[Webcomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:05 am

Does it come with a god mode?

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:20 am

Why need a God Mode when you got SPIKE as character?

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 4:13 am

RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I would totally play that game, you have to make it.

Maybe with a sprite editor on MSX... meh, i'm too lazy to do that

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Ok guys, i have something quite important to ask. I already posted on deviantart but i'm spamming this thing wherever possible to collect some feedback. Of any kind, positive and negative, so don't worry and just say what you feel about it.

I need to know what you guys think about the character "Eyesight". It's really important.

You hate him? You like him? You think he had a lot to say but i just messed with him 'cause i'm a fathead and so i horribly wasted his potential?

If you read this comic please leave a comment about it. Everything will be accepted with open arms.

Sat Mar 17, 2012 4:31 am

I liked Eyesight.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 11:30 am

Eyesight was a great character.
Actually, the only probem came from the way he died. Given the situation, he could've even avoided sacrificing himself. But since this was your first experience as writer, it can be forgiven (OK, Eyesight, you know what I mean, please, don't look at me with that eye...ohhh, pretty *asplodes*)

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 4:28 pm

I also liked Eyesight.
edit: the only downside about his death is that we diudn'1t get to see much of him. But a flashback of him raising Max would be good.

IceKitsune · Post by **IceKitsune** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:25 pm

I liked Eyesight and would love to see more of him in some way.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:23 am

angelusbr wrote:I also liked Eyesight.
edit: the only downside about his death is that we diudn'1t get to see much of him. But a flashback of him raising Max would be good.

I approve of this suggestion

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:11 am

I see... so, his death has been sudden and disappointing, and it would be interesting to see something about his past. Very well, the defects you said are pretty much the same i saw. I made a lot of mistakes with this character.

Thanks a lot

don't worry about him... let's say that i hypothetically have something special in mind. Won't do the same mistake twice.

But we'll talk about this later, right now time is my enemy

for now 1X is more than enough.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:25 am

ARGH! THE TEASER!

copper · Post by **copper** » Sun Mar 18, 2012 7:52 pm

In my honest opinion, he died before he could truly serve his archetypal purpose. he was the wise mentor who must die for the protagonist to grow, no? It is an old archetype. Dumbledore, Ben Kenobi, Gandolf the Grey.... the real problem wasn't that you killed him off, but that he died before showing Spike much of anything. Eh, just an opinion. I enjoy the entire strip.

Sun Mar 18, 2012 7:57 pm

well he was more of Max's mentor anyway. seems that he could have served that purpose for Max.
we may see him back in some way as a ghost, because all of your examples showed up at some point after their death.

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Mon Mar 19, 2012 3:58 am

@Copper: Uhm, i get it. But actually he had nothing to say to Spike... because i can say no more but you'll see

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:24 am

It is SO true (the last panel i meant)

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:19 am

I've studied roman law a few years ago. I forgot everything!
XD

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:05 am

giurisprudenza.
Ew.
Tastes even bad when you spell it!

copper · Post by **copper** » Tue Mar 20, 2012 1:37 am

XD Funny. Actors as lawyers... sounds like an evil combination to me...

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:20 am

copper wrote:XD Funny. Actors as lawyers... sounds like an evil combination to me...

how do you think lawyers got such a reputation..?

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:03 am

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:03 am

Sweet logic

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:18 am

Primo looks epic for the first time!
NEVER mess up with a dog and his food

Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:40 am

you can't downgrade like that. They deserve death... Where'd he get the gun?

Karl · Post by **Karl** » Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:53 am

RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:Where'd he get the gun?

Online shopping.

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Wed Mar 21, 2012 5:49 am

Honestly, it would made sense if it were the other way around...With Spike in the place of Primo. It felt a bit OOC.
I know this is just for the funnies, but still...

Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:41 am

Primo's an actor, he's gotta be dramatic about things. I bet that's not even a real gun. I see it as totally in character.

copper · Post by **copper** » Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:07 am

Spike has been through too much to take up arms over something so petty, it would be more OOC for Spike to be doing this. And way to go Primo, with the blaster gun. I want one now!

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:14 am

Monday = new chapter!

Ok let's put this simple: i don't remember what i wrote there and i thought i could read it but i can't, my bad

Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:21 am

translation:

_Stu_ wrote:ok this time I have a lot of things to tell and many plot twist on my way so raise your patience like a calm river on summer Evening

some words were harder than others so I had to search for earlier instances of each individual letter, but didn't take that long.

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:26 am

OMG now i remember

good thing you got it instantly, at first i was like "nah, i will read it normally, no prob", but then i saw only strange letters

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Fri Mar 23, 2012 6:16 am

Ninja Primo? This ought to be...deadly.

copper · Post by **copper** » Fri Mar 23, 2012 10:28 pm

Looks Like a naruto fandom thing... Are they going to OtakuCon or something?

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:13 am

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:14 am

Primo is a shiny star that makes other stars, 4ever and ever

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:27 am

OMG - Spike, what have you DONE?!

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Mon Mar 26, 2012 6:36 am

Samurai ninja Primo has your atention, Spike.

copper · Post by **copper** » Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:25 am

Um, the last few English translation comics seem to have disappeared..... TO GOOGLE TRANSLATE!!!!! (Tries to make out the gibberish)

What breed is Primo suposed to be again?

Oh no.... Primo is going to go and be all anime now, isn't he?

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Wed Mar 28, 2012 2:11 am

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Wed Mar 28, 2012 2:13 am

The background of the second panel LOOK AT THE BACKGROUND OF THE SECOND PANEL

Oh, and this gonna answer Copper's question too

Wed Mar 28, 2012 2:17 am

awesome background in panel 2.

copper · Post by **copper** » Wed Mar 28, 2012 3:13 am

So... I am supposed to look at the second panel, maybe?

Akita, okay. Wasn't sure. So an Italian Japanese breed dog who had no idea of the breed origin. Nice...