A Date with Fate

Now with new GALLERY

Moderators: Hagus, SeanWolf

Post Reply
User avatar
ChewyChewy
Posts: 5460
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm

A Date with Fate

Post by ChewyChewy »

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:43 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Image
PF chars

"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix

pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
User avatar
valerio
Posts: 19330
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am
Location: Italy
Contact:

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by valerio »

Ultra-awesome! 8-)
This episode's gonna ROCK
Image
User avatar
ChewyChewy
Posts: 5460
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by ChewyChewy »

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Image
PF chars

"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix

pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
User avatar
valerio
Posts: 19330
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am
Location: Italy
Contact:

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by valerio »

I love the fact that Honey gets to be all excited even if she wasn't picked up! :lol:
And now I can't help imagining Spencer's name pronounced a-la-francais: Gee-rò! 8-)
LOL, Vanilla would need Peanut's help to get all prepped up for DA DATE!
Image
User avatar
RandomGeekNamedBrent
laughing maniacally
Posts: 21032
Joined: Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:42 pm
Location: an invisible, flying volcano over Virginia

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by RandomGeekNamedBrent »

gotta say, it was obvious who'd get the date. I look forward to the rest of this.
Paradigm Shift by me
I do not actually believe any of what I'm saying.
RP character sheets
User avatar
ChewyChewy
Posts: 5460
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by ChewyChewy »

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Image
PF chars

"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix

pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
User avatar
valerio
Posts: 19330
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am
Location: Italy
Contact:

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by valerio »

D'aww! This was so sweet! it was time those two sorted things out.
Can't wait to see how Vanilla will outsmart Spencers!
Image
User avatar
ChewyChewy
Posts: 5460
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by ChewyChewy »

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Image
PF chars

"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix

pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
User avatar
valerio
Posts: 19330
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am
Location: Italy
Contact:

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by valerio »

the preparation was a riot!
the date's off for a great start! Can't wait to see Vanilla's reaction to typical Greek cuisine...
Image
User avatar
kavviyenta
Posts: 302
Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:01 pm
Location: close to DC
Contact:

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by kavviyenta »

Forgot Vanilla didn't sport the usual long eyelashes. Her attempt with Yogurt didn't go well so I wish for her well-being unless there's more to this Spencer pers-er dog. :)
http://valito.deviantart.com/ my deviant gallery, nope there's no housepets in it

Unless you like Lilo & Stitch, kinda wish to see the experiments in housepets style
User avatar
RandomGeekNamedBrent
laughing maniacally
Posts: 21032
Joined: Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:42 pm
Location: an invisible, flying volcano over Virginia

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by RandomGeekNamedBrent »

My prediction: they end up getting away from the cameras and it turns out that Spencer is putting on an act as much as Vanilla is. they end up actually talking and Vanilla grows to like the real him. But they can't be together, because he has to maintain his usual facade at all times.
Paradigm Shift by me
I do not actually believe any of what I'm saying.
RP character sheets
User avatar
ChewyChewy
Posts: 5460
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by ChewyChewy »

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Image
PF chars

"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix

pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
User avatar
valerio
Posts: 19330
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am
Location: Italy
Contact:

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by valerio »

Daww, poor Vanilla!
But of course this date is going awesome despite the clumsy moments. OK, I still have this lingering fear that Vanilla will end up cursing like an old sailor in front of the cameras, but mostly I just hope it will go all right.

Spaghetti reference, eh... :lol:
Image
User avatar
ChewyChewy
Posts: 5460
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by ChewyChewy »

EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Image
PF chars

"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix

pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
User avatar
kavviyenta
Posts: 302
Joined: Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:01 pm
Location: close to DC
Contact:

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by kavviyenta »

Didn't expect what Honey did to Spencer but that was a nice save I say. So Spencer seems to be like Vanilla except with a realistic viewpoint opposed to her cynicism.
http://valito.deviantart.com/ my deviant gallery, nope there's no housepets in it

Unless you like Lilo & Stitch, kinda wish to see the experiments in housepets style
User avatar
valerio
Posts: 19330
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am
Location: Italy
Contact:

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by valerio »

Meh.
Cute was cute, but... Dunno, left an aftertaste of unfinished. As if you wanted to rush the finale, this time.
Image
User avatar
copper
Puppy Wrangler
Posts: 6362
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm
Location: Florida

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by copper »

A nice story as always. Very cute and I loved the dinner conversation! :lol:

Can't wait for your next Cake story.
My characters
Everybody has a story to tell. What's yours?
Image
User avatar
ChewyChewy
Posts: 5460
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by ChewyChewy »

valerio wrote:Meh.
Cute was cute, but... Dunno, left an aftertaste of unfinished. As if you wanted to rush the finale, this time.
What exactly were you hoping for?

Also, kavviyenta, how do you figure that Spencer is realistic as opposed to Vanilla's cynicism?

But thanks for the compliments! :D
Image
PF chars

"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix

pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
User avatar
valerio
Posts: 19330
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am
Location: Italy
Contact:

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by valerio »

Where are the diabolical-obsessive fangirls ready to burn the competitor to Gyro's heart?
Was all of this part of a diabolical plan of Honey to humiliate Vanilla into hiding in a corner forever?
Wil Spencer fall on his knees and declare his true love for Vanilla?
Or will Spencer's first mate show up with the newborn pup, ready to exact vengeance on Vanilla for taking away her husband?!
The share will be enough to justify a second date?
Stay tuned!

'Mr. Valerio'
'Yes?'
*tapping foot* 'You forgot to take your prozac. Again?'
*tapping fingers* '..Yes?'
'Back in your room and stop pestering the authors. Marsch!'
'Aw'
Image
User avatar
ChewyChewy
Posts: 5460
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm

Re: A Date with Fate

Post by ChewyChewy »

valerio wrote:Where are the diabolical-obsessive fangirls ready to burn the competitor to Gyro's heart?
Was all of this part of a diabolical plan of Honey to humiliate Vanilla into hiding in a corner forever?
Wil Spencer fall on his knees and declare his true love for Vanilla?
Or will Spencer's first mate show up with the newborn pup, ready to exact vengeance on Vanilla for taking away her husband?!
The share will be enough to justify a second date?
Stay tuned!

'Mr. Valerio'
'Yes?'
*tapping foot* 'You forgot to take your prozac. Again?'
*tapping fingers* '..Yes?'
'Back in your room and stop pestering the authors. Marsch!'
'Aw'
I've already shown them and it would ruin the mood to do so again, besides which I don't like to write for obsessive fangirls and don't know much about it anyway.
No.
No.
No.
No.

I'm not as satisfied with it as I might be either, but those are not ways to improve it. The first is probably the closest to a good suggestion, but I don't really want to.
Image
PF chars

"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!"
"I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that."
--Phoenix

pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
Post Reply