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heh, I take it this is based on your comment in the chat thread the other day. fun.
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:heh, I take it this is based on your comment in the chat thread the other day. fun.
Actually, no, it isn't, but thanks for reminding me of that.... :?
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Huh, wonder what kind of power she received unwillingly...
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The Chimera sure isn't subtle if Vanilla can openly explain about her cursed blessing.

First time for McGruff to appear. I was thinking you might have use a Captain Ersatz substitute like McGurdle from Honorable Intention's fic or when Rick use Alan and the Groundsquirrels.
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I'm enjoying this as per usual Chewy. Vanilla getting some sort of power in interesting, a great idea obviously. I'm unsure exactly what she'll do with it, but I think that's why I like Vanilla so much. Smart, yet unpredictable, but in that way where I always understand her reasoning afterwards due to your writing!

Sorry this took me awhile to read, but thanks for telling me about, I'm looking forward for more. ^^

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Hmm, I wonder when she goes overboard and the title begins to make more sense...

As for Vanilla, seems she will need to repeat it a few more times at that! :roll:
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I'm pretty sure this isn't the Chimera's doing, but something else. Seeing as how she kinda blew the Chimera away and he wasn't expecting it.

also, since I just read your first story with the Cakes, was that whole longest night thing the chimera's doing? or is there some other supernatural thing that caused that and this power?
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I'm pretty sure this isn't the Chimera's doing, but something else. Seeing as how she kinda blew the Chimera away and he wasn't expecting it.

also, since I just read your first story with the Cakes, was that whole longest night thing the chimera's doing? or is there some other supernatural thing that caused that and this power?
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wrong. there weren't any ghosts (something less) and Vanilla, unlike Scrooge, woke up from her visions earlier than when she went in (something more).
though I suppose those cancel each other out, so you may be right.

but still, good to know it doesn't have much bearing on the main story.
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Oh, hush now. :P

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Well, that is a good thing! She at least managed to control the strength she has.... only question I have is if she will become corrupted by her own power or not.... even the righteous can succumb at times....

I wonder how Honey will react to the badge once she sees it, or her dad...

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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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Ouch, looks like Vanilla is getting too strong... sucks big time....

Nice Lord Of The Ring's reference there! :lol:

I wonder what gave her that power if not the Chimera...
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She only has super strength, now she's treated as if she's the juggernaut. :o
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so now I'm thinking this is the chimera's doing, but he made her stronger than he intended. So now he's scared.

also, classing Twilight Zone reference in there.
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:so now I'm thinking this is the chimera's doing, but he made her stronger than he intended. So now he's scared.

also, classing Twilight Zone reference in there.
Which Twilight Zone reference? :? If I did make a reference it was purely an accident.

EDIT: Forget it, I did it on purpose and totally forgot. :oops: I am so embarrassed....
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ChewyChewy wrote:It's GOOD that you took care of that troublemaker, Miss Cake.
that's what everyone said in the episode with Anthony sending everyone to the cornfield in this episode
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:
ChewyChewy wrote:It's GOOD that you took care of that troublemaker, Miss Cake.
that's what everyone said in the episode with Anthony sending everyone to the cornfield in this episode
*facepalm*

Okay...would you believe I totally forgot I put that in there? :oops: Please ignore what I said above....
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I would believe that.
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Well, she overreacted...

That chimera sure is a troublemaker. I hope she gives him a good punch in the face before he takes the power back.
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copper wrote:Well, she overreacted...

That chimera sure is a troublemaker. I hope she gives him a good punch in the face before he takes the power back.
Actually, that's probably exactly what the chimera WANTS her to do....
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Oh please, the chimera screwed up more than likely and meant to give her emotional strength, but instead gave her physical strength. Now he is just covering. :roll:
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as I said, something went wrong. The chimera is obviously scared of her. and let's not forget
ChewyChewy wrote:Vanilla couldn't be sure, but she thought it had an expression on its faces that indicated that it had not planned that.
the only question is, did he make her stronger than he planned? did he give her the wrong kind of strength? did he do exactly as he planned, but didn't expect her to not be in control of it?
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@copper: Are you writing this story or am I? :P

@Brent: Just going to have to wait and see.... ;)
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I imagine this version of the Chimera to look like this link only cuter?

The thought of him/her/them cowering make this even funnier.
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kavviyenta wrote:I imagine this version of the Chimera to look like this link only cuter?

The thought of him/her/them cowering make this even funnier.
Not "cuter", but more cartoony--like Discord in My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
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And that led to Honey having a layered dream experience.

Is the white rabbit Chimera's avatar? (Since they're not part of U&U, I assumed that can be allowed)
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kavviyenta wrote:And that led to Honey having a layered dream experience.

Is the white rabbit Chimera's avatar? (Since they're not part of U&U, I assumed that can be allowed)
:lol: No. :P

Not at all--Peter is more powerful than the chimera is. I tried to make that obvious--Peter wouldn't let the chimera do something. The chimera has no control over Peter.
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ChewyChewy wrote:
kavviyenta wrote:And that led to Honey having a layered dream experience.

Is the white rabbit Chimera's avatar? (Since they're not part of U&U, I assumed that can be allowed)
:lol: No. :P

Not at all--Peter is more powerful than the chimera is. I tried to make that obvious--Peter wouldn't let the chimera do something. The chimera has no control over Peter.
I actually forgot about Peter. I guess that's what he wanted, though. :lol:
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And so it ends... I wondered about Peter! So they are playing their own little game, eh? How fun!

I hope that Brutus learned a thing or two as well...

Honey and Vanilla hugging it out. Is there anything more precious than that? :D
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copper wrote:And so it ends... I wondered about Peter! So they are playing their own little game, eh? How fun!

I hope that Brutus learned a thing or two as well...

Honey and Vanilla hugging it out. Is there anything more precious than that? :D
What makes you think it's a game?

Who's "Brutus"? :? Do you mean Bruno?

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Yep, Bruno.... I keep wanting to call him Brutus! :lol:
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copper wrote:Yep, Bruno.... I keep wanting to call him Brutus! :lol:
:lol: If this were a comic I might have Honey and Vanilla imaginate Julius Caesar.... :roll:
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Only if there is a Cassius too!
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