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despite it blatantly grapewell, it's beautiful. Love it! Hope it'll get posted here as well!
Thank you for advertising this, Sinder.
Thank you for advertising this, Sinder.
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It's okay. It has the ability to become great, but for now it's okay to pretty good. That's my two cents anyway.
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As long as it has elements of Grapenut, I'm okay with it. X3
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Someone has a strong grasp on writing skill. The composition of that was amazing.
DOH HO HO WELL THEN
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I lie it ad all, but t i rittled withslight gramtital errors, but goo wrk noe the lees
I was going to make a joke but then I did.
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hey cool, twiggy's helping out with it
I was going to make a joke but then I did.
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Heh. Look at that... I started an actual Housepets! fan-fic.
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Oooohhh! Good one! I was surprised to see me cameo in this one, though.
They said copper instead of copter!
Grape is one tough cookie.
They said copper instead of copter!
Grape is one tough cookie.
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Despite what it's supposed to mean, this made my day. ^^The Author wrote:I sprung to my feet and paint shot through my leg.
Paige Turner - The Stargazing Polyglot! - S4 P7 E6 C4 I10 A4 L7 (SP)
Will Turner - The Timid Survivor! - S5 P4 E8 C3 I6 A10 L6 (SP)
Timothy Cotton - The Overenthusiastic Soccer Star S6 P4 E8 C5 I5 A9 L5 (Zoo)
Will Turner - The Timid Survivor! - S5 P4 E8 C3 I6 A10 L6 (SP)
Timothy Cotton - The Overenthusiastic Soccer Star S6 P4 E8 C5 I5 A9 L5 (Zoo)
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Nice. What is up with king, though? That was just weird.
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Revenge on love? I'm failing to see the revenge. Good entry though
Hold still ~I'M PAINTING THE WORLD
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SIP. When is the next update coming? When you least expect it
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Latest Chapter from OrphiusOlyandra's Fanfic is up! X3
Language warning...not PG.
Chapter 6: http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d35nlwe
Language warning...not PG.
Chapter 6: http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d35nlwe
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Awesome update! I can't wait to see where King isgoing with this. There is just one thing that is bugging me, though: What is the writer talking about when he has King saying that Peanut is Tarot's avatar? I thought that Tarot was the avatar for the Spirit Dragon. And since when is Tarot Peanut's ex-girlfriend!?
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[quote="lightwolf21"]Latest Chapter from OrphiusOlyandra's Fanfic is up! X3
Chapter 7: http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d35zl67
Chapter 7: http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d35zl67
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Chapter 7.5: http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d366lmmlightwolf21 wrote:Latest Chapter from OrphiusOlyandra's Fanfic is up! X3
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What is with all the fat comments about Peanut?
Holy bageeze, this is grapenutty!
Holy bageeze, this is grapenutty!
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[Teal'c] Indeed... [/Teal'c]copper wrote:Holy bageeze, this is grapenutty!
But don't you just love it?
"I watch ponies now! Ponies are cool!"
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
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The Broken Fox wrote:[Teal'c] Indeed... [/Teal'c]copper wrote:Holy bageeze, this is grapenutty!
But don't you just love it?
Nice Stargate SG-1 refurence! *fist-bump*
But it being Grapenutty TO DA MAX is what's going to make me read it again.
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*asplode*Tha Housedog wrote:*fist-bump*
"I watch ponies now! Ponies are cool!"
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6
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NO! BAD DOGGIES! I ship king of hearts, but grapenut is always fun to read.The Broken Fox wrote:*asplode*Tha Housedog wrote:*fist-bump*
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Wait, what did we do?!copper wrote:NO! BAD DOGGIES! I ship king of hearts, but grapenut is always fun to read.The Broken Fox wrote:*asplode*Tha Housedog wrote:*fist-bump*
Also King of Hearts and Grapenut can happily coexist, can't they?
"I watch ponies now! Ponies are cool!"
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6
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since it appears I'm the only one noticing update, here it goes
Chapter 8 - http://orphiusolyandra.deviantart.com/#/d36o8fb
Chapter 8 - http://orphiusolyandra.deviantart.com/#/d36o8fb
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Well. Peanut sure did run the gambit of possible emotional reactions, didn't he?
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Chapter 9 is up!
http://orphiusolyandra.deviantart.com/#/d3791wf
http://orphiusolyandra.deviantart.com/#/d3791wf
"I watch ponies now! Ponies are cool!"
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6
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My only problem is that he said the picture was of Sabrina and Bino, instead of Sabrina and Fido. I doubt Bino would enjoy being fingered as a cat lover!
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Chapter 10 is up: http://orphiusolyandra.deviantart.com/#/d37r3kd
X3
X3
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My main problem with this chapter is that it looks like a dream sequence of sort.
1) this timeskip is useless. There could've been enough drama in a week's absence and give the other characters the time to interact in a most proper way
2) it's poorly managed: all of a sudden, everyone's reacting like 'oh, found a trace on Peanut we've been missing from one year? Yes dear Grape, since I don't have anyone else to loose, please get lost soon in NY with a PETA guy'
3) I'm still not getting King.
4) It's not conveying any emotions, while the previous chapters made for stronger empathic reactions. This chapte is...like lukewarm water.
So, it's meh!
1) this timeskip is useless. There could've been enough drama in a week's absence and give the other characters the time to interact in a most proper way
2) it's poorly managed: all of a sudden, everyone's reacting like 'oh, found a trace on Peanut we've been missing from one year? Yes dear Grape, since I don't have anyone else to loose, please get lost soon in NY with a PETA guy'
3) I'm still not getting King.
4) It's not conveying any emotions, while the previous chapters made for stronger empathic reactions. This chapte is...like lukewarm water.
So, it's meh!
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Yeah, I must agree with Valerio, it's like a completely different story now. And I almost didn't get that there was a skip at first.
"I watch ponies now! Ponies are cool!"
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Latest Chapter (13) is up: http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d39dtej
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A girl's night? That sounds like fun.
I really missed a few updates. This fic is pretty good.
I really missed a few updates. This fic is pretty good.
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I've actually really enjoyed this fic! Girl's night sounds like fun, and I hope King doesn't get in too much trouble... he's too awesome!
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Well it certainly was in the beginning, but ever since chapter 10 I've been having mixed feelings. It was such a big turn in mood and style that I still didn't recover. Since then events seem a little bit rushed too. And the author has also completely 'borrowed' the whole Res scene and even hung a lampshade on it. I dunno. I'll see where it's going, but I'm no longer so enthusiastic.copper wrote:I really missed a few updates. This fic is pretty good.
"I watch ponies now! Ponies are cool!"
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6
Darien Shephard - SP - S-4 P-9 E-3 C-8 I-10 A-2 L-6
Dusk Roscoe - YF - S-4 P-7 E-7 C-5 I-5 A-8 L-6
Roxanne Cooper - BPS - S-4 P-6 E-4 C-7 I-8 A-7 L-6