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Anthroguy101
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:43 pm Posts: 840 Location: Lee's Summit, MO
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 Poetry Corner
Post your poems here, if you happen to have any. They may/may not be related to Housepets!
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Zander
Joined: Thu Apr 15, 2010 8:02 pm Posts: 3638 Images: 5 Location: South Carolina
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There once was a dog named tarot who's futures of people she could see she looked at peanuts future tommorrow and foresaw him playing the wii
I made that up just now :3
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Anthroguy101
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:43 pm Posts: 840 Location: Lee's Summit, MO
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 Two poems I just wrote:
The Hate Machine - 6/4/2010 They say they stand for freedom And all that you hold dear They tell you news and stories And what you want to hear They claim they're fair and balanced And think they are the light What they're not going to tell you Is they really want to fight For greed and tyrrany And not for what is right They like the Constitution But not what lies within They do not know or care That they have also sinned They claim they have the answers By putting on a show Their words are just pollution Not what you need to know The hate machine keeps whirring As it generates more lies It feeds on others' fear As your freedom slowly dies Last Ones Left - 6/3/2010 When all the people suffer As their freedom slowly dies When people start to listen To ignorance and lies The last ones left will rise And shout so all can hear They'll sing a song of pride And cast away their fear For knowledge in is the answer And sanity will win As they begin to learn That hatred is a sin They'll gather side by side United that we stand We'll reach out to our neighbors And offer them a hand Their enemies will crumble To those that start to see That we all share a world That's made for you and me (c) 2010 Clarke Macbeth If you're going to share, please give credit where it's due. Links http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3955272/http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3959475/
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Slippery-Q
Joined: Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:00 am Posts: 820 Location: El Paso, Texas
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Zach Zach buh-back, Banananana fuh-fack, Me-Mah-Mo-Mack, ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACH! :>
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44R0NM10
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Joined: Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:52 pm Posts: 3843 Location: England
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I saw a little birdy that had a pretty head I went to sit down on the bird and now that bird is dead - Oxhorn wrote the above (Yeah, your right Typhon, my bad  )
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Typhon
Joined: Sat May 08, 2010 1:16 am Posts: 1008 Location: In my house. Reading housepets. And organic chemistry.
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Don't you mean "now" instead of not?
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The Game
Joined: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:28 pm Posts: 3919 Location: Equestria
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O my gosh i love you for making this thread.
ahem,
I’ve always been The youngest of my kin.
I’ve always cried While everyone lied.
I have 3 older bros Who have fun like pros.
But they never include me.
Two went to college One stayed at home.
Two always called The one that was alone.
They never thought of How three might feel.
Three was me.
If I were like them Would they like me more?
If I were like them Would they leave me at the door?
If I were like them Would they continue to sneak? So there little sister couldn’t take a peek?
If I were like them Would they have fun with me?
If I were like them Would I be as mean?
If I were like them Would I always feel loved?
No.
The thing about them makes Them who they are.
Same for me.
If I were like them, I’d lose my touch. My uniqueness My mind My heart My life.
So ‘if’ is a word I like to ignore.
If not I’d be wishing all the time That’d be a bore.
So I guess in my mourning I’ve learned something new.
That I am me. And will never be like you.
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Buckdida
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Joined: Wed Mar 04, 2009 1:59 am Posts: 2350 Location: Richardson Valley
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Been written for over a year or so. Something tells me, now, more than ever, the poem has an eerie relevance. If you like it (only if you actually like it), do me a favor and boost my ego by faving it on DA or just say you like it or something.
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Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. First there are the friendly ones, The ones who want to help. Teachers, talkers; not the takers Make the nicest group. Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. Then there are the annoying ones, The ones who won’t shut up. With squirrely, squeaky voices They want to be liked but never learn. Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. Next there are the mean ones, The ones who cause you grief. They find a way to ruin your day; You wish you find them to make them pay. Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. Following are the artists, The ones who unleash their mind. Writers, drawers, both combined Creating what they mention Vying for attention… Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. Next up are the thieves The ones who take and steal. Going around the back, Taking, setting traps Stealing from your pack. Last there are the fantasizers. The ones who change themselves. Weak to strong, shy to charismatic Lying to honesty, skin to fur. Forever changing. For anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. _____________ (Oh yeah, and copyright to me, Buckdida, cause I really like this one.)
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Jersey
Joined: Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:03 pm Posts: 66 Location: The U.S. of A.
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haiku are easy but sometimes they don't make sense refrigerator
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FlintTheSquirrel
Joined: Sat Mar 27, 2010 6:30 pm Posts: 2374 Location: Sweden/North Carolina
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I really liked it Buckdida, except the part where you hinted toward squirrels being annoying o.O, sorry I can't comment or favorite, I don't have a DA account.
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Anthroguy101
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:43 pm Posts: 840 Location: Lee's Summit, MO
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 |  |  |  | Buckdida wrote: Been written for over a year or so. Something tells me, now, more than ever, the poem has an eerie relevance. If you like it (only if you actually like it), do me a favor and boost my ego by faving it on DA or just say you like it or something.
Status Hidden by ~Buckdida
Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. First there are the friendly ones, The ones who want to help. Teachers, talkers; not the takers Make the nicest group. Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. Then there are the annoying ones, The ones who won’t shut up. With squirrely, squeaky voices They want to be liked but never learn. Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. Next there are the mean ones, The ones who cause you grief. They find a way to ruin your day; You wish you find them to make them pay. Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. Following are the artists, The ones who unleash their mind. Writers, drawers, both combined Creating what they mention Vying for attention… Anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. Next up are the thieves The ones who take and steal. Going around the back, Taking, setting traps Stealing from your pack. Last there are the fantasizers. The ones who change themselves. Weak to strong, shy to charismatic Lying to honesty, skin to fur. Forever changing. For anyone can be anybody, where anonymity rules. _____________ (Oh yeah, and copyright to me, Buckdida, cause I really like this one.) |  |  |  |  |
I'll tell you what I think on DA, Bucky. What do you guys think of my two poems? I also made this so people could comment and criticize. You can do that here or on the social networks in the links.
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The Game
Joined: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:28 pm Posts: 3919 Location: Equestria
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OKay, my darkest poem EVER. warning: do not let this change how you see the game, she was just reallly sad and mad when she wrote this. double warning: be armed with a box of tish yous
I feel trapped. Caught. My throat is closing and my breaths come short. The walls are closing in, causing me to shrink down with fear. My heart skips a beat than two,than three then stops altogether. I'll never be found in the cold, stone room,cornered with little air and space. NO comforting hand is on my lifeless shoulder but seconds after I'm surrounded by loving warmth. No soothing voice is telling me my direction any longer, my body is on it's own. It is now a dark, dreary shell, empty with no occupant. As my soul floats swiftly to a better place, i think. I think of Earth , the place humans worshiped. The place they thought created itself and made them from monkeys. The place that told me I could never succeed, live, learn, and love. The world where knowledge was useless and stupidity was bliss. The place that turned me into an unloving, cold, harsh, evil, slab of selfishness. The place that thrived on the failure of others, the cries and screams of the suffering. The place that i no longer belonged to, no longer lived in, no longer cared about. It had chewed me and spit me out, swallowed and regurgitated me, crumbled me and my dreams and beliefs like irritating junk mail. It had finished me and was glad, as was I. I was now with my ever-loving father, in the place where all pain would be forgotten, all cries soothed and shushed, like those of a crying infant. I feel loved. My dreams are listened to, my thoughts admired. Possibilities were before me, ready for me and me alone. Everywhere i roam, the Lord is at my side, with a comforting hand, soothing voice, ready to guide me if I stray. I feel free of all saddening things. Praise be to God for helping and guiding my way through trials tough and simple, mournful events and spiteful people. He has saved me from my stone cold life.
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Teh Brawler
Joined: Fri Aug 14, 2009 1:26 pm Posts: 5133 Images: 2 Location: Someplace with Internet access
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 |  |  |  | The Game wrote: OKay, my darkest poem EVER. warning: do not let this change how you see the game, she was just reallly sad and mad when she wrote this. double warning: be armed with a box of tish yous
I feel trapped. Caught. My throat is closing and my breaths come short. The walls are closing in, causing me to shrink down with fear. My heart skips a beat than two,than three then stops altogether. I'll never be found in the cold, stone room,cornered with little air and space. NO comforting hand is on my lifeless shoulder but seconds after I'm surrounded by loving warmth. No soothing voice is telling me my direction any longer, my body is on it's own. It is now a dark, dreary shell, empty with no occupant. As my soul floats swiftly to a better place, i think. I think of Earth , the place humans worshiped. The place they thought created itself and made them from monkeys. The place that told me I could never succeed, live, learn, and love. The world where knowledge was useless and stupidity was bliss. The place that turned me into an unloving, cold, harsh, evil, slab of selfishness. The place that thrived on the failure of others, the cries and screams of the suffering. The place that i no longer belonged to, no longer lived in, no longer cared about. It had chewed me and spit me out, swallowed and regurgitated me, crumbled me and my dreams and beliefs like irritating junk mail. It had finished me and was glad, as was I. I was now with my ever-loving father, in the place where all pain would be forgotten, all cries soothed and shushed, like those of a crying infant. I feel loved. My dreams are listened to, my thoughts admired. Possibilities were before me, ready for me and me alone. Everywhere i roam, the Lord is at my side, with a comforting hand, soothing voice, ready to guide me if I stray. I feel free of all saddening things. Praise be to God for helping and guiding my way through trials tough and simple, mournful events and spiteful people. He has saved me from my stone cold life. |  |  |  |  |
I wouldn't necessarily call that dark, but it's CRAZY good. Awesome work. 
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Enty
Joined: Wed Mar 03, 2010 3:05 pm Posts: 201
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 |  |  |  | The Game wrote: OKay, my darkest poem EVER. warning: do not let this change how you see the game, she was just reallly sad and mad when she wrote this. double warning: be armed with a box of tish yous
I feel trapped. Caught. My throat is closing and my breaths come short. The walls are closing in, causing me to shrink down with fear. My heart skips a beat than two,than three then stops altogether. I'll never be found in the cold, stone room,cornered with little air and space. NO comforting hand is on my lifeless shoulder but seconds after I'm surrounded by loving warmth. No soothing voice is telling me my direction any longer, my body is on it's own. It is now a dark, dreary shell, empty with no occupant. As my soul floats swiftly to a better place, i think. I think of Earth , the place humans worshiped. The place they thought created itself and made them from monkeys. The place that told me I could never succeed, live, learn, and love. The world where knowledge was useless and stupidity was bliss. The place that turned me into an unloving, cold, harsh, evil, slab of selfishness. The place that thrived on the failure of others, the cries and screams of the suffering. The place that i no longer belonged to, no longer lived in, no longer cared about. It had chewed me and spit me out, swallowed and regurgitated me, crumbled me and my dreams and beliefs like irritating junk mail. It had finished me and was glad, as was I. I was now with my ever-loving father, in the place where all pain would be forgotten, all cries soothed and shushed, like those of a crying infant. I feel loved. My dreams are listened to, my thoughts admired. Possibilities were before me, ready for me and me alone. Everywhere i roam, the Lord is at my side, with a comforting hand, soothing voice, ready to guide me if I stray. I feel free of all saddening things. Praise be to God for helping and guiding my way through trials tough and simple, mournful events and spiteful people. He has saved me from my stone cold life. |  |  |  |  |
Hrm... I'm gonna have to disagree with Teh Brawler, and say that was kinda narm-ish... :/ came across as whiney, sorry. ~ But as for mine: Bang goes the gun The Film Star falls Tragedy to stoics, children, narcisstics Bang goes the gun The soldier falls And what about him? Oh, he's a statisic ~ Satire is fun 
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Jakkal
Joined: Wed Jun 09, 2010 2:14 am Posts: 89 Location: Frankfurt / Germany
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It's a german one, I wrote once (well not too far away) it's hard to translate, but I will give it a try...
Selbstmord (by me)
Was ist dies nun? Ein durch eigenhand Hand verursachter Tod So steht es im Buch. Was fühlen dies Menschen, die sowas gedenken und tun? Handeln sie aus Schmerz oder Not? Man weiß es selten.
Leben ist wie eine Rose. Die Dornen werden immer vorhanden sein. Die Blüte dagegen kommt und geht. Pflückt man diese. So ist es anders. Die Blüte wird sterben, in kurzer Zeit. Die Dornen, die bestehen. Somit ist das einzige was bleibt, nach dem Selbstmord, Trauer und Bitterkeit.
Translation:
Suicide
what is it? A death, made by his own hands. That says the book. But what do such humans feel, who want to do or just doing that? Are they doing it cos of pain or affliction? Only sometimes you know.
Life is like a rose. The spikes will stay for ever. The bloom will come and go. When you cull it, it's diffrent. The bloom dies, very soon. Only the spikes remains. So, the onliest thing, which stays, are sorrow and bitterness.
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44R0NM10
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Joined: Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:52 pm Posts: 3843 Location: England
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yeah, thanks for the correction. Also, I didn't know we had so many poets on these forums!
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Anthroguy101
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:43 pm Posts: 840 Location: Lee's Summit, MO
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 The Word That You Ignore 6/14/2010
He said to help the poor The suffering and weak He said to love your neighbor And hand out to the meek Yet you ignore his word And change it for you needs You filter what you like And keep up with bad deeds You take the path of greed And preach a different tune You disobey his word And hate those not like you When the time comes The wrong things that you do Will go against his order And it will be your doom http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4009781
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Anthroguy101
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:43 pm Posts: 840 Location: Lee's Summit, MO
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 Joey the Dog 6/17/2010
There is a dog that lives in the hood Some residents say that he's up to no good
He dresses in costumes and acts like a cat Maybe he's lonely and just wants to chat
Does he want acceptance or is it a show? Is it for attention, does anyone know?
Why is he so strange? Is it just for play? Why does he keep doing this day after day?
At least he has courage to show who he is Not hide everything like that brother of his
He's Joey the dog and he is here to stay Though he may be strange, I think that is okay.
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Tiggy
Joined: Fri May 14, 2010 2:38 am Posts: 3865 Location: Sweeeden :3
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Anthro, was that supposed to sound like Fresh prince?:>
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Anthroguy101
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:43 pm Posts: 840 Location: Lee's Summit, MO
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That was not my intention, but if you prefer to see it that way...
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Tiggy
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Nono, it wasn't meant in a bad way if you'd think that Oo It's just that look at the two lines, and compare those to some lyrics in the fresh prince in bel air opening theme :3 The tune just popped up in my head :< 
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Anthroguy101
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I guess I can see it sounding like that.
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The Game
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i can see that to the fresh prince tune. ... lol, joey as the fresh prince lol
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Anthroguy101
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:43 pm Posts: 840 Location: Lee's Summit, MO
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 I'm having issues with my life right now, so I wrote this po
What happened to our family And what we used to be?
What happened to the innocence And all the joy and glee?
What happened to the time And many of our dreams?
Why does it all like like It's tattered at the seams?
Is it all going to work out Is there hope around the bend?
Or is everything we worked for Going to reach its end?
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Tiggy
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Okay, so I wrote a poem, don't keel me cuz is lame :3
A dream, a world you into plumber When you finally get to slumber A world you visit once a day It might make you feel dismay
A cat who visits it alot Gets to work with a plot (<.<lol) Reality hits you in the face A smile you get, quick at pace
Wake up, wake up sleepy cat Or else you'll get really fat Above her is the pooch she loves Who makes her think, of white doves
Portal to heavens, are his eyes Looks like two, fragments of skies Both in love, with eachother But are with, someone other
In her dreams, he is there But she is, in a sphere Shining armor, he's a knight In the lunar glow of this very night
A kiss she gives, on the nose Makes him tremble, lose his pose A hug he gives, soft and cuddly The smell of him, makes her bubbly
Wake up, wake up the dream is over Sorry for interrupting, these two lovers
OH AND also! Plumber is not the profession in this case, it has different meaning(Like, enter or summit) <,< sorry for confusion Oo
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Anthroguy101
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 |  |  |  | Tobee wrote: Okay, so I wrote a poem, don't keel me cuz is lame :3
A dream, a world you into plumber When you finally get to slumber A world you visit once a day It might make you feel dismay
A cat who visits it alot Gets to work with a plot (<.<lol) Reality hits you in the face A smile you get, quick at pace
Wake up, wake up sleepy cat Or else you'll get really fat Above her is the pooch she loves Who makes her think, of white doves
Portal to heavens, are his eyes Looks like two, fragments of skies Both in love, with eachother But are with, someone other
In her dreams, he is there But she is, in a sphere Shining armor, he's a knight In the lunar glow of this very night
A kiss she gives, on the nose Makes him tremble, lose his pose A hug he gives, soft and cuddly The smell of him, makes her bubbly
Wake up, wake up the dream is over Sorry for interrupting, these two lovers
OH AND also! Plumber is not the profession in this case, it has different meaning(Like, enter or summit) <,< sorry for confusion Oo |  |  |  |  |
Nice poem. I'd post my latest work, but it would go against the rules of the forum.
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The Game
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Waiting for the dark. Waiting for the light. Waiting for the day And waiting for the night. Waiting for what’s good, And waiting for what’s not Waiting for what’s cold And waiting for what’s hot. Waiting for some time And waiting for a rhyme. Waiting for the thing that will make The wait All worth while.
Safe to say it's my lamest poem ever.
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Anthroguy101
Joined: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:43 pm Posts: 840 Location: Lee's Summit, MO
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I did a full-length hip-hop duet song a few months back: <Song> <Title="You Don’t Care"> <Genre=R&B> <Singer=male> There once was a nation that was strong and free, A nation that was once a democracy, A people stood united, they were strong and brave, But now they have to hide their views in a cave, (Be)cause ignorance is winning as the lies are spread, While people on the street need a slice of bread, They say they want to keep things for the best, But in reality they’re like the rest, <Autotune>Like the rest</Autotune> <Chorus><Singer=female> You don’t care about tomorrow You don’t think about the sorrow of the sick and suffering And the more you ventilate All your messages of hate The more your words will say to me Is that you don’t care You don’t care </Chorus> <Singer=male> The more they want to talk it up the less I hear, (Be)cause everything they say to us is just a smear, They really want to take us to place and time, Where freedom isn’t real and it’s just another rhyme, They don’t really want to help us; they’re just giving us a show, (Be)cause the more they want to speak to us the less we know. <Autotune>Less we know</Autotune> <Chorus><Singer=male> As people have to pay for the dirty air we breathe, You disrespect the planet and expect us to believe, That everything is fine and that it’ll fix itself, Like problems will be solved using nothing more than wealth, That nothing should be done for the people that are sick, I’ve heard it all before and I know your little trick, (Be)cause money’s all that matters and the people should beware, As you pray for better days, the truth is that you don’t care. <Autotune>You don’t care</Autotune> <Chorus> <Chorus> <Singer=male> Don’t care about the poor and the people on the street, Don’t care about the dying and the people that are weak, Don’t care about the people here that cannot get a job, You probably just right them off for being another slob, Don’t care about the tolerance for those who disagree, Don’t care about the people here like you and me. <autotune>You and me</autotune> <Chorus> <Singer=male> And as you shut the door on me, And on a better world where we, Can work together peacefully, The more we won't care. <Autotune>We won't care.</Autotune> </song>
For HTML n00bs: <start> </end>, and <Chorus> tags repeat the chorus.
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zeekgenateer
Joined: Wed Jun 30, 2010 6:39 pm Posts: 397 Location: Where my dreams may take me
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I went through my memory box and found this gem I wrote in third grade (I think)
"My Sister's Head" My sister's head should be replaced, it's lighter than a feather. She's trying to use tomato paste to paste tomatoes together.
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Kyderra
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Joined: Wed Oct 28, 2009 7:31 am Posts: 2683 Images: 6 Location: The Netherlands
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not a poet, but more a saying I made up, wondering what you gus think.
"Don't wish you could do that, want that you can do that"
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GameCobra
Joined: Wed Apr 08, 2009 1:27 am Posts: 2935 Location: Cape Breton, Nova Scotia
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interesting choice of words for sure. 'wanting that' feels like a different form of having,willing and taking.
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Kyderra
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My idea of what it means was: "if a person wishes he could, he is probably to lazy or has no time to take action in order to do it, if a person wants to do that, his mind is set to it , and hes going for it"
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Jack
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i got one! i got one! Ooh Eeh Ooh Ah Aah Ting Tang Walla Walla Bing Bang (ten points for the man who gets this!)
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I am the witch docter and...I don't know the lyrics. Still I get it 
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Jack
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Tiggy
Joined: Fri May 14, 2010 2:38 am Posts: 3865 Location: Sweeeden :3
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For CTC's Grace, in Oasis Towers
Alone in the Crowd.
Walking down this empty, dark street Walking down all alone, nothing there but darkness Darkness, shadows consuming every inch of light Shadows consuming every evidence of life
Walking down this street, death all around Everywhere there's suffering and torture Suffering and death combine, makes it one One they stand, against all that is light
Walking down this empty, lonely road Walking there, all alone, no one around Shadows and eyes watching ready to strike Eyes dangerous enough to kill and annihilate
I walk down this empty road laughing I look at the dark corners and smile I know what is dark and what is not Deep down inside, this road, is me
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Forty Six & 2
Joined: Tue Jul 20, 2010 3:06 pm Posts: 465 Location: On the streets, checkin out this forum on a stolen iPhone.
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Ok, I call this poem, "Cake?". I wrote it in Spanish class one day and my friend is like "... what's wrong with you?", so I can't really remember how I exactly wrote it, but I'll try...
A fresh baked cake, lying on the table Icing all over it, the cake is happy to be alive. So the man who bakes it, betrays it... he grabs a knife, and when the cake isn't looking, stabs it! The Cake screams for help but no one hears it, It can't be saved. A chunk is cut of his body, why? Why do such a thing? The cake is still breathing, stuggling to stay alive while the cake tries to cry, But is stabbed again, this time harder, you can see the blood drip off the knife. Dripping and falling onto his own body, once again, a chunk is taken out... Blood is on the wall... WHY??? the Cake screams, I'm born and then this!!! The Chef then puts his knife through the cake and looks at it... "You, you think you got to suffer? What about all the lives taken to make you? All the innocent little baby eggs killed to make you, All the happy little grains of salt, all slaughtered to make you alive... You are evil, YOU ARE THE ENEMY!!!" And the Cake realizes what he has done, and takes his punishment... Crying all the way through until it takes it's last breath...
What'd you guys think, feedback would be appreciated
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zeekgenateer
Joined: Wed Jun 30, 2010 6:39 pm Posts: 397 Location: Where my dreams may take me
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I'm not sure what to say about your poem sorry.
Here's a poem I wrote on the train. Was pretty funny to write. Hope you enjoy it.
PC Gamer Ballad
The people on the Xbox think they're so elite No idea, mouse and keyboard just can't be beat They're playing baby games like Modern Warfare 2 PC gamers, are the players that take them to school
You'll find me rockin' noobs with my g15 Rocket jumping all them fools like its in my genes You think you'll finally get me with a medic pick Newbie gamers, are the players that can suck my d---
The DPI on my mouse makes me feel alive Unlike flesh pounds, undead who want to skin my hide Gonna pull out all the stops with my m14 There's a trader, she's a player find them all on Steam.
Never find me playing any boring Warcraft monthly fees always giving the poor a big shaft. I'll just spend my time cruisin' my Audiosurf, I'm a geek, not a freak, I just know my turf.
Been a PC gamer since I was nine nothing but my desktop feels so divine. Eternally obsessed, now that's a fact, forever will it be my source of crack. ---------------------------------------- PC GAMER FOR LIFE!
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Forty Six & 2
Joined: Tue Jul 20, 2010 3:06 pm Posts: 465 Location: On the streets, checkin out this forum on a stolen iPhone.
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nice
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zeekgenateer
Joined: Wed Jun 30, 2010 6:39 pm Posts: 397 Location: Where my dreams may take me
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I feel like geeking out and trying to rap it on youtube for hilarity. We'll see if common sense gets the better of that plan.
In regards to your poem its a bit chaotic. I like poetry with a bit of structure, like with syllable scheme. Rhyming is never necessary (I just felt really inclined to do it on that poem), but I'm not sure, poetry is really freeform and no style is correct, but try telling that to certain English teachers.
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