Gone in 0.1 seconds Fanfic.

Barkeron · Post by **Barkeron** » Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:25 am

I likely this one. Hahaha.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:52 pm

ARG!!
My Mom made a suprize trip to a place that I can't say.
Its cool and all... But I won't be able to update that often today.
And guess what! My Mom also signed me up for some work tomorrow!!
But wait, This is a good thing, I will have the money to buy an iTouch!

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:53 pm

Both Noooes! and Yay-sies! :3 Have fun :>

Macsen · Post by **Macsen** » Fri Jul 16, 2010 3:26 pm

Hopper200456 wrote:I did! Im working on getting an Ipod Touch
Then I can work on the chapters on the go!!

If you haven't gotten it yet, I say wait for the next iPod touch, which will be based on the iPhone 4. Ought to be out this fall, definitely by Christmas.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Fri Jul 16, 2010 9:18 pm

Here, More suprize trips...Sorry everybody...
I will try to get more of the story done next week.
So sorry!

CHAPTER 7

Grape smoothed her blood red dress as she stood up from her throne. She walked up the three black Monsters.
Two had Peanut held down on the floor, the other had a spear up to his neck . Grape felt a tear go down her cheek as she said these words:
“Execute him.” She said trying to stop her self.
“GAH!” Peanut screamed as the beasts plunged the spear through his neck . Grape felt the tears fall down her face rapidly, but she kept her stern face. She couldn’t stop her self from looking at this dog die. She wanted to look away but she couldn’t.
A black beast walked up to Grape.
“won iz de moss tan?” It said as the tears fell down her face.
“Yes, Go for him. The REAL dog…Go…NOW!”

fenning · Post by **fenning** » Fri Jul 16, 2010 10:13 pm

"MMMMHHHHWWWWAAA!!!!"
-Doctor Farnsworth, Futurama

THAT ^ is my response to the last part! I wonder how this shall resolve itself!

Very nice! Keep writing!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:01 am

........
sine commentaria

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:25 am

Kitch wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:I did! Im working on getting an Ipod Touch
Then I can work on the chapters on the go!!
If you haven't gotten it yet, I say wait for the next iPod touch, which will be based on the iPhone 4. Ought to be out this fall, definitely by Christmas.

I was getting a 2nd gen. used so it would be cheap. Thanks for trying to help though.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:43 am

valerio wrote:........
sine commentaria

Iz needz helpz..

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:07 am

Hopper200456 wrote:
valerio wrote:........
sine commentaria
Iz needz helpz..

latin for 'no comments'
I dare say not ANYTHING until you reveal us more. This sudden change of scenery with such a...situation...
Sine commentaria.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 11:33 am

Here you all go!
Have fun!

CHAPTER 8

Grape opened her eyes to find her self lying on the couch.
She yawned as she saw Peanut playing the Wii.(He found out how to do it.)
“Your awake.” Peanut said looking at her.
“Hey, Puppy. Hows it going?” She said sitting up on the couch.
“Not too bad.”
Grape leaned her head toward Peanut’s shoulder. Peanut started Blushing, but liked it.
“I miss the old you,” Grape said lifting her head to see eye to eye with Peanut.
“…But, I could get used to the new one.” She said as she pressed her lips against Peanut’s.
Peanut thought to himself: “Score!”
Suddenly, Peanut jumped of the couch over the coffee table and landing on his feet on the floor.
“Nice Jump, Pup.” Grape said.
”I-I-I Remember.”
Grape’s eyes widened.
“Everything?!?!” She asked with excitement.
“No…But bits and pieces.” He replied
“Well…That’s still good.” Grape said.
“Oww...” Peanut said rubbing his neck..
“Whats wrong?” She asked
“My necks been hurting ever since you got up. “
Grape felt a tear go down her check.

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 11:35 am

O.M.G!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 11:46 am

ooooo, KISSY!
I approve of it!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:19 pm

I had a Grape flavored shaved ice today!
Just thought Id let you know!

The Game · Post by **The Game** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:01 pm

I love it!
and you get a hi-5 for being a GrapeNUt fan!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:50 pm

The Game wrote:I love it!
and you get a hi-5 for being a GrapeNUt fan!

100% BABY!
*Hits hi-5!*

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 6:52 pm

Are you guys bored with me?
I swear! The Itouch is in the mail!

fenning · Post by **fenning** » Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:55 pm

I LUV the GrapeNut fanservice, and the story is pretty cool, so no, I amn't bored witcha. Yet.

haha, Jk. Me likey!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:09 am

I am not bored.
I am waiting for update
as always
ready to enjoy it
waiting
patiently...

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:13 am

Did anyone get the neck hurting thing?

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:21 am

Hopper200456 wrote:Did anyone get the neck hurting thing?

I know it's something happened in Grape's dream.
Other than that, no. Sorry.

PS - are you the same Hopper who intervenes in the comic's comment box?

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:36 am

valerio wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:Did anyone get the neck hurting thing?
I know it's something happened in Grape's dream.
Other than that, no. Sorry.

PS - are you the same Hopper who intervenes in the comic's comment box?

Thats me!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:39 am

Yayz!
Grapenut fans are never enough!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:42 am

Grape+Peanut= AWESOMENESS!!!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:56 am

CHAPTER 9 (Wow, 9 already?!)

Peanut laid in his bed resting his head.
“Arg...” He wined not being able to move his neck with out it hurting.
He wanted grape to come in and talk to him, Or lay on his bed, Or snuggle, Or something like that.
But she left to go see some one named: Tarot.
Who ever that was…
----------------------Tarot’s house.---------------
“What do you mean?!?!” Grape yelled.
“In order to return Peanut’s memory you will have to travel in universes not even I know about!” Tarot replied
“AND HOW ON EARTH DO I DO THAT?!?!”
“Don’t ask me.” Tarot said getting out some cards with clocks on them.
Grape tried to calm her self.
“Okay.” Grape said with a sigh
Tarot laid some cards down.
“Pick one.” Tarot said as she closed her eyes and put her hand up to her ears.
“What are you-Nevermind, I don’t want to know…” Grape said.
She reached out and picked up a card and flipped it over.
It had a black clock pointing at the twelve.
“Whats this mean?” Grape said raising an eyebrow.
Tarot’s eyes widened.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:04 pm

oh-HO! When Tarot's on the line, things are gonna getting interesting!

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:06 pm

Creepy cards! GO GET EM VALERIO!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:31 pm

*pounces against creepy cards, scatters them*
Oooo, lookit! There's the bony lady with the schythe! Mmmm, bones... *crunches*

PS - LOVE your avvie! CUTIEEE!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 2:56 pm

valerio wrote:*pounces against creepy cards, scatters them*
Oooo, lookit! There's the bony lady with the schythe! Mmmm, bones... *crunches*

PS - LOVE your avvie! CUTIEEE!

Hey! Wha!
Those were coming into play!
Now I have to go buy more from the creepy store. >:I

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:01 pm

then come to MY creepy store!
full assortment of fears, delusions, broken hearts, bed monsters, hatchets...
Special SOS discount: 50% off essence of evil, with a blend of Tobee's raw fear

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:17 pm

Ooooo....
I think I will buy three sets of creepy cards and 5 bed monsters..
For my sisters. >:D

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:32 pm

Cooki plz? =3

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:21 pm

Awww! For such a CUTIE customer, I'll give a FREE box of chocolate chip cookies.
Plus, I'll throw in the box the parts of the latest girl scout who tried to sell them cookies to me.
Bon appetit!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:26 pm

Hopper200456 wrote:Ooooo....
I think I will buy three sets of creepy cards and 5 bed monsters..
For my sisters. >:D

Three sets of creepy cards...
5 bed monsters...
And since we're on a sale, dear customer, you might want to get this nice set of tiny coffins -to give them sisters a nice, classy burial instead of hiding the leftovers in the garden.
Have a nice day!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:03 pm

Tobee wrote:Cooki plz? =3

Your avi earns a cookie.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:33 pm

CHAPTER 10 (YAY! Anniversary!)

Tarot pushed Grape out the door.
“What-Why are yo-“ Grape started
“Sorry, Sorry, Sorry! That card was a game card. A very big mistake!And I need to go soon,BYE!”
“Well what do-“
*SLAM!*
“Hmm…” Grape said frowning.
It was already dark and raining.
Grape sighed As she walked away.
She dodged all the puddles as she walked.
She didn’t seem to mind the rain, she had some deep dark thoughts.
She reached out and grabbed the door knob of the sandwich house.
“Mom! Im home!” Grape called.
“do you know where Peanut is?” She finished.
“He just went out side in the rain.” Her Mom said making dinner.
“He was looking kind of down, Maybe you can cheer him up?”
“Uh, Sure.” Grape said walking back outside.”
She walked around the house and couldn’t see him anywhere.
She sighed.
“PEANUT?” She called.
“Peanut?!?!”
“Pea-“
She stopped to notice she was an inch off the ground.
There was an shaft of light around her.
It pulled her up very slow but at the same time fast.
She rose, and Rose,and-

-----------
Is that the right rose. :S

fenning · Post by **fenning** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:37 pm

It is the right rose, hippity hop! (I think...)

ME LIKEY!!! Lets see what this story has:
Grapenut (YES)
Tarot
Amnesiac Peanut
Satan rooms (666)
Plastic balls
creepy cards
the sandwich family
glowing white shafts of light

This has EVERYTHING in it!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:09 pm

fenning wrote:It is the right rose, hippity hop! (I think...)

ME LIKEY!!! Lets see what this story has:
Grapenut (YES)
Tarot
Amnesiac Peanut
Satan rooms (666)
Plastic balls
creepy cards
the sandwich family
glowing white shafts of light

This has EVERYTHING in it!

You got the 666!!!

fenning · Post by **fenning** » Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:13 pm

Yeah, well y'know. Imma genius!

hehe, JK!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:44 am

genius indeed.
Care to share your knowledge with us puny mortals?