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This is the combined works of Civilization and Mickey! I wrote then words while Civil drew the pictures! He was the one who suggested we work together in the first place! I hope you all like this.
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Flukely was sitting in a chair while his younger "siblings" danced to the sound of "Now That's What I Call Polka". He had a few different note jars beside him and he was humming along. Sinister laughter picked up in his ears and he got up to look at the window. His mouth fell into a scowl and he put his fist next to his waist. He pulled up and his lance appeared. The others, after popping the note, walked over and looked out the window from behind their older "brother". They all gasped and summoned their weapons before jumping out the window.

"Hello, friends~"

Delilah quickly grabbed Delusion and sent her knee into her chin, making her stagger backwards. She swung her fist and made a square indent into the muzzle of the black creature. Delusion's back made a loud cracking noise as it slammed against a tree. Quickly recovering, Delusion pulled her pistols from their holsters and began firing at Delilah. Delilah shouted in Hindi at Delusion, the shadow retaliating with "confusion".

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Flukely tumbled over himself, Faker laughing like a dunce in front of the fallen brittany. Flukely looked up, holding his cheek.

"Who is, uh, looking like the, um, stupid idiot now? Huh huh! Cause you're not not gonna win cause you're just a stupid spain-yell."

Flukely never had a murderous intent, not even with the birds he caught when he was training at the Hunting Academy, but now his fur went on end and his pupils become the size of pin heads. He bared his fangs and picked up his lance, clicking a button on it. Electricity sparked from it and he charged at the Faker.

"That means I'm gonna win, you simpleton!"

Flukely swung at him, slashing across his shoulder. Faker screamed and stumbled backward, holding his shoulder and feeling the electricity pulse through him. He screeched and swung at Flukely.

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Mario flipped backwards, away from the burning acid that Monstrous had flung at him. The shadow degu hurled another potion at him and Mario countered with a potion of his own. The two chuckled flasks and bottles at each other. Mario yelped at the shadow potion that burned his back paw, but he was quick to make Monstrous scream at the feeling of a light potions.

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Icky had Mickey in a headlock with her scythe. Mickey hacked a bit before getting a hold of her spear and swinging at Icky's face. The black cat yelped and let go, Mickey knocking her to the ground and pouncing on top of her. Mickey began to punch Icky but she sent her paws into Mickey's stomach. Icky stood up and pulled a pocket watch from her blazer pocket.

"It's time to end this!"

"Icky! That watch could ruin her mind! Put it down!"

"Gladly!~"

Icky slammed the watch on the ground, creating a portal. It began to suck everyone in. The Heroes clawed at the ground, but it was to no avail. The portal pulled them in.

The first thing they saw were ferrets. Lots of ferrets. The Heroes slowly regained their barrings and, in doing so, sprang up and formed a circle around the ferrets.

"Stay back."

"They could be anywhere."

"Who? Those shady things?"

The Heroes turned and looked at the ferrets, confusion was written on their faces.

"You saw them?"

"Saw them? We managed to chase them off! Anyway, I'm Meeko."

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Here's the rest of the comic, only three attachments allowed apparently.

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Heh, pretty cool! Looking forward to more!

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Like the way this has came out. Nice job you guys!

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Nice job, Mickey. And nice drawings, Civil. :)

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i just found this...and thought it was awesome

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Is this still updating?

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Yes, but my family books so much stuff all at once. Because of all this stuff, parties, graduations, me needing a thousand outfits for no reason, that has hindered my ability to write for as long as I normally do. I'll be writing and working with Civil here soon.

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That sounds good. We should get back to the little side story about the nice Irish twin policemen one of these days.

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And we're back... My turn to post something, Mickey still did the writing, I did the drawings. Still hope you enjoy!
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Veil helped the newcomers up and scanned them. Every Hero but James was intrigued, having not yet met the cy-pet. James merely gave him wave in greeting, both being from Apollo City, and walked over with the others to greet the others. Delilah and Mario greeted Herodotus and Laika, all from Exotic Acres. Flukely glanced at Dexter and Felicity, feeling like they were supposedly in his town of Richmond Acres. Mickey walked over to Ion and Eon, all three being from Applegate and having meet, and kneeled down to their height.

"Ah need ya'll to tell me where those shadows went."

The twins looked at one another then shrugged.

"Sorry Mickey," they chimed in unison.

Mickey sighed to the Heavens, tipping backwards and landing on her back. Tilting her head back, she saw another ferret, this one with a whiteboard. He wrote something down and showed it to her.

"Name's Alphabites. Sorry we can't help you, but we were only able to chase them outside, we didn't see exactly which way they ran."

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Mickey merely smiled and stood up, ruffling Ion and Eon's headfur. She trudged back to her "siblings" and sat down, watching over the group she belonged with. Flukely was questioning Veil like a nerdy child at ComicCon. Delilah was showing off some of her moves while Mario had a chat with Bradley and Fleta. James was taking slight steps away from an advancing Aurora, who had her eyes on his lapis beads.

Sylvester nudged Zoroaster to catch his attention, then gestured to the cut on Mickey's neck. It was oozing what appeared to be black slime. The two walked over and tapped the cats knee.

"Your neck is, uh, 'bleeding'?"

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Mickey used her spear as a mirror to look at the cut. Huffing, she put the weapon down and it disappeared again. She glanced at the two and their medical kits. She sighed as she removed her handkerchief and set it aside, signaling for the two to do whatever they were gonna do.

Flukely, after calming down from his hype, stood up. He nudged his "brothers" and "sister" before walking over to where Mickey was putting her handkerchief back on. She felt the stitches and stood up, facing her fellow Heroes.

"Thank you all very much for allowing us to take up your time, but we really must be going now. You are all in danger if we stay here, so we must leave before they come back."

The Heroes waved goodbye as they walked toward the door. Othello looked at Tutter, who merely shook his head. Delilah opened the door and walked forward, but the only thing her nose met was a wall. She yipped and took a step backwards, holding her nose. While Mario attended to it, James walked back over to the ferrets.

"Hey, why isn't there, you know, an outside?"

Meeko stepped up.

"Cause Civil only lets us roam free outside when we have to go back to our towns to continue interaction. Any other time, it's just hang time in the mansion."

James nodded and walked back over to his "siblings". Putting his fists together in front of him, he glowed a very light blue and spread them apart, summoning his bow. He pulled back and began firing arrow after arrow into the wall. The ferrets watched in confusion at the newcomers.

"These guys are weird."

"Yep."

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The Shadows had, however, used the darkness to escape. They slipped into the shadows and fled the building through the shadow of it outside. From there they ran until them came across a dark cave and hid there.

Icky licked at Faker's wounds, holding the bigger dog like a lioness would hold her cub. Monstrous grumbled at the sight as Delusion finished with her treatment of bandages and pressure on his wounds. Jerk chewed on his new scabs only to get a thwack on the nose from Icky.

"Don't pick at them, you idiot!"

"Sorry, apologies."

Icky snorted air from her nose turned back to Faker, who was laughing at the little bugs in the dirt. Icky sighed stood, deeming Faker fine enough. The black cat paced, Faker's attention being turned to her swaying tail. The other dark creatures watched her, they're colored eyes following her.

"We need a plan. A failsafe plan. A fool-proof plan."

Monstrous saw his change and let out that nervous chuckle of his, launching off Delusions nose and onto Ickys shoulder. The cats black sclera, pupilless, light green eyes shifted to him. They were filled with nothing but scorn, but Monstrous was too busy being excited to notice.

"What do you want, you stupid little appetizer?"

"I have an idea! It's good one, Icky!"

Icky doubted that with every fiber of her being, but leaned her head down to listen anyway.

"What are you planning, Monster," Delusion whispered, tilting her ears forward to hear better.

Icky's face broke as her light green Jack-o'-lantern grin grew bigger. She turned the shadow degu, who had her same grin but in dark blue. Their similar eyes swapped hatred for enemy number one.
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E walked through the castle, being new to this whole thing about being away from Exotic Acres. He held a bag of apples in his paw and looked around for his "siblings". He opened the door to the study, surprised to see note jars still out. He picked them up, examining them.

"These are, uh, notes. I ain't neva' seen them out before. Wonder where them blokes got off to..."

E's attention was attracted to the window, where he saw three different things.

His "siblings" and some weird shadows being sucked through a magic portal.

The sky turning dark ever so slightly as they disappeared.

And two, new, pet-sized pieces of paper falling from the sky. Reaching out, he caught the papers, intrigued by the why the pets on the papers, a rabbit and a pet-sized mouse, were living sketches. They moved and shifted, waving at him. E waved back awkwardly before setting them aside, not caring enough to look at their names. The black dingo climbed into the window, staring down at the ground below. He nodding before jumping, putting his fists together. He pulled them apart at an angle and chucked the new pink boomerang into the ground. It created a portal and he plummeted through it, catching the boomerang.

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Oooh, interesting! And again, nice art Civil!

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Ooooh! Top-hat ferret! I like the way he looks. Very snazzy!

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Amazee Dayzee wrote:
Ooooh! Top-hat ferret! I like the way he looks. Very snazzy!
Um, that top hat wearing animal is a cat, Icky... Shadow of Mickey... And Icky is a female...

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Ooops. Sorry about that. i'm not really good at differentiating what kind of species each character is and I was in rush so I just glanced over it.

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Delusion chuckled evilly as she slipped in and out of the shadows. The shadows had found a way into a Thought Pavilion, a place where people come to think and chat about whatever. She jumped into the shadow of the old oak tree, poking her head out to listen to the sounds of other peoples conversations. Oh, how she wanted to cause some mischief by confusing people, but she only had a limited amount of power. She slinked around, hoping to find the three she was looking for.

"Yeah, that sounds like a good idea, Civ!"

Her head whipped around and she smiled as she finally saw the people she was looking for. A girl wearing a green and silver coat, a tall male in a suit, and a small mouse wearing green pants that was perched on the girls shoulder. Delusion tilted her ears forward to listen in closer.

"Well, it probably would be the easiest way of getting everyone between our groups to get along."
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Mickey shifted to Authors head, laying down. She sighed and blew a raspberry.

"We should probably check on Yensid and Retlaw. They need to be finished."

"Oh, hush. Mickey we got time."

"I'll remove your ponytail myself if I have to, but I am going to see Yensid and Ret-larp!"

Author stuffed a biscuit into Mickeys mouth, causing Civil to laugh.

"Well don't you make quite the pair."

Delusion could feel her power draining and she quickly began hopping through shadows again. She pulled out Ickys top hat and, after making sure she had a firm hold on the brim, climb into it and fell through. The hat pulled in on itself and disappeared with a *pop*.

Delusion tumbled through a portal on the cave wall. She would have crashed into Jerk, had Faker not pulled him out of the way. Icky gave the dog a soft thwack.

"Don't help him! He should know better than to sit in front of the portal."

Icky sighed and walked over to Delusion, snatching her hat back.

"Have you any information?"

"Yes, ma'am! According to what the mouse said, the girl uses her ponytail to open portals to different dimensions."

"And what of the male?"

"He didn't say much, but I did notice a ring of keys in his pocket. He may use those to open the door to that ferret place."

Icky nodded and chuckled a bit. Her eyes glinted with pure evil. She turned to Monstrous, who immediately stood to attention.

"Your plan again?"

"First, we get the girls ponytail. We corrupt her mind and make ourselves stronger. Then, we take the males keys an destroy them where they stand! They don't have a chance."

Icky cackled toward the sky, snatching up Monstrous and giving him a small nuzzle. He relished in the privilege. Faker grumbled as he leaned against the wall, avoiding looking at them.
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The Heroes, after attacking the mess out of the wall and not making any progress, were now resting against the wall. They were all irritated, but it didn't matter to them currently. They all stood up and put their weapons away.

"How do we get out of here?"


They all shrugged before both Flukely snapped. He took a deep breath before his paws began to glow a light blue. Machine parts spilled from his sleeves as he began to build. The last piece clicked into place and he suddenly held up a ray gun. He aimed it at the door, his eyes pulsating with light blue color rings. The ferrets back up, some going in front to protect others. Flukelys muzzle was fixed into a psychotic smile as it hummed to life and the from the tip, came a blue energy ball. It bounced off the wall and struck Flukely, prompting a rather cartoony scream as he tumbled through the air. While Delilah, James, Sylvester, and Zoroaster went to help him, Mario and Mickey once again walked up to the ferrets.

"You're positive there's no way out?"

"There is positively no way out unless we have to leave."

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Ears perked and heads turn to the sound of the opening door. A sign appeared above the door that read, "Exotic Acres. Herodotus and Laika may exit.". Civil was standing the doorway, ready to escort them. Author and Mickey were at his side. All three beings gasped and stared at the extra pets present.

"Looks like your group already beat us to that."

The Heroes once again attempted to leave, but where stopped by an invisible barrier. They pushed against it with all their might, but could not get through. The other ferrets walked up and reached their paws out, finding that they passed through just fine. Author reached her hand out and couldn't enter either.

"Uh. Civil, think you could unlock the barrier?"

"Yeah, no problem... Uh, maybe there is a problem, I seemed to have misplaced the keys."

"No worry! I can just use my ponytail to-where is my ponytail?"

Both humans began to frantically look around for their otherworldly possessions. Author suddenly grips her head and falls over, gritting her teeth. Mickey squeaks in surprise and her, Herodotus, and Laika immediately goes to her side, stroking her head.

"Hey, are you okay!?"
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[i]Earlier:

Author, Civil, and Mickey were still at the Though Pavilion. They were discussing something about a collab when Civil's phone went off. It was an update about one of the town his ferrets lived in, respectively.

"So what would you think of getting our two groups to try and be more friendly to each other in their respective worlds... Well, speaking of which, mind if I go and help two of them get back into their world?"

"That's cool, Civ."

"Yeah, we don't mind."

While they were distracted about the notification, Icky slinked through the shadows like a dark snake. She hid in the shadow of shop they were in front of and carefully reached up behind Author. She snatched the ponytail away and slipped back into the shadows and going behind Civil. She slowly and silently unhooked his keys, dropping them in the hat along with the ponytail. She slipped back into the shadows and wen back the way she came.

Icky, now back at the cave, chuckled as she forced Authors ponytail to turn into emerald. She cut at the air and the Shadows jumped into the new portal. They tumbled into Authors mind, ready to cause some chaos. They all summoned their weapons and laughed to the sky as they began to run amuck.

"Tell me one more time why we're doing this."

"Ugh. Author has magical powers and we can't just take the book that fuels said powers because she'd explode us on the spot. By getting into her mind, we can ruin her focus and psyci, making it easier to defeat the Heroes."

"OK, but why are we including the male in this?"

"He apparently owns those evil ferrets or something. They are powerful in numbers and strength on heir own. Imagine what would happen if they had a leader!"

Icky swung her scythe into the ground.

"Shadows rule now. And the world is gonna know it."
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Really nice job on this part Civil! The drawings are really nice!

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