room is just down from the brothers.

Legotron123 · Post by **Legotron123** » Tue Aug 18, 2015 7:52 am

Who spotted the references I put in my last post? Because I put in quite a few.

Jacey · Post by **Jacey** » Tue Aug 18, 2015 7:59 am

The names sound familiar, but I cant remember why.

I would give a cookie to anyone who knows the reference I put in my next day post (not my recent one, the one with Barry and sam in it, its not masterchef, also serence and hlaoroo will not get the cookie if they guess. that would be cheating.)

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Tue Aug 18, 2015 8:00 am

aw , that's not fair ! D:

Legotron123 · Post by **Legotron123** » Tue Aug 18, 2015 8:16 am

Every single one of the names was a reference to something.