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by Kondog
Wed Apr 11, 2012 5:12 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: alpha male
Replies: 89
Views: 35541

Re: alpha male

Hey, I just took the time to read your Fic, its pretty good. I am not completely sure that breaking the 4th was all that necessary, but it makes for a more interesting read I'd say. the only thing I think this fic needs is a stronger plot Hook, to sell and compel the reader to keep reading. I would...
by Kondog
Fri Nov 11, 2011 10:08 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

“Konnie! Wake up you’re going to miss your date with that cute little boyfriend of yours! ” Rosa said while stomping her feet on the shallow wooden floor. Konnie yawned lazily, dragging herself out of bed and to her feet. She reached over and grabbed her iPod to check the time admiring the new glos...
by Kondog
Mon Oct 31, 2011 11:39 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: Housepets: Matt
Replies: 687
Views: 268457

Re: Housepets: Matt

Omg that was awesome! what a great update, and yes it was worth the wait!. i just love the way you portray Bino's and Matt's interesting relationship.
by Kondog
Sun Oct 02, 2011 6:13 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Sorry Konnie, I don’t exactly smell anything… ” Alexander said, before a smile crossed his lips. “ That could be the food I prepared, or it could be me! I just finished showering actually." Alexander said, slipping his soft paw into Konnie’s Konnie leaned in and pressed her nose against Alexander s...
by Kondog
Thu Sep 29, 2011 8:51 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

" Konnie! you made it, good to see you dude ". Alexander said, extending his paw for Konnie to shake. “I am not a dude….” The Labrador said with hint of annoyance as she roughly squeezed his paw in a shake Welcome to my new humble abode, come on in “thank you for inviting me over… but before we do ...
by Kondog
Tue Sep 27, 2011 5:30 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Konnie didn't have to wait long before her ride to Alexander's house arrived. She greeted lean pale skinned man and followed him to the car. The ride to Alexander's was brief and it wasn’t hard for Konnie to Imagine walking there if the weather wasn’t so bad. “Well here’s your stop young lady have f...
by Kondog
Tue Sep 27, 2011 5:28 am
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Nexius- A housepets! fanfiction.
Replies: 32
Views: 26599

Re: The Nexius- A housepets! fanfiction.

Well done great update ST! :D very well written and i really like the fun and interesting ways your using fox or should i say Fox's
by Kondog
Thu Sep 22, 2011 11:37 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Nexius- A housepets! fanfiction.
Replies: 32
Views: 26599

Re: The Nexius- A housepets! fanfiction.

excellent work on this one ST! I really liked it( but then again I'm biased ;) ) I Really want to know what happens to Isabella.
by Kondog
Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:24 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

" I'll send a cab. That should work !." Konnie jumped off the Sofa with excitement. " Wow you would do that for me!? " Konnie could not keep her tail from wagging uncontrollably. " Ok Awesome Lexy, I'll write a note for my mom telling her when i am so she won't worry. " Konnie reached ran to the ki...
by Kondog
Thu Sep 08, 2011 11:10 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

“ Theres a few guest bedrooms and a games room too. And the living room is great too, but i mostly like my bed in my new room !”. Alexander said before an idea crossed his mind. “ Hey Konnie, i really wish you could come and see it right now.You would have loved it ..” Alexander said as he shifted ...
by Kondog
Sun Sep 04, 2011 11:59 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Alexander's ears perked up at the sound of Konnies voice. " Oh you answered !" Alexander said in a happy tone, " I mean, hi Konnie, I just wanted to call you, see if you got home okay. I erm..hope..I wasn't interrupting anything " Konnie's relatedness completely dissipated from the sound of Alexand...
by Kondog
Sun Sep 04, 2011 6:18 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Konnie slouched sideways on the sofa putting her paws deep into the cushions. Just as her eyes resumed following the episodic dancing of the flames in the fireplace the phone rang. She reached over and grabbed the cordless phone adjacent to her and checked the caller ID, she didn't recognize the num...
by Kondog
Sat Sep 03, 2011 4:41 pm
Forum: Abandoned Fics
Topic: The Nexius- A housepets! fanfiction.
Replies: 32
Views: 26599

Re: The Nexius- A housepets! fanfiction.

(officially back from hiatus) Excellent work Simple things, I like where this is going( but then again i kinda already know ;) )I found your character work and dialogue are extremely well done, the same with your details- its a very good first update and I look forward where you take it. Oh and Gan...
by Kondog
Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:31 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Konnie stared into the fireplace her eyes following the hypnotic movements of the small wood fire, she never understood why but she always liked the fire. Konnie was on the verge of falling asleep when the piercing sound of the telephone broke the fire spell over her, immediately she got up and walk...
by Kondog
Thu Sep 01, 2011 8:16 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

The ride home from the grocery store was eerily quiet as both occupants were engrossed in their own thoughts. The rattling mechanical sound of the car went unnoticed as the car drove up hill to the driveway in parked. Rosa reached for her seat belt turning Konnie direction, the smile on the sleeping...
by Kondog
Fri Aug 19, 2011 7:05 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

" I can put all the shopping in the back of your car for you ma'am " “ Well aren’t you just the little angle ” Rosie said as she reached down and gently pat Alexander on the head. “ That won't be necessary, anyway your mom needs help putting her groceries . And Konnie's more than capable of helping...
by Kondog
Thu Aug 18, 2011 4:06 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Rosa strained from the weight of the heavy shopping cart as he pushed forward away from the checkout line with Nisha's help she was able to gather enough groceries to fully stock the kitchen. " I must admit Nisha your generosity is more than I would've, expected from a family member yet alone someon...
by Kondog
Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:43 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

" Sure Konnie I would like that, I think it would be fun to get out the house for a while. " Konnie smiled gleefully and stretched from the slightly uncomfortable plastic table " awesome I can't wait! " she said pushing in her chair and walking away from the plastic table. She reached into her Coll...
by Kondog
Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:49 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Alexander swallowed the bit of pie that he had in his mouth, then spoke. " Well Konnie, i like horror sometimes, and i like watching action packed movies too. Sometimes love stories " Alexander muttered at the end Quickly taking another bite of pie he spoke " So Konnie, what about you? what kind of...
by Kondog
Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:51 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Come Konnie, we can have desert and then see if our owners are finished. Its almost been a half hour, and i'll pay for it[/color]" Alexander said, showing Konnie the table yet again. Konnie followed Alexander back to the table where they previously ate." Apple pie, now you're talking my language. "...
by Kondog
Tue Aug 16, 2011 2:36 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

" thank you Konnie, that was very kind of you to do that ." Alexander said flashing her a full set of teeth with his smile [/color] " it's nothing don't mention it. my mom's a physician and has been teaching me the basics for a while now. " she said giving her handiwork one final inspection before ...
by Kondog
Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:09 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

AHH you stupid, STUPID PIECE OF JUNK !" Alexander yelled before jumping up and down on it " Take it you dumb PROTOTYPE AGHHAHH " Alexander yelled as he cracked the device under his shoes. Konnie slightly disturbed from the random turn of events and jumped up from the table and walked towards Alexan...
by Kondog
Tue Aug 16, 2011 3:41 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

" well like i said i have never been here before Konnie. But i guess we could come here often. If you would allow me that is ". Alexander said chuckling “ Well aren't you the Precocious one. ” She said as an amused tone in her voice “ yes... yes I think I'd like that .” Konnie lifted both arms in th...
by Kondog
Tue Aug 16, 2011 3:04 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC
Replies: 1264
Views: 394816

Re: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC

the way it's worded is slightly confusing and rather roundabout to me but I'm glad someone else got it.
by Kondog
Tue Aug 16, 2011 2:49 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC
Replies: 1264
Views: 394816

Re: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC

simple things, I'm slightly confused with your second response. Konnie was asking "how long have you lived in the neighborhood, not why were you at the store. Unless it was Alexander's intention to dodge the question. --
by Kondog
Tue Aug 16, 2011 2:12 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Alexander began taking mouthfuls of the food displayed before him. Alexander took a swig of his soda before replying to Konnie. " yes i do Konnie, i work out every weekt " I thought as much, you definitely have the look of someone who spends time in the gym." she said in a flirtatious tone trying n...
by Kondog
Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:07 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

oh right thanks Konnie "Alexander sure is a strange one." She thought herself as she watched him retrieve his food from the counter and return to the table. wondering how to approach Alexander and the most casual way possible She thought it would be best to wait patiently for Alexander have a coupl...
by Kondog
Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:36 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC
Replies: 1264
Views: 394816

Re: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC

well thats it for tonight ST, I'll my next post will be later tomorrow afternoon\evening. after your's of coarse
by Kondog
Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:29 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Alexander watched Konnie leave his side and grab a tray. He watched as she piled food onto it, " she's going to split that much with me " Alexander muttered, his eyes widening slightly. " Uhh..yeah thats..thats perfect konnie " Alexander said to her as she continued to receive the food. Alexander p...
by Kondog
Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:21 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

The man had noticed Alexander, and greeted him generously. " Ahh si, si you come for food ?" the man said in a thick Italian accent. Alexander smiled then replied " sì signore è quello che vorremmo. Saremo con voi presto " The man laughed and continued cooking the orders he had set out. Alexander n...
by Kondog
Mon Aug 15, 2011 3:29 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC
Replies: 1264
Views: 394816

Re: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC

so Alexander speaks Italian huh, most interesting. i like that idea.
by Kondog
Mon Aug 15, 2011 2:05 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

" it's just over there, we can get what ever you like Konnie " Alexander said reaching into his wallet and pulling out a platinum MasterCard. The lavender scent still lingered strongly on his fur. Konnie began following she had noticed Alexander pulled out his is MasterCard shot him a look of prote...
by Kondog
Mon Aug 15, 2011 1:34 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC
Replies: 1264
Views: 394816

Re: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC

Okay simple things, but I think about the switchgears and start focusing solely on Alexander and Konnie leaving the moms alone the shop for a while. This should prove most interesting ;) Oh By the Way I notice you are more active during the nighttime as far as general RP goes what is the best time ...
by Kondog
Sun Aug 14, 2011 10:59 pm
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Beef, milk, soda, vegetables, chicken and cereal were just a few things Rosie could think of, top of her head that she immediately needed in the house, she continued to compile the list in her head as she grabbed empty grocery cart for from the entrance and proceeded to follow Nisha into the store. ...
by Kondog
Sun Aug 14, 2011 8:12 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC
Replies: 1264
Views: 394816

Re: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC

Yes indeed that was my plain, a good meal makes for a pretty solid Ice breaker. -
by Kondog
Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:30 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC
Replies: 1264
Views: 394816

Re: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC

that took a little longer than I thought it was going to. In any event looks like we are good footing for our next set of interactions ;) and as most supermarkets have a deli at I imagine this would have one as well. (usually consisting of cheap plastic tables\chairs and usually busted on soda mach...
by Kondog
Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:22 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

Nisha said. " Come now Rosa we can get the groceries and then we can buy what ever else you would like ". Nisha said opening the front of the doors for Rosa. She still felt a little reluctant to accept such a gift from a stranger. Rosa nodded at Nisha in agreement and reached down into her purse. A...
by Kondog
Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:49 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC
Replies: 1264
Views: 394816

Re: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC

Ok i got an idea its just going to take me about 15 mins to finish furthermore as its damn-near 5am this will be my last one for tonight.
by Kondog
Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:37 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC
Replies: 1264
Views: 394816

Re: PF: Yorkshire Fields OOC

ST was your intention have Alexander and Konnie stay outside the supermarket or rejoin there as parents they enter?
by Kondog
Sun Aug 14, 2011 1:50 am
Forum: Inactive Role Plays
Topic: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields
Replies: 3960
Views: 547562

Re: Pet Friendly: Yorkshire Fields

" And allow me to do all the purchasing today Rosa. My work has given me a very large sum of money for the time being. And i can use this for, just about anything. It's the least i can do for a friend Nisha said reaturning the warm smile. Rosa was shocked by the sudden outburst of generosity from N...