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Here's the deal: I'm writing a story, and i want to share it,
Sooooo i will post it here so you can read it and give me your opinion, and you can help me with the story. (CoughcoughImRunningOutOfIdeascoughcough).
Well, here goes nothing....

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Cold.

It feels.......Cold.

Where am i?

I open my eyes slightly.....

I only see.....

Snow.

I realize that I am lying in the snow.

I get up slowly.

It's kinda cute actually.

...........

Wait....snow? But we are in summer.... and what I'm doing here?

"Mom.....do i fall asleep outside again?"

But then i realize that there's no one here....not a house or street, no person or animal....just me...

"I'm at middle of knowhere?! How do i finish here?!?!"

I try to calm myself, trying to understand what was going on.....but it gets worse when I realize something important.....

"Wait.....Who i am!?!?"

That simple question scared me in many ways.....how do i forget who i am....or was.....

"This is not funny!! I dont know how am i....where am i and how to go back home! I'm dirty, half-frozen and hungry!!!"


my stomach roared with that last word ... I was very hungry ... and there was nothing to eat except snow....

All this sound like something you dont believe will happen to you ever, until it happens.

So like me or not, i have to search something for eat. So i start walking.....

"This cannot be worse..."

For some reason, i feel that I'm wrong with that........

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"There are things that we forget ... And there are things that we can not forget, it's funny, I do not know which is more sad"


Wed Jun 13, 2018 4:41 pm
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After walking a while i find a path.

Maybe if i follow it, i can find someone, this path can be long.....

"But of course is going to be long! what i'm thinking....."

Thats my cynical side showing up.

aaand this time won. The path is long. REALLY LONG.

I only stop in the moment my feets start hurting.

"Come on! a path can be THIS long...."

"Funny that you say something like that even inmediately after discovering it."

"Its called being positive, ya know"

"Oh, well......you can do it better than that."

"Of course i can, is not that complicated, is just-"

Yep, theres other one here.

I quickly turn to discover a white husky, with a look between sarcasm and happiness.

"You are not from here, do you?
"

In a normal situation i would love answer that with sarcasm, but of course this is anything but normal.

"Yeah, im lost, you konw where i am now.....and more important, how do you appear here?!?!"

"I was always rigth behind you."

"............Of course, white fur, only snow in sight, you kinda camouflaged"

"And your brown fur is visible in a lot of distance.....oh, by the way you are in canada."

Yep, almost all my fur is brown, excepting some small withe spots.......

.........

"I-Im sorry, what did you just say?"

"I said that you are in canada."

..........

WHAAAATTTTT?!?!?!

"But i live in spain......HOW DO I FINISHED HERE?!?!?"

"HEY! you almost broke my ears.....ouch....."

"Sorry, but.....now that i think.....it is not supposed that there is no snow in Canada during the summer?"

"Summer? but we are in the middle of december...."

...............

Ok, Now i have a problem, a BIG ONE.

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Wed Jun 27, 2018 2:41 pm
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