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Great to see Apple got a limelight. Funny how the new neighborhood still have punny naming and pets wearing civilian clothings.

I wonder about the fate of the other dogs who bullied Vanilla.

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this new start is really interesting! Can't wait to see how Apple will redeem herself.

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Such names! You are making me hungry here~ :roll:

The clothing thing is off putting, but I can get used to it.

Well, this is an interesting story. I hope Apple becomes a good dog who can love herself

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Post Re: Apple and Sunbow
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

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Thu Nov 08, 2012 2:15 pm
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Okay.
I remember wishing hard that karm came back and bite Apple with a vengeance...but wow, talk about fast service!

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Hmm, bad friends, bad dogs, and bad personalities all around! This might turn out to be a bit dark. :?

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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

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Seems things are about to get interesting here. Apple is going to turn from bully to hero by the end and find her redemption in the process! :roll:

This should be a good story

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Um...no. Apple has never been a bully. I thought I made that painfully clear....

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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

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Awesome updates, as per standard! :D
Also, your ficcies are making me hungry :mrgreen:

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Well that could have gone better. At least Sunbow gave her a chance. :?

Maybe Apple will be better at conversations by the end of this. She needs a good confidence boost.

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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

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yay for growing friendship! :D :D :D

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Lots of angst, but if her name indicate, she will become a new dog and the cycle won't end in betrayal again. Just a symbolism.

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Well, that's good! They can make each other strong now! Let us hope they stand up to bullying.

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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.

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Post Re: Apple and Sunbow
Awww, well isn't that a sweet ending! I am glad they all made friends and Cherry got a reality check!

Also, Custard? Wow, what a feast they would have if they all brought their namesakes to a potluck! :D

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I'm glad you liked it--I wasn't sure on it.... :oops:

:lol: :roll:

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DAWWWWWW!
Extramegadose of bravery and sweetness! Now, there's a good apple in the basket (sorry couldn't resist) :lol:
I loved especially her handwritten card, way too cute!
I surely hope them girls meet again, you can't leave us without such a special occasion! (Christmas is near, Christmas is near)

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Post Re: Apple and Sunbow
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what a feast they would have if they all brought their namesakes to a potluck! :D

An apple core would not be a good thing to bring to a potluck. :lol:

good ending. loved Cherry getting caught and the paw written card.

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