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:o The White Cat! She is going to go stalker and go after Streak! Quick! To the Random Speculation Mobile!
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I'm sorry your sick. I hope Midnight and Streak are taking good care of you. Very nice drawing, by the way. I loved it!
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copper wrote::o The White Cat! She is going to go stalker and go after Streak! Quick! To the Random Speculation Mobile!
:lol:
DoDeDoddlydo! :lol:
copper wrote:I'm sorry your sick. I hope Midnight and Streak are taking good care of you. Very nice drawing, by the way. I loved it!
Thanks a lot! :D

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Do I have to go over there and check on you, Streak!? :twisted:

So is the white cat crazy or imprisoned.? The writing on the wall seems to indicate the former...
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Streak: Eek! I'm fine!!

But, Yes. She went insane shortly after being imprisoned.

Midnight: ....Former what?...Former what???
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I'm sorry, did you not understand. Nobody ever seems to understand the way I talk.

The former is the opposite of the latter. It is the first of the choices mentioned. Does that make sense?
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copper wrote: Does that make sense?
Oh, Okay. Yes. It does.
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Good, because I am horrible with explanations. Usually people just give me a blank stare before asking someone else around me what I meant. -_-'
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copper wrote:Good, because I am horrible with explanations. Usually people just give me a blank stare before asking someone else around me what I meant. -_-'
*Stares at you blankly*
O.O
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Do you know what he means?
Just kidding! I understand. :3
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*giggles*
*whistles and continues on his merry way*
Get well soon, Hopper. :)
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NosWaster wrote:*giggles*
*whistles and continues on his merry way*
Get well soon, Hopper. :)
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I thought that this Part was written and done horribly. :|

Chapter 4 Part 11

The chief laughed and pushed past Streak. Streak ran to Grape and started to take the muzzle off her. After the muzzle came off he started to untie the ropes tied around her.
"Streak-" Grape started slightly stunned.
"I'm sorry." Streak said as he finished untying her.
"Wha-" Grape tried saying.
"I shouldn't have brought you guys here." Streak said as he started to pull the muzzle off Peanut.
He quickly tossed it behind him. Streak started to untie Peanut. The crowd had quickly vanished and followed the chief.
"Grape." Peanut said as he jumped up and hugged Grape.
Grape hugged him back. Streak stood back awkwardly. After they had finished hugging Peanut looked at Streak.
"Streak...Your ship..." Peanut said confused.
Streak chuckled.
"You think It wouldn't have some sort of locking mechanism?" Streak said grinning showing teeth.
"I guess thats true...But, Won't the chief find out?" Grape said scratching the back of her head.
"Oh, We can escape before he can do anything to us." Streak said as he turned around.
"We better get going then." Peanut said taking a step toward Streak.
"Yes, Lets. Deirdre-" Streak said looking around. "...Deirdre?"
She was gone. Streak scratched the back of his head.
"You two," Streak started as he pointed at Grape and Peanut. "Go to the second village. Hide. I'll join you as soon as I find Deirdre."
"Got it." Grape said as she grabbed Peanut's hand.
Grape and Peanut started to walk down the path that led to the second village.
"Good luck." Streak said as he started to search the village.
Streak looked in four different empty cottages. Finally, The fifth cottage he checked had Deirdre in it. Her four back legs were sitting down. She was facing the wall.
"Deirdre?" Streak said walking to her.
"Oh...I didn't know you were here..." Deirdre said as she glanced at him over her shoulder.
"You okay?" Streak said walking next to her.
"Well, I just learned that everything I knew was wrong. I'm pretty confused..." She said with a sigh.
"Yeah. I can understand that."
"You...Travel to a lot of places...Right?" She asked looking at him.
She was eye level with him.
"Yes. I also might maybe know where your race's planet is." Streak said giving her a smile.
"Really? Well...I might maybe want you to take me there..." Deirdre said smiling back.
Streak chuckled.
"I might be able to arrange that after I get my ship back." Streak said smiling at her again.
"Re-...Thank you." Deirdre said hugging him.
"Of course." Streak said hugging back.
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It wasn't bad, Hopper. It was really kind of sweet. And at least now we know Streak is capable of remorse. :lol:

Deirdre will now go to her home planet. Hooray!
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copper wrote:It wasn't bad, Hopper. It was really kind of sweet.
Meh, I guess. But, I guess since you liked it then it wasn't horrible...
copper wrote:And at least now we know Streak is capable of remorse. :lol:
Streak: Whats that supposed to mean???
copper wrote:Deirdre will now go to her home planet. Hooray!
Yaaaayyy!
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I still must know about the needle! GAH! I want to know! :cry:
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It will be explained, my good friend.
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Ok. Streak you come out of these stories as kind of cold... yeah.

What's with the needle? Did I miss something?
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The needle that was used on Grape that made her scream.
Technically it just hurt her for that moment so she'd scream. =P
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Okay, good. For a second there, I thought I was missing something.
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Nope. You're fine.
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*giggles*
Now I can calmly await the next update. :)
I have a 4.5 day weekend. *jumps for joy*
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NosWaster wrote:*giggles*
Now I can calmly await the next update. :)
I have a 4.5 day weekend. *jumps for joy*
Heh, But, Sadly, Tomorrow's update might be....interesting. It might come, it might not.
I may just do some art or a comic or something...
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Here we are! This is today's update.
Annnnndddd...
Guess what I got?
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Is that. . . Midnight kissing Streak?
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NosWaster wrote:Is that. . . Midnight kissing Streak?
:shock:
Yup. :lol:
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DAWWWWW! ThankyouThankyouThankyou!


This is better than a normal update! But... Midnight looks kind of angry.

Did they have a fight just before them? Did she find out about Deidre's kiss and get jealous? Am I getting an answer to this?

Heh heh. I guess a picture's worth a thousand words after all...
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copper wrote:DAWWWWW! ThankyouThankyouThankyou!
YourWelcomeYourWelcomeYourWelcome!
copper wrote:This is better than a normal update! But... Midnight looks kind of angry.
Yeah, She does. I also forgot to put the earrings on her.
copper wrote:Did they have a fight just before them? Did she find out about Deidre's kiss and get jealous? Am I getting an answer to this?
Midnight: WHAT?
copper wrote:Heh heh. I guess a picture's worth a thousand words after all...
Heheh. I guess so.
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I can just hear Streak saying IT"S NOT WHAT YOU THINK!!!! :lol:

Does Midnight have a collar? I forget...

Also, I hope you get better soon! I can't wait for the inevitable to happen!
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copper wrote:I can just hear Streak saying IT"S NOT WHAT YOU THINK!!!! :lol:
Midnight: You know him all to well
copper wrote:Does Midnight have a collar? I forget...
No. Not at the moment, anyway. I might give her one later.
copper wrote:Also, I hope you get better soon! I can't wait for the inevitable to happen!
Thanks! :D
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Goodnews: I'm not sick! :D

Badnews: There's no update today. I know, I know. But, I was really busy today and I couldn't find the time. Yes. I know. I stink. And, Yes, I need to update more. But, Midnight's Story will update tomorrow! That's kinda good right??
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You never HAVE to update. ;)

And Midnight's story updating tomorrow sounds fantastic! *hugs*
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NosWaster wrote:And Midnight's story updating tomorrow sounds fantastic! *hugs*
Yay, Hugs! ^^
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*giggle*
I can't wait!
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*peers at Midnight and Nos* What are you two planning? I'm watching you... :lol:

And Hopper, you update almost every day. I'm amazed you can keep that up! Take all the time off you want...

I so want to read the Midnight story. It will be awesome!
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copper wrote:*peers at Midnight and Nos* What are you two planning? I'm watching you... :lol:
Midnight: Eek! That's...Kinda creepy...
copper wrote:And Hopper, you update almost every day. I'm amazed you can keep that up! Take all the time off you want...
Thanks! But, It should only be yesterday and today.
copper wrote:I so want to read the Midnight story. It will be awesome!
Thanks again! Tomorrow!
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Sorry, Midnight! I meant Hopper. He and Nos have something planned, and I think it invol--- *gets Bonked on the head*

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*Watches as copper gets bonked*
*Walks away whistling*
I see nothing. I know nothing.
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NosWaster wrote:*Watches as copper gets bonked*
*Walks away whistling*
I see nothing. I know nothing.
Uh-huh. Sure you don't >:3
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*starts to come to*

Siiiggmmaaa......
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*Sigma looks at hopper*
Sigma: He doesn't look so good. . .
Me: He's fine...

I shall now do random things.
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It's a shortie.

Chapter 4 Part 12

Deirdre sighed as she followed Streak. They both were walking around the lake.
"Wanna know why we're walk around the lake, without using the path?" Streak said turning his head to Deirdre.
"You already told m-" Deirdre.
"Because using the correct path would attract attention." Streak said smiling.
"Yes. That's the third time you've said that."
"Just informing the readers." Streak said grinning.
"The re-"
"Never mind."
Deirdre sighed and rubbed her forehead.
"So, Now, Remind me what we're doing." Deirdre said as she walked alongside Streak.
"We're hiding out in the second village until nightfall. Then, When night hits, we shall sneak aboard my ship and fly off." Streak explained.
"It's that simple?" She asked tilting her head slightly.
"Sure. How hard could it be?"
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Peanut sighed as he paced across the dirt floor. Grape was sitting on the ground with her back against the wall watching him.
"Where is he...?" Peanut mumbled quietly.
"Taking his time. He'll be here soon. Trust me." Grape said as she yawned.
"I know...Still I want to get off this planet."
"Moon." Grape said as she closed her eyes slowly.
"Right." Peanut said with a sigh.
Grape slowly fell asleep for a quick nap. Peanut looked at Grape and sat next to her. Twenty Three minutes later Streak stepped into the cottage.
"There you are!" Peanut said standing up.
"Here I am!" Streak said grinning showing his teeth.
"Took you awhile." Peanut mumbled smiling.
"Oh, Please. It's a big lake!"
Deirdre slowly entered the cottage behind Streak.
"Your friend fell asleep." She said gesturing at Grape.
"Yeah, She's taking a quick na-" Peanut started before getting quickly interrupted.
"We should all get some sleep. We should be wide awake for later tonight." Streak said yawning as he laid his back against the wall.
He closed his eyes and crossed his arms.
"Um. Okay..." Peanut said sitting next to Grape again.
"Good night, or uh...Err...Good morning?" Peanut said smiling slightly.
Deirdre smiled back.
"Good night, Peanut." Deirdre said as she walked over to Streak.
She laid next to him and quickly fell asleep.
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