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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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SQUEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The mythological and folklore references! I love it!
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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Another wonderful and light update. As always, your story proves fun but emotional.
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Love your writing style, and I'm loving this story! I can't wait to hear more!
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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Okay, this is getting more and more interesting! I wonder if they ALL will disappear?!
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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So the mystery continues, with a Holmesian flair at that! I like it.
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the plot thickens once more, it feels like Scooby Doo but better. :mrgreen:
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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Oh for... :roll:.

Awaiting the last chapter!
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EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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And so it ends. Quite the story. I hope this is not the last.

Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...
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copper wrote:And so it ends. Quite the story. I hope this is not the last.

Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...
Thanks, I hope that's a good thing. :) And I hope it isn't the last as well.

*nods* Well, we'll never know who the cat was....
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Wow, a true halloweenian adventure for the intrepid detectives, yay! :D :D :D :D
*Salutes* Congrats, CC, once again you didn't fail your faithful fandom! 8-)
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I enjoyed it. (also, am I the only one who reads Honey and vanilla with Starfire and Raven's voices from Teen Titans?)
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@valerio: Thanks for the compliment! :D

Brent: :lol: I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.
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ChewyChewy wrote:@valerio: Thanks for the compliment! :D

Brent: :lol: I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.
I didn't say she talked in the same mannerisms, just with the same voice.
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:I didn't say she talked in the same mannerisms, just with the same voice.
I figured, but it's kind of hard for me to imagine Starfire talking normally.... :roll:
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...Wow, I'm gonna be picturing Honey and Vanilla to talk like that from now on. Awesome.
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44R0NM10 wrote:...Wow, I'm gonna be picturing Honey and Vanilla to talk like that from now on. Awesome.
:lol: What did you think of the story overall?
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ever heard Princess Bubblegum on Adventure time? that's her.
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RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:ever heard Princess Bubblegum on Adventure time? that's her.
I hadn't, so I looked it up.

Mmmmmmmmm.... Still not entirely sure, but maybe.
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I loved the story as per usual, hehe. I've gotta admit, I forgot about Silver at first. Still, I really enjoyed it. A mystery in a mystery in a mystery :P

Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising. :D
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44R0NM10 wrote:I loved the story as per usual, hehe. I've gotta admit, I forgot about Silver at first. Still, I really enjoyed it. A mystery in a mystery in a mystery :P

Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising. :D
Glad you did. :) I'm not that great at writing mysteries, and was honestly solving this one myself.

Well, I'm glad you at least thought that was a good technique. I probably should have done it from multiple points of view. As I said, not great at writing mysteries.
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