Changing time - Adventures begin!

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:27 pm

NO FAIR
Val is in just 'cause he is famous and has 2k posts!
Just.
You.
WAIT.

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:28 pm

NO

U D:<

Why does it feel like I'm being replaced?<.<

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:33 pm

Tobee wrote:NO

U D:<

Why does it feel like I'm being replaced?<.<

NOBODY can replace a Tiggy!
NEVAH!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:36 pm

Chapter 1 Part 8

Streak smiled.
"Who is this?!?" Earl said looking toward Grape.
"Uhh...I-I-A-A-I don't know..." She lied.
Streak's jaw dropped.
Peanut smiled as he thought:
"He's here!"
"Look Cat,You should go find your parents. Bye,bye." Earl said as he smiled to Streak and put a hand on his back leading him to the door.
Streak walked out and down the steps as Earl shut the door.
He tossed him self onto the nears snow pile.
"Grape?!?"
"That was weird."Said Earl turning to his family smiling.
They all smiled. Peanuts smile was fake.
The Game leaned down to Peanut.
"Was that Stre-" She started.
Peanut grabbed Grape's hand and walked into his room.
The Game followed.
After they got in the room and shut the door Peanut sat on his bed.
Grape stared at him.
The Game sat with a puzzled look.
"That was Streak.And you let Dad take him out."
"The last thing I want is that alien psycho time traveler ruining our life."
"Gra-" Peanut started.
"No. Remember! You got amnesia last time he was here!!!"
"Oh, Right...I forgot..."
"Haha..Very funny..." Grape said sarcastically.
"Isn't he shapeshifter?" The Game said cutting in.
The both looked at her.

Teh Brawler · Post by **Teh Brawler** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:47 pm

Private Elliot wrote:NO FAIR
Val is in just 'cause he is famous and has 2k posts!
Just.
You.
WAIT.

Somehow I don't think post count has much to do with it.

*glances at own post count*

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 7:35 pm

Teh Brawler wrote:
Private Elliot wrote:NO FAIR
Val is in just 'cause he is famous and has 2k posts!
Just.
You.
WAIT.
Somehow I don't think post count has much to do with it.

*glances at own post count*

It wasn't the pos count.
It was just the guys( / Girls. ;D)who liked my last fanfic...

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 9:33 pm

Hopper200456 wrote:
Teh Brawler wrote:
Private Elliot wrote:NO FAIR
Val is in just 'cause he is famous and has 2k posts!
Just.
You.
WAIT.
Somehow I don't think post count has much to do with it.

*glances at own post count*
It wasn't the pos count.
It was just the guys( / Girls. ;D)who liked my last fanfic...

I READ IT... i just ddidnt have an account yet. i lurked on the forums for quite a while before joining.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 11:46 pm

Earl acting so rude?!?
Did I miss something, here??!
NO LIKE :'<

FlintTheSquirrel · Post by **FlintTheSquirrel** » Sat Sep 18, 2010 11:56 pm

That does sound odd, especially since Earl loves animals and that he even let a wolf inside of his house.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Sep 19, 2010 12:10 am

FlintTheSquirrel wrote:That does sound odd, especially since Earl loves animals and that he even let a wolf inside of his house.

Look at it from his point of view.
Strange black cat with red hair die on his hair broke into their house while they were out at dinner.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Sep 19, 2010 12:12 am

Hopper200456 wrote:
FlintTheSquirrel wrote:That does sound odd, especially since Earl loves animals and that he even let a wolf inside of his house.
Look at it from his point of view.
Strange black cat with red hair die on his hair broke into their house while they were out at dinner.

still, it's not like Earl.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:34 am

valerio wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:
FlintTheSquirrel wrote:That does sound odd, especially since Earl loves animals and that he even let a wolf inside of his house.
Look at it from his point of view.
Strange black cat with red hair die on his hair broke into their house while they were out at dinner.
still, it's not like Earl.

I thought about it, and changes it.
He is very nice to pets.
Check it out guys!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:38 am

Better.
Nice job

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:01 pm

Nice fix.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:21 pm

Chapter 1 Part 9

Streak sat in the snow.
He turned himself to face the house that belonged to Peanut and Grape.
He sighed.
He closed his eyes to try to remember what he had done.
"Let's see." Streak said trying to think of things.
"I was there when she had her Kitties...oh wait...that hasn't happened yet..."
He sighed again.
Streak opened his eyes and looked at the white paw that stuck in front of him.
He grabbed it.
It was Tiger.
He helped Streak up.
"Thanks."
"I didn't expect to find some like you sitting in the snow."
"You're a fan."
"Yes I am, your a timetraveler." Said Tiger helping Streak up.
"You read my story." Streak Said brushing himself off.
"Yes I did."
"Do believe it?"
"I do now that I'm staring at you."
"Yes."
Valerio came out of the bushes next to Grape's house.
Streak rolled his eyes.
Tiger was shocked to see him crawl out of the shrubs.
"Yo, Streak." He said running toward them.
"Do you know him?" Streak said glancing at Tiger.
"Uh, I don't think so." Tiger said.
"Hello fellow human! What is your name?"
"My names Valerio." He said stoping himself next to Streak.
"Well, Valerio I'm-" Streak started.
"I know who both of you are."
"Oh, Good evening Valerio." Tobee/Tiger said.
"You too." Valerio said observing Tobee's new body.
"I need to talk to Peanut..." Streak said looking at the house for a other entrance.
"You have the right guy Streak." Said Valerio smiling.

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:27 pm

Yaaay

asum :3

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Sep 20, 2010 12:29 am

dohohoHO!
The suspence is so killing me..but I llllove it!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Sep 20, 2010 4:48 pm

Late update, Check tonight.
How are you guys liking it?

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Mon Sep 20, 2010 4:50 pm

's a fun read ^_^

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Tue Sep 21, 2010 12:26 am

it's funny, it's original, it's very good read, yay!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Sep 21, 2010 12:42 am

Okay, I lied...
No update today..
I was Busy..
This..Fanfic....Will...Not...End...

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Tue Sep 21, 2010 1:20 am

Hopper200456 wrote:Okay, I lied...
No update today..
I was Busy..
This..Fanfic....Will...Not...End...

KEWL!
Always wanted to spend the rest of mah life in Babylon Gardens! Thank you Streak!

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Tue Sep 21, 2010 3:16 pm

Fun read as well i guess.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:41 pm

Chapter1 Part 10

Valerio sent a rope with Streak tied to it down the long chimney.
"You know I have Zangopinituse!" Streak said holding to the rope with his life.
"What's that?" Tobee asked peaking into the chimney.
"Fear of chimneys..." Streak said looking down the never-ending chimney.
_________________________________

Peanut sat next to the fireplace.
He looked outside as it started snowing.
"Hey,Dad?" He yelled.
"Yah, Sport?" He said sitting at the couch reading he newspaper.
"Could I light the fireplace?"
"I don't see why not."
____________________

"Just hold on Streak." Valerio said rolling his eyes.
"Meep.." Streak said looking at Valerio.
Tobee laughed.
"Uh, GUYS THEY JUST LIGHT THE FIREPLACE!" Streak yelled.
"Wha-" Tobee started.
Valerio pulled as hard as be could.
They heard a snap.

IceKitsune · Post by **IceKitsune** » Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:53 pm

Well this is very bad very bad indeed.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Tue Sep 21, 2010 10:25 pm

Accidenti!

Teh Brawler · Post by **Teh Brawler** » Tue Sep 21, 2010 10:38 pm

SANTA

Oh, wait

The Game · Post by **The Game** » Wed Sep 22, 2010 6:06 pm

XD
I just love how Peanut randomly asks to light the fireplace

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Wed Sep 22, 2010 6:50 pm

The Game wrote:XD
I just love how Peanut randomly asks to light the fireplace

But it's September!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:29 pm

Chapter 1 Part 11

Streak shut his eyes tight.
He spread his arms and legs out.
They screeched to a stop.
He looked down in relief and saw the flames inches away from him.
Peanut, Nor anyone noticed what happened.
Tobee peaked down the chimney and whispered:
"Are you okay?"
Streak looked up with a freaked out cat face.
"...Peachy..."
"Good, Sending the rope down." Valerio said.
________________________
Hopper sat and looked at the blank white computer screen.
"Arg!Why does inspiration strike at the wrong moments!!" He yelled waving his hands in the air.
He smacked them against the keyboard.
Fdshjak
Hopper looked at the new work he had created.
"Blast! I haft to have something!" I, er...He yelled.
There was a white blinding light.
I...He was gone.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:30 pm

one word:
randomly

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:31 pm

Elliot mumbled something that no one on the forum quite understood.

lightwolf21 · Post by **lightwolf21** » Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:37 pm

...aaaaand the fourth wall just got erased into oblivion.

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:39 pm

lightwolf21 wrote:...aaaaand the fourth wall just got erased into oblivion.

Too late. I already did.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:31 am

Great! Just GREAT!
WHO's gonna write the stuff, now that the author has been Streaked through the 4th wall?!?

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:32 am

valerio wrote:Great! Just GREAT!
WHO's gonna write the stuff, now that the author has been Streaked through the 4th wall?!?

I WILL

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:48 am

By the way!
No update Thursday.
Sorry... -_-
Artschool!

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:51 am

Hopper200456 wrote:By the way!
No update Thursday.
Sorry... -_-
Artschool!

Don't worry mr hopper
I CAN DO IT FOOOR YOOOU

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:58 am

Ooo, this is gonna get interesting then...

Private Elliot · Post by **Private Elliot** » Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:08 am

valerio wrote:Ooo, this is gonna get interesting then...

He didnt say yes or no yet.