WolvenPaw15 wrote:I would like to join Seabreeze Harbor
-type-Main-
Name- Locke Woods
-Gender- Male-
Age-human 2 1/2, pet 17
-Species-
Dog (German Shepard)
-Appearance-
A normal German shepherd fur pattern and wears a purple collar with a paintbrush tag. His eyes are icy blue
-Back-story-
Just recently moved to Seabreeze Harbor with his aunt Mimzy a fortune teller. His mother and father died in a fire and no one knows how it started.
-Strengths & Weaknesses-
S – Photographic Memory
W- Fear of fire and Gets nervous about lightning
Other notes-
Picked up a few tricks from his aunt such as palm reading, tea leaf reading, things like that
Often has paint in his fur
-Stats-
S- 4
P- 7
E- 4
C- 8
I- 7
A- 4
L-6
Good character, but i see two problems, your stats add up to 40, the're supposed to equal up to 42. (but you can keep that if you want) and the second, your character's age is 17, but in human years that would be about 4.85. (this needs to be changed)
I see very little detail on a few things, such as why he has paint on his fur, or why his tag is a paintbrush. Such things aren't required, but it is preferred to be included. They just add an extra level of character to your.. er.. character.. k?
you can enter him next time skip. :3
Edit: making a map for seabreeze harbor :3