Contest! How tough is your watchdog?
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Re: Contest! How tough is your watchdog?
no, nothing else. I'm good with how it is now.
Re: Contest! How tough is your watchdog?
Made some corrections again. Had to get this right.
"Living is Hard Dying is Easy"
"The longer you stare into the abyss, the hard it is to find a reasons to turn back."
"The longer you stare into the abyss, the hard it is to find a reasons to turn back."
Re: Contest! How tough is your watchdog?
Final details added to Dasco’s personality, equipment, and background during his time in ‘dreamland’ that could be of use. Everything it set, let’s do this thing.valerio wrote:those of you who made corrections, warn me, I must copy and save the new CS on my HD.
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Re: Contest! How tough is your watchdog?
Made my final changes and corrections. Couldn't help, but fix things up more.
"Living is Hard Dying is Easy"
"The longer you stare into the abyss, the hard it is to find a reasons to turn back."
"The longer you stare into the abyss, the hard it is to find a reasons to turn back."
Re: Contest! How tough is your watchdog?
Edited CS for Natalie "Navy" Bean
she's a skilled negotiator, a very useful talent especially in a hostage crisis. Despite that, since it's not that kind of problem that (luckily) happens often, Navy is the occasional target of mockery for being a 'softie'. It doesn't help that her partner prefers reason over action and is still guilt-ridden.
Rice lives at home
she's a skilled negotiator, a very useful talent especially in a hostage crisis. Despite that, since it's not that kind of problem that (luckily) happens often, Navy is the occasional target of mockery for being a 'softie'. It doesn't help that her partner prefers reason over action and is still guilt-ridden.
Rice lives at home
Re: Contest! How tough is your watchdog?
FINAL EDIT
Dasco and Rusty have always been partners so to forge a strong team.
During the retiremente following the attack that mutilated Dasco's front teeth (not only his canines), both studied to develop informatic skills and get an edge in the intelligence dept. This, together, with their special clearances, makes them an even more formidable due, and quite competitive with Marcus.
thank you guys for participating.
Mods, this thread can be officially closed. I'll start working on the update.
Dasco and Rusty have always been partners so to forge a strong team.
During the retiremente following the attack that mutilated Dasco's front teeth (not only his canines), both studied to develop informatic skills and get an edge in the intelligence dept. This, together, with their special clearances, makes them an even more formidable due, and quite competitive with Marcus.
thank you guys for participating.
Mods, this thread can be officially closed. I'll start working on the update.