Gone in 0.1 seconds Fanfic.

[Hopper200456]

genius indeed.
Care to share your knowledge with us puny mortals?

NOT puny.
Anyway.
666 Is said to be an Cursed Number.

[fenning]

"6-6-6, the number of the BEAST! Heck (Not really that in the song) and fire, were going to be released!!!"
-Iron Maiden
Yeah, it's the number of satan in the Christian world, and it's 2nd in unluckiness only to 13 for everyone else.

And by the way, ME AM STOOPID. I ain't no genius, I was just jokin'. hehe...

[valerio]

OK
thanks

[Hopper200456]

CHAPTER 11

Grape opened her eyes she was in the same white room as her dream. She must have fallen to sleep when she entered the…Thing.
“Grape.” Peanut’s voice said.
She looked around but all she saw was a couple of steel looking bars to keep her in the small cell.
“Peanut?” She called.
“Im here.” He said.
“WHERE?!?!” Grape said panicking.
“Here.” He voice said behind her as his arms went across her.
“Don’t alert the guards.” Peanut said softy holding her tightly.
“There is a hole in the ceiling. You can fit through it if I lift you up to it. “ Peanut explained.
“Okay…there isn’t a hole.”
“It doesn’t look like it but, there is one. “
He lifted her up into the hole. Everything was white.
“How far should I go?” Grape asked.
“Just in till’ you she the command deck in an other hole.”
She crawled through the hole.
“I-I found it.” Grape said.
“Okay. You will need to be fast. How many are in there?” Peanut asked.
“Three.”
“Perfect, I will distract them you need to go into the controls and push the Red-ish blue-ish button with the clock on it.”
“Okay, Ready.” Grape said worrying.
She heard some noise and one of the alien things came over and she heard a slam. She gasped.
“ome I o heyolp ney sefrehd u twom.” It said.
The other two went to help.
She slid down the hole. Walked over the the controls and push the button Peanut was talking about.
“Now run!” Peanut yelled.
She turned around to see Peanut being beat up.
The aliens scattered.
“Get out or you will be stuck ahead of time or in the past.” Peanut said catching his breath.
“We better go then.” Grape said.
“No, No… I’m to weak…”
“What?!?!”
Before she knew it he closed his eyes and disappeared.
She heard his voice one last time.
“You will have to be lucky to warp to your currant time.”
The was a huge light.

[Tiggy]

First, blue-ish red-ish ? What color is that?

Second; PEANUT! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

[Hopper200456]

First, blue-ish red-ish ? What color is that?

Its Peanut who said it.

[valerio]

great!
Timewarps too?
Time for my aspirin.

[Hopper200456]

great!
Timewarps too?
Time for my aspirin.

Do you sell that at the creepy store?

[fenning]

MAH BRAINZ! This story has a TIMEWARP thang too!?

Good job, once again!

[valerio]

great!
Timewarps too?
Time for my aspirin.

Do you sell that at the creepy store?

Made with the purest sulphuric acid. They make the headache go away...and the head as well.

[Hopper200456]

LAST CHAPTER

Grape opened her eyes.
She was on the grass of there front yard.
She rubbed her eyes and yawned.
“Wow…” Peanut said sitting next to her.
“Did you see that?!?!” Peanut said wagging his tail.
“Whats up?” Grape said yawning again.
“I almost got hit by an car!” Peanut said.
Grape’s eyes widened.
“What day is it?” Grape asked.
“Tuesday.”
It all pieced together for Grape.
She got so lucky the aliens had set the time to go back to the day when Peanut got hit.
But, this time he jumped out of the way.
Grape smiled.
“Well, lets continue playing.” She said.
Peanut smiled back a tagged her.
“Your it!”
THE END

[fenning]

JAW DROP!!!

What an original, surprising, and all in all GREAT ending!!!

Very good conclusion! I Likea very much! Isa Very nicea! Cyber-five!!!

[Hopper200456]

*Hits cyber 5*
Keep looking for a fan-fic I am thinking up!
Called: An Old Friend.

[fenning]

What is it gonna be about? Can you give us a hint???

I would LUV to know!!!

[valerio]

heh. Time warp CAN be useful, I see!
This ficcie was an...intense experience, must admit it.
Let's see what else are you cooking, Hopper!

[Hopper200456]

Well...
I will give you a hint.
If you promise not to use the idea.

[fenning]

Don't worry. I don't think I am that evil, so I won't steal!

[Hopper200456]

(White text for the poeple who don't want to know. )
Its about a friend that grape had when she was little.

[Dr. Prower]

So this one's done, and we're off to the next one?

[fenning]

Hmmm, interesting!

[Hopper200456]

So this one's done, and we're off to the next one?

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[Hopper200456]

Im nice.Im cool.
I finished the Intro for YOU guys