Gone in 0.1 seconds Fanfic.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Jul 10, 2010 5:01 pm

Well.. Its very short!But something!Eat all you want Val.

Chapter 3

Grape woke up on her bed.
“Oh, Good your awake.” Peanut said as he came into her room and sat on her bed.
“Sorry, I hit you.”
“Its okay…Uh, Could I have some alone time… I don’t feel very well..” Grape lied.
“Sure. Hope you feel better.” Peanut said as he left.
Grape sat on her Bed. After Peanut was gone.
She ran to the computer in the other room. Very fast she typed :
Impos. 5032 Matches. Grapes eye got huge.
“Great..” She muttered. The first words that came up were:
Impossible, Impos-Home And other random stuff. She sighed and rubbed her eyes.
“How about Imposter?” Said a voice from behind.
Grape jump when she heard it. She looked behind her to see Peanut smiling.
“Oh,Uh..Hi! Pe-Peanut..” Grape Said.
“Hmm…I think someone is thinking that Im not Peanut..” Peanut said.
“Wh-What Are y-you Talking about, Peanut.?”
“Someonem is RIGHT.” Peanut said as his legs and arms became tentacles and his head the skull. He was one of them.
Grape screamed as loud as she sould. The monster Used one of his tentacles to grab Grape around the neck Pulling her through the door.
“ACK!” Grape screamed as she was being pulled through the kitchen and out side. Ms./Mr. Sandwich were screaming keeping their distance.
“K-K-HE-K-LP!” Grape tried to say.
A huge UFO appeared from the sky just like in the movies.
Then, Also like in the movies beamed the up into the ship.
The ship’s room was huge! The air must have been poisoned or something because right when sh ebreathed it she fell into a deep sleep…
CHAPTER 3 END

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sat Jul 10, 2010 5:02 pm

WAT ?! ALIENS! O_0

Alex · Post by **Alex** » Sat Jul 10, 2010 5:04 pm

O_O Aliens... Aliens kidnapped Grape and Peanut has amnesia.... Well, this is great

I hope there will be more updates when I wake up.

EDIT: Also, you could update the OP, too, ya know

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sat Jul 10, 2010 5:06 pm

I found it easier to check if I make a new post.

The Game · Post by **The Game** » Sat Jul 10, 2010 5:41 pm

I really like this, it seems waaay interesting!
...
man, now I know how you guys feel when I don't update

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:39 am

ow.
My head.
All of a sudden, this story looks like a Bolt's spin-off...

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 2:08 am

valerio wrote: All of a sudden, this story looks like a Bolt's spin-off...

Its okay. It gets better, and more...Confusing..
BOLT?!?!

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 2:12 am

yup. You know, the movie's final scene, when Penny gets all of sudden kidnapped by...aliens!

S.P.J.H · Post by **S.P.J.H** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:11 am

Uuummmmm Yaaaaaa... I Like This

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:52 am

S.P.J.H wrote: Uuummmmm Yaaaaaa... I Like This

*Gives cookie*

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:54 am

Hey,Hey! Its short But, That seems to be a pattern.
Enjoy!

CHAPTER 4
Grape woke up chained to the floor. She looked around but it didn’t do any good, Her vision was too blurry. But she could tell she was in the same white room she had in her dream.
“Urg..” Grape moaned…
“…Grape?” a familiar voice
Grape turned her head and smiled as she stared into Peanut’s eyes.
He was chained up also.
“Are you okay?” Peanut politely asked.
“Yep, Fine thank you.” A voice from Grape’s left said.
Grape swung her head to the other side to see exactly who she didn’t want to see…Bino chained up also.
“How did-“ Grape started.
“He got in the way of the Alien Monster things..” Peanut said.
“Well…Why are you here?!?” Grape asked.
“They were trying to take over the world, And needed my body as a tool.” Peanut answered
“Does that mean, You remember everything and that was just a plan made by the Aliens?” Grape excitedly asked.
Peanut looked down.
“No, That wasn’t the Aliens. I still have amnesia.” Peanut sadly said.
“Uh, Hate to break up the chat but, I getting out.” Bino interrupted.
He had his tag and was using it to un screw the screws connecting the chains. Moments later they all were unchained.
“Okay.What way?” Bino asked.
“Oh, Oops! I forgot my map.” Grape sarcastically said facing Bino.”
“Look a hatch!” Peanut yelled as they ran toward it. The hatch was completely Black and was surprisingly, no one saw it up to this point.
“We have to open it!” Peanut said with confidence.
“What if their in there!” Bino and Grape said together.
“It’s a chance we will have to take!” Peanut said heroically
Peanut slid the hatch over seeing another white room.
He jumped in as the others followed him. Once they all got in they all noticed where they were, In the control room. This room was a round shape with a huge glass window showing earth in space.
But why would they leave it all empty with no one guarding?
Well… They didn’t. Tons and tons of Monster/Alien things were around them.
One grabbed Peanut by his neck and said something in a different language. After that he pulled Peanut up choking him.
Grape and Bino were stunned at this sight but still gasped, and before they could do anything tentacles swung around them making it hard move. VERY Hard.
Peanut was choking hard and loud giving him only seconds to live.
CHAPTER 4 END

Sorry for the bad spelling and grammar...

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:55 am

valerio wrote:yup. You know, the movie's final scene, when Penny gets all of sudden kidnapped by...aliens!

I know...I hope its not TO like that...

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:58 am

Don't worry about spelling etc. It's understandable :3

Also, IF PEANUT DIES, IM GONNA HUNT DOWN THOSE ALIENS.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:01 am

Tobee wrote:Don't worry about spelling etc. It's understandable :3

Also, IF PEANUT DIES, IM GONNA HUNT DOWN THOSE ALIENS.

I agree with Tobee. *sets Quantic Disintegrator ready*
Also, I will go all sooooo creepy on you, Hop!

Alex · Post by **Alex** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:11 am

I'm just wondering those Peanut and Bino are the real Peanut and Bino....

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:12 am

Alex wrote:I'm just wondering those Peanut and Bino are the real Peanut and Bino....

TU-TUUNNN!!!

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:16 am

Click the button.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:19 am

*applause*

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:25 pm

Now that I think about it...

If Peanut is still amnesiac, it means he was kidnapped and replaced while he was at home.
Soo...the 'Peanut' who started having feelings for Grape was the real one or the the Impostor?
Because in the second case, we'd have someone who'd help Grape and the others escape...
Hmmm...

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:44 pm

valerio wrote:Now that I think about it...

If Peanut is still amnesiac, it means he was kidnapped and replaced while he was at home.
Soo...the 'Peanut' who started having feelings for Grape was the real one or the the Impostor?
Because in the second case, we'd have someone who'd help Grape and the others escape...
Hmmm...

Oh, Gee I don't know... ;D

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 1:34 pm

Going to be gone most off the day.
Sorry!

CHAPTER 5

Peanut was being held up above the ground. He had seconds to live when an alarm went off. All the aliens/Monsters ran and didn’t look back. Red lights were flashing all over the room. The Alien/Monster holding Peanut dropped him and the tentacles let go of Grape and Bino. All the Aliens/Monsters escaped up the hatch.
Once Peanut caught his breath, he tossed himself on Grape.
“Are you okay?” Grape Asked as she held him.
“Im, Im, Fine…” He replied.
Bino was trying to get up the hatch.
“Its no good… Were trapped in here…” Bino said.
“I wonder why they all left.” Grape said not listening to Bino.
“I think it an attack.” Peanut answered.
“How to you know?” Bino asked trying to be part of the group.
“FIVE MINUTES TILL’ DESTRUCTION.” An computerized voice said.
“That gives us a pretty good answer.” Grape said.
They held each other as they lived their last minutes.
“No, No…This can’t be happening!” Grape cried
The others just sat an watched her.
“This has to be some kind of nightmare!” Grape yelled once again.
“Nightmare.” Bino started. “A nightmare is a form of dream.”
“Correct.” Peanut said completely calm. “A dream is a succession of thoughts, images, sounds or emotions which the mindexperiences during sleep.” Peanut finished.
“The content and purpose of dreams are not fully understood, though they have been a topic of speculation and interest throughout recorded history.” Bino added.
“Grape started crying as the talked. She didn’t understand why they were so calm.
“FIVE SECONDS TILL’ DESTRUCTION.” The voice said again.
Peanut pressed his forehead against Grapes.
“And everyone has to wake up some time…” Peanut said as the last seconds went by. There was a huge sound a really bright light and the quietness..

CHAPTER 5 END

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 1:41 pm

...and then everyone wakes up in the shower?

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 1:43 pm

What will happen?!

Alex · Post by **Alex** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 1:48 pm

Oh, so it WAS all a dream, after all. Or maybe it wasn't. Either way, that Peanut isn't the real Peanut!

Dr. Prower · Post by **Dr. Prower** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 2:34 pm

Chapter two: Kinda hard to get her to like you if you knock her out lol.

Chapter three: Me thinks it's a dream.

All in all, good work there ^^

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:27 am

CHAPTER 6 1/2

Grape’s deep dark sleep made her twitch on her bed.
“GRA-APE!” Peanut yelled.
Grape jumped as he yelled.
“Ack, What do you want?” Grape moaned as she got up.
“Mom said I used to call you like that…”Peanut said as he looked down.
Grape felt like crying.
“Uh-Um…How is your head?” Peanut said as he felt her head and sat on her bed.
“Fine.” Grape said as she found out what was going on.
I must be back when the alien attacked me. She smacked Peanut, ten jumped on his bad when he fell off the bed.
“OOOWWWW!” Peanut cried
“Don’t try any tricks!” Grape yelled.
“What are you doing?!?!” Peanut screamed
“Grape realized that it was a dream..
“Oh, Sorry. Just getting a little playful…” Grape replied with a smile as she got off him.”
“Um, Okay…Well…See you later. I got to go…Do stuff… without any jumping on me…” Peanut said as he left the room.
-----------------Later.-------------
Grape was trying to sleep but Peanut was constantly but bugging her.
“Come on, Peach-“ Peanut whined.
“GRAPE!” Grape said as she rolled over on the couch.
“Ugh! Please play with me?!?!
“Ugh…go away and let me sleep.” Grape said without even opening her eyes.
“Aww…” Peanut said as he walked away.
Peanut sat on the floor. But he had an idea, an idea that he would enjoy, and would be harmless to Grape.
Once she was asleep he attacked a string to her tail and then to the coffee table next to her.
Harmless, and funny. He thought showing her his amazing tying work.
“Arg… I shouldn’t have drunk all that water…” Peanut said running to the back yard.. The doorbell rang, Their Mom,
Went to go get it coming from the kitchen setting down a pale of water on the coffee table.

END OF PART 1

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:31 am

hehe, back to some domestic cuteness.
I appreciate of it!

Alex · Post by **Alex** » Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:20 am

Even with amnesia he's bothering her while trying to sleep xD

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:21 am

valerio wrote:hehe, back to some domestic cuteness.
I appreciate of it!

I thought it fit the story better.

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:35 am

Well...Again Im going to be gone all day, Sorry!

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:36 am

Have fun!

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:59 pm

Tobee wrote:Have fun!

I did! Im working on getting an Ipod Touch
Then I can work on the chapters on the go!!

Barkeron · Post by **Barkeron** » Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:11 pm

Alex wrote:Even with amnesia he's bothering her while trying to sleep xD

This. ^.^

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:29 pm

Sorry I updated only once today!!!
Have to do some work tomorrow then I will be free all week!
Have a good one! ;D

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:40 pm

Uh,
I can't find my file sorry to be late...
Where did you all go! D:
Did you get bored with me??

Hopper200456 · Post by **Hopper200456** » Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:53 pm

Sorry for taking so long.

Well, Heres a small update...
If your all still there.

PART 2

Grape yawned. She crawled across the couch. Her tail yanked back as she tried to get up.
“Arg…” Grape said grabbing her tail about to pull on it. She thought it was stuck in the couch cochins.(This has happened before.) She pulled as hard as she could tipping the table over and the bucket over her head with all the water dumping on her head.
Peanut just then got back. He looked at the scene as Grape tried to put 2 and 2 together.
“PEANUT YOU JERK!!!” She yelled. Peanut gasped as he saw the dilemma. Their Mom came in stomping.
“And WHAT happened her!” She said looking at the table then and the pets.
“Peanut-“ Grape started.
“Its my fault!” Peanut responded to his mother.
Grape turned to look at him.
“I was being to rough and knocked the table over along with the water.” Peanut continued
Grape Gasped. His mom grabbed his hand and took him into the kitchen for a time out. Grape looked at him as their mom dragged him away. Peanut smiled at her.

Tiggy · Post by **Tiggy** » Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:54 pm

Lol :3

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:20 am

hmm, mischief...or the imposter strikes back..? Hmm...

fenning · Post by **fenning** » Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:47 am

Ahh, the terrible days of time-outs!

Dr. Prower · Post by **Dr. Prower** » Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:46 am

lol Timeout. That's kinda funny. Keep writing, I like reading this ^^