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by SilentPrincess828
Mon May 27, 2013 4:44 pm
Forum: Fan Projects
Topic: Burning Desire Contest!
Replies: 18
Views: 10692

Re: Burning Desire Contest!

Yay~ Finally entering this thing.... Name: Kaida Gender: Female Species: Cat Breed: Erm... yeah. Age: 17 Pet Years (I guess?) A poorly drawn picture for her appearance which looks even worse because the whole thing was done on the computer which I started to hate after a while... http://i626.photobu...
by SilentPrincess828
Sat Feb 09, 2013 9:29 pm
Forum: Fan Projects
Topic: Burning Desire Contest!
Replies: 18
Views: 10692

Re: Burning Desire Contest!

Lol, I was going to enter this, but there are some pretty awesome submissions already, and I'm not sure if I have the time to develop a completely new character as I had mentioned. So, if I don't enter, good luck to everyone who does!
by SilentPrincess828
Thu Jan 24, 2013 10:27 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)

So, sorry for not really being around to answer these questions, but I was trying to figure things out for myself. The truth is, I still do not know what I am doing with this fic. I do know that I'm not doing anything else with what I have written at this point. HOWEVER, I THINK I MIGHT MAYBE POSSIB...
by SilentPrincess828
Mon Dec 24, 2012 9:48 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Chapter 9: The Eye of Darkness Part 1 “M’lady!” Evangeline turned as one of the winged knights entered the throne room. From the badge he donned on his armor, she could determine that he came from the Crystal Fields. “And what brings you here?” The knights of the Crystal Fields so incompetent that ...
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Nov 25, 2012 3:57 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

I'm so, so, so behind on this fanfic, so I'd like to apologize to you guys. Sparing you all of the details, life is crazy. But luckily, it seems I'm reaching that light at the end of the tunnel and may soon actually have the chance to work on this again. I've been putting some though into what I wan...
by SilentPrincess828
Thu Nov 08, 2012 9:55 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: Burning Desire: The Power Within
Replies: 406
Views: 142028

Re: Burning Desire: The Power Within

legendario13 wrote:
SilentPrincess828 wrote: I swear there were a few more even ;) but I was [unable] to find them again. :P
...got ya'?
Lol, that's what I get for rushing... :P
by SilentPrincess828
Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:29 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: Burning Desire: The Power Within
Replies: 406
Views: 142028

Re: Burning Desire: The Power Within

I don't ever make mistakes. EVER. FOR THE REST OF TIME. I found a few. As they sat on the couch, Stealer holding Sandy as she cried, probably letting [ he ] emotions go for the first time... Bino, [ do ] to either the fact Kyria had seen in him what he couldn’t even see in himself, or his slightly ...
by SilentPrincess828
Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:39 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

No update yet... (Is stuck...And uber stressed with other stuff,)

So basically, I'll just go ahead and ask,
Do you think it's too early for me to introduce characters' backstories?
And,
If it isn't, which characters would you like me to explore?
If it is, completely ignore that question.
by SilentPrincess828
Thu Oct 11, 2012 5:07 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Yeah, definitely need to reread this to get those pesky errors out. I'll get on that eventually, busy week at school. The person I asked to look at it hasn't gotten back to it. So, Peter… is his last name Pan ? Yes, actually. One thing I noticed, when you wrote "Hades's avatar," it should actually ...
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Oct 07, 2012 10:02 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

I just simply had to update because 1.) Jeff did, and 2.) Pokemon Black and White 2 come out today so writing might not be the first thing on my mind this week! Chapter (Magick!) 8: “ Do you know the reason why Angels are no longer permitted as avatars? ” Teal asked Snowfire. She knew he was just st...
by SilentPrincess828
Mon Oct 01, 2012 4:02 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Alright, characters officially dropped guys (though I did reference one of them quite nicely if I do say so myself. :lol:). I started writing the next part and before it seems as though I totally just contradicted myself from my earlier comment (and someone punches me in the face for it) I just want...
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Sep 30, 2012 2:52 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

I do have one criticism though. It is your constant addition of characters. I realize you are trying to set up an epic story, but you have added at least three dozen characters in the short time since you started this fic. It is getting confusing now, with barely any getting actual development. You...
by SilentPrincess828
Mon Sep 17, 2012 6:44 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

...(Fail post. Ignore.)
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Sep 16, 2012 12:04 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Blurbblubbubblubblub. Enough of the jibberish here's the update! :D Chapter (Lucky?) 7: “This is your plan?” Xer questioned. Peyton nodded. He took a sip from his tea. It was too hot, but he wasn’t in the mood to really care. “It’s… interesting.” Xer stated, a little confused as to how his master ha...
by SilentPrincess828
Wed Sep 12, 2012 1:23 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Huh... crossover, eh? Of course you two would come up with this, lol. Yes, but it's not quite the full-on crossover you might be thinking. Just a few things here and there. (For now.:twisted:) If Alice is 28 and Arlice 14.... He had her at 14!?!? :shock: Am I forgetting something like they are actu...
by SilentPrincess828
Sat Sep 08, 2012 8:56 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

legendario13 wrote:That was a really good long post(s)
Aw, thanks!
legendario13 wrote:This "Peter", had you introduced him before?
Not really, his existence was only really hinted at when the letter to Arlice was first brought up.
by SilentPrincess828
Sat Sep 01, 2012 8:55 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Okay, so let me start of by saying that I think I'm about to die from writing two of these in such a short amount of time. (Consider it an apology for taking the entire summer for getting the last one up.) And secondly because of that and the program I'm using on the Mac to write this, there is prob...
by SilentPrincess828
Thu Aug 30, 2012 8:59 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Chapter 5: Nothing to fear… “Y-you’re lying!” She said in harsh denial. Her sword was drawn, and pointed at his chest. Ramiel could barely look into her eyes, they pierced through him far worse than what she could do with the blade. “Evangeline.” Ramiel said without the slightest hint of emotion in...
by SilentPrincess828
Sat Aug 11, 2012 10:53 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Well, I'm back from a college visit in Arizona (why did I almost type California here?). I didn't have the chance to write because we were busy all week, but I got quite a few drawing done on the plane ride home, including an improved Hades that will be on DeviantArt eventually - first we have to ho...
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Jul 29, 2012 10:50 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

I does not suck. Lol. Typo. But I did want to see Bino and Prowler get in a shouting match, oh well. But I wonder where the scar came from? And what could have happened to make him be like that when someone touches it? Well, they kinda did. Perhaps not quite to the scale that you had hoped. And yes...
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Jul 29, 2012 8:54 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Chapter 5: Nothing to fear… (See Below) 7/29 (F, P, Pr @ GODC) - So, this part's done. Again, it feels rushed at the end. (It always feels rushed.) Those of you that voted for it wanted more Pochi, but it was more Prowler-centric. The parentheses scattered throughout are reminders for myself for wh...
by SilentPrincess828
Wed Jul 25, 2012 10:49 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

So the vote is currently at (and will probably stay at): 2 votes for Fetcher, Pochi, and Prowler at the GODC meeting, and 1 vote for Angelica and Hades going shopping As it turns out, the one is Angelica and Hades seems to be quite short (at least it does for the moment as it's in my head) so maybe,...
by SilentPrincess828
Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:45 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Blargh. Well, first of all I am alive guys. The city the college was a little 'too ghetto' as my roommate put it. But we were all safe for the week. (We did lose a girl at a museum...I don't really know what happened but she made it back okay. :)) I had a great time and worked with charcoal for the ...
by SilentPrincess828
Tue Jul 17, 2012 5:25 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: Burning Desire: The Power Within
Replies: 406
Views: 142028

Re: Burning Desire: The Power Within

valerio wrote:oh, don't worry.
We are here.
Waiting....
Always...
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Jul 15, 2012 11:00 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

So, I apologize yet again for a late update. I've had writer's block and a very stressful weak. If I have time, I'll try to hand write parts of the chapter so that I might be able to post when I get back from the college program. So you should all look forward to this. Once I'm done. Sometime soon. ...
by SilentPrincess828
Thu Jul 05, 2012 7:11 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: Everchanging Hearts: A story of Father and Son
Replies: 39
Views: 30289

Re: Everchanging Hearts: A story of Father and Son

It's a good thing I saw your signature, otherwise I wouldn't have know about it. Good job so far. Maybe a little bit more detail here and there.
by SilentPrincess828
Thu Jul 05, 2012 7:08 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

What a great chapter, and i have a vague idea of what you were talking on the jovi and the lightnings thing, sadly i cant remember either. :lol: Well, I guess I'm not completely crazy and made up the idea. I did some Google-ing, and it might be an Austrian legend, but none of the sights I visited w...
by SilentPrincess828
Sat Jun 30, 2012 5:43 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

I forgot to mention, the thing about Jovi, her sisters, and her father being the thunder and lightning, is something I vaguely remember reading a long time ago (I think it was in elementary school). That story I read told of two bulls, one a young male bull who was easily angered and upset and threw...
by SilentPrincess828
Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:44 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Chapter 4: You Say Villain Like It’s a Bad Thing The Nure-Onna was three hundred meter in length. Her snake-like body coiled around the edges of the dimly lit throne room. The human half of her body sat upon the grand throne, built for someone even larger than herself. The Nure-Onna’s hair was tied...
by SilentPrincess828
Fri Jun 29, 2012 12:41 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Since this is already two weeks late I’m uploading the first part of chapter four just to let people know I’m not dead. Writers group tonight, so hopefully I’ll get some inspiration there and the motivation to finish the rest of this. Also, I totally rushed trying to type this, so errors are likely...
by SilentPrincess828
Thu Jun 21, 2012 9:31 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: Burning Desire: The Power Within
Replies: 406
Views: 142028

Re: Burning Desire: The Power Within

Hooray! I quite liked this update and it has inspired me to work on my own!
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Jun 17, 2012 10:36 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

So, I'm going to apologize even though I'm not sure yet. This week's chapter may not be submitted today. I've been looking forward all week to getting to write it, but when I actually sat down to write it, I had writer's block. So unless Teal womps me in the head with the Inspiration Bat, I don't th...
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:47 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

JeffCvt wrote:
SilentPrincess828 wrote:“Pochipochipochipochipochi!”
YES!! More Pochi!
Lol, just for you Jeffy.
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:18 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Chapter 3 Part 2: Are Not for Sale Funny, it seems the rain has let up. Xer thought. The clouds parted and the yellow summer sun was revealed. He winced at the sudden light and tried to shield his eyes by holding his left paw over them. From the homes he passed by, he saw children and animals looki...
by SilentPrincess828
Wed Jun 06, 2012 6:49 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

copper wrote:Alice is quite mean.... wonder if it is because of the name. :roll:
Lol, that's what we always say. :lol:
lengendario13 wrote:I hope i can Remember all the new characters...
I hadn't thought about that. I certainly don't want to create confusion with an abundance of characters.... I'll see what I can do about it.
by SilentPrincess828
Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:06 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: Burning Desire: The Power Within
Replies: 406
Views: 142028

Re: Burning Desire: The Power Within

JeffCvt wrote:But I need to write it at night, next to a campfire. So... might not have that one for a while.
Lol, what? I could have Ben take you out camping, he and his pals go quite often. If you can handle the crazy that is. :lol:
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:00 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Chapter 3, Part 1: Things I Loved Before “ The world's got a funny way of turning 'round on you When a friend tries to stab you right in the face Losing faith in everything I thought I hoped I knew Don't sweat it, it’s set on false pretense… ” Peyton tapped his fingers impatiently against the arm o...
by SilentPrincess828
Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:34 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: Burning Desire: The Power Within
Replies: 406
Views: 142028

Re: Burning Desire: The Power Within

Danny? Hmm... I guess I need to re-read some chapters, I have no idea who that is. Is that a vote? I'm not really sure. It doesn't seem like one, so until you let me know, I'm going to have to ignore it. Knowing Arlice, that probably is a vote. I'm just saying since she probably won't be on again u...
by SilentPrincess828
Tue May 29, 2012 8:30 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

Naeco Nehsij? That's a place in one of your novels but spelled backwards, am I correct? And though I know quite a bit about where you want to go with this fic, I must ask, what did you mean by fix me? Yes, it is a place in a novel (wow, you have a good memory). And as for the fixing, no offense, bu...
by SilentPrincess828
Sun May 27, 2012 10:08 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?) (Deadfic?)
Replies: 98
Views: 43032

Re: The Game (Did I Make You Lose?)

JeffCvt wrote:And I still think it's a correct way to say her name.
Yeah, you're probably right. It's probably even where the word 'gaia' comes from.
JeffCvt wrote:You did a great job for finishing it in the morning.
Well, thanks, but I feel like the whole thing might sound rushed because of it... :(