Apple and Sunbow
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Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
Great to see Apple got a limelight. Funny how the new neighborhood still have punny naming and pets wearing civilian clothings.
I wonder about the fate of the other dogs who bullied Vanilla.
I wonder about the fate of the other dogs who bullied Vanilla.
http://valito.deviantart.com/ my deviant gallery, nope there's no housepets in it
Unless you like Lilo & Stitch, kinda wish to see the experiments in housepets style
Unless you like Lilo & Stitch, kinda wish to see the experiments in housepets style
Re: Apple and Sunbow
this new start is really interesting! Can't wait to see how Apple will redeem herself.
Re: Apple and Sunbow
Such names! You are making me hungry here~
The clothing thing is off putting, but I can get used to it.
Well, this is an interesting story. I hope Apple becomes a good dog who can love herself
The clothing thing is off putting, but I can get used to it.
Well, this is an interesting story. I hope Apple becomes a good dog who can love herself
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
Re: Apple and Sunbow
Okay.
I remember wishing hard that karm came back and bite Apple with a vengeance...but wow, talk about fast service!
I remember wishing hard that karm came back and bite Apple with a vengeance...but wow, talk about fast service!
Re: Apple and Sunbow
Hmm, bad friends, bad dogs, and bad personalities all around! This might turn out to be a bit dark.
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:55 pm, edited 2 times in total.
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
Re: Apple and Sunbow
Seems things are about to get interesting here. Apple is going to turn from bully to hero by the end and find her redemption in the process!
This should be a good story
This should be a good story
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
Um...no. Apple has never been a bully. I thought I made that painfully clear....
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
Re: Apple and Sunbow
Well that could have gone better. At least Sunbow gave her a chance.
Maybe Apple will be better at conversations by the end of this. She needs a good confidence boost.
Maybe Apple will be better at conversations by the end of this. She needs a good confidence boost.
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
Lots of angst, but if her name indicate, she will become a new dog and the cycle won't end in betrayal again. Just a symbolism.
http://valito.deviantart.com/ my deviant gallery, nope there's no housepets in it
Unless you like Lilo & Stitch, kinda wish to see the experiments in housepets style
Unless you like Lilo & Stitch, kinda wish to see the experiments in housepets style
Re: Apple and Sunbow
Well, that's good! They can make each other strong now! Let us hope they stand up to bullying.
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
Re: Apple and Sunbow
Awww, well isn't that a sweet ending! I am glad they all made friends and Cherry got a reality check!
Also, Custard? Wow, what a feast they would have if they all brought their namesakes to a potluck!
Also, Custard? Wow, what a feast they would have if they all brought their namesakes to a potluck!
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
I'm glad you liked it--I wasn't sure on it....
PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
Re: Apple and Sunbow
DAWWWWWW!
Extramegadose of bravery and sweetness! Now, there's a good apple in the basket (sorry couldn't resist)
I loved especially her handwritten card, way too cute!
I surely hope them girls meet again, you can't leave us without such a special occasion! (Christmas is near, Christmas is near)
Extramegadose of bravery and sweetness! Now, there's a good apple in the basket (sorry couldn't resist)
I loved especially her handwritten card, way too cute!
I surely hope them girls meet again, you can't leave us without such a special occasion! (Christmas is near, Christmas is near)
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Re: Apple and Sunbow
An apple core would not be a good thing to bring to a potluck.copper wrote:what a feast they would have if they all brought their namesakes to a potluck!
good ending. loved Cherry getting caught and the paw written card.