[Webcomic PG-13] Housepets! 1X

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Wed May 23, 2012 6:39 am

Good luck, Stu.
as for the comic I think primo is about to go fanboy after seeing a "super hero".

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Fri May 25, 2012 12:11 am

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Fri May 25, 2012 12:16 am

Captain Obvious feeling, part 1. Next one following

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I came back victorious from that exam! ....this morning i have another one more difficult. Ugh.

I had to anticipate today's page for this reason, gotta study, exam hour's and stuff. Not sure if i need to be sorry. But i guess not.

Even if i feel to be reiterative, wish me good luck, again

Fri May 25, 2012 12:21 am

good luck... and Spike's line should be "neither did I"

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Fri May 25, 2012 1:56 am

mhh... i can't fix right now, i'll do it when i'll come back home...

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Fri May 25, 2012 6:20 am

For some reason I did think primo was going to thinnk he was Matt again. But I thought that the voice in Spike's head being Matt would be strange.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Fri May 25, 2012 6:42 am

Primo, my boy...you just witnessed one dog in direct contact with an egyptian divinity to gain his power, you know your best friend used to be a human who now got superpowers himself... And you have a hard time accepting that Matt is living in Primo? Come ON!!

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Fri May 25, 2012 7:17 am

a second personality is never obvious u.u

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Mon May 28, 2012 1:35 am

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Mon May 28, 2012 1:37 am

I needed to justify this strip somehow, random mind guessing time then

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Mon May 28, 2012 8:15 am

Whgy do I have a feeling this looks alot like the Yukito/Yue relationship back in Sakura Card Captors.
But I agree that Primo would flip in joy and horror to discover Matt is inside of Spike.

copper · Post by **copper** » Mon May 28, 2012 9:37 pm

Interesting. Amazing how much alike they are. So is it an old mind body switch thing?

Well, let us hope Spike can keep the secret.

I still like the transformation. Very nice.

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Tue May 29, 2012 2:23 am

angelusbr wrote:Whgy do I have a feeling this looks alot like the Yukito/Yue relationship back in Sakura Card Captors.
But I agree that Primo would flip in joy and horror to discover Matt is inside of Spike.

Another anime i've heard of a lot but i've never seen

involuntary quotes everywhere

Btw, some accidentaly news
- I've changed the icon with a new angrier and evil one, because i'm frustrated for friday exam (and i wanted a cooler one i guess) u.u
- I'll probably continue with Chapter 8 after this one before summer stop... because it's small and humoristic. The only thing i can say is that Chapters 9 and 10 are plot HEAVY, for real. And they can't allow a humor chapter between them, just because they're really, really heavy.

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Tue May 29, 2012 6:17 am

I can't wait for chapters 9 and 10 then.

copper · Post by **copper** » Tue May 29, 2012 9:35 pm

Ooo, sounds fun! I cannot wait for the heavy ones....

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Wed May 30, 2012 2:00 am

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Wed May 30, 2012 2:01 am

Fido will be highly disappointed i suppose

Wed May 30, 2012 2:06 am

naughty naughty, Sabrina.
you can't waste time cuddling.

copper · Post by **copper** » Wed May 30, 2012 2:13 am

Silly Kitty, Tarot knows everything.

Well, tarot has a plan coming. And Pete and Horus will have things to talk about, I suppose.

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Wed May 30, 2012 8:13 am

Tarot doesn't like time wasted in cuddles.

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:00 am

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:00 am

It's just because Freelance Police is greatly cooler than State Police. And because Max is a rabbit.

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I've just heard of Valerio's idea about the 5th year card! It's great, and i'm honored to partecipate xD

The only thing i need to tell is that it may take sometime... for real life things.

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:10 am

Spike - Setting one's priorities straight

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:48 am

Loved the reference to sam and Max..

IceKitsune · Post by **IceKitsune** » Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:39 pm

You just reminded me that I need to finish Sam and Max: Hit the Road one of these days, I love Point and Click adventures but I suck at them and don't want to use a walkthrough.

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:20 pm

and i remembered to myself i still have to play season 3

hit the road was quite difficult compared to new telltale ones, like all lucasart's old style adventures... sometimes a walkthrough is required

copper · Post by **copper** » Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:45 pm

Nice, did not get the joke though.

And hopefully everyone will participate in some way for the card.... I hope anyway. Exclusion really hurts.

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:17 am

I suggest to play it if you didn't, it one of the best adventures i've ever played (Hit the Road, but imo Season 1 and 2 are much better with humor, voice acting and general setting).

There's also an animated series... but it's not so good as the games. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVoSylY5M_4

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:56 am

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:58 am

What consequences? I'll never tell you

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I'm not so sure of this translation... please tell me about any error and sort of

valerio · Post by **valerio** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:16 am

Horus is EFFING cute! And primo's reaction matches perfectly that cuteness!

Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:32 am

oh good, you know this translation wasn't your best work.
time to correct.

panel 2: "mortals whose" should be "mortals who" (possibly "whom" I'm not sure)

panel 3: I'd say "can I pet him or would I get burned?"
I'd also say "give a god some respect"

panel 4: I'd think it should be "as long as I keep the secret of Horus
then "on comprehend the nature of this power" should probably be "in comprehending..."

panel 5: probably don't need the "with no reason" because the next bubble says that none of them no why he's here. those are pretty much the same thing.
also, you could probably drop the "for some reason" in that second part.

panel 6: it's spelled "explanations"
second paragraph, I'd word it as "I've resided in Fido's soul for several months, but I've been weak. almost as if unconscious."

panel 7: second sentence should start "would he"
second paragraph "I needed to test him"

panel 8: "Who is the mortal soul you care about most in this world?"
then "It seems I couldn't have made a better choice. The answer was as honest as it was quick, and without hesitation"

now I must say that I love panel 3. "please, orange mortal..."

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 3:07 am

I was waiting for you Brent

And i knew that i made a lot of mistakes here but i never thought about THIS

fixed!

Mon Jun 04, 2012 3:11 am

much better. I'll always be here to correct your sloppy work XP

angelusbr · Post by **angelusbr** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:56 am

I just loved Primo's reaction to the cute flame.

copper · Post by **copper** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:35 pm

A very cute Flame.... reminds me of Mr. Howl's Floating Castle, the anime movie.... the flame demon?

*shrugs* Stupid work, making me miss all the correcting...

Very mysterious. So the power of Horus was activated by Pete's energy, eh? Very interesting...

Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:19 pm

copper wrote:A very cute Flame.... reminds me of Mr. Howl's Floating Castle, the anime movie.... the flame demon?

Calcifer

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:05 am

_Stu_ · Post by **_Stu_** » Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:05 am

I should produce some plush of him

Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:18 am

more corrections hooray. not nearly as many, though.
panel 1: I think it should say spirits. somehow in English, the negative is plural. (ie: 2 spirits, 1 spirit, no spirits)
alternately, you could just change the second bubble to say "not a magic one, at least."

panel 2: I'm pretty sure "some time ago" is supposed to be three words.
then Fido should ask "She has this power, too?" or "does she have this power, too?"
then it's "ask questions" not "make questions"

panel 3: it should be "get back" or "go back." "come back" is what one says to someone leaving.
then I'd say "good luck with everything"

panel 4: it should be "mortals lack respect" not "lacks"

I love the last panel. Primo and Horus make for good comic relief. I hope all the other spirits are this cute.