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by DoctorDoc
Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:45 am
Forum: Fan Projects
Topic: My First Housepets Fan Fiction
Replies: 12
Views: 5596

Re: My First Housepets Fan Fiction

This is the short bit I talked about earlier, again it's less to advance the plot and more to practice. I did my best to double check it while keeping in mind what you guys said. While writing I got a little paranoid about some things, so I might have neglected other aspects. I would love more const...
by DoctorDoc
Sun Oct 23, 2011 3:00 am
Forum: Fan Projects
Topic: My First Housepets Fan Fiction
Replies: 12
Views: 5596

Re: My First Housepets Fan Fiction

Thanks for the tips guys, they've been helpful to the next bit I've been writing. Looking over it, the second update seemed sloppily put together, and I'm trying to be slower and more deliberate with this next part. The next part isn't going to have all the sad plot bits I wanted, but will be someth...
by DoctorDoc
Sat Oct 22, 2011 2:27 am
Forum: Fan Projects
Topic: My First Housepets Fan Fiction
Replies: 12
Views: 5596

Re: My First Housepets Fan Fiction

An update! It's a fairly short one, I'm not very good at writing long chapters yet, I hope I become able to though. I felt that this one was a little fast and could have been written differently paced, but it's still something I need to work on. Constructive criticism is welcomed, and thanks for rea...
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:13 pm
Forum: Media Median
Topic: Post pics of yourself.
Replies: 2185
Views: 611617

Re: Post pics of yourself.

Teh Brawler wrote:
DoctorDoc wrote:Ah heck, why not.

I'm in the foreground, with my grumpy face, I have no idea who is in the background. :P
Image
Literally the first thing I thought of.
I love you guys.
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 20, 2011 1:52 am
Forum: Fan Projects
Topic: My First Housepets Fan Fiction
Replies: 12
Views: 5596

Re: My First Housepets Fan Fiction

Pretty good so far. All there are are two incredibly minor spelling and punctuation problems: Peanut walked up next to her bed, she looked so peaceful, yet so aggravated. That first comma is superfluous, and would be fixed with a period, em dash (-) or semicolon (;) - whichever one feels better to ...
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 20, 2011 1:24 am
Forum: Fan Projects
Topic: My First Housepets Fan Fiction
Replies: 12
Views: 5596

My First Housepets Fan Fiction

Hey guys, I haven't been here much, but I've read quite a few of the fan fictions here, and thought I'd give it a shot. I've written fan fictions before, but never one for Housepets!, so go easy on me! But really, I would love some constructive criticism so I can try and improve my work as I write m...
by DoctorDoc
Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:45 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: A Tale of Two Broadsides: A Housepets! Fanfic (PG-13)
Replies: 30
Views: 21327

Re: A Tale of Two Broadsides: A Housepets! Fanfic (PG-13)

Great update! I'm loving where this is going.
RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:let me guess. Captain Bino?
That would be awesome. :lol:
by DoctorDoc
Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:49 pm
Forum: Fan Projects
Topic: Reminiscence - A Tale of Dreams (PG-13)
Replies: 16
Views: 14871

Re: Reminiscence - A Tale of Dreams (PG-13)

This is the saddest piece of writing I've read here, but it is also probably one of the most well written I have ever read. It takes some good writing to make something with this sort foe motion in it. I did also feel that Peanut's side of it after Grape's death could be explored a little more, but ...
by DoctorDoc
Sun Oct 09, 2011 11:41 pm
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Have you ever?
Replies: 5884
Views: 726920

Re: Have you ever?

Yep, did that today, still haven't eaten, just not hungry. :P

Ever remember you have a big essay or project to do the very night before it's due?
by DoctorDoc
Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:39 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Word for Word Game
Replies: 17384
Views: 1622031

Re: Word for Word Game

Oars
by DoctorDoc
Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:37 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: The Vending Machine Game!
Replies: 6924
Views: 1040366

Re: The Vending Machine Game!

You get: A flightless bird

I insert: Techno music
by DoctorDoc
Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:33 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Word for Word Game
Replies: 17384
Views: 1622031

Re: Word for Word Game

Chores
by DoctorDoc
Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:33 am
Forum: Media Median
Topic: Post pics of yourself.
Replies: 2185
Views: 611617

Re: Post pics of yourself.

Ah heck, why not.

I'm in the foreground, with my grumpy face, I have no idea who is in the background. :P
by DoctorDoc
Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:29 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Word for Word Game
Replies: 17384
Views: 1622031

Re: Word for Word Game

paperwork
by DoctorDoc
Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:29 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: The Vending Machine Game!
Replies: 6924
Views: 1040366

Re: The Vending Machine Game!

You get: A rainbow tree

I insert: Pencils and paper
by DoctorDoc
Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:27 am
Forum: The Comic
Topic: The Welcome Thread!
Replies: 7209
Views: 6291846

Re: The Welcome Thread!

Welcome Quin!
by DoctorDoc
Sat Oct 08, 2011 10:58 pm
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Word for Word Game
Replies: 17384
Views: 1622031

Re: Word for Word Game

Papermaster

(Had to google D:)
by DoctorDoc
Sat Oct 08, 2011 10:29 pm
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Word for Word Game
Replies: 17384
Views: 1622031

Re: Word for Word Game

rocks
by DoctorDoc
Sat Oct 08, 2011 1:49 am
Forum: The Comic
Topic: The Welcome Thread!
Replies: 7209
Views: 6291846

Re: The Welcome Thread!

Welcome Tattorack!
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 11:36 pm
Forum: The Dead Thread Bed
Topic: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think
Replies: 1962
Views: 277068

Re: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think

Logic is overrated, especially when you're proving a point.
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:59 pm
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: What have you noticed about the User above you?
Replies: 8332
Views: 1003235

Re: What have you noticed about the User above you?

The user above me has a sweet avatar.
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:54 pm
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Word for Word Game
Replies: 17384
Views: 1622031

Re: Word for Word Game

Television
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:48 pm
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Word for Word Game
Replies: 17384
Views: 1622031

Re: Word for Word Game

Sean Connery
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:44 pm
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Word for Word Game
Replies: 17384
Views: 1622031

Re: Word for Word Game

Secret Agent
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 3:34 pm
Forum: The Comic
Topic: The Welcome Thread!
Replies: 7209
Views: 6291846

Re: The Welcome Thread!

Welcome Island style!
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 1:33 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Word for Word Game
Replies: 17384
Views: 1622031

Re: Word for Word Game

Glove
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 12:47 am
Forum: The Dead Thread Bed
Topic: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think
Replies: 1962
Views: 277068

Re: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think

Kitela wrote:Everything we say is a lie, including this statement.
I... I...

D':
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 12:46 am
Forum: The Dead Thread Bed
Topic: Are You A Furry?
Replies: 3959
Views: 705782

Re: Are You A Furry?

Yeah, I'm a furry.

I generally like moths, except when they decide to show up in my bathroom for no good reason, then I just fear them.
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 12:43 am
Forum: The Dead Thread Bed
Topic: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think
Replies: 1962
Views: 277068

Re: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think

I can't tell the truth from the lies anymore! D:
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 12:11 am
Forum: The Dead Thread Bed
Topic: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think
Replies: 1962
Views: 277068

Re: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think

Yeah, it doesn't seem too sarcastic.

Jeez, sarcasm is tricky.
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 12:08 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Have you ever?
Replies: 5884
Views: 726920

Re: Have you ever?

Yep, but it took me forever, and I needed a friend to do it.

Ever drink a whole 12 pack of soda by yourself in one night?
by DoctorDoc
Fri Oct 07, 2011 12:04 am
Forum: The Dead Thread Bed
Topic: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think
Replies: 1962
Views: 277068

Re: Chat Thread XXX: It's Not What You Think

I think maybe using all-caps would be more effective when conveying sarcasm.
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:47 am
Forum: The Comic
Topic: The Welcome Thread!
Replies: 7209
Views: 6291846

Re: The Welcome Thread!

The San Francisco Giants, I don't live too far away form SF. I go nuts over them. :P
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:15 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: What have you noticed about the User above you?
Replies: 8332
Views: 1003235

Re: What have you noticed about the User above you?

The user above me may or may not like hockey.
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 06, 2011 1:21 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Have you ever?
Replies: 5884
Views: 726920

Re: Have you ever?

Yep, woke up at 3 pm once, and I wanted to get up early that day too.

Have you ever been dreaming the best dream of your life, and just as it's about to get to the best part you wake up?
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 06, 2011 1:07 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Have you ever?
Replies: 5884
Views: 726920

Re: Have you ever?

Absolutely, I'm doing it right now.

Ever accidentally lean too far back in your chair, only to grab onto something else unstable and bring it all crashing down on you?
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 06, 2011 12:58 am
Forum: The Comic
Topic: The Welcome Thread!
Replies: 7209
Views: 6291846

Re: The Welcome Thread!

Thanks for the welcomes you guys! with friendly people like you, I think I'll be enjoying my stay. :3
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 06, 2011 12:40 am
Forum: The Comic
Topic: The Welcome Thread!
Replies: 7209
Views: 6291846

Re: The Welcome Thread!

I hope I stick around too! :D And no, I am unfortunately not a real doctor.
by DoctorDoc
Thu Oct 06, 2011 12:35 am
Forum: The Comic
Topic: The Welcome Thread!
Replies: 7209
Views: 6291846

Re: The Welcome Thread!

Hello! I just registered here, and I'm not really sure what to do to get to know people better, so I figured this would be a good start. I've been on a bit of a webcomic binge lately, and I blew through this one today, and I enjoyed it so much I decided to get on the forums! I like webcomics (this o...