fenrirblack wrote:Two reasons why I don't see that happening either. One being I doubt Rick would want to make that many new characters when he has an oversized cast already. Two logistics would cause a problem. Marion is an isolated incident. But if suddenly four or five more teens change in the course of a single week then we have a pandemic on our hands which will create a story problem that goes against the fundamental points of the comic. Steward and Thomas being back to back was one thing. Lois is the most likely target to follow Marion but beyond that if more humans are going to be changed it needs to be done gradually with "high risk targets" which means those who will not be missed like Thomas and Steward.
Good points. Marion being an isolated incident whose cause of transformation needs to be tracked down makes for a better story than a transformation pandemic. I still think there's room for new animal characters, though.
Thinking more about the idea I came up with earlier, where Keene scouts more prey animals for the ECP and requires Marion and them to meet up frequently. That’d be a good way to introduce more animal characters that could potentially appear in future arcs as the status quo changes. It’d also be a good way for Marion to meet and befriend others in the same boat as him in regards to having to adjust to new circumstances and dealing with hardships based on that, as well as characters around his same size and possibly age. Having King serve as a life coach for Marion would be nice and is something I want to see, but I believe that Marion also needs
peers, not just mentor(s). It’d be funny if a
familiar face showed up to one of the meetings
(I probably spent way too much time writing and coming up with something that'll never happen, but here goes):
[
Marion watches as animals start walking into the room: Lana comes in to watch over the meeting, followed by a porcupine, a couple of rats, a shrew, and a squirrel with brown-ish fur. The squirrel notices Marion and they make eye contact.]
Marion: Wait, you...
Squirrel: You...?
[
Marion walks over to the squirrel, trying to contain his anger and trauma with how that day went, but failing.]
Marion: What are
you doing here? Wanna finish the job that your
acorn and that
10-foot drop couldn’t get done?
Squirrel: [
Nervous, not wanting a scene to start.] Look, I’m sorry, okay, I’m here to be a part of the-
Marion: [
Gets genuinely angry now.] It’s gonna take more than “sorry” to make up for contributing to the worst day of my life by calling me a narc and almost
breaking my neck!
[
It’s quiet; All the other animals stare at the two squirrels. The squirrel opposite Marion has tears in their eyes. Lana is up close to them but doesn’t step in. She recognizes that Marion needs to work this out.]
Marion: [
Notices that he caused a scene, takes a step back from the brown-furred squirrel and sighs.] I’m- [
He takes a deep breath and let’s out another sigh to calm down, looking down at the floor and with his hands in his new pants pockets.] I’m sorry. It’s just what you did that day was really mean, and icing on top of a cake made of all this other really humiliating stuff.
Seeing you come in dredged it all back up on top of everything else I’ve dealt with this last week.
Squirrel: [
Sniffles a bit and rubs their elbow, feeling guilty and nervous at the same time.] O-oh. That’s... it doesn’t make up for it, but that day was bad for me too. I was messing around with the humans and trying to chat one up about what school is like. A security dog saw me and chased me off campus. My mom and dad yelled at me, told me I could’ve gotten killed, and all that. I ran off to cool down, but I needed to take my anger out on
something, and that’s when I ran into you talking to those cops…
[
Marion nods, and starts to feel sympathy for the other squirrel. He’s had those days before. He wants to hear more about why they were talking to humans, though.]
Marion: So, you wanted to know what school was like?
Squirrel: School and human stuff in general. There were these flyers put up all over the neighborhood one day, looking for animals like me and everyone else here. I showed one to Mom and Dad and they
leapt at the chance to get me to join. Real weird for them to be so eager for me to sign up…
[
Marion thinks to himself: “Because the ECP is a lot safer than bothering random kids at school and possibly getting eaten by a dog…”]
Marion: [
Slightly sarcastically.] Yeah, that does seem weird.
Squirrel: [
They smile, tears now gone. Realizing that tensions have relaxed, they become more enthusiastic.] So that’s why I’m here now. It’s real exciting! And to top that off, there’s a
squirrel as old as me in the ECP too!
Marion: Wait, what? [
Marion’s confused and looks around the room to see if another squirrel walked in.]
Squirrel: It’s gonna be awesome going through the ECP with you!
[
Marion realizes that they’re talking about him. Too embarrassed to admit that he can’t tell animals of different ages apart (and the squirrel will likely learn soon that Marion used to be human), he goes along with it.]
Marion:
Oh. You’re right, it’s going to be fun!
[
All the other animals had started talking amongst themselves earlier when they saw the situation had been defused. Lana talks to the two squirrels]
Lana: It’s nice to see you two getting along. Now, before we get started, I need to hand out your
name tags for the orientation…
[
Lana hands Marion and the new squirrel their name tags. No big reveal or twist here, just giving the name of a character who could become a major part of Marion’s story.]