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Well..It's been a while and I grabbed some new ideas,and went to the beach.
Hope you like it! :D
I also, Have a profile for my Housepets! Characters.
I must warn you though, These profiles might give away the story slightly.
So, for new viewers, you might want to be careful.
Also, If you are a new reader, I must suggest reading this first.
(This was a very long while ago and the writing is awful.)

I made the story post Bold for easy reading.

Profile: Streak

Name: Streak (Real name?)
Age: 94 (Estimate Earth Age:16)
NickNames: Streaky,Stripe,The Guy with Midnight.
Appearance: Black male cat with a red streak across a fluffy patch of fur almost across his left eye hub is brushed away.
Collar: Basic Green color.
Tag: Dark grey working Clock.
Species: Unknown. Disguised as Cat.
Family: (Brother?)
Quirks: Has Aurophobia.(Fear of the color Gold)
Favorite Food: Unknown.
Favorite Band: Unknown.
Least Favorite Food: Cornbread.
Favorite Movies/T.V. Shows: Doctor Who, Back to the Future, Jurassic Park, Lost, Psych.
Occupation: Time Traveler
Relationship: Midnight (Girlfriend)
Extra Info:
Is a shapeshifter.

Profile: Midnight

Name: Midnight Christiana (Middle Name)
Age: 15 (cat years) Birthday: June 5th
NickNames: Mid, Night. (Midge?)
Appearance: Black cat with white underbelly.
Collar: No collar.
Tag: N/A
Species: Cat
Family: Sabrina (Sister) Hopper200456/Kristian (Father)
Quirks: Will sleep anywhere in the house.(PM for list) Really enjoys baths but not pools,Waterfights, ect...
Occupation: HousePet
Favorite Movies/ T.V. Shows: Futurama, Inception, Human Target, Psych, Doctor Who.
Favorite Food: Shrimp.
Least Favorite Food: Tomatoes.
Relationship: Streak (BoyFriend)
Extra Info:
Dated Max for a Week. Left Handed.


CHAPTER 1: Pilot 1
CHAPTER 2: Pilot 2
CHAPTER 3: Secrets in the Dark (Part 2-END Here)
CHAPTER 4: The Tale of Qypynake 5
CHAPTER 5: Pit Stop (Current)
CHAPTER 6: Hiding in a Vacation!
CHAPTER 7:
CHAPTER 8:
CHAPTER 9:
CHAPTER 10:
SIDE CHAPTER: A New Interest
SIDE PART: Valentines Day!



Intro

Tobee sat and looked at the glowing computer screen.
He pressed the refresh button as he examined the Housepets forum.
He saw Valerio post a reply to his comment.
Tobee chuckled as he read the post.
He clicked the "Reply" button and typed his reply.
He waited five seconds then pressed the refresh button.
-Elsewhere-
Valerio glanced at the short comment of his post that read: "Lol".
He cocked his head as he tried to find out what was funny about his last post: "I wonder what will happen next?"
He clicked the refresh button as he hoped for an explanation.
"The Game" had commented on Tobee's post.
"What's funny about Val's post?"
-Again, Elsewhere-
Tobee sighed and typed a reply to the message.
--
Valerio also started to type across his keyboard, creating his message.
--
The Game had edited her post to add an extra comment onto her post.
--
They all pushed enter at the same time.
On each of their computers there was a flash of blinding light that came out of the computer screen.
They all covered their eyes to protect them.
Then, they felt nothing under them.


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Haha now this will be interesting ^_^
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Hopper, your ability to amaze never cease to amaze me...
My first istinct is to ask you in which way this ficcie is related to Housepets... But I know better, with you.
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Great so far, knowing Hopper it can only get more interesting. :D
Heh. Look at that... I started an actual Housepets! fan-fic.
https://www.housepetscomic.com/forums/v ... 70#p131370
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Hopper, I think you might want to name this something else. Neko already made a fanfic with that EXACT name.

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Okay this seems like a random intro to this whole fic.
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Wow that was fast. O.O
I'll change it didn't see his topic...
I might give you guys a 2nd update today!
Light wolf? Do you want to check my spelling?

Um...How do I change the name??...
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Hopper200456 wrote:Wow that was fast. O.O
I'll change it didn't see his topic...
I might give you guys a 2nd update today!
Light wolf? Do you want to check my spelling?

Um...How do I change the name??...
Edit your first post, there is a section to edit the title.
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I dont think Neko even works on his fic anymore.
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He is, he told me once

I think
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He will, don't worry about that, it may take months, but I see it happening. (Off topic)
Sorry Hopper.
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Hopper200456 wrote:Wow that was fast. O.O
I'll change it didn't see his topic...
I might give you guys a 2nd update today!
Light wolf? Do you want to check my spelling?

Um...How do I change the name??...
I wouldn't mind, but it might have to wait until I'm less busy :(. I actually have to do homework this week, and I'm working on my fan-fiction, and trying to translate Valerio's, and doing fan-art, etc... and that's just the Housepets! related stuff.
Heh. Look at that... I started an actual Housepets! fan-fic.
https://www.housepetscomic.com/forums/v ... 70#p131370
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lightwolf21 wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:Wow that was fast. O.O
I'll change it didn't see his topic...
I might give you guys a 2nd update today!
Light wolf? Do you want to check my spelling?

Um...How do I change the name??...
I wouldn't mind, but it might have to wait until I'm less busy :(. I actually have to do homework this week, and I'm working on my fan-fiction, and trying to translate Valerio's, and doing fan-art, etc... and that's just the Housepets! related stuff.
It's cool. Take your time.
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It's short...But the 2nd update today!!!


Chapter 1 Part 1 (Pilot 1)

Peanut sat on the sofa with a candy cane sticking out of his mouth and a Wiimote in his hand.
He glanced at the door off to his left as Grape entered the room.
"Hi." Peanut said, smiling because she was near him.
"Hello." Grape replied sitting down on the couch next to him.
"What's up?" Peanut asked looking at the TV screen.
"The sky." 
Peanut smiled. Grape smiled back. *cough heard in background*
"I'm bored." Grape said cutting the sweet romantic moment.
"Mm.." 
"Let's go for a walk!" Grape said standing up.
"Uh..." Peanut said looking out the window to see a wonderful pet friendly town covered in a thick sheet if snow.
"Come on!" she said turning the wii off.
"Wha-Grape?!?"
"It'll be fun!" she said, reaching for their scarves.
"Fine..." Peanut said, standing up and grabbing his scarf.
Grape smiled.

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"The sky"

pffft hahah xD
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"The sky"
Why did i laugh at that?
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The sky...
It's gonna rain fans! :lol:
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Hopper200456 wrote:It's short...But the 2nd update today!!!

Chapter 1 Part 1

Peanut sat on the sofa with a candy cane sticking out of his mouth and a Wii mote in his hand.
He glanced at the door way to his left as Grape entered the room.
"Hi." Peanut said smiling that she was near him.
"Hello." Grape replied sitting down on the couch next to him.
"What's up?" Peanut asked looking at the TV screen.
"The sky."
Peanut smiled. Grape smiled back.
"I'm bored." Grape said cutting the sweat romantic moment.
"Mm.." 
"Let's go for a walk!" Grape said standing up.
"Uh..." Peanut said looking out the window to see a wonderful pet friendly town covered in a thick sheet if snow.
"Come on!" she said turning he wii off.
"Wa-Grape?!?"
"It'll be fun!" she said reaching for their scarfs.
"Fine..." Peanut said standing and grabbing his scarf.
Grape smiled.
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valerio wrote:The sky...
It's gonna rain fans! :lol:

Lol Valerio.
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Private Elliot wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:It's short...But the 2nd update today!!!

Chapter 1 Part 1

Peanut sat on the sofa with a candy cane sticking out of his mouth and a Wii mote in his hand.
He glanced at the door way to his left as Grape entered the room.
"Hi." Peanut said smiling that she was near him.
"Hello." Grape replied sitting down on the couch next to him.
"What's up?" Peanut asked looking at the TV screen.
"The sky."
Peanut smiled. Grape smiled back.
"I'm bored." Grape said cutting the sweat romantic moment.
"Mm.." 
"Let's go for a walk!" Grape said standing up.
"Uh..." Peanut said looking out the window to see a wonderful pet friendly town covered in a thick sheet if snow.
"Come on!" she said turning he wii off.
"Wa-Grape?!?"
"It'll be fun!" she said reaching for their scarfs.
"Fine..." Peanut said standing and grabbing his scarf.
Grape smiled.
Don't Ya mean... Sweet?
Gr... Stupid fast typing and auto spellcheck....
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Chapter 1 Part 2 

Valerio woke up on a concrete street.
He lifted his head and sniffed the cold winter air.
It was freezing.
"Dove sono?" He said with a deep sounding voice.
He stood up and stretched.
He rubbed his head having his hand travel through his short black hair.
"Ero al computer ... ..."
He walked toward the snowy sidewalk and stepped up onto it.
"Excuse us, sir." said a voice behind him.
He looked around him and saw Grape and Peanut walking down the sidewalk towards him.
"Eh? Sorry .." He said, moving aside to let them pass.
He watched them walk out of sight.
His eyes widened as he realized where he was.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 
Tobee felt the cold snow under him.
"Mm..." He said stretching in the green grass.
He opened his eyes.
He saw two white fluffy paws sitting in front of him.
He gasped.
He stood up and examined his body.
"I-I'm...Tiggy?!?"
A great feel of joy ran through him.
He looked at his back.
He was exactly as he imagined the tiger.
He looked around and quickly noticed where he was.
He smiled. 
"I'm the luckiest person/tiger on earth!" he yelled, as he fell to his knees laughing.

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ahhahaha awesome

I would SO Love if that happened to me :D
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Yay! I went to Paradise!
Hopper, i love you! :D :D :D
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How was the itailan Val?
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Ya kno, you could make tiggy speak swedish aswell ^_^

If you want, that is xD
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Hopper200456 wrote:How was the itailan Val?
Absolutely purrfect! :D
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Hopper200456 wrote:Tobee felt the cold snow under him.
"Mm..." He said stretching in the green grass.
He opened his eyes.
He saw two white fluffy paws siting in front of him.
He gasped.
He stood up and examined his body.
"I-I'm...Tiggy?!?"
A great feel of joy ran through him.
He look at his back.
He was exactly as he imagined Tiger.
He looked around and quickly saw where he was.
He smiled. 
"I'm the luckiest person on earth!" he yelled as he fell to his knees laughing.
This is why I'm not a furry.

Because I would be devastated if that happened to me. :3
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Mixed feelings if this happened to me.
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totally awesome if it happened to me! :D
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I guess it would be kinda cool, but i'd miss my family and friends.
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:lol:
Hopper is gonna have fun with this
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The Game wrote::lol:
Hopper is gonna have fun with this
Hey what happened to
"I didnt slap you! I only high fived your face!"?
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Private Elliot wrote:
The Game wrote::lol:
Hopper is gonna have fun with this
Hey what happened to
"I didnt slap you! I only high fived your face!"?
it got replaced by a fish
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Pitiful.
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Chapter 1 Part 3

Grape sighed.
"I guess that's what you get when you date Maxie..."
Peanut mumbled something.
Grape didn't hear what it was.
The rest of the conversation flew over Peanut's head.
The minute he heard the name "Maxie," he turned his ears off.
"What do you think, Peanut?"
"Wha-Uh,Yeah, Me too!" Peanut said turning to her smiling.
Grape gave Peanut a weird look. 
"You...Date Max too?" she replied.

Peanut started blushing.
"Uh..."
They continued walking.
They ran into a man standing on the sidewalk looking around.
"Excuse me, sir."
The man moved aside and stared at them.
When they were out of hearing range, Grape said, "Creep..."
"What?Who?Me?!?" 
"No the guy back there was creepy..."
"Why?" Peanut asked.
"I don't know...Just felt like he was creepy..."
Peanut rolled his eyes.
They walked for a while and said nothing, until Grape screamed:
"Oh My Goodness!!!"
"What?" Peanut said.
Grape had one hand over her mouth and the other pointing at a brown haired girl lying in the street.
Peanut jumped and gasped as he saw her.
They both ran to her.
When they propped her up she awoke.
"Uh...Where?.."
"Are you okay?!?" Peanut said, helping her up.
"Uh, I think so.."
"That's good." Grape said smiling as they helped her walk across the snow onto the sidewalk.
"I'm Grape and this is Peanut."
She gasped and hugged them both.
"Uh." Peanut said.
"You can call me The Game."
Weird name, Peanut thought to himself.
"I've never seen you before. Where do you live?" Grape asked.
"Well...Very,Far,far,away. I'm not sure where I'll stay for the night." The Game said glancing at the sunset.
"That's okay! You can stay with us!" Grape said.

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I WANT IN THIS


I only have a few posts... but still! I think i'm known now :D



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I want in dis :<



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HEY HOPPER I'M TEH BRAWLER YOU ARE AWESOME AND LIKE THE BEST FRIEND I EVER HAD WHAT'S THIS YOU'RE WRITING
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HI ONLY I AM ALLOWED TO TYPE IN ALL CAPS SO LEAVE NAO
Teh Brawler wrote:HEY HOPPER I'M TEH BRAWLER YOU ARE AWESOME AND LIKE THE BEST FRIEND I EVER HAD WHAT'S THIS YOU'RE WRITING
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Private Elliot wrote:HI ONLY I AM ALLOWED TO TYPE IN ALL CAPS SO LEAVE NAO
Teh Brawler wrote:HEY HOPPER I'M TEH BRAWLER YOU ARE AWESOME AND LIKE THE BEST FRIEND I EVER HAD WHAT'S THIS YOU'RE WRITING
I HAVE BEEN TYPING IN CAPS LONG BEFORE YOU CAME TO THIS FORUM THEREFORE YOU ARE THE ONE WHO IS OUT OF LINE

ASK EBLY
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