[Webcomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X
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Any feedback/comment appreciated.
I'm sorry for the late translation.
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Wow that guy is crazy. You can tell from the hair. And, you know... the fact that he just killed someone and set the building on fire...
However, Crazy Hair Guy does make a few good points. A shop in the middle of the desert makes no sense at all... and just what is Spike, anyway...?
Five bucks/euros/lira says escaped government experiment...
However, Crazy Hair Guy does make a few good points. A shop in the middle of the desert makes no sense at all... and just what is Spike, anyway...?
Five bucks/euros/lira says escaped government experiment...
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The thick plottens....
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Oh i see what you did there -.-Cory wrote:The thick plottens....
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So that's what he said. Very good story.
Spike is acting all hero-like in this one. I love it!
It does make one wonder how Spike got that way...
Spike is acting all hero-like in this one. I love it!
It does make one wonder how Spike got that way...
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I've just read this comic and I loved it!
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Just read it, certainly got me interested. I rather like pessimistic storylines, Though i kind of doubt this'll remain/be one.
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I Enjoy the story and you drawings are getting better as you go, keep it up!
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Ok folks, last 2 for "like a broken mirror".
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Sennò non corrispondeva a quello in italiano_Stu_ wrote: AT: Weird, but real. Rules are *NOT* mine, after all.
Translation:
Feedback, commets, ecc... appreciated.
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I would say "Tell the investigators to find out who that guy is. "
Also: "A foreigner. He's hung to a wooden wall with 'Murderer' scorched on it."
Also: "A foreigner. He's hung to a wooden wall with 'Murderer' scorched on it."
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This is getting interesting. What wil Spike (superdog) do next?
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Everything is cooler with the letter X! Also I can't decide whether it's a Title Drop, or Foreshadowing...
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Very nice. Also mysterious...
Very good show, Stu. I love it so far.
Very good show, Stu. I love it so far.
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Letter L is also mysterious!
I took that joke from sheep in the big city.
I love how this story is going. Can't wait for more.
I took that joke from sheep in the big city.
I love how this story is going. Can't wait for more.
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Interesting... so Spike's abilities (which apparently made Crazy Hair Guy go even crazier) remain off-screen for now...
Now I'm wondering what happened between the last comic and this one.
Now I'm wondering what happened between the last comic and this one.
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The X have a precise meaning. And, it's not properly a letter in this case...angelusbr wrote:Letter L is also mysterious!
I took that joke from sheep in the big city.
I love how this story is going. Can't wait for more.
"like a broken mirros" is only a preview filler, I don't want to show everything. This story is totally invented and separate from the real one.Coatl_Ruu wrote:Interesting... so Spike's abilities (which apparently made Crazy Hair Guy go even crazier) remain off-screen for now...
Now I'm wondering what happened between the last comic and this one.
Don't worry though, in future what happened here will be totally clear
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Hmm... a target, perhaps? X marks the spot?_Stu_ wrote:The X have a precise meaning. And, it's not properly a letter in this case...
Ah, but of course. April 11. though not immediately, but it sounds cooler for me to just say 'April 11'.._Stu_ wrote:"like a broken mirros" is only a preview filler, I don't want to show everything. This story is totally invented and separate from the real one.
Don't worry though, in future what happened here will be totally clear
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I just tried to make a joke. But, honestlty, I'm loving this comic. I have a theory thanks to what was said above. Maybe it's just a mirror for the simbols ><, which would mean something that's superior or inferior to another._Stu_ wrote:The X have a precise meaning. And, it's not properly a letter in this case...angelusbr wrote:Letter L is also mysterious!
I took that joke from sheep in the big city.
I love how this story is going. Can't wait for more.
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I'm not sure, in the middle of "X" there's some kind of face, so it could be sort of image of Spike, then arms of the "X" could be his hands and feets. Just guessing
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This was a really good preview, Stu. I can't wait to see the real story. April 11 will come very soon, I think.
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Thank you everybody Tomorrow will be the last strip for "like a broken mirror"... and then, we'll be here again at 11 of April, with the real dish.
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I saw that Rick is going to stop HP for this week... too bad that this is my last until April 11.
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In fact, it was telegraphed. Anyway, great ending for this preview, can't wait to see the rest!
And yay for happy reuinion *little tear of joy*
PS - on a technical note, why does Tarot have dot eyes?
And yay for happy reuinion *little tear of joy*
PS - on a technical note, why does Tarot have dot eyes?
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It looks pretty good. Can't wait for the english version. This strip looks like a powerful one.
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Tarot?
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Translation (I know I've probably made a mess :S )
"In nomine Libertatis vincula aedificamus; in nomine Veritatis mendacia efferimus." -Michele Salvemini aka CapaRezza
"Let there be light! That was, uhm... God. I was quoting God."
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The "I'm not a fish" is supposed to be a metaphor for something? I get the rest of what it was said in the strip.
I'm not surprised to see tarot, but I'm surprised to know she's the necromancer. After all this is a HP fancomic, people. If it had only original characters who aren't related by any means to the HP characters, it wouldn't be a fan comic.
Why isn't Aprill 11st tomorrow? WHY?
I'm not surprised to see tarot, but I'm surprised to know she's the necromancer. After all this is a HP fancomic, people. If it had only original characters who aren't related by any means to the HP characters, it wouldn't be a fan comic.
Why isn't Aprill 11st tomorrow? WHY?
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Bino wrote:Tarot?
You can change the fish and meat thing with black and white if you want. "I'm not black, nor white", sorta.angelusbr wrote:The "I'm not a fish" is supposed to be a metaphor for something? I get the rest of what it was said in the strip.
I'm not surprised to see tarot, but I'm surprised to know she's the necromancer. After all this is a HP fancomic, people. If it had only original characters who aren't related by any means to the HP characters, it wouldn't be a fan comic.
Why isn't Aprill 11st tomorrow? WHY?
For the April 11th... It's only a time matter, for an April joke thing. No, H1X is NOT an April fool it exist.
But I need the period for an easter egg, kinda. You'll see...
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So Spike was just a persona he used... Interesting... Anyway, this has been a nice setup with an even nicer last page surprise of Tarot! I can't wait for the 11th!
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So that is what was going on... Great ending! A really good setup for what is to come. I can't wait for the next part!
So Spike is no longer Spike? Is that why he left his little tag behind? He now has a new identity?
So Spike is no longer Spike? Is that why he left his little tag behind? He now has a new identity?
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I hate this kind of questions... I can't answer that, even if I really want itcopper wrote:So that is what was going on... Great ending! A really good setup for what is to come. I can't wait for the next part!
So Spike is no longer Spike? Is that why he left his little tag behind? He now has a new identity?
btw, first post updated with prologue chapter links. Of course, they don't work for now. In the second post I've added a new "unknown" profile, just because you all know who the first one is, i guess I need an unknown to be unknown till the right moment.
EDIT: Argh, just kidding, I don't have the material to fix the first post. I'll do it when I go home.
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Ah. Spoiler. I understand you not being able to answer that.
Ooooh! Unknown characters! Can't wait to see it.
Ooooh! Unknown characters! Can't wait to see it.
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Second post updated with new profiles hidden, obviously.
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Okay, this kinda looks like "The Crow", am i right?
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this one?Sindorei wrote:Okay, this kinda looks like "The Crow", am i right?
Or this one?
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This one_Stu_ wrote:this one?Sindorei wrote:Okay, this kinda looks like "The Crow", am i right?
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Actually, I didn't saw a "the crow" movie in my life you say it's similar?
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Almost the same. in "The Crow" our main character and his fiancé are killed by someone and he returns from the dead, resurrected by a crow to avenge them both... and he's neither live nor dead_Stu_ wrote:Actually, I didn't saw a "the crow" movie in my life you say it's similar?
similar i see in here: he meets someone who takes care of him, he likes the person, but when that person was killed by some punk, the main char goes nuts ... so to speak... and he says he's in the middle which is very much the same
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