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Zander wrote:
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If i tried it would probably look way worse.


Im not going to comment.



meanie :lol:
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heheheh... thats what they all say...

the reason i dont draw scythe mad is because, everyone that has ever seen him mad is dead.

so if you did draw him mad....you'd die?

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DO NOT MIND THE WEIRD LINES.
MORE ON THAT LATER.



thats.... good... for your first..



It's not. I did a Grape picture in the fan art forum.
And uh, it made it look really bad because my scanner is half way broken. That's kinda what the lines are...

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Hopper200456 wrote:
Zander wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:
DO NOT MIND THE WEIRD LINES.
MORE ON THAT LATER.



thats.... good... for your first..



It's not. I did a Grape picture in the fan art forum.
And uh, it made it look really bad because my scanner is half way broken. That's kinda what the lines are...


not the scanlines, the pen you used to draw it was too thick. either that or draw bigger.

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Hopper200456 wrote:
DO NOT MIND THE WEIRD LINES.
MORE ON THAT LATER.
*picture of Streak*


....he looks angry....but...nice try....
If i tried it would probably look way worse.


It's the scanner! I'm not that bad of an artist!!! *weaps!*
*Zander says stuff about a ink pen.*
It was the only one I had...I use it for my webcomic...

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 Chapter 5

Peanut sat eating his lunch on the table alone.
He sighed at the thought of Grape being at Max's house doing who knows what. Streak was in his room doing something very load but he wouldn't tell anyone.
It had been a year since they got Streak.
Peanut got up with half a lunch on the table.
He walk over to Streak's room and knocked on it.
He heard a big zapping sound, Streak yelling something, a big bang, then  the door opened. 
"Ow.." Streak said as he rubbed his head that seemed to be smoking.
"Yeah?" He said looking at Peanut. 
"Um, Could you have lunch with me?"
"Sure! I was getting kinda hungry!" Streak said opening the door and coming out trying to hide something.
After Streak got his HUGE Lunch he sat down next to Peanut and they ate.
"What are you doing in there?" Peanut asked watching Streak scarf down the food.
"I'm working on a new time machine/ship thing." Streak said stoping for breath.
"I still don't believe you about the whole time traveler thing." Peanut said roping his eyes.
"You should."
"Okay,Okay, Even if there you were what you say! A cat?!? A time traveling cat?!? Your so un believable!"
"I'm not a cat..."Streak said as he stopped eating.
"Oh, Like Im supposed to believe you?!?" Peanut said getting up.
Streak got up after him.
"I'm a shapeshifter!" 
"Yup, Of course you are?!?!!" Peanut said walking down the hallway.
Streak got in his way. 
"I can't change into anything! Just somethings!!"
"Prove it!"
Streak looked at the ground.
"Fine..." 
He looked at Peanut. Then right before Peanut's eyes Streak slowly turned into black steam, Then it rebuilt into a small mousy on the floor.
"There!" Streak squeaked.
Peanut sat and stared with his jaw down.
"Stre-Streak?" He asked the mouse.
Mouse Streak then turned into steam again and was rebuilt into cat Streak.
"Now do you believe me?!" Streak said with a smile.
Peanut smiled back.

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Ooookay... I love shapeshifting. :3

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Yay!

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OK, so a year passed.
Any problem?
Nah, I'll admit that a timetraveler shapeshifting cat can come handy in such cases :ugeek:

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OK, so a year passed.
Any problem?
Nah, I'll admit that a timetraveler shapeshifting cat can come handy in such cases :ugeek:

He's very useful with household chores.

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Chapter 6 

Peanut stared at Streak who just formed into a mouse, then back into a cat. 
"Wow..."
"Yup, That's what people normally say." Streak said with a giant smile.
"So...Can I see your time machine?" Peanut said wagging his tail. 
"Well...Come with me." Streak started as he turned around toward his room.
"It's not really a time machine, but a teleportation device." Streak added.
"Where's it going?" Peanut said with a smile. 
"Nowhere."
"Oh.."
"But it's taking me back to my ship." Streak said.
"Hmm..." Peanut said rubbing his chin.
"And..." Streak started as he looked at the ground.
"I've been kinda...Lonely in my ship...Heh'..I can go in any point of time on any planet...And I can't find a single companion..."
"I'll go with you." Peanut said coming into the room.
"You will?" Streak said looking straight at Peanut.
"If you...Will let me..." Peanut said.
"Perfect!Now this machine is it!!!" Streak said as he pointed at a machine on his bed. 
"Cool." Peanut said.
"Yes! Now, This butto-"
The whole house shock and their was a big booming crashing sound.
"What the?" Peanut said as he was thrown to the ground.
Streak tried to keep his balance but fell anyway.
Streak got up,then ran out the door Peanut soon chasing after him.
A huge UFO flew over the city. It was huge, Had to be at least the size of a quarter of the earth!
Streak rubbed his head.
"No,No,NO!"

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Peanut, you know what happens when you go around pushing buttons...no, wait, that was Zach...

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^I lol'd. haha :p

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I lol'd too.
Now why did I see a resemblance in Deedee and Peanut here....

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Noice!

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I lol'd too.
Now why did I see a resemblance in Deedee and Peanut here....

...Thanks for the bad images....
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There is a Second update today!!!Keep checking!!!

Chapter 7

Peanut and Streak stared up at the ship flying over the world.
"No,No,NO!" Streak cried.
"What is It?" Peanut said as it's shadow covered them.
"It a piece of your past..."

Grape walked alone the sidewalk to her house from Max's. 
She dodged each puddle as if the were radioactive.
She yawned,excited to get back home for a fair nap...if she's lucky.
But for all she knew, she was lucky enough to go back in time and land right back where she needed.
EDS NOTE: Reads should probably read my other fan fic: Gone in 0.1 seconds.
She glanced up at the huge ship tower over the world...well...a quarter of the world.
She jumped not seeing it right in front of her face.
Streak and peanut heard a scream.
They ran toward her as fast as they can.
EDS NOTE:Streak is vveerryy fast.
As they were running they saw Grape come into view.
"Guys! Guys! You won't believe what's in the sky!!" Grape yelled.
"You think we didn't notice?!?" Streak replied.
They were only 10 feet apart when...
They all fell to the ground and closed their eyes.
There was a light, a bright light.
Then a long bang, Then quietness.

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oh, a cliffie
but it can't be bad, i mean everybody loves loud bangs!

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Chapter 8

Same white room, same alien race, same chains.
"Oh,You have got to be kidding me!" Grape said in the chains.
"Where are we?!?" Peanut said struggling.
"Oh, These guys?!?"Streak said.
"You know these aliens?" Grape said turning to Streak.
"Oh yeah! These guys are my friends!!" Streak said.
"Why are we chained up then?" Peanut said joining the conversation.
"Sacholamy!" Streak called.
"...What?" Peanut and Grape said together.
"It's an alien language." Streak whispered.
Two alien guards came.
"Sqtolakatchi!!" Streak yelled at them.
"Antoki-sewacli." The alien replied.
The Aliens went over to what looked like a control panel and pushed a button.
The chains were gone Grape and Peanut didn't even see them go.
"What's going on Streak?!?" Grape said as they all got up.
"They need my help." Streak said walking to the control panel.
Peanut grabbed Streaks hand and pulled him toward Grape and Peanut.
"Explain." Peanut demanded.
"Okay, This will take sometime.
A long time ago I was traveling, when I saw a help signal. I found the time and place. That time and place was at your universe when the aliens took you in the past remember Grape? When you saw the black clock?"Streak asked looking at Grape.
"Yes.Wait? What type of travel? our universe?!? What are you talking about?!"
Streak sighed before he started.
"Your universe is strange. Now..
The aliens beamed you up back then was because they were looking for me. When I tried to warp to your universe it was so messed up it took my form, I'm a shapeshifter by the way, and changed it into a kitten version of myself. I fell into your earth and was caught by the shelter people and was taking by the shelter. I meet an amazing kitten named Prin-"
"GRAPE."
"Er..Named Grape. Me and her were best friends, but she was taking by your mom-"
"We know all this." Peanut interrupted.
"I was talking to the fans..." Streak muttered.
"Who?" Grape asked.
"Ten years later, Aliens get trapped and can't get out so they call the smartest person they know, Me. They can't find me, so they take what they think is me, you, While I'm still in the shelter for twelve years I finally get out by your Mom.And know it's my job to save me and the aliens and let your universe rest.Were are going to time warp out of here."
"Forever?" Grape and Peanut asked.
"Yup... " Streak said looking down.
"What about Mom and Dad?!" Grape asked.
"They won't remember." Streak replied.
"Will we?" Peanut asked.
"Yup." Streak started.
"You need to get out, I'll get every thing normal. My friends will beam you down now.
There was a bright light. They were gone.

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"We know all this." Peanut interrupted.
"I was talking to the fans..." Streak muttered.
"Who?" Grape asked.

WOOHOO! Fourth-Wall-Breaking!

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Final chapter

Grape opened her eyes. She was on her bed.
She tried to put together what had happened.
Talking, Bright light, At home...
Streak most have warped them back home.
She looked around the room. It was her room.
She got up and went to her Mom.
"Hey Mom? Where's Streak?" She asked.
"Streak who?" Their mom replied.
Drat, Grape thought. The forgot just like Streak said.
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Peanut woke up on his bed.
"Aww..." He said as he got up and rubbed his head.
He suddenly remembered everything.
He ran to Streak's "room".
He saw Streak on the teleporter. 
"I came for you." Streak said smiling.
"...Right." Peanut said looking down.
"You still want to still go,right?" 
"Well...I was thinking, I should stay with Grape."
" *Ahem* Your right."
"I'm going to keep the teleporter with me, so you can come back!" Peanut said waging his tail.
"The teleporting will shutdown after the first warp."
"Oh..."
"I got to go.Maybe someone will put me in a story. " He said as he winked at us.
"Bye." Peanut said as Streak disappeared.

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You know, Hopper? I think you just gave me the inspiration for a special episode... I PMed you about it. Lemmeknow! ;)

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You know, Hopper? I think you just gave me the inspiration for a special episode... I PMed you about it. Lemmeknow! ;)


Great. Something more for me to translate. T-T

After Valerio's other 'fics, anyway. :D

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you know I enjoy torturing you :mrgreen:

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you know I enjoy torturing you :mrgreen:

I think I might be a masochist. :shock:

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How did you guys like the story?
Please tell me the ups and downs. :D

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Post Re: An old Friend.
the ups: originality is NOT a missing item, here
The downs: given the amount of themes you put in your ficcies, they are way too short...but this comes from my writing habits. Plus, there is the fact that you use themes I am not used to see for Housepets! but hey, it's your ship as someone said once :mrgreen:
If I could recuperate an interesting theme you wrote, it would be the amnesia. Now, THAT was intriguing idea and I'd gladly write it myself..without the aliens abduction, that is.

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