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ChewyChewy
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 Vanilla the Bully
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
heh, I take it this is based on your comment in the chat thread the other day. fun.
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Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:30 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Actually, no, it isn't, but thanks for reminding me of that.... 
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Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:33 pm |
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copper
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Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Huh, wonder what kind of power she received unwillingly...
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Thu Apr 11, 2013 7:48 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
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kavviyenta
Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:01 pm Posts: 269 Location: close to DC
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
The Chimera sure isn't subtle if Vanilla can openly explain about her cursed blessing.
First time for McGruff to appear. I was thinking you might have use a Captain Ersatz substitute like McGurdle from Honorable Intention's fic or when Rick use Alan and the Groundsquirrels.
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44R0NM10
Former Mod of the Aura
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
I'm enjoying this as per usual Chewy. Vanilla getting some sort of power in interesting, a great idea obviously. I'm unsure exactly what she'll do with it, but I think that's why I like Vanilla so much. Smart, yet unpredictable, but in that way where I always understand her reasoning afterwards due to your writing!
Sorry this took me awhile to read, but thanks for telling me about, I'm looking forward for more. ^^
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copper
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Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Hmm, I wonder when she goes overboard and the title begins to make more sense... As for Vanilla, seems she will need to repeat it a few more times at that! 
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Mon Apr 15, 2013 6:45 pm |
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
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Joined: Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:42 pm Posts: 20541 Location: an invisible, flying volcano over Virginia
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
I'm pretty sure this isn't the Chimera's doing, but something else. Seeing as how she kinda blew the Chimera away and he wasn't expecting it.
also, since I just read your first story with the Cakes, was that whole longest night thing the chimera's doing? or is there some other supernatural thing that caused that and this power?
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Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:05 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
That longest night was a parody of A Christmas Carol, nothing more, nothing less.
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Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:15 pm |
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
wrong. there weren't any ghosts (something less) and Vanilla, unlike Scrooge, woke up from her visions earlier than when she went in (something more). though I suppose those cancel each other out, so you may be right.
but still, good to know it doesn't have much bearing on the main story.
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Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:22 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Oh, hush now. EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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copper
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Well, that is a good thing! She at least managed to control the strength she has.... only question I have is if she will become corrupted by her own power or not.... even the righteous can succumb at times....
I wonder how Honey will react to the badge once she sees it, or her dad...
Nice new characters! Are they a once only appearance?
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
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copper
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Ouch, looks like Vanilla is getting too strong... sucks big time.... Nice Lord Of The Ring's reference there! I wonder what gave her that power if not the Chimera...
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
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kavviyenta
Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:01 pm Posts: 269 Location: close to DC
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
She only has super strength, now she's treated as if she's the juggernaut. 
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
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so now I'm thinking this is the chimera's doing, but he made her stronger than he intended. So now he's scared.
also, classing Twilight Zone reference in there.
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Sat May 04, 2013 8:38 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Which Twilight Zone reference? If I did make a reference it was purely an accident.EDIT: Forget it, I did it on purpose and totally forgot.  I am so embarrassed....
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
that's what everyone said in the episode with Anthony sending everyone to the cornfield in this episode
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Sat May 04, 2013 9:32 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
*facepalm* Okay...would you believe I totally forgot I put that in there?  Please ignore what I said above....
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Sat May 04, 2013 11:08 pm |
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
I would believe that.
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Sat May 04, 2013 11:27 pm |
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copper
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Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Well, she overreacted...
That chimera sure is a troublemaker. I hope she gives him a good punch in the face before he takes the power back.
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Actually, that's probably exactly what the chimera WANTS her to do....
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Sun May 05, 2013 10:32 am |
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copper
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
Oh please, the chimera screwed up more than likely and meant to give her emotional strength, but instead gave her physical strength. Now he is just covering. 
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
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as I said, something went wrong. The chimera is obviously scared of her. and let's not forget the only question is, did he make her stronger than he planned? did he give her the wrong kind of strength? did he do exactly as he planned, but didn't expect her to not be in control of it?
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Sun May 05, 2013 4:12 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
@copper: Are you writing this story or am I?  @Brent: Just going to have to wait and see.... 
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kavviyenta
Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:01 pm Posts: 269 Location: close to DC
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I imagine this version of the Chimera to look like this link only cuter? The thought of him/her/them cowering make this even funnier.
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Sun May 05, 2013 9:35 pm |
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ChewyChewy
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Not "cuter", but more cartoony--like Discord in My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
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Sun May 05, 2013 9:46 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
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Tue May 07, 2013 1:16 pm |
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kavviyenta
Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:01 pm Posts: 269 Location: close to DC
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
And that led to Honey having a layered dream experience.
Is the white rabbit Chimera's avatar? (Since they're not part of U&U, I assumed that can be allowed)
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Wed May 08, 2013 2:11 pm |
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ChewyChewy
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 No.  Not at all--Peter is more powerful than the chimera is. I tried to make that obvious--Peter wouldn't let the chimera do something. The chimera has no control over Peter.
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
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I actually forgot about Peter. I guess that's what he wanted, though. 
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Wed May 08, 2013 5:40 pm |
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copper
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
And so it ends... I wondered about Peter! So they are playing their own little game, eh? How fun! I hope that Brutus learned a thing or two as well... Honey and Vanilla hugging it out. Is there anything more precious than that? 
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Thu May 09, 2013 9:22 pm |
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ChewyChewy
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What makes you think it's a game? Who's "Brutus"?  Do you mean Bruno?  Glad you liked it!
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Thu May 09, 2013 9:29 pm |
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copper
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Yep, Bruno.... I keep wanting to call him Brutus! 
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Thu May 09, 2013 9:41 pm |
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ChewyChewy
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 Re: Vanilla the Bully
 If this were a comic I might have Honey and Vanilla imaginate Julius Caesar.... 
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Thu May 09, 2013 9:44 pm |
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copper
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Only if there is a Cassius too!
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