Housepets!

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This is the short bit I talked about earlier, again it's less to advance the plot and more to practice. I did my best to double check it while keeping in mind what you guys said. While writing I got a little paranoid about some things, so I might have neglected other aspects. I would love more const...

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Thanks for the tips guys, they've been helpful to the next bit I've been writing. Looking over it, the second update seemed sloppily put together, and I'm trying to be slower and more deliberate with this next part. The next part isn't going to have all the sad plot bits I wanted, but will be someth...

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An update! It's a fairly short one, I'm not very good at writing long chapters yet, I hope I become able to though. I felt that this one was a little fast and could have been written differently paced, but it's still something I need to work on. Constructive criticism is welcomed, and thanks for rea...

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Teh Brawler wrote:
DoctorDoc wrote:Ah heck, why not.

I'm in the foreground, with my grumpy face, I have no idea who is in the background.

Literally the first thing I thought of.

I love you guys.

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Pretty good so far. All there are are two incredibly minor spelling and punctuation problems: Peanut walked up next to her bed, she looked so peaceful, yet so aggravated. That first comma is superfluous, and would be fixed with a period, em dash (-) or semicolon (;) - whichever one feels better to ...

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Hey guys, I haven't been here much, but I've read quite a few of the fan fictions here, and thought I'd give it a shot. I've written fan fictions before, but never one for Housepets!, so go easy on me! But really, I would love some constructive criticism so I can try and improve my work as I write m...

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Great update! I'm loving where this is going.

RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:let me guess. Captain Bino?

That would be awesome.

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This is the saddest piece of writing I've read here, but it is also probably one of the most well written I have ever read. It takes some good writing to make something with this sort foe motion in it. I did also feel that Peanut's side of it after Grape's death could be explored a little more, but ...

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Yep, did that today, still haven't eaten, just not hungry.

Ever remember you have a big essay or project to do the very night before it's due?

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You get: A flightless bird

I insert: Techno music

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Chores

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Ah heck, why not.

I'm in the foreground, with my grumpy face, I have no idea who is in the background.

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paperwork

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You get: A rainbow tree

I insert: Pencils and paper

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Welcome Quin!

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Papermaster

(Had to google D:)

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rocks

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Welcome Tattorack!

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Logic is overrated, especially when you're proving a point.

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The user above me has a sweet avatar.

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Television

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Sean Connery

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Secret Agent

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Welcome Island style!

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Glove

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Kitela wrote:Everything we say is a lie, including this statement.

I... I...

D':

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Yeah, I'm a furry.

I generally like moths, except when they decide to show up in my bathroom for no good reason, then I just fear them.

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I can't tell the truth from the lies anymore! D:

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Yeah, it doesn't seem too sarcastic.

Jeez, sarcasm is tricky.

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Yep, but it took me forever, and I needed a friend to do it.

Ever drink a whole 12 pack of soda by yourself in one night?

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I think maybe using all-caps would be more effective when conveying sarcasm.

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The San Francisco Giants, I don't live too far away form SF. I go nuts over them.

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The user above me may or may not like hockey.

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Yep, woke up at 3 pm once, and I wanted to get up early that day too.

Have you ever been dreaming the best dream of your life, and just as it's about to get to the best part you wake up?

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Absolutely, I'm doing it right now.

Ever accidentally lean too far back in your chair, only to grab onto something else unstable and bring it all crashing down on you?

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Thanks for the welcomes you guys! with friendly people like you, I think I'll be enjoying my stay. :3

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I hope I stick around too!

And no, I am unfortunately not a real doctor.

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Hello! I just registered here, and I'm not really sure what to do to get to know people better, so I figured this would be a good start. I've been on a bit of a webcomic binge lately, and I blew through this one today, and I enjoyed it so much I decided to get on the forums! I like webcomics (this o...

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