[Webcomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

What do you call a fic that's not a fic

Moderators: Hagus, SeanWolf

User avatar
Andrea
Posts: 385
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 1:12 am
Location: Italy

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Andrea »

Image

Any feedback/comment appreciated.


I'm sorry for the late translation.
Pic related, is a photo of myself I took some minutes ago:

Image
Image
"In nomine Libertatis vincula aedificamus; in nomine Veritatis mendacia efferimus." -Michele Salvemini aka CapaRezza
"Let there be light! That was, uhm... God. I was quoting God."

User avatar
Blue Braixen
Ms. Sunshine
Posts: 5865
Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:48 pm
Location: Mountainous places
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Blue Braixen »

The translation was perfect.
Image
Image

User avatar
Coatl_Ruu
Posts: 1473
Joined: Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:56 pm
Location: [REDACTED]
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Coatl_Ruu »

Wow that guy is crazy. You can tell from the hair. And, you know... the fact that he just killed someone and set the building on fire... :?

However, Crazy Hair Guy does make a few good points. A shop in the middle of the desert makes no sense at all... and just what is Spike, anyway...?

Five bucks/euros/lira says escaped government experiment...

User avatar
Cory
Posts: 87
Joined: Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:26 am
Location: NV

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Cory »

The thick plottens....

User avatar
Revius
Posts: 35
Joined: Tue Mar 01, 2011 4:55 pm

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Revius »

Cory wrote:The thick plottens....
Oh i see what you did there -.-
"I'm going to love and tolerate you so hard 20 years from now your descendants will clutch their chests and wonder why they feel so warm and fuzzy all of a sudden." -Anonymous

Bad speller's of the world UNTIE!!!

User avatar
copper
Puppy Wrangler
Posts: 6362
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm
Location: Florida
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by copper »

So that's what he said. Very good story.

Spike is acting all hero-like in this one. I love it!

It does make one wonder how Spike got that way...
My characters
Everybody has a story to tell. What's yours?
Image

User avatar
angelusbr
Posts: 1754
Joined: Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:26 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by angelusbr »

I've just read this comic and I loved it!
Shameless advertisement of my fanfics: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/880961/Angelus-alvus

ReCreate
Posts: 1415
Joined: Sun Mar 28, 2010 6:09 pm
Location: http://bordomirc.co.cc
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by ReCreate »

Just read it, certainly got me interested. I rather like pessimistic storylines, Though i kind of doubt this'll remain/be one.
Don't let others define you, Only you can determine your fate
no longer active, sorry

User avatar
Kylar
Posts: 67
Joined: Thu Oct 28, 2010 11:32 am
Location: In the marmalade forest, between the make believe trees

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Kylar »

I Enjoy the story and you drawings are getting better as you go, keep it up!
Image
Image

User avatar
_Stu_
Banner Artist
Posts: 1572
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:44 am

03-21-2011- Origins

Post by _Stu_ »

Ok folks, last 2 for "like a broken mirror".

Image

AT: Weird, but real. Rules are mine, after all.
My webcomics! Read and subscribe if you like them (or one of them), and don't forget to vote on TopWebComics!

Image

Image

User avatar
Andrea
Posts: 385
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 1:12 am
Location: Italy

Re: 03-21-2011- Origins

Post by Andrea »

_Stu_ wrote: AT: Weird, but real. Rules are *NOT* mine, after all.
Sennò non corrispondeva a quello in italiano :P

Translation:
Image

Feedback, commets, ecc... appreciated.
Image
"In nomine Libertatis vincula aedificamus; in nomine Veritatis mendacia efferimus." -Michele Salvemini aka CapaRezza
"Let there be light! That was, uhm... God. I was quoting God."

User avatar
Blue Braixen
Ms. Sunshine
Posts: 5865
Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:48 pm
Location: Mountainous places
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Blue Braixen »

I would say "Tell the investigators to find out who that guy is. "
Also: "A foreigner. He's hung to a wooden wall with 'Murderer' scorched on it."
Image
Image

User avatar
Cory
Posts: 87
Joined: Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:26 am
Location: NV

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Cory »

This is getting interesting. What wil Spike (superdog) do next?

User avatar
The Broken Fox
Posts: 777
Joined: Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:06 am
Location: Hungary

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by The Broken Fox »

Everything is cooler with the letter X! :lol: Also I can't decide whether it's a Title Drop, or Foreshadowing...
"I watch ponies now! Ponies are cool!"

Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6

User avatar
copper
Puppy Wrangler
Posts: 6362
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm
Location: Florida
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by copper »

Very nice. Also mysterious...


Very good show, Stu. I love it so far.
My characters
Everybody has a story to tell. What's yours?
Image

User avatar
angelusbr
Posts: 1754
Joined: Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:26 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by angelusbr »

Letter L is also mysterious!
I took that joke from sheep in the big city.
I love how this story is going. Can't wait for more.
Shameless advertisement of my fanfics: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/880961/Angelus-alvus

User avatar
Coatl_Ruu
Posts: 1473
Joined: Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:56 pm
Location: [REDACTED]
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Coatl_Ruu »

Interesting... so Spike's abilities (which apparently made Crazy Hair Guy go even crazier) remain off-screen for now...

Now I'm wondering what happened between the last comic and this one.

User avatar
_Stu_
Banner Artist
Posts: 1572
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:44 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by _Stu_ »

angelusbr wrote:Letter L is also mysterious!
I took that joke from sheep in the big city.
I love how this story is going. Can't wait for more.
The X have a precise meaning. And, it's not properly a letter in this case...
Coatl_Ruu wrote:Interesting... so Spike's abilities (which apparently made Crazy Hair Guy go even crazier) remain off-screen for now...

Now I'm wondering what happened between the last comic and this one.
"like a broken mirros" is only a preview filler, I don't want to show everything. This story is totally invented and separate from the real one.
Don't worry though, in future what happened here will be totally clear ;)
My webcomics! Read and subscribe if you like them (or one of them), and don't forget to vote on TopWebComics!

Image

Image

User avatar
Coatl_Ruu
Posts: 1473
Joined: Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:56 pm
Location: [REDACTED]
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Coatl_Ruu »

_Stu_ wrote:The X have a precise meaning. And, it's not properly a letter in this case...
Hmm... a target, perhaps? X marks the spot?
_Stu_ wrote:"like a broken mirros" is only a preview filler, I don't want to show everything. This story is totally invented and separate from the real one.
Don't worry though, in future what happened here will be totally clear ;)
Ah, but of course. April 11. though not immediately, but it sounds cooler for me to just say 'April 11'.. 8-)

User avatar
angelusbr
Posts: 1754
Joined: Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:26 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by angelusbr »

_Stu_ wrote:
angelusbr wrote:Letter L is also mysterious!
I took that joke from sheep in the big city.
I love how this story is going. Can't wait for more.
The X have a precise meaning. And, it's not properly a letter in this case...
I just tried to make a joke. But, honestlty, I'm loving this comic. I have a theory thanks to what was said above. Maybe it's just a mirror for the simbols ><, which would mean something that's superior or inferior to another.
Shameless advertisement of my fanfics: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/880961/Angelus-alvus

User avatar
jopencjusz
Posts: 1012
Joined: Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:48 pm
Location: Poznań (Poland)
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by jopencjusz »

I'm not sure, in the middle of "X" there's some kind of face, so it could be sort of image of Spike, then arms of the "X" could be his hands and feets. Just guessing ;)
My account on DA (something happens since I'm back here :))

My youtube accoint (with failed attemps to at least pretend I can sing)

Student, basketball referee, activist in old basketball club and official member of this club

User avatar
copper
Puppy Wrangler
Posts: 6362
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm
Location: Florida
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by copper »

This was a really good preview, Stu. I can't wait to see the real story. April 11 will come very soon, I think.
My characters
Everybody has a story to tell. What's yours?
Image

User avatar
_Stu_
Banner Artist
Posts: 1572
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:44 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by _Stu_ »

Thank you everybody :D Tomorrow will be the last strip for "like a broken mirror"... and then, we'll be here again at 11 of April, with the real dish.
My webcomics! Read and subscribe if you like them (or one of them), and don't forget to vote on TopWebComics!

Image

Image

User avatar
_Stu_
Banner Artist
Posts: 1572
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:44 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by _Stu_ »

I saw that Rick is going to stop HP for this week... too bad that this is my last until April 11.

Image

AT: My brother says that he didn't noticed the necromancer was Tarot. But I thought it was obvious!
My webcomics! Read and subscribe if you like them (or one of them), and don't forget to vote on TopWebComics!

Image

Image

User avatar
valerio
Posts: 19274
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am
Location: Italy
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by valerio »

In fact, it was telegraphed. Anyway, great ending for this preview, can't wait to see the rest!
And yay for happy reuinion *little tear of joy*

PS - on a technical note, why does Tarot have dot eyes?
Image

User avatar
copper
Puppy Wrangler
Posts: 6362
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm
Location: Florida
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by copper »

It looks pretty good. Can't wait for the english version. This strip looks like a powerful one.
My characters
Everybody has a story to tell. What's yours?
Image

Bino
Posts: 595
Joined: Sat Feb 19, 2011 1:10 pm
Location: Tennessee
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Bino »

Tarot?
Bino wrote:I don't have any tricks up my sleeve right now that don't involve roleplaying... :x
So...... *kisses sleet* BOOM! I WIN!

User avatar
Andrea
Posts: 385
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 1:12 am
Location: Italy

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by Andrea »

Translation (I know I've probably made a mess :S )

Image
Image
"In nomine Libertatis vincula aedificamus; in nomine Veritatis mendacia efferimus." -Michele Salvemini aka CapaRezza
"Let there be light! That was, uhm... God. I was quoting God."

User avatar
angelusbr
Posts: 1754
Joined: Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:26 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by angelusbr »

The "I'm not a fish" is supposed to be a metaphor for something? I get the rest of what it was said in the strip.
I'm not surprised to see tarot, but I'm surprised to know she's the necromancer. After all this is a HP fancomic, people. If it had only original characters who aren't related by any means to the HP characters, it wouldn't be a fan comic.
Why isn't Aprill 11st tomorrow? WHY?
Shameless advertisement of my fanfics: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/880961/Angelus-alvus

User avatar
_Stu_
Banner Artist
Posts: 1572
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:44 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by _Stu_ »

Bino wrote:Tarot?
Image
angelusbr wrote:The "I'm not a fish" is supposed to be a metaphor for something? I get the rest of what it was said in the strip.
I'm not surprised to see tarot, but I'm surprised to know she's the necromancer. After all this is a HP fancomic, people. If it had only original characters who aren't related by any means to the HP characters, it wouldn't be a fan comic.
Why isn't Aprill 11st tomorrow? WHY?
You can change the fish and meat thing with black and white if you want. "I'm not black, nor white", sorta.
For the April 11th... It's only a time matter, for an April joke thing. No, H1X is NOT an April fool Image it exist.
But I need the period for an easter egg, kinda. You'll see...
My webcomics! Read and subscribe if you like them (or one of them), and don't forget to vote on TopWebComics!

Image

Image

User avatar
The Broken Fox
Posts: 777
Joined: Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:06 am
Location: Hungary

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by The Broken Fox »

So Spike was just a persona he used... Interesting... Anyway, this has been a nice setup with an even nicer last page surprise of Tarot! I can't wait for the 11th! :P
"I watch ponies now! Ponies are cool!"

Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6

User avatar
copper
Puppy Wrangler
Posts: 6362
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm
Location: Florida
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by copper »

So that is what was going on... Great ending! A really good setup for what is to come. I can't wait for the next part! :D

So Spike is no longer Spike? Is that why he left his little tag behind? He now has a new identity?
My characters
Everybody has a story to tell. What's yours?
Image

User avatar
_Stu_
Banner Artist
Posts: 1572
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:44 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by _Stu_ »

copper wrote:So that is what was going on... Great ending! A really good setup for what is to come. I can't wait for the next part! :D

So Spike is no longer Spike? Is that why he left his little tag behind? He now has a new identity?
I hate this kind of questions... I can't answer that, even if I really want it Image
btw, first post updated with prologue chapter links. Of course, they don't work for now. In the second post I've added a new "unknown" profile, just because you all know who the first one is, i guess Image I need an unknown to be unknown till the right moment.

EDIT: Argh, just kidding, I don't have the material to fix the first post. I'll do it when I go home.
My webcomics! Read and subscribe if you like them (or one of them), and don't forget to vote on TopWebComics!

Image

Image

User avatar
copper
Puppy Wrangler
Posts: 6362
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm
Location: Florida
Contact:

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by copper »

Ah. Spoiler. I understand you not being able to answer that.

Ooooh! Unknown characters! Can't wait to see it.
My characters
Everybody has a story to tell. What's yours?
Image

User avatar
_Stu_
Banner Artist
Posts: 1572
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:44 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by _Stu_ »

Second post updated with new profiles :shock: hidden, obviously.
My webcomics! Read and subscribe if you like them (or one of them), and don't forget to vote on TopWebComics!

Image

Image

User avatar
The Moon Howler
Posts: 3121
Joined: Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:38 pm
Location: The Moon

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by The Moon Howler »

Okay, this kinda looks like "The Crow", am i right?
I am The Moon Howler - the being with no exact form. I serve the Moon Goddess and in return, she gives me my muse and my shape.

Housepets: Silver the Cat! fanfic

Image

My RP Characters

User avatar
_Stu_
Banner Artist
Posts: 1572
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:44 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by _Stu_ »

Sindorei wrote:Okay, this kinda looks like "The Crow", am i right?
Image this one?

Image

Or this one?

Image

Image Bad kidding, I know.
My webcomics! Read and subscribe if you like them (or one of them), and don't forget to vote on TopWebComics!

Image

Image

User avatar
The Moon Howler
Posts: 3121
Joined: Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:38 pm
Location: The Moon

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by The Moon Howler »

_Stu_ wrote:
Sindorei wrote:Okay, this kinda looks like "The Crow", am i right?
Image this one?

Image
This one
I am The Moon Howler - the being with no exact form. I serve the Moon Goddess and in return, she gives me my muse and my shape.

Housepets: Silver the Cat! fanfic

Image

My RP Characters

User avatar
_Stu_
Banner Artist
Posts: 1572
Joined: Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:44 am

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by _Stu_ »

Actually, I didn't saw a "the crow" movie in my life :? you say it's similar?
My webcomics! Read and subscribe if you like them (or one of them), and don't forget to vote on TopWebComics!

Image

Image

User avatar
The Moon Howler
Posts: 3121
Joined: Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:38 pm
Location: The Moon

Re: [Fancomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

Post by The Moon Howler »

_Stu_ wrote:Actually, I didn't saw a "the crow" movie in my life :? you say it's similar?
Almost the same. in "The Crow" our main character and his fiancé are killed by someone and he returns from the dead, resurrected by a crow to avenge them both... and he's neither live nor dead
similar i see in here: he meets someone who takes care of him, he likes the person, but when that person was killed by some punk, the main char goes nuts ... so to speak... and he says he's in the middle which is very much the same
Last edited by The Moon Howler on Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:15 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I am The Moon Howler - the being with no exact form. I serve the Moon Goddess and in return, she gives me my muse and my shape.

Housepets: Silver the Cat! fanfic

Image

My RP Characters

Locked