Changing time - Adventures begin!

The Moon Howler · Post by **The Moon Howler** » Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:53 pm

Heyo, Hopper! I recently started to read your fic and i must to admit that such a mix-up of Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy, Dr. Who and HP! is just simply amazing

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Mar 29, 2011 2:29 pm

Sindorei wrote:Heyo, Hopper! I recently started to read your fic and i must to admit that such a mix-up of Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy, Dr. Who and HP! is just simply amazing

Thank you!
I'm a pretty big sci-fi fan, so it just seemed to fit.

copper · Post by **copper** » Tue Mar 29, 2011 6:43 pm

Okay, what did Streak do in a past life to get that lucky?

Great update. I can't wait to see how they handle this.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Mar 29, 2011 6:54 pm

copper wrote:Okay, what did Streak do in a past life to get that lucky?

One can only wonder...

copper wrote:Great update. I can't wait to see how they handle this.

Thanks!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Wed Mar 30, 2011 6:40 pm

*Air Guitar*

Chapter 5 Part 11

Streak was still grinning.
"That'll make it easy for us." He said walking to one of the many desks.
Grape and Peanut sat on the chairs and watched him.
"How may I help you, sir?" The lady at the desk asked.
"Hi there!" Streak said smiling. "We need to set up an appointment with Andred...We can uh, do that, right?"
"Of course! When would you like to see him?" The lady replied smiling.
"Um, In five minutes?"
"That date's booked. Any other time?"
"Anytime today will do." Streak said shrugging.
"Okay, just a sec....." She said as she started to type on the small grey laptop in front of her.
Her eyes scanned the screen for a few seconds and she soon looked at Streak.
"I'm afraid we won't be able to get guests in all day. With his birthday and all..." She said keeping her fingers placed on the keyboard.
"Oh, um, okay. What about tomorrow?"
"Booked."
"Blast..." Streak mumbled quietly.
He nodded and walked back to Peanut and Grape.
"Booked." Streak simply explained.
"All of today?" Grape asked.
"And tomorrow."
"Seriously?" Peanut asked with a sigh.
"Nope. I was joking." Streak said sarcastically. "Yes, seriously."
"What do we do now?" Grape asked curiously.
"What do you think?" Streak said looking at her.
They all looked at each other staying silent.
"I...I'm not sure what." Grape rolled her eyes.
"Oh, Well, I guess I'll explain myself." Streak said crossing his arms grinning.
"We need to somehow talk to this so called 'Andred' and somehow wiggle the information out of him. Once we do-"
"You could check the website."
Streak looked puzzled and he looked at Peanut.
"Website?" Streak asked raising an eyebrow.
"I didn't say that."
"You didn't-?"
There was a laugh. A young male walked up to them. He had a black scarf, dark blue sweats, and a zipped up light blue sweater. He ran a hand through his thick green hair.
"There's a website." He said.
He had light grey skin. Streak's ears perked up.
"A website?" He asked smiling.
"Yeah. A website with practicably everything you need to know about Andred."
"Really? Were can I find it?" Streak asked as his smile form into a grin.
"It's AdredOnli...Here let me just write it down." He replied pulling a piece of paper and a pen out of his pocket.
"Sweet. Thanks a lot." Streak said watching as he scribbled down a website address.
"Sure. No problem."

The Moon Howler · Post by **The Moon Howler** » Wed Mar 30, 2011 6:45 pm

Yay! An update!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Wed Mar 30, 2011 6:49 pm

^^ Yay! A comment!

jopencjusz · Post by **jopencjusz** » Wed Mar 30, 2011 6:51 pm

Yay! A two yay!

copper · Post by **copper** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 12:33 am

*facepalms* Wait... Why didn't they just do that to begin with? This planet is almost a mirror image of Earth!

Nice update. That helpful alien won't be helpful for long, will he?

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 12:38 am

copper wrote:*facepalms* Wait... Why didn't they just do that to begin with? This planet is almost a mirror image of Earth!

I don't know. Streak's dumb, I guess.

copper wrote:Nice update. That helpful alien won't be helpful for long, will he?

Thanks! And, well... He's one of those guys that leaves and never gets mentioned again.=P

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:33 pm

Kinda short. Oh well. Enjoy?

Chapter 5 Part 12

Peanut was laying on his bed in the hotel. He was staring up at the ceiling.
Grape was sitting on her bed reading a book.
"How long did he say he was going to be?" Peanut asked sitting up.
"He said roughly ten or twelve minutes." Grape said without removing her eyes off the book.
"How long has it been?"
"It's only been three."
"Oh..." Peanut said with a yawn.
Minutes passed and they both stayed quiet. Streak entered with a closed black laptop in his hand.
"Back." He said sitting next to Peanut.
"Sweet. Is that it?" Peanut asked looking over his shoulder.
"Yup."
"The hotel has a free internet server." Grape said closing the book.
"I know. Just...a....sec." Streak said opening the laptop and typing on the keyboard.
"What does it say?" Peanut said wagging his tail.
"Nothing yet..." Streak said dashing his finger across the touch pad. "Ah! Here we go."
"What is it?" Grape asked sitting on the other side of Streak.
"Andred Dofine. Age: 48." Streak started, reading off his laptop. "At the age of 18 Andred studied to be an architect but soon decided to become, oh blaa blaa blaa. Let me skip ahead..." Streak's eyes scanned the page for any useful information.
"Ah, here." He said gesturing at the screen. "Andred founded the so called 'mine project'. Says here that he paid almost for everything!"
"Sounds like a nice guy." Grape said raising her eyebrows.
"Yah, and rich." Peanut said smirking.
"He happens to be one of the most known people on the earth." Streak smirked.
"Is he like, pretending to be good but is really bad?" Peanut asked.
"No. I don't think that's the case. Why would he kill himself?"
"Maybe he escaped on a ship or something?" Grape suggested.
"Mmnn...Maybe. But why would he destroy all of his research? All his mining equipment would be gone!" Streak said shrugging.
"Oh, good point." Peanut said nodding.
Streak smiled and closed his laptop.
"And, the end." He said with standing up.
"So?" Peanut said watching him.
"So, he isn't in the picture. Wasn't him."
"Now what?" Grape asked also standing.
"Now we continue where we left off."
"Which was?"
"Walking around the city doing pointless stuff?" Peanut suggested.
"No...Walking around the city investigating." Streak said correcting him.
"Same difference." Grape said chuckling.
Peanut chuckled with her and Streak smirked again.
"Anyway. We don't have much time left. We're already half way through our seconded day." Streak said as he started to walk to the door, laptop in his hand.
"Right behind you." Peanut said as they both followed him.

copper · Post by **copper** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:06 pm

Okaaaaayyyy.... so Streak ruled out Andred Dofine. Perhaps he knows who did it then?

Peanut and Grape don't do much. Perhaps they can get their own adventure.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:17 pm

copper wrote:Okaaaaayyyy.... so Streak ruled out Andred Dofine. Perhaps he knows who did it then?

Perhaps......

copper wrote:Peanut and Grape don't do much. Perhaps they can get their own adventure.

You're using the word "perhaps" a lot.

And, they might get their own little chapter(s).

copper · Post by **copper** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:22 pm

Perhaps....Perhaps.....Perhaps

Do you know the reference, because I forgot.

Not much happened, but at least the story is advancing. Did I mention how much I enjoy your fanfic?

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:48 pm

copper wrote:Perhaps....Perhaps.....Perhaps

copper wrote:Do you know the reference, because I forgot.

Reference? I guess I don't. =P

copper wrote:Not much happened, but at least the story is advancing.

Yeah, Sorry about that. Once they get to the second planet it becomes better...

copper wrote:Did I mention how much I enjoy your fanfic?

Thanks alot! ^-^ Did I mention how much a enjoy reading your comments?

copper · Post by **copper** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 11:04 pm

Awww, you are so good to your fans.

The refernce was a song. I got it right, that is the name.

So they are doing that? I was wondering about that.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Mar 31, 2011 11:13 pm

copper wrote:The refernce was a song. I got it right, that is the name.

Hmm...Never heard of it.

copper wrote:So they are doing that? I was wondering about that.

Yes.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Fri Apr 01, 2011 1:52 pm

Chapter 5 Part 13

--Later That Night-Hotel Room--
Grape was sitting on her hotel bed reading the same book as earlier.
"I'm bored." Peanut said pacing in front of her.
"Then find something to do." Grape replied simply.
"Like what?" He asked looking hopeful.
"You could read one of the books that are on the bookshelf." Grape suggested gesturing at a small bookshelf sitting against one of the walls.
"I did."
"Read another one. They're very interesting."
"I read all of them." Peanut said slightly embarrassed.
Grape smirked with a quiet chuckle. Streak entered through the door. Grape looked up from her book.
"Hey Str-"
"We got to go." He said looking very serious.
"What? Why?" Peanut asked sitting on his bed.
"Now." He said already starting to walk out the door.
Peanut and Grape looked at each other and quickly followed him. Streak, ignoring everything around him, walked very quickly toward the small parking lot where he parked his ship.
"Streak!" Grape called trying to keep up with him. "Can you tell us what's going on?"
"Tomorrow." Streak said still walking.
"Tomorrow? What about tomorrow?" Peanut asked looking confused.
"Tomorrow is when the accident happens." Streak said as they walked next to his ship.
"What? You said that the 'accident' happens after tomorrow." Grape tried to catch her breath before they all entered the ship.
"I was mistaken." Streak said as the door to his ship opened.
He entered through it and gestured for Peanut and Grape to enter.
"But-" Peanut was soon interrupted by Streak who pulled him inside the ship.
"Get in Grape. I can already feel the ground starting to shake." Streak said as he started to dash his fingers across the nearest keyboard
Grape hopped into the ship and the door started to slide shut.
"B-But why can't we just like, go back in time?" Peanut asked sitting on the red torn couch in "The Room" of Streak's ship.
"Oh, Yeah. Then we could have two different versions of ourselves walking around!"
"So, what. You can't re-vist a place at a certain time?" Grape asked sitting next to Peanut.
"Nope. Not easily. I could if I had this thing but that thing is very expensive and I'm not made of cash."
"What do we do now?" Peanut looked at Streak scratching his head.
"We do what we did a few days ago just on the other planet. And this time we'll be successful."

copper · Post by **copper** » Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:02 pm

That's Streak for you. Always the optimist.

That thing sounds awesome. Too bad it's so expensive. Does it have a generic version. Maybe stuff will do...

We can only wish to read as fast as Peanut.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:14 pm

copper wrote:That thing sounds awesome. Too bad it's so expensive. Does it have a generic version. Maybe stuff will do...

You know it's expensive when Streak can't afford it.

copper wrote:We can only wish to read as fast as Peanut.

It's his super power.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Apr 04, 2011 3:51 pm

We can dance. (And sing!)

Chapter 5 Part 16

The ship gently lifted off the ground and quickly launched into the sky. It flew straight through the sky and into the deeps of space. After flying a few miles away from the planet they were just on, it slowly stopped. After minutes of just sitting in the same place it started to spin. It quickly began to spin faster and faster until pieces of the ship started to form into a type of grey misty. It started to slowly disappear into the cloud of mist. It was gone in a matter of minutes.
-Ortrontuim(Green Planet)-Three days before the accident-
The light green grass swayed in the cool breeze. The bright pink sun started to raise and shine over the plains. A large blue dome reached over a large section of the planet. The same dark grey mist appeared in the air and started to form the ship again. It soon was completely formed and it gently landed on the soft grass. The door slide open and Streak stepped out.
"And that, my friends, is how a ship lands."
Grape and Peanut quickly followed him out.
"Glad you got it fixed...Finally." Grape said with a faint chuckle.
"Hey now. It's hard to find a good repair show around here." Streak replied with a shrug.
"When you say: 'around here' do you mean like, all of space?"
"Basically." Streak started as he turned around to face the dome. "Oh, my. A big dome. A big...Blue...Dome."
"A big blue bubbly dome." Peanut said correcting Streak.
Grape smirked and rolled her eyes. "What is it?"
"A dome." Streak said grinning.
Peanut chuckled. "A blue dome." he said sticking his tongue out slightly.
"A big blu-"
"Okay, I think we all know that it's a dome, not matter what color or size." Grape said interrupting.
"Do you know what's inside, Streak?" Peanut asked looking up and down the dome.
"Oh, it's probably a city or town or something."
"Why is in a dome?" Peanut asked curiously.
"Because they were out of the boxes."
Peanut chuckled loudly. Grape couldn't help but smirk a little.
"But, seriously?" Streak started with a shrug. "Could be to keep a deadly disease or flesh eating monster out."
Peanut and Grape looked at each other then at Streak wide eyed. Seconds passed silently.
"...I'm joking." Streak said grinning again. "Come on. Lets go check it out."

The Moon Howler · Post by **The Moon Howler** » Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:05 pm

Always that grin, right?

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:08 pm

Sindorei wrote:Always that grin, right?

Streak wuvs his teeth. ^^

copper · Post by **copper** » Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:10 pm

Well, good to see them laughing again.

I think it is to keep the deadly green gas from killing the inhabitants.

Nice update, Hopper. I liked the lighthearted tone of it all.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:18 pm

copper wrote:Well, good to see them laughing again.

Yes, but trust me, they'll be back to the seriousness later...

copper wrote:I think it is to keep the deadly green gas from killing the inhabitants.

Deadly gases? Well, I guess they won't last long, huh.

copper wrote:Nice update, Hopper. I liked the lighthearted tone of it all.

Thanks. I enjoyed writing this one. ^^

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Apr 05, 2011 1:22 pm

This update is for entertainment purposes only. Please, do not apply the update to the mouth.

Chapter 5 Part 17

Streak stood next to the "big blue box." Though, it seemed so much bigger when he was standing up close to it. He guessed that it must have been at least fifty five feet tall. None of them even wanted to guess how long it was. There was no visible entrance.
"Hmm." Streak said simply as he rubbed his paw across the side of the dome. "It's metal."
"So?" Peanut said touching it gently with one finger.
"So...It's metal." Streak said with a shrug.
"How can we get in?" Grape tilted her head as she spoke.
Streak shrugged. "Ask nicely?"
"Maybe there's a door on the other side?" Peanut suggested.
Streak smirked. "Yeah, why don't you just go over and check."
Peanut took a few steps back and looked around the dome. It was long and would have taken half an hour to walk around it.
"Never mind."
Streak chuckled. He looked at his own fist and pounded at the dome. A faint echo could be heard on the other side.
"I guess no one's home." Streak said shrugging.
Suddenly, a door shape quickly opened in the dome, where Streak had knocked.
"I stand corrected?" He said as he took a step toward the door.
Peanut followed him. Streak's foot stepped into the dome before he soon discovered that there was no floor. Peanut grabbed his collar and pulled him back before he could fall. Streak fell back onto the soft grass.
"Eep." Streak simply said rubbing his eyes.
"You really should be more careful." Grape said looking into the dome.
"I was...Careful enough." Streak said rolling his eyes.
Peanut looked over Grape's shoulder. As Streak said, a city stood inside the dome, but it was dug deeply into the ground. The city looked like it was straight out of the twentieth century.
"Told yah'" Streak said with a chuckle.
He stood up and walked toward the 'doorway'.
"How do we get in?" Grape asked as she gave Streak room to look.
"Hmm...I wonder if there's some sort of staircase or-" Streak had slipped and fallen down the large pit.
"Streak?!" Peanut yelled watching him fall.
Luckily, there was a construction site nearby and Streak softly fell into a huge pile of loose dirt.
"Streak are you okay!?" Grape yelled, hoping he'll hear.
"...Yeah. I'm all dirty..." Streak said as he slide off the pile.
"That's what happens when you fall into a pile of dirt." Peanut smirked.
"So, what was that about being careful?" Grape asked with a chuckle.
"..." Streak stayed silent.
"How can we get down?" Peanut asked breaking his silence.
"Jump."
Peanut and Grape looked at each other.
"Yeah, 'cuz we would just loooove to have all our bones broken." Grape rubbed her forehead with her paw.
"Baby." Streak said brushing himself off.
"Any other way?" Peanut asked looking around the huge dome.
"...You could try and fly down but-"
"Okay, seriously. You find a way up, we'll stay up here safely." Grape said crossing her arms.
"Got it. Um, you're welcome to wait in my ship if you need to. Stay safe." Streak said started to wander off.

copper · Post by **copper** » Tue Apr 05, 2011 9:24 pm

And once again Streak finds himself alone. He is always doing that. Careless...

I thought it was the big blue dome.

That's quite a bit of technology, there. Automatically opening door.

Peanut saved Streak. What will he do to repay the life debt he owes?

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Apr 05, 2011 9:28 pm

copper wrote:And once again Streak finds himself alone. He is always doing that. Careless...

That does seem to happen a lot...

copper wrote:I thought it was the big blue dome.

Nah, It's a big blue bubbly dome.

copper wrote:That's quite a bit of technology, there. Automatically opening door.

Not very "Intruder proof" though.

copper wrote:Peanut saved Streak. What will he do to repay the life debt he owes?

I think Peanut is one of the many that wonder what Streak would be like on cat-nip.

copper · Post by **copper** » Tue Apr 05, 2011 9:38 pm

Intruder proof? Anyone who walks in is going to fall to their death. I think that makes it pretty intruder proof.

Streak on catnip. Now that you have mentioned it, you must make it happen!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:02 pm

copper wrote:Intruder proof? Anyone who walks in is going to fall to their death. I think that makes it pretty intruder proof.

Good point. Ker-Splat.
That's very good defense.

copper wrote:Streak on catnip. Now that you have mentioned it, you must make it happen!

I'm sure it'll happen eventually. Fairly soon, most likely, with a girlfriend like Midnight.

redmarker97 · Post by **redmarker97** » Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:06 pm

Two things:

1.) You might want to work on your description. Its kinda vague, to be honest with you.
2.) Work on connecting the chapters together. There is a save button, so you can come back and work on it. Personally, I wouldn't split it up unless it was some ungodly wall of text.

Although, with those flaws, I like what I've read so far, and I look forward to the continuation of this.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:13 pm

redmarker97 wrote: 1.) You might want to work on your description. Its kinda vague, to be honest with you.

I know. That was one thing I was hoping would get better over time.

redmarker97 wrote:2.) Work on connecting the chapters together. There is a save button, so you can come back and work on it. Personally, I wouldn't split it up unless it was some ungodly wall of text.

I know about the "edit" button but, I like to to rather update everyday in small bits then, update in large chunks.

redmarker97 wrote:Although, with those flaws, I like what I've read so far, and I look forward to the continuation of this.

Thanks! I look forward toward your future comments.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Wed Apr 06, 2011 1:47 pm

Sorry it's so short. And, err...This one isn't very descriptive either. -.-

Chapter 5 Part 18

Streak walked down the road that was not very far from the pile of dirt, which he fell in.
His fur was filthy, but he didn't seem to mind. "Alone again..." He thought to himself as he passed many large buildings. The streets were very clean for a city like this. Many people would have thought they were in america because everything looked the same. But, Streak could tell the differences. Even as he thought about it he might have thought that this was a chunk of a popular city in america like New York if it wasn't for the deep hole. He then quickly noticed the huge differences as he passed a corner. A huge silver sky scraper was standing tall over him.
"Hmm? What's this?" He asked to himself.
He entered through the large revolving door. Once he was inside he looked around the large room with
elevators on almost every wall. The elevators were all plated in what looked like copper. There was an expensive red rug with yellow tassels spread across the floor, starting at the door and leading toward an expensive desk. Obviously, whoever owned this building was very rich. Many rows of chairs were randomly placed throughout the room. A line had been formed in front of the expensive desk. Streak had decided that instead of ticking the receptionist off, he'd just sneak around. He started to slowly walk to the chairs and pretended to sit down. He quietly slipped behind the chairs trying to stay out of sight. He slowly made his way to one of the elevators. Two small round buttons were placed next to the elevator. They both had two arrows one, of course, was pointing up and the other was pointing down. Streak tapped the up arrow quickly and quietly. He heard a "dinging" sound and the doors slide open. He slipped into the elevator and quickly pushed a random button on the side panel. He sighed, relieved, as the doors closed.

copper · Post by **copper** » Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:20 pm

Sneaky Streak. He is finally taking caution in what he does.

It was a short update but I am sure it will move things along.

The description is fine, at least to me.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:29 pm

copper wrote:Sneaky Streak. He is finally taking caution in what he does.

Someone note the date!

copper wrote:It was a short update but I am sure it will move things along.

Yeah, they do. :3

copper wrote:The description is fine, at least to me.

Yay! That's good then. As long as it was close to being fair. ^^

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Apr 07, 2011 2:14 pm

Chapter 5 Part 19

Streak leaned against the back wall of the elevator. Each wall was colored a dark red with yellow lining on each of the corners. He sighed again and glanced at the side panel where all the "floor buttons" were placed. There were twelve round bubbly buttons each rowed in rows of three. Each had small LED lights behind them, making the buttons glow a faint light yellow. The first button was labeled "B-1" and the last one was "Door Open". The other ten were labeled, as you could guess, "First Floor" "Second Floor" ect...
"The basement sounds fun." Streak said with a faint mumble.
He sighed, knowing he should find a way down for Peanut and Grape, he pushed the "Tenth Floor" button. The elevator "dinged" and Streak could feel it start to raise. Moments later the door slide open once again and Streak stepped out. This lead into a much smaller room. The wall on the left of Streak was completely made of glass. He could see most of the city outside it. There was a desk in front of the window, but it wasn't as fancy as the one on the first floor. A lady was sitting at the desk. She looked human, but, she probably wasn't. Her green eyes were fixed on the small computer monitor in front of her. Her fingers were flying across the keyboard that was placed near the monitor. She looked up at Streak and smiled.
"May I help you?" She asked watching Streak walk over to the desk.
He placed his hands on top of the desk. The desk came up to his waist.
"Um, yes. How would you get from down here to out of the blue dome thing?" Streak asked.
The lady tilted her head letting her dark brown hair dangle down to one side.
Streak blinked a few times. "I don't need an 'ID' to get in here, right?"
"Oh, no, this building is open to the public." She said typing a few words into her computer.
She glanced at her screen for a few seconds before talking. "Um, yes, you must make an appointment, though."
"Oh, okay. Can I make that now? I err...Have a few friends that are flying in for a visit."
"Yes, you may." The receptionist typed a few things onto her keyboard. "Okay, I can get you out in an hour. Does that work for you, sir?"
"Oh, yes that'll work perfectly."
"Okay. Now, there'll be a 'loading dock' on the north side of the city. You're allowed to enter at-" She checked her watch. "Two thirty."
"Sweet. Sounds good." Streak said starting to walk toward the elevator.
"Um, sir! I'm going to need your name."
"Oh," Streak stopped and turned around. "Just put it under 'Streak'."

copper · Post by **copper** » Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:01 pm

Well, that was easy, huh? If only every trip was like that.

I have a feeling that Streak is going to be detained in that building. It's a Trap!!

Peanut and Grape get some alone time. I guess that's something.

Nice little upodate, Streak. Can't wait for the next one.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:09 pm

copper wrote:Well, that was easy, huh? If only every trip was like that.

If only...Iiifff only.... *sniff sniff*

copper wrote:I have a feeling that Streak is going to be detained in that building. It's a Trap!!

copper wrote:Peanut and Grape get some alone time. I guess that's something.

Yes, but it never gets written. Doh! xP

copper wrote:Nice little upodate, Streak. Can't wait for the next one.

Streak: You're welcome....I guess.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:40 pm

Shorty or shortie?

Chapter 5 Part 20

Streak stood in the middle city with his arms crossed. He wasn't exactly sure where he was, but he knew he was at the "staircase" that the receptionist told him about. Except, there was no staircase. He was standing next to a yellow rectangular patch on the concrete. Streak figured that the yellow rectangle were (was?) stairs that extended. He tapped his foot lightly waiting for his hour to come. He was constantly checking his wristband for the time. He sighed and walked to a bench a few feet away. Minutes passed and he just sat and waited. Finally, after a man in a blue jumpsuit walked to the staircase, looked around, then pressed a small button on his black utility belt. There was a loud "booming" sound, then the yellow rectangle started to raise. As Streak had guessed, It slowly started to form into a staircase. The raised and reached the where the dome began. Streak smiled and stood up and walked toward the stairs. The man nodded as Streak walked up the stair stretching. Once Streak got to the top he smiled, cracked his knuckles, and knocked on the wall. A doorway appeared out of the dome just as it did before. Streak smiled and stepped out onto the dark green grass. He sighed a sigh of relief and started to look around. He could see his ship in the distance. He smiled and started to walk toward it. Minutes later he had reached his ship. He pressed the "door open" button on his wristband and the door to his ship slide open.
"There you are!" Peanut said smiling.
He was sitting on the red couch next to Grape.
"Yeah, sorry. Took me an hour to get the stairs up." Streak replied as he gestured toward the dome.
"Sweet. You got stairs up?" Peanut asked standing up and walking out of the ship.
"No, I flew up." Streak said sarcastically.
Grape smiled and rolled her eyes, following Peanut.
Streak lead them to the doorway that he had opened and guided them down the stairs.
"Wow. It looks like...Earth." Peanut said as he looked around the city.
"Yeah, just smaller and contained in a small little dome." Grape scratched the back of her head, still not used to all the "aliens" walking around normally.
"Peanut, didn't you say that about the last planet?" Streak asked grinning.
"Yeah, well all these planets look the same."
Streak tried not to chuckle. "No they don't."
"Yeah, they do. I'm just not a 'space cat'."
"I am not a cat. I am a-"
"Watch what you say about cats, Streak." Grape said interrupting him.
"Err...Right." Streak mumbled quietly. "So, are you guys hungry?"
Peanut shrugged. "Kinda."

copper · Post by **copper** » Fri Apr 08, 2011 11:02 pm

Darnit, Grape! You interrupted him before he told us the name of his species!

Streak is rather patient, huh?

Nice update, Hopper. Monday should get interesting.