[Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty rose

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[Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty rose

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http://eyesight.thecomicseries.com/

As promised, this is 1X first anniversary, and i wanted to start this new comic. This is supposed to be my first true webcomic, since Eyesight, Layna, Winter and others are fully original and separated from HP. I think is more comfortable for you if i post here the episodes... of course every feedback of any kind is accepted, like 1X. I hope you will like this :D

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Do penguins sweat? :?
But hey, nice start 8-)
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This is going to be interesting. Maybe will see Eyesight adopting Max and how he got his magic eye.
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I am looking forward to this. A lot of stuff should be answered in this. Like the Organization. Won't be so mysterious after this story is done. :)
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another great page. It's nice to learn Eyesight's true name.
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So is he Hirnon, or Garros...?

Um, did you use a different translator or something? The translation is a bit lower in standard than 1x. :?

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copper wrote:So is he Hirnon, or Garros...?
I thought he was Orda.
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copper wrote:So is he Hirnon, or Garros...?

Um, did you use a different translator or something? The translation is a bit lower in standard than 1x. :?

I like your signature. Very nice.
He's Orda ^^

The translation actually seemed a bit rough to me too, but i did it in speedrun mode... did you see any mistake? If you see something just tell me and i'll fix'em no problem :D
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:lol: :lol: Eyesight is the sleepy leader. Now that is funny. Wonder when he got all serious.
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probably after he gets his scar.
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:probably after he gets his scar.
and the magic eye.
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Luna werewolf wrote:awesome webcomic!
Awesome is standard, with this author :D
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valerio wrote:
Luna werewolf wrote:awesome webcomic!
Awesome is standard, with this author :D
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She's pregnant? This won't end well...
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Doesn't get any less worse on keeping the egg safe either.
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kavviyenta wrote:Doesn't get any less worse on keeping the egg safe either.
My prediction: she dies and so does her child and what killed them is what gives Orda that killer eye and makes him adopt Max.
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angelusbr wrote:She's pregnant? This won't end well...
yeah, pregnant is not the same as eggs. Does she really need rest? can't Orda take care of the egg every once in a while? or is that too girly for him?
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Penguin males sit on the egg the same amount as the females. It is so that both can eat. Months on end for each. Happy Feet anyone? :lol:

Ooo, I think Orda inadvertently destroys Layna and the egg in his quest for power for some reason, which is what gives him the eye. 8-)


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Penguins have a gestation period. 63 days if i remember correctly. Actually i don't know if females need to rest or not... it's just to "umanize" them, not important though.
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cute Max. Is that before or after "Fluffy"?
or did your universe split off before that event?
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:cute Max. Is that before or after "Fluffy"?
or did your universe split off before that event?
Theoretically before, but actually that Fluffy thing messed up with my plans :lol: so i think i'll have to change something or justify somehow
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chibi max. :D
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OMG!
Who cares for continuity?! GIVE US MOAR MAX FLUFFINESS WITH EYESIGHT!!! :D :D
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Very adorable. Max was a cute kitten.
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So they're in a zoo??
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*victory fanfare* correct! :D
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Yay! A Zoo! I want to see Karishad! He is the one who got Eyesight his weird eye, right? :roll:

Orda is going to do something stupid, I bet.
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copper wrote:Yay! A Zoo! I want to see Karishad! He is the one who got Eyesight his weird eye, right? :roll:

Orda is going to do something stupid, I bet.
It's not the same zoo (actually, is an aquarium, but zoos and aquarium are similar so it's correct), but who knows, now that you make me think about it a crossover would be possible :lol: i'll think about it
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Something tells me this will backfire...horribly.
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I bet it looks awesome, whatever happened.... Just don't cross the streams! :roll:
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Awww, who is proposing to whom?


This looks like it will be a good show.

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It'll be a memorable opening.
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