Housepets!

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I don't think a demon is in the food truck because they have the demon radar, but I think it is 50/50 that Steward is in it.

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I was referring to the food truck. I feel like it could be a vector for the curse and I can hear Steward writing the message, or it could just be a random oddly specific food truck.

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I can't tell if this suppose to be apart of the demon plot, a red herring for the demon plot, or completely unrelated.

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Distant Starlight - Omen Sirius didn't sleep that night. He sat on his bed, stricken with motionlessness. When the others realized he was still in his make-shift quarters well after breakfest, they dragged him into the living room. He curled himself into a cocoon of blankets. His mind was slowed and...

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I liked the story. A bit short, but it gets it point across. In particular, I enjoyed the ending line, it has a certain punch.

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His cheeks are consistent, what is inconsistent is whether or not the fur behind it is white like his muzzle or orange like the rest of his head, and probably causes the cheek marks to look different because contrast.

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Distant Starlight - Dusk Sirius mediated in a make-shift circle composed of the few materials he had or could easily borrow. His experience and training told him that it shouldn't work; the circle he made with a protractor, his small length of rope and a salt shaker was hardly circular, he could not...

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I feel sorry for the bear. He had the mental filter broken and is just left in the dark.

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I feel like they must have been changed in the last time minutes and really unobservant, especially for the boss who is probably in an office building with other transformed humans. I feel like there is a perception filter where people can't tell what is going on until it is pointed out to them.

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I feel like things are to far in the air to make any solid predictions, I feel like it would be odd to establish demons this much and establish that they can invade anytime with minimal effort and only stopped by being actively opposed by celestials, only to conclude that threat in the same arc whil...

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So either there is a perception filter that makes people not realize the whole "people have turned into animals" and so he could only notice it after it was pointed out, or this is guy is really oblivious, not noticing how (probably) lost half of his height (It is also possible he was alre...

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I am glad that I have continued this and that at least someone is reading it and enjoying it. As part of the main story, I intend for a new magical pet to enter Azure Creek. I don't want to get into much spoilers, especially since I am trying to tell a story with mystery aspects, but if anyone wants...

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Distant Starlight - Names As Zeus went to walk down the street, he felt something pelt his nose and then it felt wetter than usually. Shortly after, he was running through the rain back home. When he walked through the front door, Jax handed him a towel. While trying to dry his fur, he saw Sirius dr...

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I believe it is established that while there is a demon on the planet, demi-gods are time-locked to that planet's perspective of time. So ignoring the less interesting answer that just doesn't apply to Bahamut, that means either Bahamat immediately dumped all of the work on Kitsune after saying they...

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Distant Starlight - Pacing Zeus paced back in forth in the kitchen. His eyes eventually wandered over to Sirius' electric kettle. He remembered Sirius saying that he could have some, but also Jax's recommendation that he didn't. He poured a glass, and as he reached the glass to his muzzle, he instin...

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Dino Breel didn't seem to have much self-preservation than Heaven Breel, though I am not sure now much of that was feigning ignorance. It is possible whatever turned Dino Breel into Nega Breel brought him closer to being like Mortal Breel.

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Distant Starlight - Bound Sirius, frustrated by his lack of progress with mapping the rune inscribed into community, decided to take a different approach. He walked back to the wall, and hesitantly reached towards. He stopped half-way through, thinking about how it might effect him in this state and...

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Distant Starlight - Brewing Tyrant paced back in forth, occasionally taking glances towards a mouth of a cave. Suddenly, he felt a single tap on his shoulder and fell over. He glanced up at a black cat above him, Bella, glanced over at the cave entrance and then glanced over at her. Without the wolf...

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Distant Starlight - Cartography After a few days, Sirius was released from the clinic. They could not find anything particularity out of place or concerning, which seemed to worry them more. It didn't seem as though they would want to take him of the community for now, and going out on his would not...

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I like to think that all he did was take the car out of brake, and someone just positioned that car on the wrong part of the hill the mansion is on.

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I personally feel like it is likely that there story will end with them turning back into humans. Housepets has this massive cast of characters competing for screen-time, and so when a character story ends, I think it makes sense that there role either changes or they get written out of the story. I...

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While it is true that the HP! Universe is far from an egalitarian paradise, I think its society is more interesting than more people give it credit. I don't think that pets are a metaphor for marginalized groups. Pets are a lower-class, but they are lower-class than humans. Compared to other animals...

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Distant Starlight - Ripples Elder Greenhoof looked his reflection in his lake. His pelt was shades of green and his antlers turned into wood and leaf by the guardian will. Occasionally, droplets of water would fall from the sky and disturb the water. This was the first time that it had rained agains...

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The HP! universe is messed-up and more than a light dark, but pethood, especially in a progressive, pet-friendly community like Babylon Gardens, doesn't seem to that bad of a deal. I think the only pets that have ever took issue with it have been ones that have been actively abused, and even then, S...

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In the least helpfully titled arc, "Oops, I arced.", it is stated that Bino has "zoning issue." And I don't think it is any secret that he had a shock collar. It has an obvious lightning bolt on it, and neither Bino, Peanut or Grape find the concept unusual. It might also be earl...

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I just realized, "Obviously You're Psychic", is a perfectly reasonable response to the situation. Who else would be calling a random land-line that you are just happening by?

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I am not the best person to get writing advice, but from what I seen you tend to jump around from project to project a lot, while also trying to keep a chapter formula. I would recommend trying to write self-contained story stories. It is great to experiment, but you also need to know the format you...

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Distant Starlight - Earlier -- Earlier -- Jax was adjusting his K9 vest when he heard Ms. Hawthorne call to him, "Can you check on Sirius before we leave?" After adjusting the last strip, he called back, "Will do." He walked into the living room, and Sirius was sitting and it loo...

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While I don't have any official arc structure established, I am considering everything between Farsighted and Power to be the prologue, and that we are now starting the second major arc of the story, hopefully answering some of the mysteries surrounding Azure Creek in a satisfying manner. As part of...

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Distant Starlight - Power Sirius woke up. His paw immediately reached for his upper chest, and he expelled a sigh whenever he felt his bandana. Glancing around, he was in the clinic. The wall trimmings had distinctive paw-print pattern. His last memories were talking to Trevor at the New Years Celeb...

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I am curious where this is going. I also bit curious about this priest who doesn't believe in God.

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Distant Starlight - Helper Felix flipped through the papers, as he saw Jax return with Sirius. As he walked up towards them, Jax gave him a death glare before introducing him, "Sirius, this is Felix. He is another K9 officer." Sirius replied, "Greetings, Felix." "Hey. You do...

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Regarding Kitsune's behavior towards the end of Temple Crasher 2, just having a demon on earth seems to supress Kitsune's nonlinear sense of time, and he was standing next to a portal to Pandemonium. It was also established that the denizens of heavens were weakened due to the proximity to the porta...

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I would like to point out that I believe that Dragon and Pete were also responsible for the defense of this world as part of agreement with Heaven to play the game, and that the only reason that they are mortal now is because a bet that they made between themselves.

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I think the implication is that Tarot just doesn't clean out her fridge near as often as she should.

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While I can see where Tarot is being reckless, I am not to keen on the plan, "Just find the demon and run away really fast." When your only way to call for back-up relies on you being able to escape the literal demon, I feel like there is some holes in the plan. And as for Tarot not sharin...

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Distant Starlight - Exchange "Yeah, I will meet you over there Ash." Snow said, her phone pushed into one shoulder while she awkwardly applied a poultice to her other shoulder. "Yes, love you too." she said as tried to hold the cloth on her shoulder, while picking up the phone an...

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Tarot and Sabrina's living arrangement are surprisingly mysteriously. I am pretty sure that Sabrina's owner vanished into the ether some where between her rescuing Spo and the arranged marriage, there is the possible mundane reason that his job simply takes him to remote places of the world for long...

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I think that Marion and Lois staying as animals is a safe bet for various reasons, several of which have already been mentioned. I feel at this point, they might want to stay as animals. It is exactly for these reasons I wouldn't be surprised if they were forced back to their human forms, however if...

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Distant Starlight - Ordered Jax and the other police dogs were setting up the park for the new years party. Mostly dragging out plastic folding tables and setting them with snacks. One of the K9s, a reddish brown greyhound, dragged out a rope and asked, "Should we have it this year." Jax w...

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