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I'm sorry guys
Anonymous: Dog
Re: Anonymous: Dog
The Black Dog? I am so sorry she had to die so young.....
You even got the origin right in the name! Bravo!
This is interesting. You mostly just messed up your conjugations, but it is more than readable.
You even got the origin right in the name! Bravo!
This is interesting. You mostly just messed up your conjugations, but it is more than readable.
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Re: Anonymous: Dog
Well for me there's one word to describe this situation: OH ****! *throws Gibby at poor people*
Fox: Ah ignore Peanut fighting Bino, you want churro, no? King: Si!
Let's Dance! *falls to floor*
Let's Dance! *falls to floor*
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Re: Anonymous: Dog
I guess that I should do a better when reviewing it.copper wrote:This is interesting. You mostly just messed up your conjugations, but it is more than readable.
Oh well, it's still a good start. I can't wait until the next part.
Jeff "Clavy" Civit
Re: Anonymous: Dog
i like it, lots of grammer errors but i seem to have the same problem so who am i to judge ^_^
Shawn "hey."
Sean "greetings."
Alex "hi everyone ^_^"
Justin "wazz'up dudes."
David "i hope it rains today."
Shawn "this is my loving family, sort of speak."
Sean "greetings."
Alex "hi everyone ^_^"
Justin "wazz'up dudes."
David "i hope it rains today."
Shawn "this is my loving family, sort of speak."