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Okay, to stop chaos in another thread I'll be posting stories here.
I just have to wait for Leaf to gather the first parts.
This story will be told in acts

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WALL OF TEXT WARNING! IF YOU SUFFER FROM IMMENSE AMOUNTS OF READING ISSUES RELATED TO BOREDOM, YOU HAVE NO IMAGINATION. THA-
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I'm pretty sure it's a nice story, but I've yet to read it myself. Also, sorry Tensa, I ran through it with my spellchecker. |D

EDIT: I've ran over for a grammar touch up, and there was only one thing that really needed fixed.
Done with permission of course, but I still feel off doing so. |D


A lonely wolf under the one moon in the night sky, he stares at the sky longing for a companion.
But he never gets his wish, as the sky fades to black
And no stars are visible
He cries out "What did I do to deserve this!"
And his answer is the sound of nothingness, and oblivion
He cried to himself, begging for it to end, but was answered with silence again.
He continued to cry.
The wolf stared blankly.
"Miles... Miles of nothingness... It's so... Empty, and I feel so sad."
He looked down and saw he didn't even have a shadow to keep him company.
The wolf decided to get some sleep. He closed his eyes and slept. His dream started of nice, he was with his pack, happy. But the dream twisted into a nightmare where he realized he was alone... But not for Long, because he was attacked later by a monster. He shot awake panting with fear.
All the wolf wanted was to go home now. He didn't care about being alone anymore. He just wanted to get out of that heck hole. He tried to see if there was a way out. But the world suddenly distorted to a forest. He knew he was still in the world cause he couldn't go past the trees and was stuck in the same place he was before he came to the world.
The wolf was happy that he didn't have to look at nothing anymore. He just wished he was in his 'real' home.
He curled himself into a ball and closed his eyes.
The wolf curled himself tighter. He couldn't stop thinking of his family. He felt himself become sad at the thought of never seeing his younger brother bouncing around playfully.
"if I ever get out of here, I'll shower him with enough affection to make someone physically sick."
All his thoughts now shifted to working nonstop to get out.
The wolf searched the 'forest' high and low searching for some means of freedom. He got tired after hours of searching, he collapsed to the ground and whined.
"This is too much work! I don't wanna go through all this trouble! ... But I have to!" he drove himself to keep going. He was determined.
"I can't give up! Even it takes an eternity, I will get out!"
He yelled.
The wolf saw something that wasn't there before. A woman in all white.
"Eh? When did she get here... Wait! If she's here that must mean there's a way out!"
The wolf trotted over to the woman.
"umm, excuse me."
The woman ignored the wolf
"Please. Is there a way out of here!?"
The woman continued to ignore him.
"Please! I'm begging you to help me, I-I just wanna go home!" the wolf had tears going down his eyes.
The woman stole a quick glance at the wolf, he looked awful.
She sighed
"You look pitiful! Fine, I guess I'll help if only to make you stop whining."
"R-Really?" he asked while wiping his face.
"yes, yes. Just stop it with the crying already!"
The wolf was ecstatic. He was finally going home, or so he thought.
"BUT! you'll have to help me with something first."
"... What!"
The wolf was worried! He didn't know what she could possibly want.
"What do you want?"
The woman thought for a moment
"I want the blood of your firstborn son."
"WHAT! There's no way I'm doing that!"
"it's a good thing I'm kidding then."
She sighed.
"I'm bored, entertain me!"
The wolf was confused.
"Entertain you how?"
"Do something funny genius! And if it's not funny enough, I'm not sending you home! I'll give you a hour or two to think of something."
"what am I suppose to do! I don't know the first thing about entertainment."
The wolf was sitting on a rock thinking about what to do.
"It's already been half an hour!"
The woman called out
"Actually it's been 15 minutes."
"oh... THAT STILL DOESN'T HELP ME!"
he then though of something.
That's it! I'll just be myself, I'm a pretty fun guy... Hopefully.
He then though of other stuff to add on to that.
An hour has passed as the wolf was preparing himself for the humiliation he was about to endure.
"Hey pup! You have a hour left."
The wolf got annoyed at being a pup.
"Hey, just cause I'm small doesn't mean you can insult me!"
He huffed and turned away.
The sooner I get away from that weirdo the better!
"I heard that!"
How did she-
"While you're on this plane, I can read you're mind."
... Then you heard me when I called you a rat faced monster.
"YOU WHAT!"
Nothing!
"let's keep it at nothing!"
Several minutes passed.
"Pup! Ten more minutes!"
He whined
"Please don't call me pup, it's embarrassing!"
The woman sniggered
"Oh I'm ever so sorry Puppy."
He whined louder, which caused the woman to laugh
"See, you can be entertaining! Just do what you did there again, and you'll do fine."
The wolf blushed cause he was embarrassed."
"Okay, you have five minutes!"
The wolf built up his confidence to get ready
Okay! All I have to do is make her laugh, and smile. If things go smoothly, I'll be home soon, and can see my little brother again.
The though of seeing his brother determined him even more!
"Times up pup! Lets get this show on the road!"
The wolf walked up to her.
"this is pointless, but to keep it formal, my name is Artemis, state you're name pup."
He growled, then calmed down
"My name is Karol Ciel."
"okay Karol pup let's see what you got."
"No, let's lee what you have Artemis."
"Wha-"
He then leaped on her, and made her fall to the ground.
"Hey! What are you doing!?"
"oh you'll see."
He then started to lick her face
"KYAA! STOP IT!"
he ignored and continued to lick
"I mean it! Stop!"
"Will you send me home?"
"Never!!"
He stopped licking, and started to tickle her
"Wah hahaha, stop it I'm ticklish haha."
This went on for five full minutes.
"Ahahaha OKAY! I'll let you go! Just stop with the tickling!"
He then got off.
"Okay you win. That was actually a bit fun. But if you ever pull a stunt like that again, I'll send you to a dimension full of demons!"
He blushed
"Sorry about that..."
Artemis snapped her fingers and a portal appeared
"This will get you home, and I'm going with you!"
"... Huh?"
She sighed
"I like you kid, so I'm going with you! Plus I can't stay here, it's too depressing!"
Karol whined
"What will I tell my family!"
She thought for a second
"Tell them I'm you're Girlfriend or whatever."
Karol blushed
"but you're not!"
"they won't know that."
She then changed her form to a white wolf that was the same size at Karol.
"let's go pup."
He timidly put his paw in the portal
Then Artemis pushed him the rest of the way, he screamed as he plummeted through, and passed out.
When he woke up he saw the faces of his family members.
His little brother who was a lot larger than him had leaped on him crying over-dramatically.
"Big brother! I missed you!" he cried hugging him
He looked around and saw his other brothers staring at them.
"so where were you shortie" his oldest brother asked.
Suddenly Artemis showed up and answered for him
"he was with me."
His older brother growled
"And who might you be?"
"Well, I'm the Pu- I mean Karol's girlfriend."
Karol blushed
What happened to me telling them?
Artemis then looked at Karol
I decided to do it myself
Wait, how are yo-
The eldest wolf spoke up.
"I don't believe you. If you're lying, I will attack you without hesitation."
He was acting that way cause he was very protective of his brothers, and karol knew that well.
Karol smiled
"it's true big brother. Shes my girlfriend"
His brother was dumbfounded
"Really, that's wonderful! Sorry for being rude."
His brother extended a paw to Artemis
"I'm Raven! Nice too met you!"
Karol scoffed
He sure had a fast personality change!
(In total Karol has three brothers. Raven, his younger brother, and another older brother.)
The youngest wolf looked confused
"What's a girlfriend?"
that question made everyone burst into laughter
"What, what did I do?"
He got off Karol
Karol continued to laugh
"no, its nothing little bro! BWAHAHAHAHA!"
after that bout of laughter everyone calmed down
Raven looked at Karol
"anyways, how did you guys meet?" he asked curiously.
Karol froze up, so Artemis answered again
"well, I was walking around the place when out of nowhere a bear came and attacked me! I was so scared! But Karol came and rescued me like a princess from a dragon!"
She winked at Karol
Karol blushed
wow, she's good at making up stories.
Artemis smiled
I try my best.
Raven grabbed Karol and gave him a huge bear-hug
"Oh lil bro! I'm so proud of you"
Karol sighed
He actually bought that. That's weird, cause he can usually spot a lie very easily. Maybe he's faking.
He looked up at raven, who was grinning down at him. His eyes were saying
*don't you dare think I bought that for a second! And don't think this is over.*
Karol gulped, and tried to get away, but raven gripped him tighter
"Hey, let's go over here an have a quick chat dearest brother. Could you excuse us."
Artemis shrugged
"okay, I guess."
And raven disappeared with Karol behind a bush.
"Okay Karol, did you really think for a second I would even consider believing that crap-story? I'm no fool."
Karol sighed
"No big brother."
Karol looked down
Raven put a paw on his shoulder
"Now, who is she really?"
Karol tried to think of something
"Okay. She's really some random girl I met in the woods that followed me home. She said she had no family to go to."
He hated lying to his brother. He looked up to see if raven believed him.
"*sigh* I'll trust you for now, but I don't Like Her."
Karol smiled.
"I'm gonna have to punish you for lying to me though."
He then frowned
"I'll think of your punishment later, for now let's go back to the others."
And they went back to Artemis and the others.
When they returned they saw Artemis and the little wolf chatting. They noticed them come back.
"Big brother!" and the little kid pounced Karol again
"Wahh! Get off Mark!
the wolf (who's name is Mark apparently) didn't listen to his older brother.
"Get off him now!"
Raven said, and mark got off
"You hold as much authority as ever Raven."
The second oldest wolf said with a smirk.
"it's all in the tone of your voice, see Karol your voice isn't commanding enough."
Raven replied, giving a huge grin
"that, and I'm the oldest, and know how to manipulate people very easily."
Karol sighed
"That just means you're a bully with authority"
And raven hit Karol in the back of his head.
"Oww! What was that for!"
"I'm a bully with authority, remember"
Karol whined.
Artemis chuckled at the scene
These wolves aren't too bad. I can tell this will be fun! And Karol is kinda cute. I guess I won't mind being his Girlfriend.... Nah!
And she smiled to herself, she could tell she would enjoy her new 'family'
Act 0 end.

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... Yeah, I'll be editing that a lot.

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Since you can't change it yourself, you'll have to PM me or a mod over this area like Brent, or a global mod like Diss the details you want changed.
I'll be happy to do it though. |D
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Go ahead, I'll start on Act 1

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*GRAMMAR NAZI's the whole thing*
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Leafolawl wrote:
*GRAMMAR NAZI's the whole thing*
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I said edit it! Not insult it!
Act. 1 Rainy day.
Raven watches as the rain pours down outside. "The rain is very depressing, I really wish it would let up. And I really hope it doesn't thu-" Boom. The sound of thunder fills the forest, and echoes through the cave they were in. Raven hears a scream from inside. "Oh come on!" raven groaned. Artemis came to the mouth of the cave and sat next to Raven "What's wrong with Karol?" raven sighed "he's afraid of thunder." it went silent for a moment except for the sound of rain. Artemis looked at Raven "Really?" Raven glanced at her "Yes. It's really sad when you think about it... *sigh* id better see if he's alright." Raven went further down into the cave.

When he came to wherethe others were, he saw Karol clinging to his brother. The wolf was comforting him as best as he could. He said soothing words, but they weren't helping. Mark walked up to Raven and looked at his other brothers. He then looked up to raven with a sad expression "he's doing it again." mark hated to see Karol the way he was, helpless. Raven looked at his brothers "Hey, Drake. I'll take over." the wolf looked up at raven "You sure Bro?" raven shook his head. Drake got up, pried Karol off, and let Raven take his place. Karol looked at his brother with terrified eyes. Raven hugged Karol and rubbed his back " It's okay Karol, I'm here." Artemis gave them a confused look " What is going on?" they ignored her. The room filled with silence. The sound of the rain gave a calming affect, as Karol started to fall asleep. But the calm was short lived, as thunder shook the cave.

Karol screamed again, and clung to raven so tight, it started to hurt. Raven didn't complain, and let him cling. Artemis was tired, so she went to sleep, as did everyone else. Everyone except for Raven. He was rubbing Karol's head as he slept. Karol snuggled with Raven's tail. He smiled at how cute he looked. He looked out the cave and saw the rain was letting up a bit. "Finally, Now I can get a bit of rest." he flopped down and closed his eyes. He was releived he wouldn't have to worry about thunder anymore. He moved Karol so he was under his arm. "Goodnight scardey cat brother." he finally let sleep overtake him and snoozed away, listening to the smooth sound of the rain. He felt truly peaceful.

Act1 end.
This was a bit short. Hopefully I didn't do too bad.

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I'm kidding, I'm just going to go through and see the story first, and correct any major errors I might come across.

Highly doubt there are any that are imposable to decypher though.

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Thanks leaf!
I'll get on with act 2
... I guess this makes you my editor.
I give you permission to edit stuff I mess up on.

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I can only Edit stuff I post, since I'm not a mod, so that leaves you pretty much on your own passed the prologue(act 0), but I thank you for the thought.

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Leafolawl wrote:
I can only Edit stuff I post, since I'm not a mod, so that leaves you pretty much on your own passed the prologue(act 0), but I thank you for the thought.

No, from now on I'll pm them, you edit, then you post.

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Unless you hit me with a curve ball like that.
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So yeah, were set!

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Written by TensaZangetsu, Edited and posted by Me.
Here's hoping this kicks off well!
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Act 2:"Meals"

Raven returned with dinner, a deer he killed. "Okay Mark you go first." Mark trotted up and took a chunk out of the meat. He sat down and started to eat. Raven then took his own piece and left. Drake then took his piece and sat next to Raven, and ate. Karol smiled "Artemis you go ahead." she scoffed "I'm not eating that. I'll get my own food thank you." Karol sighed "Are you always that stubborn?" she smirked and left, whacking Karol with her tail. Karol sighed and took his meal and sat next to Mark. Mark looked up "Where'd Artemis go?" he asked cause he overheard their conversation.

"She just left to get something to eat" mark tilted his head "But there's food right there." Karol sighed "she's just being stubborn... Don't worry." After a while Artemis came back. Karol was curled up with mark digesting his meal. She was eating a sandwich, and a piece of chicken. Karol gasped. "Where did you get that from!?" He asked as she took a bite out of the sandwich, chewed, and swallowed. "I stole it from a hiker. He didn't even notice." Said Artemis. Karol whined. "Why did you do that!" She took another bite. "It was there, i was hungry, and I wanted it, so I took it." Karol shook his head. "That makes you a thief." she shrugged. "So, you act like humans don't have plenty to eat." she finished the sandwich and was about to eat the chicken, but Karol grabbed it "Hey! What are you doing!?" Karol was about to throw it, but Artemis rammed into him, and grabbed the chicken. She ate it and threw the bone at Karol, and it bounced of his nose.

Artemis laughed at him and went off to rest. Karol growled She really aggravates me! he sighed. He decided to go to bed. He lied down and tried to rest, but was awaken by Artemis throwing a bucket of water in his face. "GAH! what the heck Artemis!" She howled with laughter at the expense of Karol. He shook off getting Artemis wet too, which made her stop laughing. They both stared at each other for a moment, then started giggling. Karol sighed "Where did you get that bucket from?" "I found it" she replied. They continued to laugh. They laughed for a while before they got tired and decided to sleep. They started cuddling with one another and they both rolled into a quiet night's sleep.

Act 2 end.
Moral of this: Don't steal near a metaphysical entity, Don't remain near a stealing metaphysical entity, and Don't steal! Ridiculous stuff will happen if you do.

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I must say, I really like the story so far, It's very entertaining. Keep up the good work :D

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Thanks!
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Um... you should rephrase that, its more like:
"don't steal near a metaphysical entity, don't be near a stealing metaphisical entity, don't steal"
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Um... you should rephrase that, its more like:
"don't steal near a metaphysical entity, don't be near a stealing metaphisical entity, don't steal"
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... That does sound better :lol:
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Um... you should rephrase that, its more like:
"don't steal near a metaphysical entity, don't be near a stealing metaphisical entity, don't steal"
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... That does sound better :lol:

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I just had to put that in, because it itself sounds funny. |D

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Thanks Tatt, and Leaf for helping with the story.

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[pre-story_commentary]
Leafolawl: I'm going to mess with this to tell you I'm going to be making a pre-story and after-story commentary area, got it?
TensaZangetsu: Got it!
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Act 3: "Strolling in flowers"
Raven lied down in a meadow full of red and white wildflowers. It was early in the morning, and everyone else was sleeping. He looked around. There was nothing but miles upon miles of flowers. "these flowers are beautiful." He sniffed at a few of them "each one has a very nice scent" he sighed. "I'm glad no one knows about this." He was ashamed of loving flowers. "A fearless leader doesn't spend time sniffing flowers, they're protecting their pack! Flowers are useless to them." Raven remembered the words his father told him.

But they're really nice. Why can't I like them? He tried hard to stop liking them. But he couldn't. The only person who knew about his secret was Drake. He trusted him the most. But raven felt like his younger brothers wouldn't be as understanding as Drake. He shook it off, and tried to enjoy the flowers for as long as he could. Cause he'd have to stop soon, and go back to his pack. "A fearless leader's work is never done." he truly hated being something that he's not. He just wanted to be happy and carefree. He wanted to spend his days admiring flowers, and nature. "But I can't, I have to take responsibility for my family's sake."

He never noticed Artemis was watching him the whole time. "He is truly a pitiful thing." she shook her head and walked off. "I have to do something about that." she then put on a evil grin. I guess my fun starts sooner than expected. she thought as she disappeared into the shadows while the sun rose.
Act 3 End.

[after-story_commentary]
TensaZengetsu: Artemis sets a plan in motion! How mysterious.
Leafolawl: How is it mysterious if you know the entire story?
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It's mysterious to the people that don't know the story!
That's what I meant!

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I know, I'm just poking fun. :lol:

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Artemis Is a cruel she-wolf entity

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Yet again, you make me happy with another great update on your story. I hope you keep this going until the end. :3

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Yet again, you make me happy with another great update on your story. I hope you keep this going until the end. :3

Then this will go on for years to come.
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MY story is mysterious to ME even.
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Character sheet time!

Name: Karol
Age:2
Species: Wolf
Size: 1'4
Relatives: Raven(Older brother), Drake(Older brother), Mark(younger brother), deceased Mother and Father.
Mate: Artemis (possibly)
Likes: peaceful days, family and friends, Artemis( to an extent)
Dislikes: Thunder, being alone, Artemis(to an extent)
Karol is the runt out of his family, he's smaller than his younger brother mark, who is only half his age. He and Artemis have a Love/Hate relationship. She loves to bug him, and he hates it. He looks up to Raven, and sees him more like a father figure than a brother, and gets really happy when Raven gives him praise. He cares very deeply for mark, and tries to teach him right from wrong. He and Drake hardly interact, so he really doesn't have that many feelings for him. He won't admit that he likes Artemis's company.

Personality: He tends to be very timid around strangers, Which makes it hard for him to interact with strangers, and acts very serious around his family, he only does it to impress Raven. He has a size complex, and is afraid of things bigger than him. He shows Mark lots of affection and love, cause he really cares for him.
Special skills
Expert tactician: he can devise a plan for anything. And they work 95% of the time, except for when Artemis messes with them. Other then that, they're fine.

Master hand to Hand fighter: his size may not show it, but he can fight. He can throw a bear three times his size without much effort. His strength is vast, but he is too afraid to use it.

Weakness: his fear of loud noises makes him feel like a pathetic loser.
Hes a wolf that takes all his responsibilities very seriously, and also knows when it's to relax, But it's usually ruined by Artemis.

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Act 4: "City Wanderers"
Raven returned from the flower patch he was at. "Where my bro's at!" Drake then groaned, and trudged out. "Still sleeping! What you should be doing." He was only half awake. Raven smiled "Well, I didn't feel like sleeping, I feel like going for a walk, wanna come?" drake shook his head, and just dragged Raven back to bed "Hey! Let go!"
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Karol woke up as the sun shone in his face, and noticed Artemis was gone. He got up and looked around. He looked for a while, then found her walking ahead of him. "Hey, Artemis!" he called, and started jogging up to her. She looked back and smiled "So, little pup wants to follow me around?" Karol frowned "No, I want to know where you're going." Artemis chuckled "So you're a stalker now?" Karol blushed "N-no!" Artemis smiled "I'm just messin' with ya, I'm going to the town that was nearby." Karol gasped "Why would you go there! The people hate wolves!" She stopped instantly "Who said I was going as a wolf?"

She then changed forms to a white cat with a huge bell around her neck. "And you're going too!" Karol shook his head "No way! I'll get killed! Did you not hear the part about hating wolves!" She sighed "We'll have to do something about that won't we." Karol was confused "What do yo-" He was cut off by her chanting something, then a pillar of smoke enveloped him. When it cleared there was no longer a wolf, but a black cat with a bell around his neck similar to Artemis', he had the same features as Artemis, except he still had his wolf eyes. Karol looked at himself in horror. "What did you do to me!?"

Artemis chuckled "I turned you into a cat so you could go into the town with me." Karol growled "I said I didn't want to go into the city! Now change me back!" Artemis frowned "You're no fun y'know that. And I can't change you back." Karol gasped "WHAT!?" Artemis started to walk off towards the town. "The spell wares off after a few hours, that's plenty of time to explore!"

Karol whined "Bu-but I " Artemis then dragged him off. "C'mon already!"
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They made it to the edge of the town. There was a sign that said Welcome to Halure. There was a huge pink tree in the middle of the town. Karol stared at it. "It's beautiful, I've never seen anything like it!" Karol marveled at the petals falling from it. Artemis walked right next to him "See. Isn't it beautiful. But no time to stare at it, we got other things to do." Karol saw her walk off, and followed right behind her. They explored the town, and got a few handouts from the people (Well, Artemis did. Karol was too scared). Karol was having lots of fun "this is great! I've never had this much fun before!" Artemis then walked off again. "Hey, where are we going now?" He asked as he caught up to her again.

"I wanted to sit under the tree for a bit." Karol followed Artemis to the base of the tree. "Good, there's no one here. It'll be more peaceful." She dragged Karol under the tree with her and lied down. Karol lied down next to her. He looked over to Artemis "This is very nice... Wait how long has it been?" Artemis thought for a moment. "Probably about three or four hours... Oh crap!" As soon as she said that, the spell wore off, and he turned back into a wolf.

Karol panicked "No, No, NO!" Artemis sighed "Calm down already!" Karol looked over to her "Calm down, CALM DOWN! I'm gonna die! The people are gonna kill me! How can I calm down!" Artemis then slapped him "Calmed down yet?" He rubbed his face "Yes, oww."

Artemis sighed "We gotta come up with a way for us to get out without you being noticed... I got it" She left for a while, then came back with a collar. Karol sighed "Where did you get that from?" She chuckled "Stole it from some dog." Karol sighed "why am I not surprised." she scoffed "You act like I always steal!" Karol whined "Just hurry up and put it on me." Artemis then put it on him. The collar was black with a star charm. "Hey, I don't look to bad." Karol admired himself a bit. Artemis sighed "Let's just go already." Karol then stopped, and followed behind her, still a bit worried. I hope this works.

Act 4: end.

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Thank you leaf.
So, I'll get to work on the next C Sheet.

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This is Halure, The City of Blossoms
It Is a city on Terca Lumieres, in tales of vesperia. I needed to share this.
For more info look up Tales of Vesperia.

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Act 5: "New addition"

Artemis lead the way as they exited the city. "Wow, people are actually buying this?" Karol sighed. They didn't run into any trouble for a while. But then a dog came up to them "Hey! You're that cat that stole my collar! Give it back!" Artemis sighed "Right when were home-free, this guy shows up, let's just ignore him." Karol looked at the dog "Shouldn't we give back what belongs to him?" The dog looked obviously upset. Karol began to take off the collar. "Here, take it back." Artemis gasped "What the (censored) are you doing!?" the dog took the collar back "Oh thank you so much!" the dog hugged him, which made Artemis cringe.

She calmed down "Okay, so you two are all buddy-buddy now, how do you suppose you get out now Karol?" Karol turned grim "Oh right, the reason we needed your collar was cause I'm a wolf, and I'm not ready to die yet!" The dog smiled "Well, I can help you out, I know Halure like the back of my paw." Artemis grabbed Karol by his ear and whispered "Are we really gonna trust him?" Karol whispered back "We have no choice but to trust him. Plus, he seems pretty trustworthy." Artemis grinned "That, and you like him." Karol tried not to snap at her.

The dog led them to an alleyway. "What are we doing here?" Karol asked. The dog rummaged through some boxes neatly in a corner "Ahh! Here it is. He held up a white collar with a moon charm. Artemis growled "If you had another collar, why did you bother us about that one!" the dog sighed "Because this one is special to me, my owner gave it to me before she died" Artemis and Karol cringed at 'died' there was a moment of depressing silence. "What about that one?" Artemis asked. "Oh this one, I found it in the middle of the street" "Oh... Lame! I thought it would have a story too!" Artemis whined "Well sorry, not everything's like a book!" the dog snapped

"By the way, what's you're name?" Karol asked as the dog put the collar on him. "It's Ace, what about you two?" Karol was about to answer, but Artemis pushed him out of the way "Well since you asked, I'm Artemis, and he's my faithful henchman Karol. Now, get us the helm out of here!" Ace sighed "She's... Interesting". "I go through this everyday." Karol whispered.

The trio went through town, getting the occasional glance, but that was about it. They made it to the edge without any trouble. "Okay were here." Ace said. "Ace, do you have a place to go?" Karol asked, and Artemis elbowed him hard "Don't give him any idea's!" She whispered harshly. Ace sighed "Honestly, no I don't, but I'll be fine." Karol got upset "... Why don't you come with us?" Ace was surprised by the suggestion "I wouldn't wanna be a burden" Artemis tried to drag Karol "He said no! Let's go!" he ignored her "C'mon! There's enough room for you." Ace thought about it for a minute before he said "Okay, I'll do it!" "Yay!" Karol said while there was a distinctive
"Noo!" coming from Artemis. Ace, and Karol both laughed at her .
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When they returned Mark was bouncing around as usual. Drake was playing with him, and Raven was sleeping under the shade of a tree. "Okay ace, you wait here." Karol said, and ace nodded.. Karol walked up to Raven and nudged him a bit. "Raven wake up, can you wa- WAAH!" Raven had grabbed Karol and gave him a massive hug. "And were was my little bro this time?" he tried to pull away, but to no avail. "Well... I went with Artemis... To..." "To what?" Karol whined "The town." Raven dropped Karol and gasped "For the love of god! Tell me you weren't followed, or noticed!" "No! I'm not that stupid! I went with a disguise on!" he pointed to the collar. "Where did you get that from!?" "What had happened was..." [one explanation later] Raven sighed "At least you're safe" "So can he stay big bro?" Karol asked. Raven sighed again "We already have one roach living here" He hinted towards Artemis "What's it matter if we add another. He can stay." Karol hugged his brother and said "Thanks!" Before he ran off to tell Ace. " Why can't I say no to him." He shook his head. Great, another mouth to feed.

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And I will post the next one myself, cause i wanna try something

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Still gonna crack a joke...

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Still gonna crack a joke...

COMPLETE!

What does that have to do with anything?

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Still gonna crack a joke...

COMPLETE!

What does that have to do with anything?



Don't bother to try to understand how leaf thinks. It is an impossibility. Also new friend for Karol Yay!

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Still gonna crack a joke...

COMPLETE!

What does that have to do with anything?



Don't bother to try to understand how leaf thinks. It is an impossibility. Also new friend for Karol Yay!

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No seriously, it is near impossible to figure out what's going on in my head. |D
So many mental instabilities and problems, so little time. |D

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Act 6: "Crushes -part 1-"
Ace has been in the group for two weeks now. He helps raven with getting food, Artemis with her pranks(But she still doesn't like him), hangs out with Karol, and plays with mark... Yet he doesn't spend any time with drake at all.

He was very upset cause he wanted to bond with everyone, but drake kept avoiding him. He must hate me. He thought this was the only reasonable explanation. "But why? Did I do something to make him not like me?" He sighed "I'll just have to try harder to get him to like me." He get determined.
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Drake was playing with Mark, but had his mind on something else. He couldn't stop thinking about how cute the new dog was. He had developed a crush on him over the first week he was there. He kept avoiding him, cause he was very shy and too nervous to speak to him. I'm such a loser! I'm too afraid to even speak to a dog!! He had thought. Mark noticed he was upset. "Are you okay big brother?" Drake looked down at the pup "I'm fine kiddo, it's nothing."
*****
Ace came up with a plan to get drake to talk to him. He thought about forcing him into a cave and make him chat. "... No, he'd kill me if I did that!" he whined. I need a plan. "Maybe I could just say hi and start a conversation... That could work, but first..."
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Mark had gotten bored and left. Drake was alone. "Now I have time to think." he lied back on a tree, and looked up at the clouds. Huh, that one looks like a flower... he sighed. "I really should talk to someone about this... Maybe Raven... No, maybe Karol, he's already dating someone.... Yeah... I can't believe I'm about to do this!" he hated that he would ask his younger brother for advice! "I'm such a loser!" he banged his head against the tree in rage.
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Raven was lying down next to a few flowers. He started sniffing their pleasant aroma. They smell so wonderfu- out of nowhere Ace popped up. "OH MY GOD!YOU SCARED ME ACE!" Raven screamed. He tried to calm himself. Ace folded his ears back "Sorry raven... Can I talk to you?" Raven stopped panting and looked at Ace. "Uh, sure... About what?" "Why does drake avoid me?" Raven blinked at him "He what?"
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Drake went to where Karol usually slept "Karol, you here?" He asked "Kaaaroool!" Karol then came out with a black eye "Oh my god what happened to you're eye!?" Karol sighed "Lets just say, when a girl wants to go somewhere... Do not try to stop her." "Actually, that's why I'm here... Can I ask you something?" Karol looked at his brother with his good eye. "What?" Drake blushed "C-Can you give m-me some advice?" Karol was confused "Advice on what?" Drake blushed even harder "H-how to tell someone you... Like them." Karol got even more confused "Why are you asking me?" Drake blushed again "Cause you're the only one with a mate." It took Karol a minute to realize what he was talking about "Look, I'm not the one you should be asking.... Try Raven." Drake slumped down a bit. "Okay I guess." And he left to find his older brother.
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