[Webcomic PG-13] Eyesight - Goodbye my little pretty rose

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I believe you meant they win a "prize" not a "price"
but I hope they win. ^_^
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I believe you meant they win a "prize" not a "price"
but I hope they win. ^_^
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I hope they win as well. Very unfortunate accidents need happiness beforehand to make the fall all that much emotional. ;)
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I live only to correct the mistakes of others. *bows*
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I live only to correct the mistakes of others. *bows*
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I wonder if they'll get in trouble for the art they did.
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I wonder what happened fr Eyesight to become a spyish person.
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come to think of it...do I smell Horus followers in that ice sculpture?
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3rd panel is to remind you, not to remember you.... too tired to think of other mistakes. :roll:

Nice, wonder how he escaped. Must have been quite a daring do...
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http://eyesight.thecomicseries.com/comics/10/

Maybe this one is a little over rating, so i'll just put the link... but i'll wait for mods to decide
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Thats really cool 8-) that now the entire eyesight comic so far is on a website like a normal webcomic. Also great page, Eyesight is really good at what he does.

You should put 1X on a different website like you did with this one, it would make it much easier to read quickly.
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musclecar326 wrote:Thats really cool 8-) that now the entire eyesight comic so far is on a website like a normal webcomic. Also great page, Eyesight is really good at what he does.

You should put 1X on a different website like you did with this one, it would make it much easier to read quickly.
I did it already :D in the 1X topic, 1st post, you can find links to the website and every information. Here it is btw https://www.housepets1x.thecomicseries.com/ ;)
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Eh, just a bit above rating. And by the by, the rules state you cannot link to above rating stuff either. :P

It is alright, really. Just showing the first shot puts it over.
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wow, talk about watching that eye should someone took care of asking him what was happening! :shock:
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Looks like it's one of the penguins of the aquarium.
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This has gotten interesting. (Well, not that it wasn't already, it got even more interesting)

Makes me want to know what happened in the time between the aquarium and now.
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Hmm, perhaps that was a future vision? And it could be the other bird is just psychic and reached into his mind to find the name Layna. Wonder what happened to her anyway.
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mmm, perhaps it's the kangaroo...
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why would he tell Heartbreak that he's a video game developer? Plus, he'd call him Eyesight, not Orda.
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With Red Rose, you can never know... :twisted:
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Or maybe it's Max.
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Interesting.
Either his killing eye worked only on living creatures, or he still had to acquire his power. Saying cuz all the time in the 1X series he used to keep his eye closed.
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First, "Do I Woke You Up" should be "Did I Wake You Up."

And now he's actually a video game developer. Wonder how he managed to get into a job like that.
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Sorry guys, i was totally in hurry this morning (or this night, time zones you know) and i was terribly busy till now... fixed everywhere, errors and other things i forgot
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JeffCvt wrote:And now he's actually a video game developer. Wonder how he managed to get into a job like that.
I'm pretty sure that is a cover story.
valerio wrote:Either his killing eye worked only on living creatures, or he still had to acquire his power. Saying cuz all the time in the 1X series he used to keep his eye closed.
I think he only covers it to keep it a secret. It doesn't kill unless he wants it to.
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I would assume he has power over that eye... I mean, who wants to be King Midas?

I wonder who he is having a cup of tea with... perhaps one of the former zoo penguins?
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Uh yeah, surprise! It's a long story but next week i've got something to upload, something "unexpected" to close before summer break, so surprise but-- ehm, update on friday!

And i decided in this comic to show Eyesight with a good number of different clothes. It's more interesting to draw in this conditions, and more varied to see.
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Now things will get juicier. With a bit of evil.
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You are evil Stu... giving us something big and then leaving for months. Oh well, this is a great comic!

I like the monologue. And the outfit. :D

You might want to look up the difference between "A" and "AN". :?
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O M G the "an" before a word that begins with "h" :( i'll fix it immediately
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_Stu_ wrote:O M G the "an" before a word that begins with "h" :( i'll fix it immediately
Actually, the rule goes by phonetic spelling. Some words that begin with "H" do need an "AN" instead of an "A". Like you say "an hour" or "an heir" because the H's are silent, and the phonetic spelling does not include them.
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http://eyesight.thecomicseries.com/comics/14/

Yo guyz! The 13 pages introduction is over, and i made an opening (don't judge me for quality, i know it's not that good) as a prelude for the true beginning of the story.

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that...
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AWESOME!!!

It's like a real opening to a TV show.
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brent spoke right. Awesome is the word.
have fun, relax and see you back in sept :D
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Thank you guys, it took sometime to make it xD i'm glad you like it!
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You leave after giving such an awesome opening. That makes me sad now.

Anyway, see you after your long break.
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