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Hopper200456 wrote:Oh yes. But, Are the doppelgangers the real doppelgangers or are Peanut and Grape the doppelgangers?

Again, they are mirror worldws. They are doppelgangers of each other. The timelines match exactly, only the events are different. Since the timelines are the same, The two Grapes and Peanuts were born at the same time. They are doppelgangers of each other, Hopper. There is no true doppelganger. I only used that word because we knew of Grape and Peanut first. By the way, the doppelgangers could have different names, so this could get interesting if it is true.
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You're right. Other slight things could be different as well. Like, That black dog at the apple store could be Peanut's "doppelganger". =P
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Nah, in stories like this, to show the doppelganger relationship, the colorings would be opposite, like a photo negative, the same,but slightly lighter or darker, or some other similarity. That is so that the doppelganger is distinguishable. Though sometimes just a shared birthmark would suffice.
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That is also true. I'd probably go with Lighter/Darker colors.
And, This is kinda random, but, this reminds me of a random idea I had awhile ago that the went to an alternet universe where Peanut was a cat and Grape was a dog.
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Uh, wouldn't that mean that Grapenut could exist without the interspecies stigma!? :?
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I guess it could! But they'd need to change the tags around a bit. =P
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Chapter 5 Part 5

"Any questions regarding the Apple products?" The black dog asked raising an eyebrow.
"Are you giving out free stuff today?" Streak replied.
The black dog gave Streak a glare.
"...That's what I thought."
Streak stepped outside of the store and sighed.
"Well, that was useless." Peanut said following him.
"Not completely. We now know that they are not giving out free stuff today." Streak said as Grape came out of the doors.
"So now what?" Grape said as she stretched.
"We checked one store. There's got to be somewhere else we could check." Peanut said gesturing toward a group of different buildings.
"Maybe we could get kicked out of a clothes store. That'd be a first." Streak said scratching his chin.
"Well, we should at least look for something!" Grape said waving her hand in the air.
As she talked Streak walked across a corner.
"What in the Galactic Omega is that." Streak said looking straight in front of me.
Grape and Peanut looked at each then walked around the same corner.
"Wow." Grape said looking up at it.
There was a huge hole dug into the ground. It was wide. At least twenty feet long. Streak could tell that it was very deep as well. Inside the hole a thick metal pole plunged into it. The pole was exactly in the middle of the hole. Metal plates were placed around the hole to keep the dirt tightly packed into the ground. A huge railing was wrapped around the hole to keep anyone from falling into it. The pole was stuck out of the ground and brushed against the sky. Streak couldn't tell how tall it was. So, he decided that if anyone asked, he'd answer by saying: "Really tall".
"What. Is. That." Peanut asked staring at the hole.
"I'd say it's a...a...let's find out, shall we?" Streaks running to the hold.
He placed his hands on the railing and peered down the hole. Peanut and Grape both followed him but only Streak would look down.
"That's deep." Streak said pushing a few buttons on his wristband.
It beeped and it started to create a whirring nose.
"Um, what's going on with your...thingy." Grape asked poking it.
"Well, you know when I told about the helicopter I blew up?"
"Yes, and I still wish I could have been there." Peanut said smiling.
"Well, my wristband created the spark that light the whole thing."
"That's awesome. Where can I get one?" Peanut said with he's tail wagging.
"No where. But, anyway, a small spark isn't the only thing it can create. It can create many liquids as well as the same two liquids that are used to make glow sticks." Streak said pushing a button.
His wristband beeped and a small little tube extended from the side that Streak's hand was. He moved his hand over the hole and pushed another button. Green glowing liquid poured out of the tube and fell down the pit. It feel down and soon disappeared in the dark. There was a bright flash from the hole and a small crackle.
"Wow." Streak said raising his eyebrows.
"What?" Both Grape and Peanut asked looking at him.
"It goes straight down to the core."
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Well, that was weird. A hole that goes to a core? Methinks that may have caused the destruction...

And Peanut so wants to blow something up, doesn't he? :lol:
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copper wrote:Well, that was weird. A hole that goes to a core? Methinks that may have caused the destruction...
Yup. Someone was walking by the hole and sneezed into it. His sneeze cause the core to randomly expand and jerk backward taking the planet with it. The planet collided into planet and everyone died. The End. ._.
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I like to see things go boom. AND FIRE! I LOVE FIRE!
Which is why I made Heatwave... (Name is still being decided... This is a temp name.)

HW: *grumble*
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I... think I should separate those two brothers/enemies...

Anyhoo, that was quite the interesting update. I wasn't expecting the huge pole. I wonder what it's doing there. o.O
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NosWaster wrote: I... think I should separate those two brothers/enemies...
With names like Frostbite and (Maybe) Heatwave? Yeah, I think that'd be a good idea.
NosWaster wrote:Anyhoo, that was quite the interesting update. I wasn't expecting the huge pole. I wonder what it's doing there. o.O
I think the annual javelin toss was last week for the Giants on the planet across of this one. :lol:
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Yeah... I don't think fire and ice mix too well... Especially when these brothers are fighting. Heatwave is the angry and rude one...

And that's a hilarious joke!
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I still think it is the cause of it all. And is it magnetic in some way?
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I would assume that since it's a giant metal pole that's stuck into the core of a planet, it gets magnetized by the magnetic field of the planet. So my guess is that it is.
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That;s why I asked, maybe both planets have a magnetic core that repels each other through those poles. The poles malfunctioned somehow, causing the balance to shift and the planets crashed into each other.
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Chapter 5 Part 6

"Why would it go down to the core?" Peanut asked glancing down at the hole.
"Well," Streak started as he walked around the pit. "I think they are mining for...Something..."
"Why would they mine straight out of their core? Wouldn't the core like, melt the mining tools?" Grape asked quickly following Streak.
"Well, one little known fact that there are many metals that are strong to face some planets core."
"Interesting." Peanut noted as he walked next to Grape.
"So, do you think the mining is what caused the accident?" Grape said tilting her head slightly.
"It's a plausibility. Many planets have been known to mine their own land. And, I've heard of mining planet's cores before just never seen it."
"Why would you want to mine the core? Wouldn't that hurt the planet?" Peanut asked curiously.
"Oh, well, they aren't mining the inner core. They're mining the outer core. Many planet's cores are very rich with expensive minerals."
"Also, interesting." Peanut added.
Streak nodded.
"Anyway, we should get back to getting kicked out of stores."
Grape smiled and rolled her eyes.
"Ooo, that looks promising..." Streak said looking at a building with a fountain in front of it.
"Very promising." Grape said adding to Streak's statement.
All three of them walked to the building and entered through the front door. It was very fancy inside. A line of different species were lined in front of a desk with a female receptionist. Her skin was a light purple and she had red hair. Because of the desk, they couldn't see much more of her. Streak walked behind the last person in line.
"What are you doing?" Peanut whispered to Streak.
"Gettin' in line."
"For what?" Grape asked also whispering.
"We'll find out!" Streak answered grinning show teeth that seemed to sparkle.
Grape sighed and walked to Streak, also getting in line. Peanut looked confused for a minute, looked around, then followed them both. They waited in line for about twenty minutes. As they approached the desk Streak noticed a poster hanging off the desk. It read: "Friday hear The Blue El Caminos! Singing their top ten hits!"
"May I help you?" The girl asked looking up at Streak smiling.
"Um, I'm the band manger for The Blue El Caminos."
"Y-...You're Abigail Dogwood?" The receptionist asked surprised.
"Um," Streak said trying to think of a plan. "Yes. Abigail is short for...Abigailison."
"Is that even a name?" She asked raising an eyebrow.
"Ye-"
"Is it even a word??"
"Look, I could have one of my agents fire you right now." Streak said crossing his arms.
"Agents? What agents?"
"Yes, my two agents." Streak said as he gestured to Peanut and Grape.
"I don't think you have the power to fire me." The receptionist said raising an eyebrow.
Streak laughed a obviously fake laugh.
"I can't. But my agents can." He said pretending to wipe a tear out of his eye.
"T-...They can?"
"Yes. These agents were sent to me straight from...Your boss!" Streak said raising his pointer finger.
"My boss?...Seriously?"
"Oh, yes. He said that there was this one girl that worked for him...He said her name, oh what was it...." Streak started as he looked at the receptionist's name tag.
"He said that this girl name Claire Windieson was a nightmare."
"He...Said that?" She asked looking down.
"Yup. He also sad that I have the right to fire her if she gives me any trouble."
"Um, Oh, err...Anyway, w-what can I do for you uh, Ms...Mr. Abigail?"
"We shall need a room! With twenty-four-seven room service."
"A room?" She asked looking at a clipboard.
"Yes...This is some sort of hotel, right?"
"Um, Yes."
"Perfect!" Streak said smiling.
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Nice update. Either Streak is good at bluffing, or that woman has zero confidence in herself! :lol:

And mining the core!?!? YOU FOOLS!!!
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copper wrote:Either Streak is good at bluffing, or that woman has zero confidence in herself! :lol:
Both.
copper wrote:And mining the core!?!? YOU FOOLS!!!
They just want to be rich!...Yeah, they're pretty big fools.
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Apparently they haven't heard that avarice is bad. A pole for mining must be bad. I don't know why.
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copper wrote:Apparently they haven't heard that avarice is bad.
Humans are smart enough to figure that out by themselves.
copper wrote:A pole for mining must be bad. I don't know why.
Better than using your hands. =P But, yes. Using a drill would be a lot better.
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A sudden ending. Oh well.

Chapter 5 Part 7

Streak smiled as a maid closed the door to their new hotel room. It was a fairly large room. Windows were lined against the wall covering it. They were all a very clean glass. The curtains hung above the windows, ready to be released at anytime. The room had a soft tan carpet with small green swirls across it. There was a separate door leading into what Streak assumed was the bathroom. Three beds were lined up across the floor. They were a fairly nice size with fancy tan sheets, matching the carpet.
"There." Streak said nodding as he sat on one of the beds.
"I gotta say..." Peanut started looking around room. "It's a nice room."
Streak nodded.
"Five star!...I think..." He said rubbing his chin.
"So, as we're 'investigating' we have to pretend you're the band manager to some blues band?" Grape asked looking out the windows.
"Um, I guess so. But, Friday is when the band play their concert and uh, well, it's Monday."
"Oh, okay."
"Are you saying that the band is what caused the accident?!" Peanut asked waging his tail.
"Settle down. I really doubt a blues band could pull two planets together. But, we have plenty of time to figure that out later. I need to go get my ship and place it somewhere safe. Err...Safer." Streak said standing up and walking to the door.
"Oh, okay. How long will that take?" Peanut asked stopping him.
"A few hours maybe." Streak replied shrugging.
"Mind if we poke around and do some...well...some shopping?"
"Uh, I guess. Here you'll need this." Streak said as he handed them a five cards. One was blue three were green and the last one was red.
"Oh, um, thanks. Currency?"
"Yup. Meet me back here in two hours."
"'Kay. See you then."
Streak left the room and walked down the fancy spiral stair case. The exit door was in front of him now and he sneaked out it, hoping that the receptionist didn't see him. He sighed, relieved that he wasn't caught and retraced his steps back to where he parked his ship. There it was. Right where he left it. He walked to the ship and looked at the smash remains of it.
"Hmmm..." He mumbled as the door opened.
He stepped inside and it started to raise into the air. It made a few crackling sounds and some dirt fell from the sides. The ship continued to raise until it was above all the buildings. It flew across them and slowed down as it got near the center of the city. It soon stopped and started to descend slowly. It landed in front of a large shop labeled: "Cal's Ship Repair." Streak stumbled out of it.
"Wha-...Oh, good. " He said to himself as he walked to the door.
He entered the door and walked to the closest person he could find.
"Hey, excuse me?" Streak asked the man.
He was about six feet tall. He had dark red skin and three eyes. His third eye was above the first two. He look like a human besides the skin color and the third eye. He was wearing a blue jump suit with the store's logo on it.
"Yes, how may I help you?" He asked clasping his hands together.
"I've got a ship out there that could use a good repair." Streak answered gesturing outside at his ship.
"I see. That doesn't look like a module from around here. Is it?"
"No," Streak started as he started to walk outside. "It is a rare type..."
"Well, I'm not sure what I can do then." The man replied shaking his head staying inside the shop.
Streak continued to walk outside.
"Fine. I'll fix it myself..." He mumbled.
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Poor Streak. Always having to do things by himself. *snicker*
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NosWaster wrote:Poor Streak. Always having to do things by himself. *snicker*
Heheheh, being smart means you have to do a lot of the things by yourself.
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Poor Streak. He can never get any help.

Grape and Peanut sure like to shop, don't they?

Hiding from that receptionist just makes hi look even guiltier. I hope he realizes that. :lol:
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copper wrote:Grape and Peanut sure like to shop, don't they?
Hey, Streak's paying for it all. :lol:
copper wrote:Hiding from that receptionist just makes him look even guiltier. I hope he realizes that. :lol:
He probably does but, that doesn't stop him! Beside...Sneaking out of a hotel? Awesome. :lol:
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:o The mysterious black kitty! We haven't seen her in a while. I thought she was forgotten this whole time. :lol:

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copper wrote::o The mysterious black kitty! We haven't seen her in a while. I thought she was forgotten this whole time. :lol:
What? Oh, nonono... I'm just waiting for the perfect moment to add her into the story. Heheheh... :lol:
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Um, Change in plans guys. Yeah, I know this is an regular update, but you see... That special chapter I had planed for today needs to be put in later for reasons I cant say. So, for now, It's just this:

Chapter 5 Part 8

Peanut sighed as he walked out the door to their hotel room. Grape followed closely, looking over his shoulder.
"What did he give you?" She asked curiously.
"Uh, some slips of paper. I think it's money." He replied holding them up to Grape, letting her see.
"Sweet. How much?"
"I...I have no idea, really."
"Oh. Well, I wonder what they have for sale on this planet." She said walking down the spiral stair case.
"They better have something to eat. I'm starving." Peanut followed Grape.
"Why wouldn't they? Come on. I'm sure we can find something."
They both walked out of the door and started to wander around the city, looking for stores and items they would be interested in buying. The city was fairly crowded, but not as much as Peanut and Grape thought. After looking around for a place to eat for about thirty minutes they both decided it'd be best to ask someone.
"Excuse me..." Grape said to one of the store keepers. "Do you know where we can find a place to eat around here?"
The store keeper nodded and gestured to a small place across the street.
"Ah, thank you." She said as she started to walk out the door with Peanut following.
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Streak smiled as he stood back, admiring his handiwork. He had fixed his ship. Well, more or less. As he said before, he was no mechanic. But, his ship was now flyable again.
"In your face." Streak said grinning.
He pushed a button and the door smoothly slide open.
"Ah, I love that sound." He said as he stepped inside the ship. The door slide closed and lift into the air. It started to spin. Before it could jerk forward and fly off the ship started to form a thick dark grey cloud of smoke. The ship was gone, leaving the cloud to slowly disappear.
Peanut and Grape were sitting at one of the many tables in the restaurant. The table was a plain white color. Peanut was holding a cup in his hand with a light blue liquid in it. He didn't know what it was, but it was good. Grape had the same thing, but she was drinking it through a straw.
"I wonder where Streak is." Peanut said taking a sip of the drink.
"I don't know. Where ever he is he's probably grinning." Grape said with a faint smile.
Peanut chuckled.
"Hey!" Streak said walking up to the table. "There you guys are! I've been looking all over for you."
He was grinning.
"Oh, sorry. We should get some sort of communication." Peanut said gesturing to a chair next to him.
Streak sat on the chair resting his elbows on the table.
"I fixed my ship."
"Sweet." Grape said sipping at the straw.
"Yeah, I know. So, have you guys seen any thing suspicious?"
"Nope." Peanut answered finishing his drink.
"Huh. Well, we'll have to wait until the third day..."
"Are you mad?!" Grape asked looking at him strangely.
"Well, I guess." Streak said shrugging.
"Won't we die if we do that?" Peanut asked.
"No. We have a fixed space ship." Streak said smiling.
"Ugh...Okay...But you have to promise that we won't get hurt." Grape said tilting her head slightly.
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"Promise!...I hope."
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Oh Streak, you and your empty promises. It is not good to depend on luck, you know.


Nice little chapter, Hopper. It almost makes up for the missing chapter. You hyped that chapter up so much.

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copper wrote:Oh Streak, you and your empty promises. It is not good to depend on luck, you know.
Streak: I know that. But, Me and lady luck are good friends.
copper wrote:Nice little chapter, Hopper. It almost makes up for the missing chapter. You hyped that chapter up so much.
Yeah, I know! I'm so sorry about that! You know how I said that they'd stay on earth for about a week? well, that's around when it happens.
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Lady luck can be a fickle friend, Streak.

And they get to go back to earth. Yay!
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copper wrote:Lady luck can be a fickle friend, Streak.
Streak: True. But, she always seems to stay on my side....Most of the time...
copper wrote:And they get to go back to earth. Yay!
Heh. They'll go to earth a lot. ;)
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Sweet update, Hopper!
I kinda find it funny that Streak can't even bring himself to lie to them... *giggle*

I might be... otherwise occupied for a while. Just got a new gaming keyboard and mouse and I'm gonna start giving them a good test drive :lol:

I will still be very closely following this story. ;)
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NosWaster wrote:Sweet update, Hopper!
I kinda find it funny that Streak can't even bring himself to lie to them... *giggle*
Heheh. Thanks. Yeah. It seems that it was hard enough for him to try and lie. :lol:
NosWaster wrote:I might be... otherwise occupied for a while. Just got a new gaming keyboard and mouse and I'm gonna start giving them a good test drive :lol:
:lol: *Jealous*
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Don't be jealous. I had to shell out 120 clams for the keyboard and 100 for the mouse.
Correction: My DAD had to shell out the money.

Expensive: Yes
Worth it: Oh yeah.
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NosWaster wrote: Expensive: Yes
Worth it: Oh yeah.
:lol: I'll bet!
Okay, I was gone like, for four hours today, so I am really tired. And, to top that off, when I got home my netbook decided that it didn't want to connect to the internet anymore. It took me awhile to fix that as well. So, this update is really short, and kinda lame, but whatever....

Chapter 6 Part 9

"Rrrright." Grape said with a sigh.
"Hey, trust me. Nothing will go wrong." Streak said as he stood up.
"Don't jinx us." Peanut said smirking slightly.
"Well we should get started on looking around more."
"Streak's right. We don't have that much time."
"Well, three days." Peanut said shrugging.
"Well, then. No need to waste more time. Come on, guys."
Streak started to walk toward the door. Peanut and Grape looked at each other, shrugged then followed him.
-10:30 pm(Four Hours Later)-
Streak opened the door to their hotel room and entered it.
"Well, that was useless." Grape said yawning. "I'm really tired."
"Me too." Peanut said yawning, because she yawned.
"Lets hit the sack, then. We all seem pretty tired."
"Good idea. My legs hurt." Peanut added before plopping down onto one of the beds.
Grape nodded and laid on her bed. Before Streak went to his bed he made sure that all the windows and doors were locked tight. After that he yawned, stretched, and flicked the light switch off. He laid down on the bed that he assumed was his and closed his eyes slowly. All three of them fell quickly asleep. The next morning when Streak awoke he was slightly surprised to find that Peanut and Grape were all ready awake, and they had called room service.
"Wow, err...What's this? Breakfast?" He asked looking at one of the coffee tables next to his bed as he sat up.
The table had three round white plates with scrambled eggs and bacon on them. Two of the plate's food was half eaten.
"Yeah, I thought you wouldn't mind if we ordered some food." Peanut said handing him a fork.
"No, it's fine. Did it cost extra?" Streak took the fork and pulled the plate onto his lap.
"Nope. I think it came with the room." Grape said taking a bite from the food on her plate.
"Sweet." Streak said eating a few bites of his plate.
"I know. So, what should we do today?"
"Depends." Streak said while eating some of the bacon.
"On?" Peanut asked.
"I don't know. It just does." Streak said before taking a bite of the eggs.
"Oh."
"Well, we might be able to get that receptionist to tell us more about this planet." Grape said glancing at the door.
"Yeah. 'Cause she loves us." Streak said smirking.
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Well, it shows off Streak's snark pretty well! :lol:

Nice little update, Hopper. Really, it isn't too bad.

Sounds like a good breakfast.
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copper wrote:Nice little update, Hopper. Really, it isn't too bad.
:D Thanks.
copper wrote:Sounds like a good breakfast.
Hey, they had bacon. That instantly makes it good. :lol:
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(On the yesterday's update I put "Chapter 6" by accident. That means nothing, really. Just an accident. =P)
Chapter 5 Part 10

"Excuse me." Streak said standing in front of the receptionist's desk.
Grape and Peanut were behind him standing quietly.
The receptionist sigh heavily.
"What?" She asked with a groan.
"We're looking to uh, surprise someone. It's his err...Birthday today." Streak explain.
The lady sighed again, this time quieter.
"Who might this person be?"
"Um, That's the problem...We don't exactly know his name."
The lady stared at Streak blankly.
"S... Seriously?" She asked rubbing a hand over her face.
"Yeah. Um, he is powerful and uh, in control of everything here. And he's respected." Streak said nodding.
"That's all I...Err...We know." He said continuing of his first statement.
"Andred Dofine?" She asked rolling her eyes.
"Er...Who's that?"
"You don't kno-...." The receptionist sighed.
"He's only the biggest man on the planet." She added.
"Too much ham?"
She ignored him.
"He controls and runs everything. The drill. The stores. Everything."
"Really? Sounds like someone we need to go see. Where might we find him?" Streak said turning around.
"He works at that big brown building over there." She started as she pointed out the window and across the street. There was a large copper plated building with three stories. "But-You can't just go see him." She said looking down at her clipboard.
"And, why not? It's his birthday." Streak smiled and started to walk toward the door.
Peanut and Grape looked at each other and followed him.
"Okay, Seriously? She's right. We can't just walk in pretending it's his birthday." Grape said as Streak pushed open the door.
"Well, I know. But, still. We need to try and check it out."
They all wandered around the copper building before finally finding an entrance. They walked through the two wide door place in one side of the building. The inside looked much like a bank. Desk, Tables and potted planets were scattered across the room. Many people of different races and species walked across the floor, through doors, and sat on seats that were lined up against one of the walls. Two men dressed in blue jump suits were hanging up a white banner on a balcony that was towering over the whole room. Streak walked a few steps into the room and rubbed his chin.
"Hmm...This'll be tricky." Streak said looking at the desks.
"Why don't we just ask someone about this so called 'Andred Dofine'?" Grape suggested.
"We could but it'd be better if we somehow got an appointment with him..." Streak said shrugging.
"Uh, guys?" Peanut asked looking up.
"What?" Streak said looking up at the banner that Peanut was staring at.
Grape also looked at it.
"Wow..." She said scratching the back of her head.
In big bold letters the banner simply said: "Happy 48th Birthday, Andred!"
Streak grinned.
"I had no idea!" He said chuckling.
"Nice guess." Peanut said, also letting out a faint chuckle.
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