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Aarden
Joined: Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:47 pm Posts: 418 Location: Underground
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 Re: Housepets: A 'Simple' Date
Great ending to the fic! 
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Thu Dec 09, 2010 3:15 am |
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Tha Housefox
Ms. Sunshine
Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:48 pm Posts: 5857 Location: The nth plane
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Did anyone catch the hidden link here? I could have sworn that it could run straight into This fic 
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valerio
Game Master
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 6:53 am Posts: 18896 Location: Italy
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Ooo, you sly doggie! 
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Thu Dec 09, 2010 9:24 am |
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Tha Housefox
Ms. Sunshine
Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:48 pm Posts: 5857 Location: The nth plane
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Gah! I hit the quote button instead of the edit button! ARGH!
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Thu Dec 09, 2010 9:27 am |
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44R0NM10
Former Mod of the Aura
Joined: Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:52 pm Posts: 4011 Location: England
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ok, I loved this ending. Gotta say, Max got off badly, but it was still very well done. 
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Thu Dec 09, 2010 6:02 pm |
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Karl
Joined: Sun Sep 12, 2010 7:27 pm Posts: 1664 Location: Singing Fortepiano
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I can't believe it's over! But all stories must come to an end My time reading this was well spend. Especially I likes that you both switched in writing during the story. It's something that I see rarely. Ending was little short to me in my opinion. But overall, sotry was entertaining and it even had moments of tension. Oh and btw Housedog... your other fanfic will take me some time to read it, but don't worry. I'll catch up 
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 5:55 pm |
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Tha Housefox
Ms. Sunshine
Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:48 pm Posts: 5857 Location: The nth plane
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 Thanks. :3 I intended for the ending to take a little longer originally, maybe make this eleven chapters instead of ten...but when I started writing the tenth chapter, I felt like I could end it there without making it too short or leaving anything important out...and I succeeded, at least, in my own mind I did.
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 6:14 pm |
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copper
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Joined: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:18 pm Posts: 6362 Location: Florida
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Yes. You succeeded. Congratulations. Your story was awesome.
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:36 pm |
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Aarden
Joined: Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:47 pm Posts: 418 Location: Underground
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Sat Dec 11, 2010 6:52 am |
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ctcmjh
Joined: Sat Mar 27, 2010 11:42 pm Posts: 6020 Location: Washington
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Yes, this story was pretty awesome.
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Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:58 pm |
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Tha Housefox
Ms. Sunshine
Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:48 pm Posts: 5857 Location: The nth plane
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Thank y'all! 
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Sat Dec 11, 2010 1:05 pm |
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The Game
Joined: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:28 pm Posts: 3920
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That was so cute! And Max was really understanding. I though he was going to unleash his inner ninja on Peanut or something.
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Sat Dec 11, 2010 4:01 pm |
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Tha Housefox
Ms. Sunshine
Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:48 pm Posts: 5857 Location: The nth plane
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 You have no idea how much I actually laughed at this.
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Sat Dec 11, 2010 4:56 pm |
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Barkeron
Joined: Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:01 pm Posts: 870
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Great ending. Movie audience effects from Fiddler and Keys, lol.
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Mon Dec 13, 2010 11:21 am |
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jacruz666
Joined: Wed May 18, 2011 7:54 pm Posts: 1 Location: Mexico
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Awesome!!!
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Mon Jun 06, 2011 11:29 pm |
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Tha Housefox
Ms. Sunshine
Joined: Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:48 pm Posts: 5857 Location: The nth plane
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*bows* Thank you.
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Private Elliot
Joined: Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:51 pm Posts: 2592 Images: 0 Location: Facepunch.
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I should really reread this.
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