Housepets: A 'Simple' Date

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Great ending to the fic! :D
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Did anyone catch the hidden link here?
I could have sworn that it could run straight into This fic :roll:
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Tha Housedog wrote:Did anyone catch the hidden link here?
I could have sworn that it could run straight into This fic :roll:
Ooo, you sly doggie! :D
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Gah! I hit the quote button instead of the edit button! ARGH!
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ok, I loved this ending. Gotta say, Max got off badly, but it was still very well done. :D
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I can't believe it's over! But all stories must come to an end :)

My time reading this was well spend. Especially I likes that you both switched in writing during the story. It's something that I see rarely.

Ending was little short to me in my opinion. But overall, sotry was entertaining and it even had moments of tension.

Oh and btw Housedog... your other fanfic will take me some time to read it, but don't worry. I'll catch up ;)
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Karlos wrote:I can't believe it's over! But all stories must come to an end :)

My time reading this was well spend. Especially I likes that you both switched in writing during the story. It's something that I see rarely.

Ending was little short to me in my opinion. But overall, sotry was entertaining and it even had moments of tension.

Oh and btw Housedog... your other fanfic will take me some time to read it, but don't worry. I'll catch up ;)
:D Thanks. :3
I intended for the ending to take a little longer originally, maybe make this eleven chapters instead of ten...but when I started writing the tenth chapter, I felt like I could end it there without making it too short or leaving anything important out...and I succeeded, at least, in my own mind I did.
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Yes. You succeeded. Congratulations. Your story was awesome.
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copper wrote:Yes. You succeeded. Congratulations. Your story was awesome.
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Spargo wrote:
copper wrote:Yes. You succeeded. Congratulations. Your story was awesome.
This^
Yes, this story was pretty awesome.
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ctcmjh wrote:
Spargo wrote:
copper wrote:Yes. You succeeded. Congratulations. Your story was awesome.
This^
Yes, this story was pretty awesome.
Thank y'all! :D
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That was so cute!
And Max was really understanding. I though he was going to unleash his inner ninja on Peanut or something.
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The Game wrote:That was so cute!
And Max was really understanding. I though he was going to unleash his inner ninja on Peanut or something.
:lol: You have no idea how much I actually laughed at this.
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Great ending. Movie audience effects from Fiddler and Keys, lol.
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Awesome!!!
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*bows* Thank you.
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I should really reread this.
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