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Oh Mah Gawd, Meh first Topic! :D *ahem* well any ways, I have a webcomic Idea that I've been writting up; doing the scripts and making the characters, and unfortunately there's a small snag in the plan...I cannot draw it. But regardless, I'll post what I've written so far (A character list and two scripts)

(NOTE: In ordor to accomodate this I might have to triple post. I apologize to the moderators in advance)
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You can always use the Edit button, unless the scripts are that large that they far surpass 60,000 characters.
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Okay, here we go. My Idea is called: The Last Human!

The Overall Story

You ever have on of those days where everything works out just fine, and you think, “Well, things can’t go wrong today!”

Well they can go wrong….

…in a big way…

Take for example, Joseph Blake. He was just a regular mechanic from the present time, working on a mysterious scientist’s generator when suddenly:

Zap!

He finds himself transported millions of years in the future, where animals have evolved into humans, humanity are now deadly monsters, and Joseph is the last (normal) human! Poor Joey now tries his best to fit into a world where he is a stranger from another world. Along the way he makes some new friends and unfortunately new enemies.

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Main Characters
Name: Joseph “Joey” Blake
Species: Human
Sex: Male
Age: 26
Height: 6’ 00”
Hair: Brown/short
Eyes: Green
Occupation: Mechanic
Relationship Status: Boyfriend to Jessica

Bio: Poor Joseph! He was just your average Joe mechanic, working on peoples machines so that he could live a quiet normal life. Now he’s the center of attention for the people of neo-Gainesville, as he is-unfortunately-the last the human on earth. Joseph is the main character of the series, and is likewise the eponymous last human. He is at first very distraught over the fact that he’s no longer a normal person, living with other normal people…well okay may not all of them were normal, but that’s besides the point. He was lonesome and depressed, but fortunately the kind people of Neo-Gainesville warmed up to him. Now he’s more laid back and caring of others around him. He now makes his living in the future, and once again has a normal life…or at least as normal as a guy who has an anthropomorphic cat as a girlfriend, and two anthropomorphic canine criminals constantly trying to kill him can get. His best friends are Rizzo and Kyle.

~THE FUTURE SUCKS!! IT JUST…SUCKS!!!!
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Name: Jessica Griffin
Species: Feline Animan
Fur Color: Black
Sex: Female
Age: 25
Height: 5’ 11”
Hair: Pink/short
Eyes: Blue
Occupation: Graphic artist, Writer
Relationship Status: Girlfriend to Joseph

Bio: Sweet little Jessica is a party raver who has a heart of gold and the soul of a young child. She makes a quiet living by designing artwork for videogames, T.V. shows, magazines etc. She also likes to write stories and blog about her life. This is how she met most of her friends. Lately she’s had a rough time hooking up with dates, because most of the people she asks out are actually only interested in one thing. Fortunately her problems were erased when she stopped looking for animan hunks, and settled on the affections of the last human. Since then she’s stuck to Joseph like crazy glue. Her best friends are Valerie, Jen, and Laura. She’s one of only two people who actually refer to Joseph as “Joey” (though in Jessica’s case, it’s more of a pet name).

~Ugh, I have writers block…better get the thought enhancer.
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Name: Rizzo Bailey
Species: Feline Animan
Fur Color: Light tan
Sex: Male
Age: 27
Height: 5’ 10”
Hair: Brown/short
Eyes: Brown
Occupation: Mechanic
Relationship Status: Boyfriend to Sally.

Bio: All the single ladies are totally nuts for Rizzo…for all the wrong reasons. Is he a dashingly handsome Spanish matador? No. Is he that hunky man from across the street? Nope. Is he the captain of the nation’s top football team? Not even close. No, Rizzo is a mechanic (much like Joseph) who was blessed (or cursed) with irresistibly cute looks. Rizzo is a chirpy go getter, who always gets job done and done right. However, despite his quirky, hard working attitude, he’s unbelievably shy around girls, and sadly for him, the girls know this. The fact that he lives in an apartment with two girls doesn’t necessarily help his situation. Rizzo can always be found working on some kind of project and is the only other person who calls Joseph, “Joey”. Recently, when he attempted to take a vacation to the Bahamas, he found himself on a wacky adventure, that landed him with a tomboyish girlfriend named sally.

~Why is it that when I try to be masculine, some crazy lady always seems to interfere?
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Name: Kyle Bradshaw
Species: Feline Animan
Fur Color: Beige with brown stripes
Sex: Male
Age: 28
Height: 6’ 1”
Hair: Bald
Eyes: Blue
Occupation: Store Clerk
Relationship Status: Single (has a crush on Laura)

Bio: Stop! Don’t panic! Kyle’s got everything under control! Kyle Bradshaw is the straight man of the group. Whenever things go wrong, he’s the guy who restores order. That’s what made him an asset for when Joseph crash landed in his neighborhood. He is one of the first people Joseph ever met, and is consequently his roommate/best friend. Kyle makes a modest living as a store clerk for a department store in Neo-Gainesville’s nearby city. Despite being pretty level headed, he can get flustered from time to time when to many people start to get on his case. But all in all, Kyle’s always around to restore sanity to the freaked out people…or at least try. Oh, he also has a crush on the Family Dodgers sister Laura.

~If your going to be subtle, at least get your point across!
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Name: Malcolm Hammond
Species: Canine Animan
Fur Color: Gray
Sex: Male
Age: 37
Height: 5’ 9”
Hair: Black/Mullet
Eyes: orange
Occupation: (Self appointed) chaos theorist
Relationship Status: Divorced twice

Bio: It could be a clear sunny day outside and he would swear that the end is near. Malcolm is a man who spends a little too much-…well okay spends WAY too much time doing chaos theory research. That’s probably why two women already left him. He thinks that Joseph is an unstable element to this world, and that he’s going to cause an apocalypse that will wipe out the entire animan race. Or at least that what he will tell you. He operates with his unpleasant colleague Brian, and together the two always attempt (and fail) to get rid of Joseph by any means possible.

~Stay calm?? I’m friggn’ chaos theorist! I’m supposed to be panicked!!
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Name: Brian Simpson
Species: Canine Animan
Fur Color: Black
Sex: Male
Age: 39
Height: 6’ 3”
Hair: Gray/short
Eyes: Red
Occupation: Ex-Military Scientist
Relationship Status: Single

Bio: Without a shadow of a doubt Neo-Gainesville’s most unpleasant person. He’s a scientist with a deep seated grudge against Joseph. Whilst it seems that he hate him for the same reasons that his colleague does, Brain seems to have some other reason…Brian is more colder and intimidating that his partner, and he always seems to keep cool in the most tense of situations…sort of. He is forever hell bent on eliminating Joseph from his world, and is willing to remove him anyway possible…even if it means killing him.

~Ugh, I’m surrounded by utter incompetence…
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Secondary Characters

Name: Valerie Jones
Species: Feline Animan
Fur Color: White
Sex: Female
Age: 26
Height: 5’ 9”
Hair: Blond/Medium Long
Eyes: Green
Occupation: Fashion Model
Relationship Status: Girlfriend to Thomas

Bio: Titled Neo-Gainesville’s sexiest feline, Valerie Jones is quite the fashion model. She knows exactly how to charm the camera, and loves to show off new outfits. Many of her…uh…fans assume that she is a rather sassy person but in reality, she’s a kind hearted soul, who enjoys the company of her friends. Valerie is almost always seen wrapped around her photographer/boyfriend Thomas, and she loves to tease his teenaged apprentice, Jason. Among her list of hobbies are, reading, hiking, and, what else? Shopping! Fabulous!

~I will never understand the purpose of high heel shoes
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Name: Thomas Hampton Jr.
Species: Feline Animan
Fur Color: Dark Gray
Sex: Male
Age: 27
Height: 5’ 10”
Hair: Black/short
Eyes: Yellow
Occupation: Magazine Photographer
Relationship Status: Boyfriend to Valerie.

Bio: ‘Ello there ‘ol chap! Thomas is a self taught photographer who hails from northern England. He’s a real organized kind of guy, who almost always seems to be sorting through his many photo albums and putting them in certain orders. He met Valerie when she went for a photo shoot in London. Her cameraman didn’t show, but fortunately Thomas happened to be around to take the pictures for her. Since then, they’ve been a couple. In his part time, he likes to snap photos of the wildlife, and he gives free photography lessons to his apprentice Jason.

~Yes, I’m British. Lord knows I get reminded all the bloody time.
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Name: Jennifer “Jen” Harding
Species: Feline Animan
Fur Color: Brown
Sex: Female
Age: 28
Height: 5’ 11”
Hair: Dark Brown/Long
Eyes: Green
Occupation: None
Relationship Status: Married to Nitro

Bio: Remember the good ‘ol days? No? Well then have a chat Jen! Jen is a sentimental woman who has an affinity for nostalgic memorabilia. She loves to collect old objects, such as dolls, music records, soda cans, boxes, etc. But the one she loves to collect more than anything are comic books. She literally has boxes of old comics that she’s collected over the years. Her love of the printed world of heroes is probably why she married Nitro; a comic book artist. She enjoys hanging out with her best friends Valerie and Jessica, and enjoys foreign cuisine (particularly Italian foods). A peculiar thing about the ways she dresses: she looks like a child from the sixties!

~Can’t comic book companies just make a superhero who isn’t a depressive sadist?
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Name: Nicholas “Nitro” Harding
Species: Feline Animan
Fur Color: Brown
Sex: Male
Age: 29
Height: 6’ 1”
Hair: Light Brown/ Short
Eyes: Yellow
Occupation: Comic Book Artist
Relationship Status: Married to Jen

Bio: You would think that Nitro is a hippie if you saw him. He’s probably the last person on the face of the earth the wear denim jackets, but hey: it’s now about the age, but the looks! Nitro is a comic book artist who make a living doing art for many, many comic book series. The main series he works on is called white lights: a series that follows the life of four teenagers who have superpowers. When he’s not working on comics, he can be found reading a mystery novel, or sculpting figures out of clay. At present time, he’s been married to Jen for two years now.

~No, I don’t go to clubs, unless my wife comes along…with a mace…
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The Family Dodgers:

The Family Dodgers are a trio of reptilian animen who live near Joseph and his friends. All of them have some kind of job revolving around technology, and they are good friends with Joseph and his posy.

Name: Michael “Mike” Dodger
Species: Reptile Animan
Scale Color: Dark Green
Sex: Male
Age: 21
Height: 5’ 9”
Hair: Red/Short
Eyes: Yellow
Occupation: Technician help/Musician
Relationship Status: Single

Bio: Are you ready? Are you ready? Huh, huh?? Mike is the youngest of the Family Dodgers, as well as the most obnoxious. He’s a hyper little dude who his always seen with an energy drink in his hands. He always moving at the speed of sound, and is constantly looking for adventure (trouble). His fast paced manor can sometimes press his older siblings patience to the edge, but they both still like him…preferably quiet. He has a job as an electrician, and he helps building computers. In his spare time, he’s the drummer for the Family Dodgers Band, “Dodgebacks”.

~Are we gonna go or what?? I’ve been waitn’ for ten minutes!
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Name: Mathew “Matt” Dodger
Species: Reptile Animan
Scale Color: Brown
Sex: Male
Age: 31
Height: 6’ 2”
Hair: Bald
Eyes: Blue
Occupation: Program Debugger/Musician
Relationship Status: Single

Bio: Matt is the de facto leader of the Family Dodgers, and is the eldest sibling. He sometimes acts a little smug and is quiet possessive of certain objects, but then again what big brother isn’t? Matt is a rather calm person, and is good friends with Kyle. He makes his way in this world by debugging software for various companies in Neo-Gainesville’s nearby city. In his spare time, he’s Dodgebacks guitarist.

~You people are absolutely nuts, you know that?
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Name: Lauren “Laura” Dodgers
Species: Reptile Animan
Scale Color: Light Green
Sex: Female
Age: 27
Height: 5’ 10”
Hair: Orange
Eyes: Pink
Occupation: Beta Tester/Musician
Relationship Status: Single (has a crush on Kyle)

Bio: Lauran is the only female of the family, as well as the nerdiest of the trio. She’s a real big gamer who always seems to be playing the latest video games. Laura is a very tomboyish girl, who’d rather wear cargo pants that a skirt. In fact, none of her brothers have ever actually seen her in a dress before! Laura has the all important job of being a beta tester the famed Dragonware videogame company. In her spare time, she’s the bassist for her family’s band. Oh, she also has a crush on Kyle, though in Laura’s case, she act’s sort of, “off-and-on”. Weird. Must be a tomboy thing!

~You hide the fact that you have a crush on me about as well as a train wreck.
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Name: William “Weaver” Bradley
Species: Canine Animan
Fur Color: Dark brown
Sex: Male
Age: 48
Height: 6’ 2”
Hair: Brown/Scruffy
Eyes: Brown
Occupation: Farmer
Relationship status: Single

Bio: Well howdy pardner! You’d never meet a more true to life redneck than Weaver. He’s always seen plowing his field and working on his garden. He’s a real down to earth kind of guy with a heavy southern drawl and has absolutely no idea on how to work technology. He’s a bit kooky too, as he’s always rambling on about aliens and conspiracies, but many people still like him. He’s a little leery about Joseph’s arrival, and at first he didn’t like him, but that quickly changed when Joseph gave him a framed photo of his deceased father as a Christmas present. Since than, he’s been good friends with Joseph

~Wait, now if yous ain’t an alien…does that mean you’re Jesus??
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Minor Characters

Name: Professor Martha Davis
Species: Human
Sex: Female
Age: 32
Height: Unknown
Hair: Brunette/long ponytail
Eyes: Unknown
Occupation: Freelance technology scientist
Relationship Status: Unknown

Bio: You think Brain is unpleasant? He‘s a friggin‘ angel compared to this highly rude woman. Davis is an antisocial scientist who (despite being very minor character), is the one responsible for sending Joseph into the future. She’s a rude person and will snap your head if you don’t breathe the right way, but fortunately she only appears for one or two issues.

~Well, it’s about time, you incompetent fool!
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Name: Doctor Fredrick Vanguard
Species: Rabbit Animan
Fur Color: Brown
Sex: Male
Age: 45
Height: 6’ 1”
Hair: Blond/Shot
Eyes: Yellow
Occupation: Biologist
Relationship Status: Unknown

Bio: Vanguard is the doctor who ran tests on Joseph to see if he carried any dangerous illnesses or bacteria. Of course even with his tests coming out negative, Brian and Malcolm are still adamant that Joseph has to go.

~Yes, I’m quite aware of that, Mr. Blake
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Name: Maxwell Powers
Species: Canine Animan
Fur Color: Brown
Sex: Male
Age: 43
Height: 5’ 10”
Hair: Red/Short
Eyes: Blue
Occupation: CEO of the, “Wild Passions” magazine
Relationship Status: Divorced six times(!)

Bio: Ew! The mere thought of this man just makes you want to take a shower. Powers is a dirty sleaze who happily exploits women in his (equally filthy) magazine to make profit. He’s had his eye on Jessica and her friends for a while now, and finally he obtained pictures of them by tricking poor little Jason to get them. Needless to say, this action left poor Maxwell, with several bruises, and some mental scaring.

~Beauty? Does anyone actually ever use that word anymore?
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Name: Jason Ellington
Species: Avian Animan
Feather Color: Red
Sex: Male
Age: 16
Height: 5’ 8”
Hair: Brown/scruffy
Eyes: Blue
Occupation: Apprentice to Thomas
Relationship Status: Single

Bio: Jason is the teenaged equivalent of Rizzo. He is a rather shy boy, who has a passion for snapping photos of the world. He takes private photography lessons with Thomas, and he is a good friend to Valerie and her friends. The one downside to his character is that he’s rather naïve. He easily trusts people a bit to easy, and sometimes that can get him into trouble. But of course after the fighting’s over, the girls are oh so quick to be friends with him again.

~No, I’m fine. I think voluntary motion will return to me soon.
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Name: Alexis Stewart & Sandra Ward
Species: Rabbit & Giraffe Animan
Fur Color: White, and Yellow.
Age: 28 & 27
Height: 5’ 9” for both
Hair: White/short & Red/Long
Eyes: Red & Blue
Occupation: Unknown
Relationship Status: Unknown

Bio: Alexis (the rabbit animan) and Sandra (the giraffe) are two girls that share an apartment with Rizzo. They love to tease him whilst he works away on a project of some kind.

~Oh Rizzo~! Whatcha working on?
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Name: Sally (she has no last name)
Species: Feline Animan
Fur Color: Dull Yellow
Sex: Female
Age: Approx. 27 (she can’t remember exactly)
Height: 5’ 11”
Hair: Red/Short
Eyes: Red
Occupation: N/a
Relationship Status: Girlfriend to Rizzo

Bio: Sally is an Orphan from an Island far out into the pacific. She was later found by a gang of pirates, who adopted her and taught her life on the high seas. Rizzo met her when he accidentally got on the wrong ship to go to the Bahamas. She’s a sporty girl who always looking for adventure.

~Ya know, there’s more to being a man than doing stupid stunts.
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Name: Captain Freeman
Species: Reptile Animan
Scale Color: Dark Green
Sex: Male
Age: 53
Height: 6’ 3”
Hair: Bald
Eyes: Yellow
Occupation: Captain of the S.S. Saber
Relationship Status: Widow

Bio: Captain Freeman is Sally’s adoptive father. He lost his wife due to cancer, and now spends his time on the high seas, losing himself amongst the worlds oceans. He adopted Sally, because he understood her pain. He’s very protective of her, and is always worried if she’ll be okay. He has another daughter named Shanda.

~None of ye lies, ye scurvy nitwit
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Name: Shanda (She has no last name)
Species: Reptile Animan
Scale Color: Green
Sex: Female
Age: 29
Height: 6’ 00”
Hair: Brown/short
Eyes: Pink
Occupation: Pirate
Relationship Status: Single

Bio: Shanda is Sally’s step sister and Captain Freeman’s real daughter. She’s just as peppy as her step sister, and is always itching for adventure.

~Yay, adventure!
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Name: The Neo-Humans
Fur Color: Variable
Height: Variable
Eyes: Variable

Bio: theses horrid monsters are all that remains of what once was the human race. They are primordial, and vicious. They’ve been quarantined off from humanity, but unfortunately Joseph and his friends accidentally end up in their quarantined area trying to escape from Brain and Malcolm

~WWWRRRROOOOWWWWRRR!!!!
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Name: Mandy Baker
Species: Canine Animan
Fur Color: Beige
Sex: Female
Height: Unknown
Hair: Brown/ Long
Eyes: Yellow
Occupation: Unknown
Relationship Status: Unknown

Bio: Actually, she has no story whatsoever. She’s only used as a running gag. Whenever Joseph says, "Son of a-", Mandy always seems to be standing nearby with an annoyed look on her face

~Ahem!

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Mmm... that looks very interesing, good luck with the comic (:
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Pointless Trivia!

-Joseph’s name is a pun on the term, “average Joe”.
-Jessica was originally named Jane
-If you haven’t guessed it yet, Malcolm is named after John Hammond and Ian Malcolm from the Jurassic Park Franchise
-Matthew and Michael are named after the Chapman brothers (the creators of Homestar Runner)
-Sandra is loosely based off of Nina from Camp Lazlo
-Like wise, Alexis is based off of Panini from Chowder
-Laura is based off an ex-girlfriend of mine
-Nicholas and Jennifer’s nicknames are a pun on the word Hydrogen
-Brian and Malcolm’s personalities were inspired by Jafar and Iago from Walt Disney’s Aladdin
-Captain Freeman is named out of irony, because he always feels trapped due to the death of his wife.
-Animan is a combonation of the words Animal and Human
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Now for the scripts! :D

The Last Human Pilot:
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~Panel 1: Bust Shot of Joseph just standing, staring off into the distance.

Caption box: He is Joseph Blake. Once he was just an ordinary guy.
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~Panel 2: Bust shot. Joseph is drinking a soda

Caption Box: But one day, He would no longer be normal.
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~Panel 3: Bust shot. Joey’s now looking out toward the reader with a confused look on his face.

Caption Box: He will become the one who will shatter the boarder between reality and Fantasy.
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~Panel 4: Bust shot. Joey’s now looking up out of confusion.

Caption Box: This summer…One man will-

Joey: Am I in a trailer of some kind?
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Last Human Ep1:
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~Panel 1: Joey is standing in the doorway of a house. A silhouetted figure is standing in it and is talking to him.

Joey: Hello Professor Davis! Sorry I’m late.

Davis: Well it’s about time you showed up, you incompetent fool!
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~Panel 2: Joey is beginning to walk down a hall. He’s talking to the silhouette.

Davis: The generator is down there and to the left. don’t touch anything, or else!

Joey: You got it, ma’m!
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~Panel 3: Joey’s walking down a hall, with a smile on his face.
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~Panel 4: Joey’s looking back with a disappointed look on his face.

Joey: (Thought Bubble) You’d think with all this scientific research, they’d find a cure for being a jerk.
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welp, there goes the fourth wall.
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Psykeout wrote:welp, there goes the fourth wall.
I honestly can't wait to see/read it!
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Grief, I didn't expect you guys to look over this so soon! thanks! :D
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Looks interesting. I'd definitely read it.

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Story...will...be...addicting! You have my kudos! And your art style will match the characters perfectly!!! (Hopefully)

Do eet!

I also recommend doing some of the comics first before making the actual layout of the website and everything...also, MAKE IT DAILY!!! (Nah, just kidding...unless you really have the time, though, we'd appreciate it!) Also, whenever you do it, give us the link to it! Talk to Rick to interchange links, etc...Ask other webcomics to see if you can befriend them so that they may help you out. This is my advice to you. NOW DO EET!!!

P.S. Neo-Gainsville=Neo-Florida?...also...you look oddly familiar...
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Just another for me to send into everlasting Darkness

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dalonewolf25 wrote:Story...will...be...addicting! You have my kudos! And your art style will match the characters perfectly!!! (Hopefully)

Do eet!

I also recommend doing some of the comics first before making the actual layout of the website and everything...also, MAKE IT DAILY!!! (Nah, just kidding...unless you really have the time, though, we'd appreciate it!) Also, whenever you do it, give us the link to it! Talk to Rick to interchange links, etc...Ask other webcomics to see if you can befriend them so that they may help you out. This is my advice to you. NOW DO EET!!!
Lolz thank you, however, I'ma probably either have to make friends with and artist because of my horrid srawing skillz, or I'll have to revert to sick figures... -_-
P.S. Neo-Gainsville=Neo-Florida?...also...you look oddly familiar...

Many people say I look familular. I do frequently vist many fourms, depending on what I'm currently obsessed with. Also, yes Neo-Gainesville is located in a neo-Florida. I was going to use Port St. John (the area I live) but I felt the need to use gainesville instead.
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Hmm...ok. Well, you could always do a chibi comic! You could look at the FloRiDa comic, its style is chibi-ish!...

Also, it's good to know another Floridian visits the forums as well!
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dalonewolf25 wrote:Hmm...ok. Well, you could always do a chibi comic! You could look at the FloRiDa comic, its style is chibi-ish!...

Also, it's good to know another Floridian visits the forums as well!
So is Copper.

I would draw this for you, but I can't, for two reasons:
1) My hands are full with fanfics.
2) I have no computer art skills whatsoever.
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Well it's fantastic that you put so much thought into this :D

I hope that it gets drawn up eventually
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lots of good artists here. you'll find someone, but you might do better to post in the media median. we tend to hang around there sometimes.
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Psykeout wrote:lots of good artists here. you'll find someone, but you might do better to post in the media median. we tend to hang around there sometimes.


Hey!, that's a good idea! Thanks! :D

...wait, wouldn't that be a little bit mean on my part? I mean the artist is the one doing all the hard work.
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Well...not if the artist loves what he is doing...
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Well, my hunt for an elusive Artist still continues, HOWEVER, that does not stop me from posting up some scripts in the mean time. (Only one for now, but it's eight panels long)

Last Human Ep2: Two Rows

Panel 1, Row 1: Joseph is on his knees in front of a machine and is wiping his forehead.

Joseph: Whew. Another machine, another payment
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Panel 2, Row 1: Joseph’s in the same position, and is now working on the machine

Joseph: Not that I can complain really. I mean it brings in some decent money. Still, my life could use some more pizzazz.
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Panel 3, Row 1: A light envelops Joseph, who has a shocked look on his face.

Joseph: What the…!?
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Panel 4, Row 1: Same shot of the machine, but now Joseph is completely gone.
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Panel 1, Row 2: A shot of a dark room with a lone trash can.
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Panel 2, Row 2: Same shot.

Joseph: Whoaaaa!!!
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Panel 3, Row 2: A cloud of dust, and now Joseph’s legs are sticking outside of the can.
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Panel 4, Row 2: Same shot, but the dust is cleared.

Joseph: Okay, when I asked for Pizzazz, this isn’t quite what I had in Mind.
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Sounds great so far. I can't wait for you to bring this webcomic idea of yours to fruition. I came when I felt my name being posted here. I will always support a fellow Floridian, though, so you now have a stalwart fan on your hands. I hope you can deal with that. :D
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copper wrote:Sounds great so far. I can't wait for you to bring this webcomic idea of yours to fruition. I came when I felt my name being posted here. I will always support a fellow Floridian, though, so you now have a stalwart fan on your hands. I hope you can deal with that. :D
Lolz, I haven't even got an artist yet, and already have a small fanbase. :D Thanks!

EDIT: Also thanks to the rest of ye moltly crew!
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Nitrosparxx wrote:Panel 3, Row 1: A light envelops Joseph, who has a shocked look on his face.

Joseph: What the…!?
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Panel 3, Row 1: Same shot of the machine, but now Joseph is completely gone.
just to let you know~
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Whoops! thanks for spotting that!
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I might take my hand on drawing this.. :o
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Okay, so it was brought to my attention by the people on FA that I had forgotten some details in my profiles. So here's a rundown on some of the forgotten details:

Joseph

Attire: White T-Shirt and blue jeans
Hats: Read Baseball cap
Shoes: Black Sneakers
Body type: Skinny(non anorexic)
Facial Features: None of importance
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Jessica

Attire: Black shirt with long white sleeves, and black jeans*
Hats: N/a
Shoes: Black sandals
Body Type: Skinny(non anorexic)
Facial Features: None of importance
Anthro type: Typical Black cat

*The shade of black is to be darker than Jessica’s fur
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Rizzo

Attire: Yellow polo shirt and long brown slacks
Hats: N/a
Shoes: Gray tennis shoes
Body type: Skinny(non anorexic)
Facial Features: None of importance
Anthro Type: Typical tan colored cat. No fur pattern
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Kyle:

Attire: Blue over-shirt (always opened) with a white undershirt and dark blue cargo shorts
Hats: Light blue Bucket hat
Shoes: Blue sandals
Body type: Chunky (not obese)
Facial Features: Non of Importance
Anthro type: Beige Persian cat with brown stripes
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Malcolm:

Attire: White t-shirt and beige khakis
Hats: Beige boater
Shoes: gray tennis shoes
Body type: Skinny (non anorexic)
Facial features: black goatee
Anthro type: Typical white lab, with gray fur
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Brain

Attire: Typical business suit
Hats: None
Shoes: Black leather shoes
Body Type: Skinny (non anorexic)
Facial features: non of importance
Anthro type: Typical black lab
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Valerie

Attire: Red short sleeved jacket, with a pink tank top underneath. A red short skirt.
Hats: N/a
Shoes: thigh high red boots. Not high heeled
Body Type: Skinny (non anorexic)
Facial features (none of importance)
Anthro Type: Typical White cat
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Thomas

Attire: Black vest with a white long sleeved collared shirt underneath. Long black slacks
Hats: Black flat cap
Shoes: Brown loafers
Body type: Skinny (non anorexic)
Facial features: non of importance
Anthro type: typical gray tabby
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Jen

Attire: Green long sleeved bellbottomed shirt, and a medium denim skirt
Hats: a brown feather head band.
Shoes: Beige sandals
Body type: skinny (non-anorexic)
Facial features: Wears brown tinted circular spec glasses
Anthro type: Typical brown tabby
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Nitro

Attire: Long sleeved denim jacket with black t-shirt underneath. Blue jeans
Hats: N/a
Shoes: white tennis shoes
Body type: Skinny (non anorexic)
Facial Features: Non of importance
Anthro type: Typical brown tabby cat
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Weaver

Attire: Plaid long sleeved shirt and denim overalls
Hats: Straw hat
Shoes: Brown ankle high boots
Body type: Skinny (non anorexic)
Facial features: Non of importance
Anthro Type: Typical brown blood hound.
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Matt

Attire: black t-shirt and black cargo shorts
Hats: N/a
Shoes: Black tennis shoes
Body type: Chunky (little bit overweight)
Facial features: None of importance
Anthro type: typical chameleon
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Mike

Attire: Green hoodie and blue jeans
Hats: N/a
Shoes: Brown sneakers
Body type: Skinny (almost anorexic)
Facial features: None of importance
Anthro type: Typical brown Anole lizard
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Laura

Attire: Black Tank top and blue jeans
Hats: N/a
Shoes: Black sandals
Body type: Skinny (non anorexic)
Facial features: None of importance
Anthro Type: Typical Green Iguana

K here ya'll go. also don't forget to come to me via this thread -> https://www.housepetscomic.com/forums/v ... f=7&t=1117 if you want a shot at drawing for me. :D
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meh, tried my hand at jessica. im dissapointed with the shading, but i'm not going to shade most of the time in the comic anyway. so..
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Zander wrote:meh, tried my hand at jessica. im dissapointed with the shading, but i'm not going to shade most of the time in the comic anyway. so..
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Nitrosparxx wrote:
Zander wrote:meh, tried my hand at jessica. im dissapointed with the shading, but i'm not going to shade most of the time in the comic anyway. so..
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The image link isn't working... :<


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it should work..

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Hmm, It's still not showing up. Maybe my computers broke. |:<

(No, I am serious, I wanna see, but it ain't working)
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how about now?
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Zander wrote:Image

how about now?
Okay, FINALLY it's showing up. Zander...how can I put this?























it's...awesome...Seriously, this is actually better than I had imagined! :'D I look foward to seeing how the other characters will look in your style!
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(Sorry for double posting)
Well ladies and gents, since I'm in such a good mood (thanks to zander's awesome artwork) I've prepared three scripts for you guys to enjoy! :D

Last Human Ep3: Three Rows.

Panel 1, Row 1: Joseph’s crawling out of the trash can.

Joseph: Ugh! That hurt! Guess I must’ve activated a teleporter of some kind.
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Panel 2, Row 1: Joseph is standing upright, contemplating his situation. His arms are crossed, and his right hand is covering his mouth. To the right of him are red dusty stage curtains.

Joseph: Hmm, now let’s see here. Where am I? I don’t think this is the lab.
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Panel 3, Row 1: Joseph is now opening the curtains.

Joseph: These curtains…these are stage curtains! That machine must’ve transported me to an abandoned theater of some kind. Looks as if no one’s used them in ye-
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Panel 4, Row 1: Joseph is out in front of the curtains. He has a look of shock on his face.
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Panel 1, 2, 3, 4, Row 2: These four panels are all various shots of the inside of a lavish restaurant. These shots are just of various animan (anthros) in fancy clothes sitting at tables, all looking up at Joseph with surprised looks on their faces. I don’t really care what kind of animals or clothes are used for these panels. Go nuts!
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Panel 1, Row 3: This Panel takes up the entire third row. We get panoramic shot (from behind Joseph) of the restaurant that is filled with fancy (posh) guests. All the guests are looking at Joseph.

Joseph: (Thought Bubble) Never thought I’d say this but…I don’t think I’m in Florida anymore.
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Last Human Ep4:

Panel 1: Joseph in front of the curtains, with a sheepish look on his face.

Joseph: Erm…Hi?
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Panel 2: Over head view of the people at their tables.
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Panel 3: Same shot, but now everyone’s panicking.
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Panel 4: Joseph still in front of the curtains. He is burying his face in the palm of his hand.

Joseph: Oh boy. This is going to be a bad day.
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The Last Human Ep5: Two Rows

Panel 1, Row 1: Joseph is dashing through the crowd of animen.

Joseph: Argh! I need to get out of here!
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Panel 2, Row 1: Frontal shot of Joseph bursting through the entrance to the restaurant.
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Panel 3, Row 1: Joseph dashing off panel to the right.
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Panel 4, Row 1: Joseph hiding behind the side of the restaurant. He’s panting. In the back a police cruiser is stopped outside the restaurant.
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Panel 1, Row 2: Joseph’s peaking around the corner. In the background Police(ani)men are running into the restaurant.
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Panel 2, Row 2: Joseph has his hands together and is looking to his left. He has an evil grin on his face.

Joseph: Haha! Yes, I’ve escaped!
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Panel 3, Row 2: Joseph is now looking to his right. Kyle is standing there. Joseph has a shocked looked on his face, whilst Kyle is indifferent.

Joseph: Yes, I-…!
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Panel 4, Row 2: Joseph has fallen over, and is now off panel. Kyle meanwhile shares a confused look at the reader.
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NOOO!!!

D:

the more of the story you post the less i want to draw them!

it ruins surprises :<
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Oh, I'm sorry. :< I guess I'll take a break then...
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Zander wrote:NOOO!!!

D:

the more of the story you post the less i want to draw them!

it ruins surprises :<
In all due respect, that's not a great attitude to have. :|
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Just a little reminder for those curious, this project is not dead. It's currently having a...I guess you'd call it, a sabbtacal.
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I need more moral to draw your comic >_>
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Zander wrote:I need more moral to draw your comic >_>
Anything I can do to help gain back some moral?
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Not really, it comes randomly. If i try to draw something without moral, then it comes out horribly. :<
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