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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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kavviyenta
Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:01 pm Posts: 269 Location: close to DC
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Great to see Apple got a limelight. Funny how the new neighborhood still have punny naming and pets wearing civilian clothings.
I wonder about the fate of the other dogs who bullied Vanilla.
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Sun Nov 04, 2012 12:11 pm |
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valerio
Game Master
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am Posts: 18896 Location: Italy
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
this new start is really interesting! Can't wait to see how Apple will redeem herself.
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Sun Nov 04, 2012 12:25 pm |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Such names! You are making me hungry here~ The clothing thing is off putting, but I can get used to it. Well, this is an interesting story. I hope Apple becomes a good dog who can love herself
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Mon Nov 05, 2012 1:37 am |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Thu Nov 08, 2012 2:15 pm |
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valerio
Game Master
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am Posts: 18896 Location: Italy
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Okay. I remember wishing hard that karm came back and bite Apple with a vengeance...but wow, talk about fast service!
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Thu Nov 08, 2012 2:28 pm |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Hmm, bad friends, bad dogs, and bad personalities all around! This might turn out to be a bit dark. 
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Fri Nov 09, 2012 9:38 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
_________________
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Mon Nov 12, 2012 10:33 am |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Seems things are about to get interesting here. Apple is going to turn from bully to hero by the end and find her redemption in the process! This should be a good story
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Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:28 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Um...no. Apple has never been a bully. I thought I made that painfully clear....
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:31 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Tue Nov 20, 2012 5:39 pm |
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valerio
Game Master
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am Posts: 18896 Location: Italy
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Awesome updates, as per standard! Also, your ficcies are making me hungry 
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Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:57 am |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Well that could have gone better. At least Sunbow gave her a chance. Maybe Apple will be better at conversations by the end of this. She needs a good confidence boost.
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Wed Nov 21, 2012 10:49 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
_________________
 PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Thu Nov 22, 2012 3:01 pm |
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valerio
Game Master
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am Posts: 18896 Location: Italy
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
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Thu Nov 22, 2012 3:30 pm |
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kavviyenta
Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:01 pm Posts: 269 Location: close to DC
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Lots of angst, but if her name indicate, she will become a new dog and the cycle won't end in betrayal again. Just a symbolism.
_________________ http://valito.deviantart.com/ my deviant gallery, nope there's no housepets in it
Unless you like Lilo & Stitch, kinda wish to see the experiments in housepets style
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Thu Nov 22, 2012 4:26 pm |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Well, that's good! They can make each other strong now! Let us hope they stand up to bullying.
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Mon Nov 26, 2012 11:08 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
_________________
 PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 10:04 am |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
Awww, well isn't that a sweet ending! I am glad they all made friends and Cherry got a reality check! Also, Custard? Wow, what a feast they would have if they all brought their namesakes to a potluck! 
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 10:28 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 10:42 pm |
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valerio
Game Master
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am Posts: 18896 Location: Italy
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
DAWWWWWW! Extramegadose of bravery and sweetness! Now, there's a good apple in the basket (sorry couldn't resist) I loved especially her handwritten card, way too cute! I surely hope them girls meet again, you can't leave us without such a special occasion! (Christmas is near, Christmas is near)
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
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Joined: Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:42 pm Posts: 20539 Location: an invisible, flying volcano over Virginia
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 Re: Apple and Sunbow
An apple core would not be a good thing to bring to a potluck. good ending. loved Cherry getting caught and the paw written card.
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