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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
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Mon Oct 24, 2011 8:47 pm |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
SQUEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The mythological and folklore references! I love it!
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Mon Oct 24, 2011 9:13 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
_________________
 PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Tue Oct 25, 2011 12:18 am |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
Another wonderful and light update. As always, your story proves fun but emotional.
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Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:12 am |
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44R0NM10
Former Mod of the Aura
Joined: Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:52 pm Posts: 4011 Location: England
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
Love your writing style, and I'm loving this story! I can't wait to hear more!
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Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:21 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
_________________
 PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:35 pm |
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PhoenixAsper
Joined: Fri Mar 19, 2010 7:38 am Posts: 579
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
Okay, this is getting more and more interesting! I wonder if they ALL will disappear?!
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Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:45 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
_________________
 PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:01 am |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
So the mystery continues, with a Holmesian flair at that! I like it.
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Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:11 am |
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44R0NM10
Former Mod of the Aura
Joined: Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:52 pm Posts: 4011 Location: England
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
the plot thickens once more, it feels like Scooby Doo but better. 
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Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:08 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
_________________
 PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:29 pm |
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PhoenixAsper
Joined: Fri Mar 19, 2010 7:38 am Posts: 579
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
Oh for...  . Awaiting the last chapter!
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Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:34 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
EDIT: I'm deleting my Honey and Vanilla Cake stories both to cut ties with this forum completely and because I don't want their existence here to jeopardize possible publication of them in the future.
_________________
 PF chars
"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
Last edited by ChewyChewy on Tue Jan 12, 2016 11:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:11 pm |
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copper
Puppy Wrangler
Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
And so it ends. Quite the story. I hope this is not the last.
Vanilla had fun, she knows it. I just wonder who the cat was...
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:36 am |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
Thanks, I hope that's a good thing.  And I hope it isn't the last as well. *nods* Well, we'll never know who the cat was....
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:38 am |
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valerio
Game Master
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am Posts: 18897 Location: Italy
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 6:36 am |
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
laughing maniacally
Joined: Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:42 pm Posts: 20541 Location: an invisible, flying volcano over Virginia
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
I enjoyed it. (also, am I the only one who reads Honey and vanilla with Starfire and Raven's voices from Teen Titans?)
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 1:48 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
@valerio: Thanks for the compliment!  Brent:  I can maybe see Vanilla having Raven's voice, or a similar voice, but Honey doesn't talk like Starfire.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:18 pm |
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
laughing maniacally
Joined: Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:42 pm Posts: 20541 Location: an invisible, flying volcano over Virginia
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
I didn't say she talked in the same mannerisms, just with the same voice.
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:28 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
I figured, but it's kind of hard for me to imagine Starfire talking normally.... 
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:32 pm |
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44R0NM10
Former Mod of the Aura
Joined: Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:52 pm Posts: 4011 Location: England
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
...Wow, I'm gonna be picturing Honey and Vanilla to talk like that from now on. Awesome.
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:35 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
 What did you think of the story overall?
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:37 pm |
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RandomGeekNamedBrent
laughing maniacally
Joined: Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:42 pm Posts: 20541 Location: an invisible, flying volcano over Virginia
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
ever heard Princess Bubblegum on Adventure time? that's her.
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:38 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
I hadn't, so I looked it up. Mmmmmmmmm.... Still not entirely sure, but maybe.
_________________
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:41 pm |
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44R0NM10
Former Mod of the Aura
Joined: Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:52 pm Posts: 4011 Location: England
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
I loved the story as per usual, hehe. I've gotta admit, I forgot about Silver at first. Still, I really enjoyed it. A mystery in a mystery in a mystery Something that I think i have to mention though, it felt like we were following Vanilla as she solved the case. At least that's how I followed it. When Vanilla was hiding soemthing, that came as even more of a shock to me. I'm not sure if I liked that or not, but it was a good technique to making something even more surprising. 
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:48 pm |
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ChewyChewy
Joined: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:23 pm Posts: 5460
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 Re: Halloween Cakes
Glad you did.  I'm not that great at writing mysteries, and was honestly solving this one myself. Well, I'm glad you at least thought that was a good technique. I probably should have done it from multiple points of view. As I said, not great at writing mysteries.
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"We have to do this take again! HAL, do it with a LOT less emotion!" "I'm sorry Stan, I'm afraid I can't do that." --Phoenix
pair-o-dimes dot blogspot dot com
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:51 pm |
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