Through the Lapses of Time.

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Dr. Prower wrote:Awww, poor Bud. He tries to be a hero and loses his girl...
*waits until neko gets here to realize and spoil what just happened*
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Oh Zander I like where this is going. Oh boy this is going to be so much fun.
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...what am I suppose to spoil?
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Neko wrote:...what am I suppose to spoil?

Thank God.
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Neko wrote:...what am I suppose to spoil?
the food in your fridge.
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Zander wrote:
Neko wrote:...what am I suppose to spoil?

Thank God.
Its not like there's that much to spoil Zander its pretty obvious what just happened.
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Mind-blowing? Check!
Oooookay, see more now?
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“A name for who?” Grape looked in anticipation at Bud.

“A name for our... son... If we had one. We were hoping too but I guess now were not.” Bud looked up at the sky.

”I still don't know what we would name it if she was a girl though.”

It all clicked together for Grape.

“What year is it” Grape pushed on more answers from Bud.

“How can you be alive and not know what year it is? Its 2005.” Bud replied, a little annoyed.

Grape just then realized what she had done. She had broke up Peanuts parents.

Oh God. I knew this was going to happen why didn't I just hand them the Watch? Grape thought.

“Im sorry and it was nice meeting you, I might be back soon. But right now I got to go!”

With that she got up, and ran across the street, watching for cars this time.

She ran as fast as her paws would take her, back in the direction of peanut.

She turned into the alleyway they had appeared in. no signs of Peanut.

“Peanut! Peanut!” she kept calling out, hoping for some sort of sign from her friend. But with no use.

As she emerged from the alleyway she looked across the street, she saw Charlotte, apparently Buds girlfriend, walking down the sidewalk with tears in her eyes.

Grape ran across the street again, hoping that she could somehow get them back together again.

Hey! Wait up!” Grape shouted out to Charlotte.

She turned around and was met by Grape running after her.

“Oh, its you. What do you want? I don't have any other boyfriends.” She turned back around, and continued walking.

“I have to talk to you. Its really important. What you saw back there, it wasn't what you think!” Grape tried to explain.

'I know what I saw, and theres no way I'm hooking back up with that worthless cheater.

“You don't get it, you have to!”

She turned and looked at Grape sternly.

“Fine. Ill give it one more try. But if I see him so much as look at another girl, were through.”
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IceKitsune wrote:
Zander wrote:
Neko wrote:...what am I suppose to spoil?

Thank God.
Its not like there's that much to spoil Zander its pretty obvious what just happened.
*cries* I fail at cliffhangers :=(
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Zander wrote:*cries* I fail at cliffhangers :=(
I fail at describing backgrounds in detail.
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Oooo, back to the future reference, eh?
even better!!!
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valerio wrote:Oooo, back to the future reference, eh?
even better!!!
Never seen it :o

*waits for people to start driving the forum off-topic again*
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Not from me, nossir!
You stay in-topic and give us more fanfic!!
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Grape walked back with Charlotte to where Bud was laying down, as they passed the alleyway that Peanut was supposed to be at, Grape took a peak inside, and sure enough peanut was sitting right there, in the corner on the ground.

He looked up and saw Grape and Charlotte walking.

“Hey! Wait up for me!” Peanut yelled to the two as they were walking.

He eventually met up with them. Charlotte turned around to Peanut, and looked at him a little bit.

“You look just like my boyfriend.” Charlotte smiled to him.

Peanut didnt know what to say. Was her boyfriend ugly? Was he handsome? So he just nodded and continued walking.

Grape knew how awkward this would be for Charlotte if she knew Peanut was her son, so she kept her mouth shut.

“There he is, over there.” She pointed to Bud, laying down on the grass across the street from them.

They all crossed the street together and made there way over to where Bud was.

He looked over at them and was shocked to see Charlotte.

“Charlotte, i- i-" Charlotte stopped him with a kiss.

Bud turned to thank Grape.

“Thank you, I don't know what I would have done without you, grape.” Grape just gave him a thumbs up and grabbed peanuts hand and started to walk off.

The ground started shaking again, just as it had at the ski slopes. “Oh no not again” Peanut held onto grape tight.

The three white figures rose up out of the concrete, it felt like an earthquake. They all grabbed hold of Bud, who tried to resist.

“No you don't!” Grape screamed at them. She started running full speed at them, going to tackle them.

She was stopped by a bright flash of light which temporarily blinded her, and when she opened her eyes he was gone.

“Oh no.” She turned back to Peanut. He was on his knees holding his stomach.

Something was happening.











Kinda short, but if i had went any further i wouldnt have been able to stop, so here you go :P
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aaarrgh! TOO SHORT! You can't do that to us! *waves fist*
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“Arrrgggghh!!” Peanut screamed in pain.

Charlotte and Grape rushed over to comfort him.

“Whats happening?!” Charlotte asked, stunned at what just happened.

“You two are his parents! They took his dad away, now I don't know whats happening!”

Charlotte gave Grape a concerned look. “Hes not my son! Ive never had a son!”

“You will, its hard to explain ill try to tell you later.” Grape looked back at Peanut, who was now on his side, still crying and screaming from the pain

“Its ok, just tel-” She stopped when she noticed Peanut stopped yelling.

He started twitching on the ground, his fur started changing to a different color, his eyes changed to a Dark red, Claws lengthened, teeth lengthened, ears became pointed.

His fur color was now somewhere between gray and black.

He got up from the ground and looked at them, with an angered expression in his red eyes.

“Charlotte. Run!” Grape whispered to Charlotte. They turned around and bolted as fast as they could in the opposite direction.

The now changed peanut started running after them.

Apparently running much faster, considering he was now only a few feet behind him.

They ran down the sidewalk until they reached a busy intersection.

Grape and Charlotte looked at each other and nodded.

They ran out right in the middle of traffic, hoping no one would hit them. They made it out the other side unscathed.

They looked back just in time to see Peanut run into the road. A car couldn't stop in time and ran right into him, knocking him off his feet, and sent him skidding across the pavement at least 20 feet.

Grape stuck her hand in front of Charlotte to signal stop. Grape turned around to see Peanuts limp body laying on the asphalt.

They were in awe at what just happened. Then there was some movement.

Peanut got up by himself and stood straight up.

He looked over at them and cocked his head to the side, popping his neck.

As he was walking over to the awestruck pets, a guy in the car that hit him got out leaving the door open. Peanut walked right past him and grabbed the door with both hands.

He then proceeded to rip it straight off of its hinges.

He pulled it back like a Frisbee. Grape realized what he was going to do.

“Duck!” Grape yelled at Charlotte. Just in time for Peanut to throw the car door at them.

It just barely missed both of them as it flew over and into a store window. Peanut proceeded to run after the two, just as they started running too.

“How are we going to lose him?!” Charlotte yelled to grape. Almost out of breath.

Grape thought for a moment. “I know!” Grape yelled. She looked at the watch on her wrist.

“Grab a hold of my arm!” Grape motioned for Charlotte to grab hold.

After Charlotte had grabbed Grapes arm she pressed a button again.

The familiar whoosh sound came back into play.





Is that longer?
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Okay, you've updated like 5 times in 1 day now! HOOOW?:< also, WAAAH Peanut! you're a mutant dogsomething now! I just hope they find Bud again :<
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Tobee wrote:Okay, you've updated like 5 times in 1 day now! HOOOW?:< also, WAAAH Peanut! you're a mutant dogsomething now! I just hope they find Bud again :<

Did you really think that i was going to tell you the story? Pff. think differently next time you highlight something : P
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Ok so Peanut's some sort of Demon now, its a good thing we know they turn him back to normal. (I think at least I pretty sure Peanut was normal when the Cats were chasing them through the mans room because I think that the man would notice that Peanut wasn't a demon like thing)
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weeeeird.
But still...interesting...
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wha- how- bu-

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IceKitsune wrote:Ok so Peanut's some sort of Demon now, its a good thing we know they turn him back to normal. (I think at least I pretty sure Peanut was normal when the Cats were chasing them through the mans room because I think that the man would notice that Peanut wasn't a demon like thing)

Are you sure it was peanut? Makes ya think huh?
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Your right it could have been Peanuts Dad I didn't even think about that. But still my point stands.
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this ficcie has one point made clear.
/Borg mode on/ Speculation is futile /Borg mode off/
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No more updates for today, so i leave you with this

http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/479/lol3iy.png

I thought it would give you a laugh.
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Zander wrote:No more updates for today, so i leave you with this

http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/479/lol3iy.png

I thought it would give you a laugh.
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Neko wrote:
Zander wrote:No more updates for today, so i leave you with this

http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/479/lol3iy.png

I thought it would give you a laugh.
Why must you always share our IRC convo's with everyone >:O
Because i thought it was funny :o

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Zander wrote:
Neko wrote:
Zander wrote:No more updates for today, so i leave you with this

http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/479/lol3iy.png

I thought it would give you a laugh.
Why must you always share our IRC convo's with everyone >:O
Because i thought it was funny :o

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Why quote me? I'm not the only one who says funny stuff on there- oh, wait, I am...
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Now, now, guys. Make up, hm? There are far other reasons to litigate...
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moremoremoremore pleasepleasepleaseplease
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Grape woke up first, she took a look around, it was snowing, just like how it was at the ski resort.

She looked over at Charlotte, who was asleep over in another patch of snow.

Grape ran over to her and started shaking her. “Charlotte! Wake up.”

Charlotte's eyes gradually opened and looked at Grape.

“Where am I?” Charlotte asked, apparently amazed that it started snowing.

“Ill have to explain later, we have to make s-” Grape stopped when Charlotte reached up and yanked hard on Grape's collar

“Explain now.” Grape pried Charlotte's hand off of her collar

“Ok- Its very confusing. Me and Peanut were playing in the snow when I found a watch. Later I figured out the watch controls time. I accidentally went back in time and met you, and in doing so I somehow turned Peanut into some sort of monster.”

Grape looked around when she said it to make sure no one was listening.

“Wow.” Charlotte was stunned, to much to think about at one time.

“Now come on, lets see what time were in now.” Grape helped Charlotte up and they started running toward the hotel that was nearby.

They ran inside, ignoring the managers yelling to wipe there paws and ran into a elevator.


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When they reached the top Grape ran to the room they rented.

She opened the door to see Peanut's and her luggage.

She ran back out, and over to the Sandwiches room, Charlotte following right behind as Grape knocked on the door.

After a little bit Mrs sandwich opened the door, eyes watering.

She took one look at Grape, not noticing Charlotte behind her. She reached down and hugged Grape.

“Where have you been!? We've been worrying about you!” Grape leaned back enough to talk.

“How long have we been away.?” Grape almost started crying herself from Mrs. Sandwich's crying.

“you went missing yesterday, we thought we lost you forever!” Grapes mom hugged Grape again.

She finally looked up and noticed Charlotte. “Where is Peanut?” She looked down the hall both ways.

Grape didn't have the heart to tell her that he was still missing, let alone that he turned into a monster.

“Oh, he's waiting outside.” Grape let out a fake uncertain smile.

Charlotte looked at Grape with a confused look.

“And who is this?” Mrs. Sandwich looked at Charlotte.

“Oh, uh... she helped me get back home.” Grape's smile turned toward Charlotte.

Charlotte shot Grape another confused look.

“If you don't mind, now that you know were not lost can we go back outside and look for Peanut?”

Mrs. sandwich thought about it a little bit, not wanting to let Grape out of her sight.

“Fine, but were coming with you” Mrs. Sandwich suggested.

“NO! I mean, no, thank you. We'll be fine.” Grape replied, not about to let her mom into this.

“Ok fine, but be back by dark if you cant find him.”

Grape nodded, and almost literally dragged Charlotte behind her running down the hall.


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When they reached the Lobby again, Grapes head started pulsing, her vision was fading out again, she fell on her knees next to Charlotte, when she blacked out.

She woke up in a large church.

She looked around before looking toward the front of the church, she saw the three white figures, which she could finally make out to be cats, standing next to a cage.

When she squinted enough, she could make out peanuts dad, because he didnt have a collar, in the cage.

“Hey! You've done enough! Take the stupid watch and release my friend, and change Peanut back!” Grape yelled out to them.

All three turned to her. Grape just then realized that she was alone, Charlotte must have been left behind.

“You do not understand. When the device is used. It draws energy from the surrounding areas. Completely changing the course of time.” All three said in unison.

“So!? What does that have to do with taking my friends?! I'm giving you the watch back, take it and put everything back to normal! Now!” Grape wasnt messing around. She wanted Peanut back. The real peanut.

“When the energy is taken from the surroundings, the only way to return the energy...” They paused.

“...is to take it from someone.”
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Uh oh things have just gone from bad to worse. Now that's how you do a cliff hanger Zander.
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IceKitsune wrote:Uh oh things have just gone from bad to worse. Now that's how you do a cliff hanger Zander.
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IceKitsune wrote:Uh oh things have just gone from bad to worse. Now that's how you do a cliff hanger Zander.
yay :3

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*jumps off the cliff* Cliffhangah! GAH! need moar right now :3
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...and that's why he's called Cliff Hanger!!!!....
CAN'T...HOLD....ON....MUCH....LONGER....!

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The Game wrote:...and that's why he's called Cliff Hanger!!!!....
CAN'T...HOLD....ON....MUCH....LONGER....!

kudos if you know where that's from
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This is some good stuff here. :D
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When Peanut was turned into a Monster, I bet it's because of Time Paradox.. Stuff..
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